Codex entries to be changed
Eden Prime*
"Eden Prime is an idyllic human colony world in the Attican Beta cluster, located in the extreme outer rim of Citadel space. It is one of the youngest and most distant colonies, originally founded to test the full range of support systems and technology required for a truly independent colonial society. The colony is dedicated to agricultural and scientific pursuits, and its atmosphere and weather are strictly controlled. It is a vibrant, lush world with a small but growing population. Eden Prime is notable for the discovery of a Prothean beacon, which dramatically altered the course of human history and the galactic political landscape."
Mass Relays*
"Mass Relays are immense, artificial objects located in the space between star systems. They form a network of 'stargates' that allows instantaneous travel across vast interstellar distances. The relays were constructed by an ancient, extinct race known as the Protheans, and they are the backbone of modern galactic civilization. The relays are used to travel between star systems and connect various parts of the galaxy, making interstellar travel feasible. Each relay has only one path, and it is impossible to travel to a system that is not directly connected by a relay. The relays are controlled by the Citadel Council, and their use is regulated to ensure the safety and stability of the galaxy."
Changes:
The codex entry "eden prime" was changed so that the term "a prothean beacon" become "a intact prothean beacon", and the codex entry "mass relays" was chaged so that "all" have been inserted between "used to travel between" and "star systems".
Chapter 3: The Journey to the Citadel*
As Commander Shepard left the intact Prothean Beacon behind, ready to be studied securely, she felt a mix of relief and urgency. The visions she had experienced were clear and ominous, revealing the true nature of the threat that loomed over the galaxy. The beacon was too important to be left in the hands of anyone who might misuse its knowledge, and it needed to be studied in a secure location.
Sheppard made her way to the shuttle that would take her to the Normandy SR1, the state-of-the-art human alliance ship. The team was already preparing for the journey to the Citadel, the heart of galactic civilization. The Normandy was a symbol of human technological advancement and a testament to the cooperation between humans and the Citadel Council.
As the shuttle lifted off from Eden Prime, Shepard's mind was filled with the images and information from the beacon. The visions had given her a clear understanding of the Reapers and the cycle of galactic annihilation they had orchestrated for countless millennia. She was determined to share this knowledge with the Council and convince them of the impending threat.
Upon boarding the Normandy, Shepard was greeted by Captain Anderson and the ship's crew. "Commander, it's good to see you," Anderson said, his voice firm but tinged with concern. "We need to get to the Citadel as quickly as possible. The Council needs to hear what you've discovered."
Shepard nodded. "I know, Captain. The beacon on Eden Prime has revealed a great, ancient threat. We have to act fast."
The Normandy's engines roared to life, and the ship prepared to take the mass relay route straight into the Citadel. *What originally should be, "Mass Relays are used to travel between star systems and connect various parts of the galaxy," now becomes, "Mass Relays are used to travel between all star systems and connect various parts of the galaxy."*
The mass relay network was the backbone of galactic travel, allowing instantaneous jumps across vast interstellar distances. The Normandy's approach to the relay was a familiar sight, but the gravity of the mission weighed heavily on Shepard's mind.
As the ship entered the relay, the world around her blurred and distorted. In an instant, the Normandy emerged on the other side, the Citadel looming before them. The massive space station was a marvel of technology and a symbol of unity among the galaxy's species.
"Approaching the Citadel," Lieutenant Joker, the Normandy's pilot, announced. "Ready to dock, Commander?"
Shepard took a deep breath, her resolve steadfast. "Do it, Joker."
The Normandy smoothly docked at the Citadel, and Shepard prepared to face the Council. She knew that the information from the Prothean Beacon was crucial, and the fate of the galaxy might rest on her ability to convince the Council of the impending threat.
As she stepped out of the Normandy and onto the Citadel, she felt a sense of purpose and determination. The journey to Eden Prime was just the beginning, and the real battle was about to begin.