Crowpaw watched as the MoonClan patrol huddled briefly before padding away. His mind still buzzed from the border confrontation. He didn't know which cats were on that patrol, but he knew enough to sense that Thornstrike didn't like seeing them so close to the border. But why? After all, Shadowstorm hadn't seemed too bothered.
As if on cue, his mentor called out to him. "Crowpaw! Let's go." Shaking off his thoughts, the young apprentice obeyed, hurrying to catch up with the patrol. He fell in step beside Brightleaf, his paws brushing against the dry grass as he bent his ears forward, eager to overhear Shadowstorm and Thornstrike's conversation.
"You were out of line," he heard his mentor hiss. "That was unnecessary, and I will be informing Eaglestar of such."
Thornstrike's voice was low but brimming with indignation. "Out of line? Shadowstorm! They were trespassing! We can't just lay down and let MoonClan press up on our borders! If we do, they'll be invading our camp before we know it!" The fur along his spine bristled, and Crowpaw could see Thornstrike's claws flexing into the dirt.
Shadowstorm's gaze was steady as he responded, "Thornstrike, MoonClan did not cross into our territory. They were on their side of the river, and I won't tolerate unjust accusations. We can't let anger dictate our actions." Crowpaw was impressed by the calmness in Shadowstorm's voice, like a rock standing firm against a rushing stream.
Crowpaw's pulse quickened as he listened, striving to grasp the tension simmering between the two warriors. Thornstrike was usually steadfast and loyal, yet his demeanor now felt unusually intense. What had changed? Why was he suddenly so aggressive toward MoonClan?
"Unjust accusations?" Thornstrike spat back, his tone dripping with disbelief. His hackles rose, making him look even larger. "You think we should just stand back and let them get comfortable? We can't afford to do that! We can't let them think SunClan is weak!"
"It's not weakness, Thornstrike. It's strategy," Shadowstorm insisted, his patience showing through his measured words. "We need to show that we're strong, yes, but we can do that without unnecessary confrontations. If we escalate things now, we risk a much larger conflict with MoonClan. We can't let this grow out of control." Shadowstorm's eyes briefly flicked to the horizon, as if considering the possible repercussions of growing tensions between the two clans.
As the conversation continued, Crowpaw's thoughts raced. He could feel the tension between them like a dried branch, bending in the wind with apprehension, ready to snap without warning. The mention of Eaglestar sent a shiver down his spine – what if their leader supported Thornstrike's aggressive stance? Would things really come to a fight with MoonClan?
A quiet whisper from Brightleaf beside him pulled Crowpaw's attention away from the quarreling cats. "Thornstrike looks ready to claw Shadowstorm's fur off," she muttered, though Crowpaw sensed a hint of unease beneath her lighthearted tone. He could almost believe her for a moment. She added quickly, "I'd hate to be in the den when they talk to Eaglestar."
As he listened to Brightleaf, his gaze remained fixed on the two warriors. They were as different as fire and ice – Thornstrike's body practically thrumming with rage, his tail lashing back and forth like a lightning bolt. Meanwhile, Shadowstorm stood firm, his fur sleek and his voice as steady as ever.
"This conversation is over," the dark gray tom declared finally, narrowing his eyes at Thornstrike. "If you have any more you wish to say, you can save it for Eaglestar." Without another word, Shadowstorm hurried ahead of Thornstrike, leaving the older warrior to fume silently.
Crowpaw cast a sideways glance at Brightleaf before scurrying forward to catch up with Shadowstorm. As he approached, Shadowstorm glanced down at the young tom, his serious gaze softening. With each passing pawstep, Crowpaw found himself drifting closer to Shadowstorm, comforted by the SunClan deputy's presence. It seemed his mentor shared this comfort, draping his tail along Crowpaw's shoulder with a reassuring warmth as they moved stride for stride back to camp.
The familiar sights and sounds of the SunClan camp came into view as they neared. The camp was bathed in the soft light of the setting sun, casting long shadows over the clearing. The scent of freshkill filled the air, mingling with the chatter of returning warriors. Crowpaw felt a sense of relief wash over him as the tension of the border confrontation began to fade and the pleasantries of camp took its place. He looked back up at Shadowstorm, waiting for his mentor to speak.
"Crowpaw and Brightleaf, you were both great assets to SunClan today. Treat yourselves to some freshkill and rest in camp," Shadowstorm instructed, his tone firm but warm. For a moment, Crowpaw caught his eye, warmth filling him as he saw a glimmer of pride. Then, without sparing a glance, he added, "Thornstrike, come with me."
Crowpaw was not as disciplined. Craning his neck, he looked back to see Thornstrike's reaction. From this angle, the large scar that scored his left flank was prominent. That, coupled with his fierce amber gaze, made Crowpaw shudder. Quickly looking away, he hurried deeper into the camp.
After plucking a juicy-looking mouse from the freshkill pile, Crowpaw spotted Larkpaw and Willowpaw lounging beside the apprentices' den. The two she-cats were stretched out in the last rays of sunlight, occupied by casual conversation. The mouse secured in his jaws, he padded over to join them.
"Hi Crowpaw!" Larkpaw greeted him eagerly, her blue eyes shimmering with curiosity. She bounced to her paws, her tail flicking with excitement. "I saw Shadowstorm and Thornstrike looking for Eaglestar. What happened on your patrol?"
Willowpaw, meanwhile, was eyeing the mouse he had brought over. "More importantly, are you going to eat all that by yourself?"
Crowpaw let out an amused chuckle through the mouse. Dropping it to the ground, he pushed it gently toward Willowpaw. "Have some," he told her. Willowpaw didn't need to be told twice. With a grateful purr, she ravenously dug into the mouse. Crowpaw watched with faint amusement, wondering if she would even leave him a bite.
"Hello, harebrain! You haven't answered me yet!" Larkpaw huffed, her whiskers twitching in impatience, pulling his attention back. "Why did Thornstrike look so angry? Was it MoonClan? Are they invading?" His sister's questions sped up until her words were nearly a blur.
"No, MoonClan is not invading," he told her.
Larkpaw blinked, clearly unsatisfied with his brief answer. "Then what happened? Did you have a fight? Was there a border skirmish?" she pressed, leaning closer.
Crowpaw sighed, shaking his head. "N-no, there was no fight. It was just... tense. Thornstrike thought MoonClan was getting too close to the border, but they never crossed it."
Willowpaw paused from the mouse, glancing up at him with wide eyes full of concern. "Tense? What do you mean?" she asked, her voice quieter, more serious now.
Crowpaw shifted his paws uneasily. The memory of Thornstrike's bristling fur and harsh words flickered in his mind. "Thornstrike didn't hold back... he really confronted Shadowstorm about it." He hesitated, unsure how much more to say. "It was... uncomfortable to watch."
Larkpaw's tail flicked with curiosity. "Thornstrike must've been furious for it to get that tense."
Crowpaw frowned. "It wasn't just anger... it felt different." He glanced down at his paws, his fur prickling uncomfortably at the memory. "I don't think I've ever seen Thornstrike like that before."
Willowpaw's ears twitched, her hazel eyes darkening. "Do you think Eaglestar will step in?"
Crowpaw shrugged, still uneasy. "I guess we'll find out soon enough," he muttered, his ears twitching as he spotted Shadowstorm exiting Eaglestar's den. For a moment, he considered running up and asking him about the discussion, though he ultimately thought better of it and chose to stay with the other apprentices.
Larkpaw followed his gaze. "Are you going to go speak with him about it?"
"I-it's not my place. I'm just an apprentice. He's the deputy of SunClan!" Crowpaw didn't want to overstep, even if he was there when the altercation took place. A cold pit of doubt settled in his stomach. It didn't feel like his place.
Willowpaw shrugged, taking another bite of the mouse. "Maybe. But you were there. I'm sure Shadowstorm would listen if you had something to say."
Crowpaw shuffled his paws, uncertainty gnawing at him. "Maybe," he echoed, though he wasn't convinced. Would an apprentice's voice even matter in a discussion like that? He glanced one more time in the direction of Eaglestar's den but made no move to approach.
"Well, whatever happens, I'm sure we'll hear about it soon enough," Willowpaw said between mouthfuls, her tone more casual now. Her relaxed mood calmed Crowpaw.
Nodding, he decided it was best to let it go. "Yeah, you're probably right." He lowered himself to the ground across from Willowpaw and dug into the mouse, finding comfort in the familiar taste of freshkill as they returned to more idle chatter.
The next sunrise, Crowpaw and the other apprentices were woken early by their mentors and taken out onto the hills for battle training. The chill of dawn still clung to the air and the sun was still cresting over the hills. Now, he sat beside Shadowstorm, observing as Larkpaw and Willowpaw sparred. He was impressed by his sister's grit and determination against the older apprentice, even if things weren't going her way.
"You aren't going to overpower her, Larkpaw! You need to think strategically." Oakfoot's voice rang out. The senior warrior, and Larkpaw's mentor, was pacing nearby. His muscular frame cast a long shadow as he moved. Watching the training brought Crowpaw's mind back to their apprentice ceremony. He had felt a pang of jealousy back then, wishing he had been chosen by Oakfoot himself.
"Larkkit! Step forward," Eaglestar had commanded from atop the high mound. Larkpaw had looked as if she would burst with excitement. "Larkkit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Larkpaw. Your mentor will be Oakfoot."
Crowpaw recalled the murmurs of surprise among the gathered cats. Oakfoot had only recently finished mentoring Blazefur, yet here he was, taking on another apprentice so soon.
"Oakfoot, you were an exceptional mentor to Blazefur. I know it is rather soon for you to be taking on another apprentice, but I believe your discipline and fairness will make you the ideal mentor for Larkpaw. I expect you to pass on all that you know to her, much like you have for Blazefur."
Crowpaw had been so nervous during the ceremonies that he barely registered the moment Larkpaw touched noses with Oakfoot. His paws had felt like stones beneath him, and all he could think about was his turn. His mind had been racing, wondering with dread who his mentor would be.
"Crowkit!" He remembered the familiar hiss and the sharp nudge in his backside. It had been Morningfall, his and Larkpaw's adoptive mother. She had taken them in as her own after they'd been brought to SunClan, already expecting kits of her own. Though they were never very close, he would always feel indebted to her for protecting him and Larkpaw as kits. "Are you paying attention, Crowpaw? Crowpaw!"
"Wha-huh?" Crowpaw blinked back to the present, suddenly realizing he wasn't standing in front of Eaglestar anymore. His fur grew hot with embarrassment as he noticed everyone was watching him. It wasn't Morningfall nudging him. It was Shadowstorm, and from the sound of his voice, he didn't seem happy.
"If you're not going to pay attention, then why are we wasting our time here?" Shadowstorm scolded him. Crowpaw recoiled at his mentor's sharp words and shame tightened in his chest. He had never been so harsh in his criticism before. He was usually so encouraging. Crowpaw wondered for a moment if he maybe deserved it – he had been daydreaming, after all.
"I'm sorry, Shadowstorm. It won't happen again," he squeaked, ashamed and embarrassed to have been called out in front of the whole training group.
Shadowstorm narrowed his eyes and Crowpaw felt his chest tighten. He tensed, bracing himself for another tongue-lashing. But then his mentor's gaze softened and relief washed over Crowpaw like cool rain spilling down the SunClan hills.
"I know it won't. You're young, and the border conflict was intense. You probably have a lot on your mind, don't you?" Shadowstorm's voice was gentler now. When Crowpaw's only response was a nod, he continued. "But let's just try and focus on our training today, alright?"
Crowpaw felt the heaviness of guilt lifting off of him. Reinvigorated, he scrambled into the center of the clearing to face Larkpaw. His brow furrowed with determination – he wasn't going to daydream anymore. Now, he'd show Shadowstorm everything he'd learned.
Crowpaw crouched low, his muscles tensed as he readied himself. Across the clearing, Larkpaw mirrored his stance, her eyes sparkling with competitive fire. For a moment, they both stood still, sizing each other up.
Larkpaw was the first to move, darting forward in a feint toward his left side. Crowpaw anticipated her move and dodged, quickly spinning to face her again. But before he could react, Larkpaw pivoted sharply and slammed into his flank, knocking him off balance. Grunting as he tumbled to the ground, Crowpaw rolled with the impact and sprang back to his paws, shaking off the surprise. His heart pounding, he swore to himself that he wouldn't fall for that again.
"Come on, Crowpaw! Stay light on your feet!" Oakfoot called from the sidelines, watching their every move intently.
Crowpaw's eyes narrowed with renewed focus. This time, he charged forward, aiming low to sweep Larkpaw's legs. She jumped back just in time, but he had expected that. As she landed, Crowpaw lept upward, catching her off guard and pinning her to the ground with his forepaws.
For a split second, he felt the triumph of victory, but Larkpaw wasn't finished. With a twist and a sharp kick from her hind legs, she sent Crowpaw stumbling backward.
They both scrambled to their paws, panting, but still tensed and ready to leap.
"Not bad," Larkpaw said, flicking her tail playfully. "But I'm still faster."
Crowpaw kept his eyes glued to his littermate. "You got lucky," he retorted.
"That's enough," Oakfoot announced, stepping between the two and signaling with his tail for them both to stand down. Beside him, Shadowstorm and Brightleaf stepped forward.
"All three of you did wonderfully," Brightleaf purred. "Crowpaw and Larkpaw, that was excellent," she complimented before turning to glance at Willowpaw. "You'd better watch out. You wouldn't want your younger denmates to catch up to you, would you?"
"They can try all they want," Willowpaw flexed confidently. "But don't think I'll go easy!"
Shadowstorm chuckled at Willowpaw's confidence, his tail flicking with amusement. "That's the spirit, Willowpaw. Just don't let it go to your head." He turned back to the group. "Good work today, all of you. Let's head back to camp and rest up before the sun gets too high."
Crowpaw felt his chest swell with pride as they began the trek back. His earlier embarrassment was long forgotten, replaced with a sense of accomplishment. This time, he knew he had earned his mentor's praise. He was finally beginning to feel like he could one day be a powerful warrior, dedicating his life fighting to protect SunClan.
A/N: Gonna slow down a little bit as I'm hitting midterm season now. But the next chapter is already in the works, so don't worry! Continuing to work on expanding the depth of each chapter with more environmental details and more character development. I hope you enjoyed this one! Cheers!
