To X
Thank you for your comments on my story. While I'm not familiar with some of the references you made, I appreciate your thoughts. I understand that the time skips and emotional focus might not resonate with everyone, and I'll keep your feedback in mind as I continue writing.
If you'd like to discuss your thoughts further, perhaps you could create an account on the site and send me a private message. I'd be interested in hearing more about what didn't work for you and what could make the story more engaging in your eyes. I'm always open to improving, and your insights might help point me in the right direction.
- Lady-Applejacks1987
Also, an update for Chapter 4 will be coming soon—sorry for the delay!
