Sun and Star: Save The Universe
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Author's Note
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One thing Naruto quickly realized about Star was her uniquely focused, yet often chaotic, approach to life. Turning a simple academic concern into a full-blown spectacle seemed to be within her exclusive domain of talents. As Star made her way toward Ms. Skullnick, Naruto braced himself, sensing the impending calamity yet unable to divert its course.
"Ms. Skullnick!" Star's voice, melodious and cheerful, cut through the tense classroom atmosphere like a knife. The teacher, already on edge and clenching chalk so tightly it crumbled, spun around to face her. The room fell into a hushed anticipation, the air thick with the students' collective anxiety.
"Star, darling," Skullnick growled, her patience worn thin, "What whimsical request do you have now?"
"Oh, nothing much, Ms. Skullnick! Just a teensy-weensy favor," Star began, her voice dripping with innocence. "Could you, perhaps, magically transform my F into an A? Pretty please?"
The classroom erupted in a mixture of gasps and stifled laughter, the audacity of Star's request shocking even the most seasoned of Skullnick's adversaries.
"You're pestering me over a grade? Now?" Skullnick's voice boomed, echoing off the classroom walls. "On top of everything, my romantic escapade ended in disaster at the dock!"
"The dock?" Star echoed, confusion painting her features.
"The location is hardly the point!" Skullnick exclaimed, throwing her hands up in frustration, signaling her resignation to a loveless existence on dry land.
Naruto sighed, his frustration mounting. The entanglement of personal affairs with professional responsibilities seemed all too common, yet wholly avoidable outside of truly serious circumstances.
Eyes sparkling with a sudden inspiration, Star offered a solution. "What if I use a spell to find you the perfect partner, and in return, you adjust my grade to something a bit more... stellar?"
Skullnick's bewilderment was palpable. "You'd do that?"
Gathering her magical energy, Star twirled on the spot, her wand aglow with potent magic. "Prepare for a Love Storm!" she announced triumphantly.
"Star, no!" Naruto's warning came too late. A surge of green energy erupted from Star's wand, enveloping Skullnick and transforming her into a troll, much to the horror and fascination of the class.
"What have you done, Star?" Naruto groaned, pinching the bridge of his nose. This was not in the day's plans.
"I... I turned her into a troll," Star admitted, a mix of horror and awe in her voice.
The classroom, however, erupted into cheers, led by Justin's enthusiastic fist pump. "Star Butterfly rules!"
Skullnick, now a troll, wailed in despair, "I'm hideous!"
Naruto, ever the voice of reason, urged Star to undo her spell. "This isn't right. We need to change her back."
Agreeing, Star attempted to reverse the transformation. "Lightning Change Back!" With a flick of her wand, she, Naruto, and the trollified Skullnick vanished, reappearing in Naruto's yard.
Immediately on alert, Naruto deftly avoided an ambush by a lurking creature, demonstrating his ninja prowess by neutralizing the threat with precision and speed.
"What are you, some kind of royal knight in training?" Skullnick marveled, her trollish appearance doing little to hide her astonishment.
Their confrontation was interrupted by the arrival of Ludo and his minions, seizing the moment of supposed vulnerability.
The all too familiar scrawling drew their attention.
"Ludo! What are you doing here?"
"Catching you at your most distracted!" Ludo clenched his hand with a smirk.
"What?" Star crossed her arms with a small roll of her eyes, "I have been way more distracted than this."
"I don't know." The kappa said, "You seem…Pretty distracted."
"Nah, not really." She replied.
"Oh, well…" Ludo gaze down to his feet then look ahead with pointing finger past Star, "What's that over there?!"
"What?!" Star looked away, "Where?!"
Naruto let out a sigh and face palm.
"Get her!" The kappa shouted and his henchmen lunge with battle cries.
After the first encounter Naruto had made sure to fit several of his usual hunts with weapons. The closest monster had came to a stop with a shriek as a spear buried itself in its knee causing it crash in the down and causing several of the nearby monsters to stumble over it.
The distraction proved enough time for Star to go on the attack.
"Dagger Crystal Heart Attack!" Her wand fire a volley of crystal hearts at the monstrous group and the creatures cried out in pain as the hearts stab their bodies. "FEEL THE LOVE!"
While he didn't know how different the monsters biologies differed then anything he knew from earth's he used a dagger and dug at and slashed at where tendons or vital muscle areas in the arms and leg areas as he slipped past them.
One by one he disabled them. Jabbing the middle eye of the giant with his elbow before grasping the back of the head and slamming it into the ground before sling boarding to the chicken monster and slashing off a piece of his beak. It was obvious that most of them were not trained fighters as the moment it took to stop to complain the blond punched it into the jugular causing it to collapsed.
Ludo watched on in horror as this blond ruthlessly pieced his henchman up. He took no time to taunt or banter he was ruthlessly and quickly taking them apart.
"YOU HORR…"
"RAINBOW BLAST!" Star's attack zooms past over the kappa's head and it hit a gray minotaur, sending him flying into Skullnick with a crash. "NARWHAL BLAST! NARWHAL BLAST!" The princess notice Skullnick and the minotaur staring lovely at each other, "Awww…" A lobster monster tried to attack her from behind, only to meet one of her common attack spell. "Narwhal blast."
The assemble of monsters were soon dwindling down to a dozen. "Forget the girl for now! Get him! Get him!" Ludo barked out to his goons before he point at Naruto who was using a taser to zap one of the fly monsters!
"Hey, guys!" Star jumped in, "I think you forgot something." She held her wand up as it glow yellow, causing the monsters to halt their chasing and Naruto to jump off the wailing fly."Don't let her cast the spell!" The kappa roared.
"THERMONUCLEAR BUTTERFLY BLAST!" The princess announced loudly."NOT AGAIN!" Ludo and his minions screamed out before a loud explosion cover the whole yard with rainbow lights and butterflies then everything went white for a moment. After the explosion die out, Star blink few times to regain her sight and she look around to see unconscious monsters and several small fires."Whoa-ho-ho-ho-ho." Star laughed in surprise.
"Starting to get a hang of your control I see." Naruto walked up to her side with an impressed whistle.
"Well training helps. And you think that's cool wait til you can see the strongest spell I know." The princess placed her arms behind back with a lopside grin, leaning closer to him.
"G-G-Get up…" Ludo managed to recover as he shook unconscious bearded monster, "Get up!"
"Told you I wasn't distract…" Star said smugly before she looks down at the downed creature curiously, "Wait, I…I didn't kill that guy did I?"
"No, your psycho body guard is responsible!" The kappa pointed his staff at Naruto.
"Me! That's not even my dagger!" The blond cried out incredulously at the blade that was lodged in the creature's back.
Clearing the blond of murder the creature groaned weakly. "Oh, never mind, he's alive." He suddenly kicked the creature in head, "Get up! I don't pay you to nap!" He pull a purple scissor out then cut an portal in midair, "Get up, you dead weights!" The monsters weakly get up on shaking legs then walk though the portal, one of them drag the bearded monster across the yard by his legs.
"Ooh, you're so muscly…" The teen duo turns to see Skullnick flirting with the minotaur. "Oooh!" Star squealed with clenched hands and bouncing heels."Isn't that lovely?" Naruto repressed the urge to twitch.
"Yeah sure."
"So…" The princess skip up to the new couple, "Now that I hooked you up, how about that A?""Honey, please!" Skullnick waved it off, "I'd give you an A plus if I was still a teacher." She squeezed the monster's arm, "I'm setting sail with Captain Triceps here." The minotaur babbling excitingly."What about my A?" Star gasped as the couple walk through the portal."Try studying." The troll replied right before the portal close and the princess groan dejectedly.
"Don't look so down. You didn't get you're a but you made a painfully down bad woman happy. You did good." Naruto patted her back with a light chuckle.
"But my A…" Star whined with a pout, "Math thingy is so hard and I don't want to st…""I can tutor you in math after school when we get home."
"Let's study!" Star bounced on her feet. Doing a complete 180 on her attitude.
The blond then suddenly realized something and let out a groan.
"What's wrong?" the perky blonde asked.
"Going to have to tell the principal we're out of a teacher."
The next day, the class listen to Star's explanation about the absent of their teacher. "So anyway, long story short, Skullnick ran off with this weird man-bull guy thing to another dimension, and now she is gone forever." Star balanced her wand in one hand with swinging leg.
"…Star Butterfly rules!" Justin cheered before the students huddle around Star. "Wow, Star, that is so rad, girl!" Jackie smiled."Thanks!" The princess grinned widely.
Entering the classroom Naruto could see the class was practically read to nominate Star their queen if not class president. Only time would tell if this dismissal was for the better or worse.
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Chapter End
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Yep. Removing or I should say replacing Skullnick as a character. One of the many things thats going to shift changing things in a new direction.
