Hey guys Volt here there will not be a chapter this week due to the Hurricane and my family needing to stay with me so I won't have enough time to finish what i have written for chapter 4 and be able to re read and edit what needs to be edit
Currently i am actually re writing chapter 1 and 2 to be a bit more similar to chapter 3 in the sense of how i use dialogue
I also have some answer to 4 questions i was asked and 1 comment that i would like to explain since clearly the person read all of 2 words of my chapter and did not finish before commenting
Let's start with the comment. I appreciate you for saying that my idea sounds interesting but my format is bad and that it kills wanting to read more of it….. No duh the format is bad this is my first time writing a story and i say it almost every chapter i'm learning while i go and there will be rewrites and fixes as i go i'm not just gonna post something and not fix it
Now for the more fun questions
No i am not going to be overpowered i feel like that defeats the purpose of a story if the mc is just broken at the start. i feel as if my strength with my team is fair due to training them for 2 years prior to the start of my journey and a freshly minted trainer shouldn't be able to beat me let alone hurt my pokemon that won't be the case for long my mc humbling is around the corner
No i won't be capturing a legendary for awhile in a story sense i feel it's not fair to be that strong ( also i hate unovan legendaries outside of Zekrom and i think i said box art legends are off the table)
Honest I am regretting not changing Ash's kanto journey along with Ash and Gary not knowing my OC due to me stating the families were friends so i might retcon or just rewrite chapter 1 just a little bit to fix that issue
I honestly don't plan to capture too many pokemon i feel like i will lose track of them along with character development for 100 pokemon seems a bit much I feel like i'm going to pull a TRAVELER ( amazing fic btw definitely go read it) and limit myself to a team of 6 from the starting region and then grab one or two mons from each region as im passing I don't have a set number but definitely not more then 25 I want each pokemon to have their own personality and traits
Well that's about it against THANK YOU for reading my FIRST ever fic and will continue with me on the journey and if i see that i can handle it i might start a second one or maybe a story based on Ash as the focal point since people like that more than OCs and outside of stories like ( Essence by vincentgrey21 and Traveler by The Straight Elf) I haven't seen or read any really well fleshed out Ash centric fics
Chapter 4 will be out around October 3-6
