Hey everyone, It's been a long time since i uploaded, and i don't really have an excuse as to why I haven't uploaded a new chapter of Hyperdimension Neptunia an New Life, i want to finish the story, but there was a lot i felt could have been done better. Since it's been so long, i decided to start from the beginning.
Also, looking back, my writing was bad, with too many mistakes and bad grammar, but over the past couple years I've been practicing, and I have gotten better.
If you're new here, which you most likely are since it's been six years since I started the story, fair warning: I'm still not the best writer, so I'm sorry if I messed up somewhere. Also I'm going to try to update monthly
Anyway, I hope you enjoy
Raymond Rose: Gender: male
race: Mexican-American Eye color: Brown
15 years old; 5 foot 5 inches Skin color: very light Brown
Hair: short and messy :color black with a little bit of red
clothes: a red zip-up hoodie, a white t-shirt, black pants, red and white shoes, and a silver locket around his neck.
City: LA (Side note: the first story had Ray in New York; I don't really have an reason for doing this)
in a group home for orphans
Raymond's POV
"Raymond Do you have any idea how much trouble you're in"
"Mr Johnson, I know I took things an little too far, but in my defense, he tried to attack me with a knife. I could have been killed."
"You broke both his arms after you disarmed him."
"I just wanted to make sure he didn't try again, and besides can't you forget about this? It's my birthday." I said
"I don't care you put him in the hospital, and to tell you the truth, I don't like you; in fact, I only took this job because the pay is good."
"Okay, first off, wow, that is an pretty shit thing to do, so what am I in for?" I said,
"Cleaning duty for two months by yourself; that is all now leave My office." I leave Mr. Johnson's office only to find Noah right out side, "So what happened?"
"I got cleaning duty by myself for two months." I said,
"Sorry to hear that If it makes you feel any batter, I saved a piece of your cake."
"Thanks, but I have to tell you something. I plan on running away tonight. I can't take it here anymore. I don't know where I'll go, but you're my only friend here, so I thought you should know."
Noah looked sad. "I understand this place is pretty bad. I wish you luck."
"Thank you for everything." I said a little sadly, I went to my room too get the little belonging I have, and waited until after Mr. Johnson left to leave
Leaving the group home, I started walking, trying to get as far away as possible. After an couple hours, I hear an gunshot very close by. Not knowing which direction the shot came from, I just kept walking forward until I saw a man come out of an alley. He had blood on him.
Not even giving it an second thought, I started running. Lucky for me, I was also right next to an alley so he couldn't get an good shot at me. There was a right turn in the alley so I took it to avoid getting shot for a couple more seconds. There was now a six-foot wall in front of me. I jumped and got over it, but my foot hit the edge and I started to fall at that moment.
I was so scared because of this Mistake That men would catch up to me and kill me, but before I hit the ground, I saw a bright light, and the next thing I knew, I was falling from the sky. "CRAP CRAP CARP CARP TREES!" I hit several tree branches before hitting the ground. "Ow, so much pain!" everything started going dark.
eight hours later
Neptune :Virtua forest
"Ugh, finally finished." With all those quests now, maybe Histy will get off my back for awhile. I can't wait to get back home and have some pudding" Neptune started walking home until she saw an boy on the ground
"Hey, you're not dead, are you?" Neptune grabbed a broken tree branch and started poking the boy with it.
The boy started coughing for an second "Oh, thank goodness, now that I know he's alive, I should have compa take an look at him." Neptune transformed into purple heart and picked up the unconscious boy. And goes to the basilicom
Arriving at the basilicom Neptune/purple heart is met by histoire and compa "Welcome ba... Neptune. Who is this and what happened to him?" Histoire says
"I don't know his name, and I found him in Virtua Forest, and compa thank goodness you're here could you take a look at him?"
"Such Nep-Nep, I'll take an look at him, just put him down in the guestroom, but be ready just in case he needs to go to the hospital." Compa says
After Neptune put the boy in the guestroom, she turned back into her normal form and left the room so Compa could work. "Neptune, may I ask why you didn't just take him to the hospital to begin with?" histoire says
"Well, Histy, to be honest, my first thought was that Compa could help him, but thinking about it now, it's probably better that he's here so we could find out who he is and get him home." Neptune says
One checkup and two puddings later, "compa you done already, so is he going to be okay or do I need to take him to the hospital?" Neptune says
"Well, I did the best I could, and he was pretty beat up, but he should be okay. But if he doesn't wake up by tonight, take him to the hospital right away." Compa says
"Compa, did you find any kind of ID or phone on him so that we can inform his family or friends what happened to him" histoire says
"Sorry, Histy, but the only thing I found was an silver locket with a picture of a baby boy with his parents." Compa says
"I see now the baby must be him, and the parents must be his mom and dad," Neptune says proudly of herself.
"Neptune, that must is pretty obvious, well There isn't much we can do now but wait for him to wakes up" histoire says
Raymond's POV
"Ugh, I guess that wasn't an dream with how much pain I'm in." Looking at my surroundings, I don't recognize the room at all. Not knowing where I am, I start to panic, thinking I might still be in danger.
"So you're finally awake." an cute girl with purple eyes and short light purple hair, my first thoughts were that she's a cosplayer or she's being forced to wear that, and now I'm in some deep shit.
"U-Uh, w-who are you and where am I?" I said very nervously, "I'm Neptune, the protagonist, the one who saved you And you're in my guestroom" Oh god, I'm in deep shit.
"T-Think you for saving me and before we Continue you're not being forced to do this right there's not Some Scary parson making you do all this?" I said
"The answer is no, I'm not being forced to do anything, and what makes you think that?" Neptune says
"W-Well, I don't really see people dress like that unless they're cosplayers, so I thought someone might be making you it." I said
"i'll have you know I always dress like this, and there is nothing wrong with how I dress; oh, I almost forgot, and what's your name and where do you live?" Neptune says
"My name is Raymond, and I don't live anywhere; I'm just some homeless orphans," I said sadly.
"I'm sorry to hear that, but now what I am supposed to do, maybe Histy will know Ray, I'll be back in an minute." (Great, she left, and I still don't know if I'm in danger.)
After a few minutes, Neptune came back with a fairy on an book "Neptune, you didn't give me any medicine, did you?" I said
"Compa said she didn't give you anything."
"Okay, then, just to be clear, you can also see the fairy on a book right next to you?"
"Of course I see Histy I mean how couldn't you see this little Cutie" (it was at this moment I Realize I'm in an different world)
"Oh god I should have realized sooner I only went from almost getting killed to falling out of the sky" I said
"Ray, what are you talking about?" Neptune says
"...Okay I'm going to Sound Crazy and you're probably not going to believe me but I am not from this world" I said
Neptune and Histy look at encounter and than back at me "Raymond we believe you but now I am unsure what to do with you" Histy says
"Really both of you believe me just like that and what do you mean unsure what to do with me?" I said
"Ray Of course I believe you the same thing happened to me one time well Except for the someone trying to kill me part but i don't think that's important right now"Neptune says
"Raymond I am unsure what to do because of your Unique Situation you're not from this dimension and when Neptune told me that you're a orphan we Planned to send you to an orphanage but now that I know that you're from a different dimension I worry you will end up homeless or dying somewhere once you're old enough to leave the orphanage because you know nothing of this dimension" Histy says
"Histy I have an idea how about we let him Stay here for awhile that way you could Teach him all of the important stuff that he needs to know and me and Nepgear could show him around planeptune" Neptune says
"Are you sure Neptune, what if he wants to go back to his home dimension not too Mention we don't even know this boy" Histy says
"I never want too go back, there is nothing for me there" I said sadly
"Because Histy I thank everyone deserve a chance besides his so young and I don't think his a bad guy" Neptune says
"I won't stop you Neptune, but this could be an Long commitment to Help him" Histy says
"I know Histy, but I have good feeling about him" Neptune says
"thank you Neptune" was all I could say before starting to tears up
"Hey there's no need to start crying now How about I get compa to Bring you something to eat to get your mind off of being sad okay" Neptune says
Before I could say anything she was already out the door I use my hands to Wipe away the tears away I than turn my attention too Histy
"Histy how came Neptune Decided I could stay here i mean I don't know much about what fairys do here But Neptune looks around my age if not an bit younger so shouldn't someone older be making this kind of Decisions?"
"I guess I should start by telling you the most important things first: I'm not an fairy; I'm a tome that contains the history of Gamindustri. There are four goddesses that protect Gamindustri and four nations that they rule over. CPU black heart goddess of Lastation, CPU green heart goddess of Leanbox, CPU white heart goddess of Lowee, and finally CPU purple heart goddess of Planeptune"
""Okay, that's a lot to take in, but I have to ask. You said that you're a tome that contains the history of Gamindustri, so you must be an important person, so who is Neptune?" I said
"I guess I should be honest with you Neptune is the CPU of planeptune" Histy says
"Neptune is an goddess but she looks like cosplayer, and you're a tome that contains the history of Gamindust. And I am to Stay here for who knows how long, this Sounds way to good too be true" I said
Before Histy could say anything Neptune came back with another cute girl with food
"Neptune is it True that you're an goddess" I said
"Histy you told him already I was hoping not too tell him until it was Necessary" Neptune says
"I didn't know you wanted to Keep it Secret, he Asked who you're so I told him Histy says
"Here yours food uh what's your name?" Compa says "Its Raymond" I said "okay here your food Ray-Ray, also Nep-Nep I have to go two get to work soon so I have to get going now" compa says
"Okay compa be safe, Ray now that you know that I'm an goddess what do think about me" Neptune says
"I mean you look like an cosplayer but so far you seem like an normal girl too me, Why do you ask? I said
Well I was Afraid if you knew that I was a goddess you are like, oh goddess please spare me and stuff," Neptune says " Neptune not to be mean but you don't look like you could hurt a fly, also, could I eat now before my food gets cold," I said
That's sweet of you to say but I could hurt a Dragon and yes you can eat now, I'll be back when you're done" Neptune says as she left the room with histoire
as I was eating I had a lot of thoughts, like dragon's are real here and the tome that contains the history of Gamindust, there are four goddesses and one safe me, I almost died two times today,
Before I knew it all my food was gone and a little while after Neptune came back, "so how was the food" Neptune says
"Real good I haven't had anything like that in an long time, Neptune What makes you an goddess" I said
"I don't know all I know is that I was born an goddess, why the question about it" Neptune says
"It's just why Take me in if you're an goddess surely there are better things you could be doing? I said, unsure of myself
"Not really, I mean everything has been Peaceful for awhile now, besides right now as far as I know you're the only person who needs help right now" Neptune says
"thank you Neptune" was I could say "why don't you get some rest now you look tired" Neptune says
"Okay I do feel tired, I don't know what time of day it is but goodnight" I said
"Goodnight Ray" Neptune says Leaving the room, as I fall into Sleep I thought to myself what have I gotten myself into
