The Primordial Instinct

AN: Alright first and foremost I just want to say how some of these 'guest' reviewers are a bunch of little bitches especially this one calling himself 'Matt' who said and I quote.

'you so need a brain. Kaguya was the Ten Tails.'

No she wasn't dipshit it's stated in the fucking manga that the Juubi was the fucking tree named Shinju and that after Kaguya ate the forbidden fruit growing from it did it get a fucking physical incarnation.

So to put it in small words for your obviously tiny brain… THE SHINJU IS THE FUCKING JUUBI. While Kaguya was an alien who came to earth from another FUCKING planet. After eating the fruit did she become the physical host of it, its never implied that she was the actual fucking ten tail dipshit.

After all in the manga it is said that long before the time of man did the SHINJU create everything and GAVE life to all as it was the PRIMORDIAL being of the elemental nation.

Sheesh you can tell who actually reads the manga and who just skims through it saying 'Picture pretty.' from comments like this.

So to all those who actually left me amazing reviews I wish to say thanks those were amazing and one actually made me aware of the many errors in the prologue so those have been fixed or the one I was able to catch.

So Thank You Very Much but now here is the official first chapter of my new story. The fate one might be posted sometime this week or next weekend.

DISCLAIMER: I OWN SHIT!


-Last Time-

"So I decided instead to bring you back with me and help me as my demi-god and since Chaos chose you to be her champion there is nothing Zeus can do to you this way you'll always be close to me and help me bring peace whether he likes it or not."

Naruto was liking this more and more going with his mother and helping her annoy a stuck up prick well.

"Where do i sign up?" Both women smiled at him knowing what he was thinking.


-Present Time-

Naruto and his mother were now waiting on Chaos to send them back to the realm of Hera.

"So what am I to do once we get there mom?" Naruto asked while looking at her and stretching lightly.

"Unfortunately I will have to send you to a camp for demigods for now until you can prove yourself a true hero in my realm then and only then can I make you a god and have you at my side at all times." Hera told him, making him frown but nod.

"That might be a little harder to do than we all think." when Chaos said this she saw them look at her so she continued on

"Well you see Naruto might have the Shinju in his control but not his power therefore your chakra is out of control so I suggest training your chakra control once more oh and just because you have the knowledge of all your friends jutsu's doesn't mean you can actually do them right away." Naruto's shoulders were slumping more and more as she went on.

"Another thing yes your clones are an excellent way to train but not with this as the Shinju is disrupting your chakra flow until you can fully tame it so I believe you can only make around two to three clones at a time now." With those final words Naruto was on the floor on all fours crying tears of despair.

"M-my training cheat move is useless now and now I have to actually train." Hera laughed at her son knowing how much he loved that move.

"Cheer up my child with my blessing you'll be able to use the very basics of the Sharingan at least everything else you'll have to once more work for it and I"ll love to see you once more show me why you were the best choice to be my champion." Chaos said while smiling at him.

"Wait, if the Shinju is a fraction of you can't you give me full control over it so I can use my clone again." Naruto asked with hope in his eyes.

"Why yes I can… but I won't since it'll be a lot more fun to see you grow once more. I mean really Naruto I'm here all by myself I need some sort of entertainment no?"

"And me being unable to properly protect myself is entertaining." Naruto deadpanned.

"You won't be unprotected since as my champion nothing in creation can fatally hurt you… I did tone it down so you won't be too overpowered. I can't have a mortal stronger than the gods straight off the bat now can we? That would just be weird plus it will placate little Zeus for a bit and keep him off your back if he knows that the bastard son of his wife can be put in his place." Naruto nodded at her reasoning but then another thought came to mind.

"So what can I do?"

"You'll be able to make as stated anywhere from three to five(with my blessing of course) clones, the Rasengan, Sage mode although nature is limited there, the basic Sharigan predict, copy(though nothing uses chakra so demigod related techniques can't be copied) and the ability to put people under genjutsu even though I know you are not good at them with the Sharingan you can at least make people fall asleep and hypnotize them." Naruto was shocked that he was basically no stronger than a chunin.

"I'd also recommend you not try and use the bijuu cloak too much since it only worked last time because I allowed it to so I could bring the Shinju and you here. Once you tame the Shinju or separate it once more you can freely use it again." Chaos informed him while he nodded along.

"With my blessing you won't have that much difficulty learning everything once more it will just take time. Also should Zeus truly try and smite you all you have to say 'Chaos grant me strength' and you will have instant access to your bijuu cloak just don't kill him… not yet at least." Naruto tilted his and looked at her confused.

"There is a prophecy going on right now and Zeus although he really isn't needed but for better or worse needs to be included for now as the prophecy involves his daughter and the children of his brothers." Naruto nodded.

"Man, I just finished one prophecy and now I have to help with another." Naruto whined while placing both arms behind his head.

"Can I at least know this prophecy or is it top secret?" Naruto asked while looking at both his mother and Chaos.

"The Prophecy itself is as follows…"

'A Half-Blood of the Eldest Gods Shall Reach Sixteen Against All Odds And See the World in Endless Sleep The Hero's Soul, Cursed Blade Shall Reap A Single Choice Shall End His Days, Olympus to Preserve or Raze'

"That is the full prophecy and since Zeus, my brothers Poseidon and Hades are considered the big three we all know it refers to them." Hera sadi while watching her son go into a thinking pose and seemed to be deep in thought.

"I see… I don't get it at all!" Naruto said after finally slamming his fist into his open palm making Hera sigh in exasperation.

Chaos though laughed loudly always loving Naruto goofy and idiotic personality since it always brought so much warmth and joy to whoever accompanied him on his journeys.

"Well now that you know your limits it's time to send you two off I was able to get everything pertaining ninjutsu, genjutsu, taijutsu, kenjutsu,senjutsu and everything else a ninja might need who can use everything since you are now the last shinobi given how the Shinju and you unknowingly took all the chakra with you." Naruto was amazed then remembered that the old man sage did bestow upon him all his power so it sort of made sense.

"Ok I'm ready when you are Lady Chaos, mom." both smiled at him.

"As soon as you get into camp I will claim you so prepare yourself since I'm sure my husband would not be too pleased." Hera warned him, making him crack his knuckles and grin.

Chaos nodded and snapped her fingers making a burning sensation appear on Naruto's left pec.

"That mark is my symbol and what marks you as my champion but I'll claim you as well when you reach camp to make Zeus think twice about attacking you." Chaos told him while Naruto rubbed his chest,

"Well hold on but giving how you can use the Flying Thunder God this shouldn't feel that much different."

"Good luck my Champion and once you're done bringing peace to that realm I shall reward you handsomely."

All Naruto was able to see next was a flash of white before he felt the familiar sense of weightlessness and the rush of traveling faster than light itself.


-Unknown Forest-

The first thing he felt was exhaustion and then chakra depletion.

'Crap come on lady Chaos you could have at least put me here fresh instead of leaving me like how I was in the war.'

Naruto decided to take a few minutes to rest before figuring out where in the world he was. He was thankful that his mom at least told him he would be dropped off as close as possible to camp.

As he was resting Naruto heard roars and felt the very ground shake making his eyes open to see a mass of monsters chasing three kids and a goat man?

'Two girls one about twelve another around seven and the boy seems to be fourteen the goat man can't really tell.'

"Well fuck." Was all Naruto said before running towards them while trying to see what he could do at the moment.

'I have enough chakra for maybe two rasengans or one big ball rasengan… I can also probably make six clones shit now. I really wish I could have told lady Chaos to heal me up a bit at least.'

With that Naruto decided to throw caution to the wind and just focus on saving the kids.

"Hit the dirt NOW!" the kids and goat man turn in time to see Naruto in the air with a huge sphere of what looked like blue energy of some kind.

'Chō Ōdama Rasengan!'(Massive Rasengan)

Everyone watched as his attack made contact with the one eyed monsters called the cyclops.

"Who is that!?" The twelve year old black hair punk looking girl screamed while shielding herself and her friends with her shield.

"Doesn't matter who I am right now, I'll take it from here!" Naruto screamed back, not moving a muscle trying to get even a sliver of nature energy.

The four of them looked at him like he was crazy and little did they know that when it came to fighting to protect Naruto Uzumaki always went big.

When two giant black dog looking monsters took a step forward towards him Naruto vanished in a burst of speed and appeared in between them aiming a punch to both their faces. Unfortunately Naruto saw them both dodge or so they thought before the two of them were sent flying in opposite directions slamming through a tree before turning to golden dust.

Before any could see the marking around his eyes disappeared and his onyx black eyes were back.

'Really! Only five seconds of sage mode is all I can muster right now what the hell!'

Naruto jumped back landing in front of the kids and watched a whole bunch more of the dogs approaching with more cyclops and three hideous looking bird looking ladies.

"Give us the child of lighting demigod and we'll let you li-"

The other two looked towards her to see a strange knife in her forehead with a piece of paper attached to it. The three of them were about to laugh at the idiot demigods blunder until the paper fizzled and exploded.

"What the hell was that!"

They both saw one of their own turn to golden dust from the simple knife and both turned to glare at the blond only to see all five of them running towards the camp.

"Get back here you bastard!"

"Great, now they're even more angry. Was that your plan from the beginning blondy?" The punk girl asked him as they ran with him taking the rear.

"Quite the opposite really. I was hoping that would distract them long enough for us to make it to camp." Naruto said while throwing more behind him in a random direction taking out a few of the hell hounds as he recently found out they were called.

"Well with my shield i can probably buy you some time to get to camp so…"

"We all make it or none of us do." Naruto told her while looking her in the eyes making her stop her train of thought and nod at him.

"Well do you have any more tricks up your sleeves?" the blond boy asked, making him think and slam his fist on his hand.

"One but i'll most likely pass out from exhaustion." Naruto told them, making them nod.

"Do it Grover and Luke will catch and carry you blondy." the blackette said

"Sure thing sparky." Naruto fired back at her, making her eyebrow twitch in annoyance.

"My name is Thalia." she told him while glaring at him, making him chuckle and smile while stopping and lifting his hand in the air while two clones popped into existence at his sides.

"Naruto… Now get behind me and prepare to catch me."

Luke and Grover did as told while Thalia and the little girl kept running towards camp.

'Fūton: Rasenshuriken!'

With his attack ready Naruto threw it at the monster, catching a good chunk of them and making the weaker ones flee while the bird ladies were still there with small cuts and scrapes.

'Lord Hades will make you pay boy!"

All Naruto could make out while trying to remain conscious was the panicked voices of Luke and Grover screaming for Thalia?

He risked lifting his head only to see that Thalia girl get smacked hard by one of the few remaining cyclops.

'Shit I-I'm sorry I couldn't be stronger right now.'

Just before losing consciousness he saw a bolt of lighting hit Thalia before passing out to the screams of the little blond girl.


-Mindscape-

As his body healed and rested, Naruto was inside his mindscape staring down the Shinju who was doing the same.

"It seems even now you're causing me trouble Shinju." Naruto knew it couldn't speak as Chaos said it was only her Chaotic nature in physical form and as such Chaos has no conscious only instincts.

"You kept me from saving a little girl and now because of your interference in me I have to face her friends and tell them I'm sorry for not being able to save her."

"I swear to you I'll make you submit to me so I never have to see another person die in front of me."

Naruto put his hand on the Shinju's snout and squeezed taking a bit more chakra from it to speed up his recovery.

"I swear this on my partners and best friend's name… Kurama!"

As he made his oath he felt himself awake in the real world. He knew time in his mindscape was different since it was all in his head he could make time last as long as he wanted.


-Real world-

Naruto awoke to a sore body and dry throat. He looked around for water and saw a glass on his bedside but when he reached for it all he did was smack towards the floor.

"You should rest some more since I bet your body is still not fully recuperated." Naruto turned to look at a half horse half man speaking to him.

"My name is Chiron, trainer of heroes and one of the counselors here at camp half-blood." he introduced himself knowing the look in Naruto's eyes.

"Um, hi I'm Naruto Uzumaki." Naruto said not knowing what else to say.

"Nice to meet you Naruto now let me ask you, do you know who your godly parent is?"At his nod Chiron started to stroke his beard.

"Good then rest and when you can walk we will present you to the camp and see if you are claimed."

"Are the ones I came into camp ok Chiron?" He asked, seeing his shoulders stiffen a bit not too much to be noticed by normal people but to a shinobi it was enough to answer his question.

"I see it was Thalia wasn't it?"

"Y-yes her father made a grave mistake as she was never to be born so she would have always been chase had she remained among us but he didn't want his brother to get his hands on her so he decided to make her a pine tree with the added benefits of making a protective barrier around the camp forever being out shield."

Naruto now knew who her father was and he was angry at him basically letting her neither die nor live to always be in limbo.

"Thank you for answering me honestly now if you'll excuse me I'm going to sleep some more." he need to get his stregth up and calm himself so he kindly told him to fuck off.

"I understand, do try to rest. I'll send someone over to help you later."

Now he was left alone with his thoughts and he didn't like that as for one he was an idiot so thinking wasn't his forte he knew that.

'Damn it where is Shikamaru when you need him!"

Time passed by with him waking up periodically to drink water with the help of some camper until he could finally stand by himself three days later.

As he walked out of the big house as he found out what it was called he looked around at all the campers walking around doing their own thing or training on what looked like swordplay hand to hand combat and rock climbing.

"Finally awake I see?" Chiron asked while trotting up to him.

"I stayed any longer and I'm sure my back would meld together to the bed." Naruto joked making Chiron smile at his bad joke,

"Come the other that came with you has already been claimed so we must now introduce you."

"So who are their godly parents?" Naruto asked while walking with his arms behind his head and lifting his legs into the air a little too high.

"Well Luke is the son of Hermes, god of thieves, travelers, and the messenger of the gods. While Annabeth the little girl with you is the daughter of Athena goddess of wisdom, battle strategy, and architecture." Chiron told him, making him nod along even if he had no idea who they were.

"Now wait a bit… Children gather around to welcome a new member this is Naruto Uzumaki and h-" Chiron stopped when the bronze peacock feather symbol of Hera appeared over his head along with the symbol Chaos the literal creator of their world and all others.

"A-all hail Naruto Uzumaki son of Hera queen of olympus and goddess of marriage, motherhood and patron of women. As well as the champion of Lady Chaos, creator of all." Chiron and even the pudgy man with a soda can kneeled before him making him make a face of disgust.

"You guys really bow… well that lame can't you just I don't know shake my hand and give me a pat on the back as a welcome." Before Chiron could say anything, a bolt of lighting came fast towards him.

If it wasn't for his shinobi training Naruto was sure he would have been hit. Before he could breath another came towards him making him dodge again and again he was beginning to see why Chaos called him a child.

Having had enough Naruto reached into his mind looking for a specific jutsu he always wanted to try finding it Naruto quickly ran through the hand signs and called out his jutsu.

'Raikiri!'(Lighting Blade)

Everyone saw as Naruto produced lighting of his own in his right hand and used it to literally cut Zeus' own lighting bolt.

Naruto stood there with another Lightning Blade ready to cut another lighting bolt should he need to but when he saw the sky clear he sigh and let his jutsu fade. As he did that he grabbed his hand and started breathing a little hard with sweat coming down his face.

'So this is what Lady Chaos meant with me not being used to the techniques I got from the other if one signal Lighting Blade used so much chakra. I need to start training again and fast can't be using untested jutsu right off the bat.'

"So what now?" Naruto asked the horse man who merely looked at him in shock at his deeds.


-Mount Olympus-

Zeus was fuming at his wife's bastard for merely living and then having the guts to show him up using his own element.

"It seems he's better at controlling lighting than you eh Zeus?" Poseidon laughed at his little brother while Zeus merely glared at him before turning at his wife.

"Don't you dare tell me anything Zeus or should I remind you of all the times you cheated on me and sired all those children of yours?" Hera said while looking him dead in the eyes making him look away before turning back to her ready to fight again only to shut him up again.

"At least my son is capable of protecting himself instead of needing daddy to help him or give him the gift to become a hero." Hera said and Zeus knew what she meant so he merely looked away.

"Can he be trusted sister?" Hades asked her.

"Of course he can brother or do you think Chaos would have made him a champion of hers otherwise." Hera answered making him frown but nod.

"So where was he all this time?" Demeter asked while looking at the image of her sister's demigod.

"In his original realm as he was the child of prophecy in his own world." This made everyone curious.

"Oh another child of prophecy?" Athena asked while already curious of this boy.

The blue eyed boy that would call the names of the nine beast and play with them

"A simple prophecy but a very effective one as my son grew to love and be loved by all in his realm to the point where all the separated parts of the primordial being in his realm loved and trusted him like the prophecy stated."Hera said while smiling at the image of her son.

"So if you leave my son alone I'll leave your son alone dear." Hera whispered this simple threat to Zeus' ear making him look at her in shock.

"R-right so long as he stays in line I-I won't try anything." Everyone looked between the two knowing Hera made a very scary threat if Zeus was agreeing to let the child live.

"B-but one wrong move and I'll end him Hera." Zeus threatened trying to keep control.

"As you wish." Hera could see all the gods interested in her son but none more than Aphrodite.

Hephaestus didn't seem that interested in him even if he was technically his half-brother.

Ares seem more interested in his fighting prowess than anything else.

Aphrodite just seemed to ooze out lust as she watched her son walk about the camp she would need to warn her son of her.

Demeter was looking intently at him more in the way of seeing if he ate enough cereal or not so Hera merely rolled her eyes at her.

Athena was using her big brian to calculate if he was useful to her in any way and Hera quite honestly didn't like it.

Apollo was grinning from ear to ear having seen how her son had an effect on aphrodite and she knew he was planning on using him to pick up mortal women.

Artemis seemed to take an interest but nothing more than that maybe it was the permanent feeling of nature that accompanies her son when he became a full fledged sage.

Hermes well from what she could see he didn't even look his way being too preoccupied with the cell phone of his so she moved on.

Dionysus was just reading another magazine about wines and vineyards so she left him be.

Hestia seemed to smile at her before giving the image of Naruto a gentle smile and Hera knew her eldest sister felt the family oriented love her son gave off.

Hades on the other hand nodded at her and went back to trying and dissolved the fighting between his brother on who their mother loved most.

Poseidon trusted her so she knew he wouldn't try anything for fear of her wrath so she wouldn't judge him too badly she also knew about his demigod son so she had leverage should he try something.

Zeus on the other hand was the one she would keep an eye on very, very closely.

Zeus over at his throne felt a chill down his spine as if he was being watched and judged for a crime he had yet to commit.

For now Hera would watch the other gods and goddess some more than others but soon she would determine who could be allies and who would be obstacles. She also felt that maybe her future daughter in law was here as she panned to the other goddess. She smiled at some and nodded as she could see one falling for her son.

'I have all the time in the world to plan on how to get my son together with her hehe so I'll wait, grandchildren can wait a few centuries.'

Back at camp Naruto was sneezing up a storm wondering who was talking about him so much and he also felt a feeling of dread as if someone was plotting something with him in mind.


AN: Done with the first chapter damn that was long… so as you can see if you saw the hints there are a few pairing choices already so leave your favorite in the reviews so I can see who you guys favor more.

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