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Guest99: Maybe something with the Suicide Squad. If I found something good, I could do a Lincoln X Thicc QT pairing. I could use ideas, just don't know if I'll use any of them.
jeremiahkelley93: Thanks.
Gamelover41592: I hope you enjoyed it.
OmegaDelta: I watched/listened to it on youtube, I might. It might be fun to try a chapter of that.
NarutoisNumber1Ninja: I have been wanting to do something with Batman, I'll think about it. I was never a Doctor Doom fan, but it sounds interesting.
Whatif-inator: I'll watch them and see if I can work with them.
Alphared45667: Hope you enjoyed it. I'm not a huge fan of Luan X Maggie pairing either, but I wanted to keep the couple similar to the series. I think I would enjoy doing Loser Baby. However I'm not completely sold as Clyde as Husk and Lynn Jr. as Angel Dust. To me, Lynn would be more likely to be a gambler (Sports Gambling) and drinking her problems away. As for Clyde, it's hard to match him to a Hazbin character.
Pedro Alonso Buby Huayanay Zam: Hope you enjoyed it. I want to do some more unquiet pairing for future chapters, like Lincoln with older girls or women. Just not focus solely on those. I haven't gotten around to watching the adventure with Superman show yet. I did watch the Zenless Zone Zero character demo. I'm going to wait a bit before attempting something from that game.
eduardo.bettin26: Hope you enjoyed Lori's reaction, I want to do more like that in future. I never heard of Underverse, maybe something to look into. Yes I will pair him with other girls, not just Ronnie Anne. The only series I know that you listed anything about are Fate, DMC, Ben 10, and Spider-man. The others I'll look into. I'm on the fence about pairing him with his sisters, but I won't say it's off the table. Pairing him with Sam is a more likely possibility.
Guest 07-07-2024 (CH 1): I only read one of the story you mentioned, and that story is completely different from this story. What is a Person's Worth is a story telling a tale, while this is a reaction story. The stories are going to be frame differently.
Perseus12: I watched it and I'm not sure how to justify them watching it.
Guest 07-07-2024 (CH 5): Luke and Landen Loud are someone else's OCs. I'm not going to use someone's OCs without permission. Besides, I believe they are Sin Kids (not completely sure) and I have no intention of using them in this story.
Guest 07-07-2024 (CH 7): No Lincoln isn't Lucifer.
Guest 07-07-2024 (CH 8): One of my guilty pleasures are stories of noble characters becoming complete opposites of themselves. Also I enjoy writing how the Loud Family might react if their kind son. Was someone cruel, villainous, or heartless.
redsteel116: I was thinking of doing another song from Hazbin Hotel. However I'm thinking of making someone else Vox instead of Chandler.
redsteel116: Glad you're enjoying it.
Guest 07-10-2024: I never watched or read The Walking Dead, something to look into.
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Chapter 8: Clyde into the Spider-verse
Disclaimer: I don't own The Loud House. I make no money or profit from this.
All of them had recomposed themselves and were talking about the last world and what they learned from the book. "Cobalt wasn't kidding, that world has so much in it" Lincoln commented. He had come to terms with that version of him. He didn't like him, but knew there was nothing he could do about it.
"I must agree brother unit" Lisa said, still looking over the book. She had decided to temporarily stop her attempts to figure out how the screen works. "While some of these spaceship designs are ridiculous, how they travel far distances is intriguing. I'm curious if I can replicate it for our world."
"I wonder if any of those aliens exist in our world?" Lana asked. Some of the creatures the book mentioned seemed cool to the young girl.
"Lincoln literally shouldn't have been one of those Jedis" Lori commented with a frown. She wasn't a fan of them after learning more about what Jedis do.
"They weren't all bad" Lincoln tried to defend his counterpart's choices. While he didn't like him at the moment, he believed he was a good person before Palpatine manipulated him.
"Now he's part of the Sith," Lucy said from behind him, scaring him. "They are truly beings of darkness. They won't hesitate to betray one another and their rule of two."
"Both sides suck" Lynn Jr. said with a frown.
"Did the book say something about a gray side?" Ronnie Anne asked. She had calmed down after everything she saw.
"Yes, but not much," Lisa replied. "All it said was that some of these "force users" were capable of using both the light and dark side. However I refused to believe in such nonsense."
"I wish we could've seen the babies," Bobby commented. He had finally pulled himself together after watching his sister's counterpart get hurt.
"I hope we don't see anything like that again" Clyde said in a depressed tone. He was still a little shaken, but he had stopped crying.
"Then let's hope we don't watch anymore of the one in Montana" Luan muttered to herself. Luna and their young sisters heard her, and nodded in agreement. The parents couldn't say much after everything they saw. It was terrifying to see their sweet, caring, loving son. Being a cold, violent, hateful person.
"Seems like everyone has calmed down," Cobalt said walking up to the group. In his hands was an orb that was black with red spider web.
"Is that the next orb?" Rita asked fearfully. She and her husband were now becoming nervous when they saw an orb.
"Yes, but this is a little different," their host replied. "My creator has taken scenes from a world and made them into a trailer for you."
"Trailer? Like a movie trailer?" Lincoln asked, confused.
"Yes, Exactly" the android replied. "One of the people who watch you alongside my creator has expressed interest in this world. However since my creator is unsure what to show you, they decided to do this. They are still deciding what to show you, so they did this to lighten the mood a bit."
This made some of them happy, while others were worried about what his creator was planning to show them. "So what are we going to watch?" Luna asked nervously.
"I can't say anything without spoiling everything, but you'll see a familiar face," Cobalt replied. "Now who wants to do the honors?"
The Loud Family looked a bit nervous at this. Hearing they were going to see a familiar face made them worried. Not all the people they saw were the best of people. "I'll do it" Ronnie Anne said walking up to the android, and taking the orb. "So I just throw this at the screen?" She asked, which Cobalt just nodded. She did and it went into the screen, with it coming to life and turning on.
The screen opens to a young man in a red and blue suit, standing on a gargoyle of a building high above the city.
"That person looks just like Luna from the one world?" Leni said, pointed at the screen.
"You're right Leni," Lincoln said with a smile. "He looks like Spider-Woman!" This filled the family with hope of who they were going to see.
"Spider-Woman?" Clyde, Ronnie Anne, and Bobby asked at the same time.
"It was the first world we watched," Lynn Jr. said excitedly.
"My name is Lincoln Parker," a voiceover said. The man then sat on the gargoyle and started to read a newspaper he brought with him. "I'm pretty sure you know the rest."
"What?!" The entire Loud Family shouted in shock, scaring the other 3 guests.
"But it was Luna who got the superpowers!" Lana shouted.
"Yeah! Lincoln died from her when he was that Lizard!" Lola shouted, surprising the new guests with that information.
"What you say is true, but that doesn't mean that's always the outcome," Cobalt said, getting everyone's attention. "There are worlds where Lincoln was bitten by the spider instead of Luna. There are worlds where it's someone different entirely. This Lincoln is very different from the first world you watch."
This brought smiles to the family faces, now believing they were going to enjoy this. The 3 non Loud Family members were just confused, but said nothing.
"I saved the city," it then shows him stopping a subway train. "Fell in love," it then shows him upside down with his mask up to his nose. He was kissing Becky Watson.
"What?!?" The older Loud girls shouted, mostly Lori and Leni. The younger ones were gushing over this new relationship of their brother's counterpart. The parents were confused, not recognizing the girl. Bobby was dumbfounded, as he recognized Becky. Clyde was looking at the screen surprised with a slack jaw. Ronnie Anne had an indifferent expression, but was feeling conflicted on the inside. As for Lincoln, his face was as red as a tomato.
"Linky and Becky are dating!" Leni cheerfully said with a little clapping.
"Way to go bro" Luna said with a teasing smile.
"Another older girl?" Lynn Jr. started with a teasing smirk. "I'm starting to think our brother has a type."
"Lincoln" Lori said in a low menacing tone.
"Lori, you can't blame Lincoln for any of this!" Rita said to her in a stern tone. "They are completely different people. What the one on the screen is different from our Lincoln." Lori just let out an angry huff and said nothing more.
"Who's this Becky?" Lynn Sr. asked his daughters, wanting to know who they were looking at.
"Becky is one of Lori's and Leni's friends," Luan replied.
"She's also a long time Ace Savvy fan" Lincoln added, getting over his embarrassment.
"Really?" Clyde asked him, surprised. Lincoln nodded and Clyde smiled at hearing that. Ronnie Anne looked away and let out a small huff, which no one saw.
"I saved the city again," it shows him as Spider-man on a date with Becky. His spider sense goes off and a car flying towards him through a large window from behind. He suddenly stood up, turned around, and punched it back out. "And again, and again." It then shows 8 different times he saved the city.
"Whoa, this Lincoln sure did a lot," Lynn said in awe.
"I wonder if Luna's counterpart did things like this?" Lincoln wondered out loud. Said sister heard this and blushed in embarrassment.
"Look I'm a comic book, cereal, I got a Christmas album, and a so-so popsicle." It then shows a comic called "True Life Tales Of Spider-man". Then an ad of a little girl eating a cereal called "Spidey-o's". Then shows the ad for his Christmas album with all songs rolling up on the screen. And finally a picture of a popsicle that loosely looked like him.
"No way!" Clyde and Lincoln both said in excitement at the comic.
"He got his own cereal?!" Lynn Jr. said in disbelief.
"Little bro can sing?" Luna asked surprised, seeing the Christmas album.
"That looks nothing like him!" Lana shouted in disappointment.
"This one certainly is more popular then Luna was" Rita muttered to herself.
"But this isn't about me…" it shows him swinging through the city. Then switched to a 14 year old in a similar suit, only black and red. He lifts up his mask to show Clyde Morales. "...not anymore."
"Clyde!?" Everyone, except said boy, shouted in surprise. As for Clyde, he stared up at the screen stunned.
"Yes, that's Clyde Morales," their host replied.
"He looks older," Ronnie Anne commented.
"That's because he is, he's fourteen here" the android replied.
"So did Clyde get bitten instead of me or Luna?" Lincoln asked their host.
"That's partly correct," Cobalt replied. "I'll explain more later, just continue to watch for now."
"Spider-man swings in once a day…" The scene then shows Clyde in the back of a police car. His father, Jefferson Morales, was talking to him as he drove him to school. "...Zip zap zop in his little mask, and answers to no one." It changes to Clyde getting out in front of his school. "I love you Clyde," his dad said to him.
"Who's that?" Clyde asked in confusion.
"That's Jefferson Morales, Brooklyn police officer and father to Clyde Morales," Cobalt answered.
"What about my dads?" Clyde asked him worriedly.
"Jefferson is his dad, his biological dad" the android replied. "This Clyde lives with his biological mother and father." Clyde's expression became a little crestfallen at this, hearing that Clyde lived with his biological parents.
"So he's just like my counterpart," Luna commented out loud.
"What do you mean Luna?" Bobby asked.
"Luna's counterpart who is Spider-Woman, her father was also literally a police officer" Lori answered her boyfriend.
"Sounds like he's not a fan as well" Lincoln commented.
"Yea, I know dad" Clyde replied, in a nonchalant tone. Just as he's about to walk into the school, the car's speaker sounded.
"You got to say "I love you" back," Jefferson said over the speaker.
"Dad, are you serious?!" Clyde asked, turning around, embarrassed by his father.
"I want to hear it," he replied seriously.
Many of them laughed at this, except for the teens, Clyde, Ronnie Anne, and Lincoln. They felt sympathy for that Clyde, knowing how their parents could embarrass them.
"Look at this place-," was all he could say, before his father interrupted him.
"Dad, I love you," the father repeated.
"Dad, I love you," Clyde finally said. He was annoyed and embarrassed by his father's actions.
"That's a copy," Jefferson said with a smile.
This got a laugh from everyone, seeing that Clyde gave in.
"My name is Clyde Morales," his voiceover said. It showed him running through the city, before showing him in his spider suit jumping off a building. "I'm the one and only Spider-man."
"No you're not!" Lana angrily shouted.
"Calm down sweetie," Rita said, trying to soothe her daughter. "I'm sure he just doesn't realize there are others." Lana just let out an angry huff.
The scene changes to show the Super-Collider starting to malfunction, with Clyde at the control panel. "At least that's what I thought," Clyde's voiceover said.
It then changed to this large bald man in an expensive looking suit. "Have you ever heard of a Super-Collider?" He asked with a sinister expression. "You're gonna love this." This was Wilson Fisk, better known as the Kingpin. A computerized voice said "dimension opening now", before showing Spider-man flying through something and the screen going black.
"Who was that?" Luan asked.
"How did he acquire a Super-Collider?" Lisa asked in shock.
"What was happening to Linky?" Leni asked, concerned.
"That was a man named Wilson Fisk, but is better known as The Kingpin," Cobalt replied. "He is one of the top heads of the criminal underworld. He acquired the Super-Collider through secret and possibly illegal means. As for that Spider-Man, he was traveling through dimensions because of the Super-Collider."
"That's impossible!" Lisa shouted in outrage. "That's not what a Super-Collider does. It boosts particles, such as protons, at speeds close to that of light. They collide with other protons, these collisions produce massive particles such as the Higgs boson or the top quark."
"While that's correct, this one does something more" the android replied. "He can open rifts to parallel dimensions and pull people from those dimensions."
"That's implausible!" The young genius shouted in fury.
It then shows Spider-man standing over a groggy Clyde. "You're just like me" Spider-man says to him, with his spider sense going off.
"That's impossible," Clyde said to him in disbelief.
"Ha! Told ya" Lana shouted with a smug smile.
"Alright kid listen up" Lincoln's voice said. The scene changed to the inside of a small restaurant called Krysoulas. Where a 38 year old scruffy looking Lincoln was sitting at a table with Clyde. "This fry is your universe," he said, pointing to a small overcooked fry. "It's soggy, it's weird, it's gross. Now this delicious normal fry is my universe." He said pointed to a different fry before eating it.
"Wow, that Lincoln looks like he's seen better days" Luan commented.
"Clyde doesn't look like he wants to be there" Ronnie Anne commented.
The scene changes to Clyde looking at a Spider-man suit in a glass case. "So you want to learn how to be Spider-man?" Lincoln's voice said. The scene changes to Lincoln putting on his suit and mask, with Clyde putting on a knockoff version of his suit. "Can you teach me?" Clyde's voice asked.
"Yes I can," Lincoln's voice replied. The scene changed to Lincoln tossing Clyde over the railing of a building. "Time to swing," Lincoln's voice said.
"So Lincoln is going to teach Clyde?" Lynn Jr. commented, a little surprised.
"This is the reverse of the last world" Luan quietly muttered.
"It's good he's teaching him, but I think there are better ways" Lynn Sr. commented nervously. He, his wife and Clyde were worried. Not liking the idea of being thrown off a building.
It changed to Clyde swinging in a wooded area. "Good, you're doing it" Lincoln encouraged in front of him. It then showed them both holding onto something and swinging together. "Double tap, turn and whip it out again," Lincoln said to the younger boy.
"Okay" Clyde replied as he started to get the hang of it.
"He's starting to get the hang of it," Lincoln said with a smile.
"Whip and release, you're a natural" he complemented. Suddenly it showed someone in a similar suit appear from above and webbed up the guys. They landed on a branch of a nearby tree.
They wore a black and white suit with a hood with the inside lining was pink with blue webbing. They removed their hood and mask to show it was a 15 year old girl with short wavy brunette hair. "Hey guys" she said to the two webbed up individuals.
"No way!" Lincoln said in excitement.
"It's Luna!" Lana said with the same excitement.
"Yes, but it's not the same one you've seen," Cobalt started to explain. "This Luna has a similar origin, but is different and younger."
"Wait, really?" Luna asked, surprised. "Does that mean-"
"No, that still happens," Cobalt interrupted her. This made the family a little sad, the others were confused and a bit worried.
"Who are you?" Lincoln asked confusedly, while Clyde said nothing and only stared.
"I'm Luna Loud," she replied. The scene changed to one of Luna playing the drums, before showing her jumping off a building as Spider-Woman. "I'm from another, another dimension."
It went back to Clyde and Lincoln, who were now free and on the ground. "How many Spider People are there?" Clyde asked.
"No kidding" Lynn Jr. commented sarcastically. "We already have three of them."
The scene changed to black and white, then showed a woman in all black hanging from the ceiling. She wore an all black ensemble with a long flowing coat, knee-high boots, gloves, sunglasses over her mask, and a fedora. "Hey fellas," she said, her voice was monotone. This was Lucy Loud, also known as Spider-Woman or Spider Noir.
"That sounds like Lucy?" Luan commented.
"That's because it is," Cobalt replied, surprising everyone. "She is Lucy Loud, also known as Spider-Woman or Spider Noir. She lives in a noir-like world."
"So Lucy gets spider power too?!" Lynn Jr. asked with confusion and disbelief. "The Duchess of darkness?!" Cobalt just nodded.
It then shows a 13 year old girl with short messy blonde hair. She wore a school uniform and a backpack. "Hello" she cheerfully greeted, with a pose. It then showed her on a large mechanical red and blue Spider. This was Lana Loud, also known as SP/dr.
"Lana too?!" The athletic Loud shouted again. "What about me?! Does a version of me get them too?!"
"I become a superhero too?" Lana asked excitedly.
"Yes Lana too, but she is different," Cobalt started to explain. "She was bitten, but it allowed her to form a psychic link with the spider. The spider is in the robot controlling it and saves the city as SP/dr. As for a world where you're a spider person, there might be one out there. However I don't know any."
"This could literally not get any weirder," Lincoln said, looking at the 2 new Spider People. Suddenly a small bipedal rabbit wearing the same outfit walked up to him. "It can get weirder," he said, holding out a hand to shake. This was Lincoln Lapin, also known as Spider-Hare.
"What literally is that?" Lori shouted, pointing at the masked rabbit.
"That's Lincoln Lapin, better known as Spider-Hare," Cobalt replied.
"So Lame-o is a bunny?" Ronnie Anne commented with snicker. Cobalt nodded, getting everyone to laugh including Lincoln.
"Okay…" was all Luna could say looking at the anthropomorphic rabbit.
"We need to get back to our own universes…soon" Luna's voiceover said, as the scene changed. It showed a storm in the city, then the 5 Spider People standing in a room, and Spider-Woman landing somewhere.
"Brooklyn is gonna collapse," Clyde's voiceover said. It shows something strange happening to a building with Jefferson looking up at it in confusion. "My family lives in Brooklyn!" His voice continued. It showed Clyde and his uncle having a bonding moment. Before changing to his mother and father walking into his room. Clyde immediately ran and hugged his father.
"Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa," Jefferson said to him, taken aback by the hug. He returned it, but was now confused.
"Clyde, what's wrong?" His mother, Rio Morales, asked with concern. Clyde only looked at her with worry.
"What was happening?" Luna asked, concerned.
"I'm guessing that was my mother, but who was that other man?" Clyde asked.
"The Super-Collider caused earthquakes and visual anomalies when active" Cobalt started to answer. "If left on for too long, it will do more than just destroy the city." This worried everyone, with Lisa wondering what made that Super-Collider different. "Now yes that's his mother and the man was Clyde's uncle Aaron Davis."
"Davis?!" Clyde asked with surprise.
"No relation to Theresa Davis, your mayor" he replied. "At least not to my knowledge" he muttered quietly.
The scene changed to Clyde, in his knockoff suit, running from someone in an alley. The person was shrouded in darkness, except for the purple glow from the bottom of his feet.
"This was never your city" Fisk's voice said as the scenes changed. It showed the person from before riding a motorcycle. Then changed to this shirtless man using a scorpion tail, attacking Clyde. Then it changed to the face of a large green goblin looking monster. "It's mine" his voice said, changing to show the Super-Collider active again.
"Who were those guys?!" Lincoln asked with concern.
"The one in black and purple is called the Prowler" Cobalt began to answer. "The man with the tail is called Scorpion, and the monster is called the Green Goblin."
"The last two didn't put much thought into their names" Luan commented with a deadpan expression.
Cobalt simply ignored her statement. "They are some of the known villains of Spider-Man" he stated.
It showed Clyde looking nervous and panicked. "If I don't destroy the Super-Collider…" his voiceover said. The scene then shows Clyde, in his red and black suit, swinging through the city. Then a huge EMP wave goes off in a part of the city. "...None of us will have a home to go to," his voice continued. The scene shows a shocked Spider-Woman, before showing an unmasked Lincoln looking sadly at a framed picture of Becky.
"What happened?!" Lori asked, seeing the depressed Lincoln looking at a picture of Becky. Everyone became nervous and worried, thinking something like the last world happened here.
"Lincoln and Becky got divorced" Cobalt replied, shocking and confusing them. "You see, Lincoln eventually married Becky and yes she knew about him being Spider-Man. Even after marriage he continued to be Spider-Man. While his life as a mask hero was going good, his life at Lincoln Parker wasn't. He had trouble finding and keeping a job becuse of Spider-Man. His aunt eventually passed away. Finally his relationship with his wife became distant because he was hardly around because of Spider-Man. When Becky expressed her desire to want kids, he agreed to a divorce. Since he didn't want to neglect his family and gave Becky a chance to have a better family. It was rough for him after the divorce, but he never stopped being Spider-Man."
"What about the comics, albums, cereal, and popsicles?" Lincoln asked, confused and concerned.
"Who said that the Lincoln who said that, was the one you've seen?" Cobalt replied cryptically. This confused everyone, except for Lisa who's eyes widened.
"The Lincoln talking in the beginning, is a different Lincoln then the one training Clyde!" She shouted in realization.
"Exactly," Cobalt said with a nod. "Two Lincolns, both having similar pasts, but with different outcomes. That Lincoln never got any of that and lived a hard and tough life."
Hearing this made many of the kids have second thoughts about being a Hero. They thought being a Hero would be all fun and games. Never thinking of the hardships that come with it.
"Remember, what makes you different…" Lincoln told Clyde before the scene changed. It showed Spider-Woman swinging and avoiding something falling on her. Then to Clyde in normal clothes, him with a nervous and unsure expression. It changes to Clyde swinging in the city, then him fighting and swinging away from the goblin. "...That's what makes you Spider-Man," his voice continued. It showed Clyde swinging through the city at sunset, then to one at night with a jacket over his suit.
The scene then changes to Clyde in his suit in front of his dad at a crime scene. "Officer, I love you" he said to him, before swinging off.
Jefferson laughed a bit before realizing what was just said to him. "Wait, huh?" He said to himself, with a puzzled expression.
This got another round of laughter from the group.
Then a title screen was shown. It said "Spider-man into the Spider-verse".
It then showed the 6 Spider people on the ceiling of a room. Below them was someone reading a comic while listening to music in an office chair. He moved to get his energy drink. "That way, that way," Lincoln whispered to the group. They moved so they would stay behind him and not be spotted. The person took a drink and moved again. "Other way, other way, other way," he whispered again. They moved again, but this time the person spun around to face their direction. He then looked up from his comic and saw all of them.
"Do animals talk in this dimension? Cuz I don't want to freak him out" Spider-Hare asked the others. The person fainted back into his chair, making it fall to the ground. Lincoln and Clyde just looked at each other.
The screen went black and Cobalt moved in front of it. "That's it for this one, so any thoughts?"
Everyone was laughing at the final scene. "That was awesome," Lincoln said after he finished laughing.
"Now I want to see more of that world," Clyde commented.
"I want to see one with me getting spider powers," Lynn Jr. said with a smile.
"I wish we could've seen more of Linky's and Becky's relationship," Leni said happily. Lori just gave her the stink eye for that.
"It was nice to see in that world, Lincoln wasn't killed by Luna" Luan commented. Hearing this concerned the new guests.
"What about me?" Ronnie Anne asked. "Where am I in that world?"
"What was Mr. Fisk attempting to do?" Lisa asked.
"First, I'm not sure if you exist in this world," Cobalt started. "Second, the Kingpin was attempting to see his deceased wife and daughter. You see, he wanted to pull a different version of his wife and daughter from another dimension. He was willing to destroy the multiverse to get them back."
This caused some of them to feel conflicted about the Crime Lord. While what he was doing was bad, he was trying to see his family again. Some of them might do the same, in his position. Lisa simply scoffed, refusing to believe Wilson's Super-Collider could open a way to a different dimension.
"Now before I forget" Cobalt said, snapping his finger and making a remote appear in front of the group. "My creator has made this remote. You can use this to rewatch any of the previous worlds you watched. My creator recommends this so the new arrivals will know what's happening. Since they seemed to be very lost watching this trailer."
The group nodded and muttered in agreement. "Now if there's nothing more, I'm going to wait for the next orb" Cobalt said before walking off. The group looked at each other before getting some more food, then watched the previous worlds for the 3 new guests.