Yeah. It looks like I have to improve a lot and take in feedback to make this story more exciting. Anyhow, since I am busy with the next chapter, coupled with my other two stories. Here is a Sneak Peak.

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Dark Souls: Takes of the Other Embers

Eight

Chapter 30 Sneak Peak

Ash raised the Wolf Knight's Greatshield in front of him. He had feeling there were going to be many likely due to how his Darksign now that he thought about it. "I didn't think of how my Darksign would have gotten their attention. No wonder many Grimm shifted their attention rather than me. Seems like this environment had disregarded my thoughts on being guarded at all times. However…"

The Unkindled Knight had a feeling that there are only a handful that are on the other areas of Mantle that were being dealt with by the others. Seeing in the situation he is in; he knew he had to let loose of holding back. I'm going to protect its people no matter what! Even if I were to be killed so easily!"

Insert Honkai Star Rail OST - Dramatic Irony

He puts the Greatshield onto his back and carries the Wolf Knight's Greatsword with his right. His left, however, had flames in it. He coats the blade in fire to deal more damage to these enemies infected by the abyss before putting the Wolf Knight's Greatshield back on. He waited patiently while his fingers were tapping on the hilt in expectation. "Let them attack first. Being the one to do it would only give them the advantage. As for the Darkwraiths…" He had plans for them. But for now, he would deal with the Grimm first.

This paid off when five Sabyrs rushed towards him before lunging. Before they could tackle him to the ground, he swung his Wolf Knight's Greatsword with ease so that it could decapitate them in one go. Two more rushed towards him. Ash raises his shield as he blocks one attack before fatally stabbing the other through its neck, killing it instantly. He quickly pulled out the sword before swinging his sword, which he was able to decapitate.

More Sabyrs appeared on the corners of the street. Yet, they were easily dealt with by either getting slashed, stabbed, or decapitated. In some instances, Unkindled was granted an opening to use his magic, where he placed a hand on the floor, where flames spurted from the ground around him. Those who rushed towards him had met their unfortunate end and were immediately engulfed in flames. As the fire died down, the Unkindled stood up and immediately saw more Grimm coming in his direction. Frustratedly, he gritted his teeth underneath his helmet as he put the Greatshield right in front as he readied for another round. "Great. Just when I thought I had the advantage, there seemed to be more of them." No matter, he is going to persist in fighting.

Just when the Grimm were approaching him, they stopped in their tracks. Ash didn't seem to notice any changes. Yet, he sensed as though they had been startled by something.

Honkai Star Rail OST Ends

Apology if this chapter is short. I just haven't written a lot yet.

Tell me what you like in this story and what improvements I can make?

Now, I am going to continue writing this chapter. It will be a while until it is finished.