A Friend Suggested I write this story... a Mika or just a new OC story set right around the Kyuubi Attack.
To give my human, non bloodline oc time to actually grow and develop without bloodlines or nepotism.
Do you like this idea?
College and work is sucking up so much time. Sorry for the delays and shorter chapters.
Neji's sweat boiled as it fell on his green glowing palms, just in time for the fish beneath him to start moving, wriggling with life once more. He laughed, proud. "I did it!" He crowed, making the sparring trio of Mika, Shin and Hinata stop and turned to him with pride in their eye.
"Great!" Mika called out, rushing to Neji. "That is something else, that technique takes more six or more months to get even the basics. Prodigy status is definitely proved here."
Hinata, who had managed that trick even faster than Mika had, beamed at him while Shin killed and started to devour the previously revived fish. "You really are something else, Neji."
Naruto, failing at the rasengan... again, made failed to pop his balloon. "What's so great about that."
Mika sighed "Naruto, the Mystic Palm is a pure control. Something that even few Kage can manage, hell even the Fourth was not capable of the Mystic Palm by all metrics. There is a reason Tsunade was seen as so dangerous to entire armies, she capitalized on amazing skill and raw control to create craters with single blows. It is something you could never dream of doing without your constant sucking on the Fox's teat."
Gaping, Naruto looked at Mika as if he had never seen him before. "Why are you so mean?"
"Because I am allergic to stupid." Mika paused. "I'll make you a deal, you show me what Jiriaya taught you. If I cannot manage to master the Rasengan in a week, I'll be nice to you from here on out." Hinata and Neji all smirked, Shin looking at Mika with a hopeful glint in his maniacal eyes.
Naruto nodded, eyes sharp. "It's really hard... Deal!"
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Jiraiya returned to Naruto as night fell, figuring it would be time to give Naruto some encouragement. Hearing the boy shouting, screaming. "This is so not fair, how'd you get the first stage done so fast?" Hurrying over up the hill that lead to Naruto's training ground, he was stunned to see Mika, Hinata and Neji all using the balloons to easily, effortlessly use the first stage of the rasengan in their hands.
Hinata shrugged. "It's not hard, we do harder, more control heavy jutsu on the regular."
"It's not much different than the rotation." Neji said.
Mika nodded. "The Mystic Palm is harder."
Gaping, Jiraiya looked onward. "How is that even... Naruto, why'd you even show them?"
Naruto turned. "I wanted them to be nicer to me, they said they would be if they couldn't get the get the first stage in the next week... it took them like five minutes."
"I, ugh... fine, you three. If you cannot get the Rasengan in the next... you'll never try the rasengan again."
They all just shrugged. "Sure."
Mika frowned. "It's a costly justu, I probably won't use it anyway."
The three kids would to Jiraiya shock, master the second phase by the next hour...
And it was only then that Jiraiya would realize that all three were more than geniuses, but prodigies of a whole other level...He was not sure he liked it. Few geniues ever turned out well, but three of them? Three geniuses all about the same age, strength and power...
It told of either the greatest of times...
Or something far less good.
Chapter end, tell me what you think in the reviews.
This was a joy to write.
Love, your Ninja Overlord,
Mika.
