Well first read the fanfic "Smooth Talk" by Bchets. It is way better than this story. Anyway, for this chapter. I'm writing it on Yuigahama's point of view. Also, I really hope Bchets comes back to finish this story.
Well I received a negative review for the last chapter and the only way to resolve it is that you should read the original story first like I recommended and I'm not trying to be bitter or salty but I'm writing a POV so yeah there going to be missing info so yeah read the original work then read mine.
Original work: Smooth Talk
Author: Bchets
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Yuigahama's POV
The heater in the clubroom was rumbling. I was on my cell phone. Yukinon was getting annoyed with him. Hikki, he was just sitting there in his chair, reading his light novel. I just sat there, thinking how those two are about to start flirting.
"Hikigaya-kun"
"Hm?"
"We have a request. Could you get your eyes out of your trashy book for once?!"
Here it comes. They're going to flirt. I guess I go back to emailing my friends. Once those two starts, they don't stop until I say something but since those two are loners. I let them enjoy it for awhile. I'll just step in once they get heated up.
"Sorry, it keeps me from falling in love with the two beautiful girls across from me."
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I'm not sure that I heard that right. Yes! That's right, I heard wrong. No way that Hikki would say that. EH?! I'm blushing. I can feel the heat in my cheeks. I looked at Yukinon, she was red too. I can see Hikki was also turning red. No way. No way, he actually said that. I feel so happy.
"I'm just saying what's been on my mind for a while. You two are beautiful.
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Again, he said something like that. I'm so happy and I'm getting embarrass too. Hehe. He called me beautiful. I saw him standing up from his chair. Wait! Hikki please don't leave. I do not mind if you continue.
"I'm going to get some drinks. You guys want anything? Other than me?
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Hot! I think it getting a little hot here. It is warm here in the clubroom. I'm starting to feel dizzy. Yes, I think I might be getting sick. Well maybe love sickness… Well, let not talk about that since Hikki doesn't accept my offer to hang out. Would one date hurt you that much? I really think that you might enjoy it.
He opened his mouth again, "Nothing? Well, you'll just have to settle for me then."
Hikki, when have you become so bold. It is not a bad thing. I like it rather I love it. Now if you can just focus it on only me. I would be way happier. If we just go on a date. I hope this bold Hikki might ask me out.
"H-H-Hikigaya-kun… Please leave." Replied a trembling Yukinon. Was Yukinon scared?
He followed Yukinon order and left the room. I need to email Hina and Yumiko about what happen. I have to tell them that Hikki got bolder.
"Yuigahama-san, do you know what is wrong with him?"
"Hikki? No, I was going to ask you?"
"I see…"
"Yuigahama-san, can you go get Hiratsuka-sensei. We have to tell her what just happen."
"Hiratsuka-sensei? Ah! Yes! I'll go get her then." I replied as I got up. I left the club room. Yukinon is relying on me. I'm happy.
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Well I guess that I might look for her at her desk. She is a teacher. They have teacher things to do. While I was walking down the hallway, I was thinking about what Hikki said. Beautiful. I'm so happy. The Hikki that I'm in love with just called me beautiful. This a good day. Now that I remember, that fashion magazine I read, said that if the boy you like called you beautiful. It means that I did something that brought out my charm. So, what did I do that was different from before? Umm… I don't remember. Hiratsuka-sensei turn the corner, and I wave at her. Oh! Wait! I was supposed to tell her to come to the club room. I called out for her.
"Hiratsuka-sensei, do you have a minute?"
"What is it Yuigahama-san?"
"Yukinon, want to talk to you about Hikki"
"What did Hikigaya do this time?"
"Well Hikki was like whoa. And then he called us beautiful. Then Yukinon and me were shock. Then I was like what. He said that."
"Yuigahama, I don't really understand what you said."
"Hikki, called Yukinon and me beautiful"
"I see… Well I'll have Yukinoshita explain"
We walked back to the club room. Hiratsuka-sensei open the door and I walk behind her. She walked to the table and place her paper down on the table. "So, what is going on with Hikigaya-kun? Yuigahama was telling me, he changed and saying weird things."
I did tell her what happen. It seems like Hiratsuka-sensei rather talk to Yukinon about what happen rather than me. Well it is Yukinon, she is sooo smart. Yukinon took a lungful of fresh air, then she starts explaining it to sensei…
I wonder what Hikki doing now. I know he went to get a drink. I guess he is drinking his MAXX Coffee. That drink is too sweet. I don't like it. Oh! They finish talking. "H-Hikigaya said that?"
"Yeah…" I replied
"Yes." Replied Yukinon
"Hmm… Yeah I wonder what gotten into him? Well let me go find him and see what the problem is."
She walked toward the door to leave the clubroom. I looked at Yukinon. I really hope Hiratsuka-sensei know what happen to him. I don't like it, if he talks that way to other girls. I rather want him to say it to me only but since he said that to Yukinon and me. I can forgive him for that. I wonder if I can make him go on a date with me. Now that he is saying weird things. After a few minutes, sensei open the club door.
"Sorry, Yukinoshita and Yuigahama… I-I can't do anything against that."
Why is Hiratsuka-sensei face red? Wait! Did he flirt with sensei too? You really are a bad boy, Hikki. It not a bad thing. Wait! What did that magazine say about bad boys? Something about how bad boys don't care about where or when they may force their self on the girl they like. Ehh? … Does that mean Hikki will push me down on the table. Even in front of Yukinon. Kyaa! Too bold Hikki. I saw that Hikki enter the room. The idea he might force his-self on me, scares me. I'm not ready. I need a bath first. I ran behind Yukinon's chair. Yes, I'm hiding behind her. I'm embarrass and I'm scared I might say something that I might regret. Like telling him I'm alright doing it in front of… Wait! What am I saying?!
"What is wrong? I don't bite. Unless you're into that."
Kyaa! Hikki bite! Hikki bite… He pushes me down and he start to nibble on my ear thing. What was it called earlobe? Earlobe? Yes, it is earlobe. I'm smart too. So yeah, he starts to unbuttoning my shirt. And biting my neck and he continuing going down to my bra. Then he bites my ni… Wait! No. No. NO! Don't fall for that Yui. Stop daydreaming! This is not Hikki. Hikki would not do that. He is smart so he would be gentle with me. Yeah, stupid fantasy thingy. Well it not a bad thing… Yes, Yui let never tell someone else about that fantasy of Hikki. Stupid magazine…
"Oh, Hiratsuka-sensei left her papers…" said Yukinon while standing up.
"Yukinon, don't go!" I interrupted Yukinon. I just recalled what I fantasize about Hikki. I don't know what to do if I stay alone with Hikki. I might embarrass myself. I don't want that. Not in front of the boy I like. No go at all!
"I'm sure you'll be fine. He is focused on his book, anyway." Yukinon why do you leave me like this? Well it is cute that you want to run away.
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"We're finally alone"
Kyaa! Hot! It is getting hot in here. I looked down to hide my embarrassment. My face is so red. I got up and moved closer to Hikki. And no, I'm not trying to seduce him. Maybe a little… We are alone and a magazine that I read. Said this is the perfect time to attack.
"H-Hikki, if there's anything I can do to help" I kept getting closer to him. I can see the small facial hair under his nose. The smell of MAXX Coffee on his breath. I heard the door open. A Yukinon walked in.
"What are you two doing?" Said a Yukinon.
"Nothing Yukinon!" As I turn to her. I backed away and went to my chair. I was flushed. I was really close to Hikki. Yukinon return to her seat and she read her book.
I was sitting down. What can I do to help Hikki? Ah! How can I forget about her? I pull out my phone. I start to email Iroha-chan. I ask her to help Hikki since he is acting weird. A few second later my phone rang. I put my phone to my ear and started to walk toward the door to answer it.
"Hello? Iroha-chan?" I step into the hallway and close the door behind me.
"Yahello, Yui-senpai. Sooo! What is senpai doing this time?"
"Hikki is being weird. Like he called me pretty."
"Really?"
"Yes"
"I see"
"That why you should come over. Something might be wrong with him."
"I guess. I had some reports from others about him"
"Yes, please hurry.", I turn toward the door and open it.
"Iroha-chan is on her way…" What I saw, was Yukinon and Hikki pretty close to each other and Yukinon was red. I guess they were getting a little intimate when I interrupted. I started to blush from that and I looked away. The main reason for that was because I also tried to get close to him.
"A-am I interrupting?" Well it is shocking. That they flirt openly but once behind closed doors. I have no idea what they do. They just hold each other… No knowing them, I guess they just sit far from each other.
Yukinon put on her poker face, she flicked her hair out of the way and walk back to her chair and replied, "No, not at all. I was just pouring tea for Hikigaya-kun." Hmm… I see. Well that is explanation that Yukinon might say.
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After a few minutes of the club room becoming silent, there was a knock on the door.
"Come in" Yukinon replied to the knock.
The door open, and Iroha-chan showed up.
"Senpaaii!" Said Iroha-chan walk up to him. Leaning close to him, which for some reason cause him to blush. Why are you blushing?
"So, what's going on? There's a lot, I been hearing about you today, Senpai." She waited for his replied. But nothing came out from him. She back away and face us for an explanation.
"I don't know what's wrong with Hikki." I said
"Neither do I." Yukinon replied.
"I see. Well, I'll just have him do some manual labor for me. You don't mind, right Senpai?" He glared at her but it did not face her. I would have been scared. "Alright! Follow me, Senpai!"
As Iroha-chan walked out of the door, Hikigaya-kun got up to follow her. At the door, he turns around and face us.
"I rather spend the rest of my day with you lovely ladies, but duty calls." I looked downward to hide my embarrassment. I know I'm blushing hard like a tomato. Hikki you are so bold.
"Senpai, you're so slow! Huh? What happen here?" Asked Iroha-chan
"N-nothing happen Iroha-chan!" I replied
"… Nothing at all" Replied Yukinon
"Well, let go Senpai". As they both left the clubroom.
I went back to my cell phone until I notice that Yukinon was on the laptop. That's right we had some request to answer. I heard my phone ring, I put it to my ear. It was Iroha-chan, it seems she called to inform us that she can't help Hikki out either.
"It seems that Iroha-chan couldn't help either."
"Well it is fine, let get back to answering those request, Yuigahama-san."
We started to work on the request. As we were working, Hikigaya-kun open the door to the club room and walked in.
"Oh, Hikki's back."
"Ah, Hikigaya-kun, we were waiting for you… We need your help."
"Well I'll go first, Yuigahama…" Well there nothing I say back but I really didn't like this one. It was too close to actual one.
Yukinon cleared her throat while trying to hold back a blush. I guess she is embarrass because the request was about romance. "T-there's a guy that I l-like. S-should I confess to him? What if he says no?" She glances at Hikki who had a worried face. Wait! Did he actually believe that Yukinon might actually like someone? Hikki, there is no guy that is close to her. So, you don't have to worr… Wait! Why am I trying console him?
"Anyone would be lucky to have you. But if he says no… Then I'll be glad to tell you yes." I see, so that why Yukinon waited for Hikki. But does that actually work for solving this request? Well it is Yukinon, so she might have an idea to solved it. I trust Yukinon. She is soo cute and smart too.
Yukinon just sat there, doing her usual pose that she always does. When she thinks. She has the same pose like that statue of a person on the toilet thinking.
"Hmm… I suppose that will do. We'll just remove that last part and replace it with something like this… Yuigahama-san, how's this?" asked Yukinon.
I walked up to the laptop and read what was on the screen. I nodded with a bright smile. It was good.
"Looks great! What do you think Hikki?" As I slid the laptop toward Hikki so he can read it.
"Well, at least Hikigaya-kun is good for something for once." said Yukinon with a grin.
"My turn", I took the laptop away from Hikki. "Ah! This one is from Yumiko! Let see, 'A boy that I have thought of as an acquaintance acted different towards me today. I don't know what I'm feeling for him and I don't fully understand those feelings. But it is definitely unexpected. What should I do? My heart is still beating fast."
I felt something. It felt the same way as when Sable gets into trouble. Guilt. This feeling… is coming from him… Hikki. I faced Hikki and peered at him. Why? Why do I feel guilt from you? He averted his eyes away. Yes, this is guilt. Then it hit me, it was because Hikki did something to Yumiko. I started to type out a respond without a reply from Hikki. Yukinon found that strange, so she walked over to me as I was finishing up and she stared at the screen.
Yukinon read out what I just typed out, "You shouldn't worry about that at all. He is probably just acting weird for the day, just treat him normal as always…" Yukinon was thinking again. Maybe it the respond, it is the only thing I could think of. "Wait! Could she be talking about Hikigaya-kun?" Yes, Yukinon, he said something to another girl. She looked at Hikigaya-kun, who turned away out of embarrassment. He is a boy after all.
"Anyway, let's go with the next question. Ah, how about this one."
Yukinon looked at the laptop and read out the question, "Two of my friends are having a fight. I can't just pick one side but I still want us all to be friends. What should I do?" She looked over to Hikki for a respond.
He said something stupid, "You should not pick either. Choose me instead."
I looked at Yukinon and we both nodded.
"That won't really work…" I said.
"It seems this method can't solve every request… So, I take back what I said about you being useful…" Yukinon looked at him then continue what she said, "Well, he succeeded once. Maybe we should focus on the relationship ones."
"Sound good!" I said.
Hikigaya-kun had a face of horror. Why? We continue to answer the request. Hikki did the most of the work while Yukinon modifying them. I help pick the good ones. I was not planning to help with much more but while I was watching them, I started to fantasize again. It was a stupid fantasy dream thingy. I rather help both of them than dream about walking into a room with Hikki changing and somehow, he started touching me. I could dream later. At home, in my room. Alone…
"Shall we call it a day."
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After packing up our things and cleaning the club room, the three of us gave the key to Hiratsuka-sensei. She seems to be acting weird. Then we made our way outside of the school. Hikki left to get his bike, after his return, we walked together for a little while. At the station, giving our good-byes.
"I can't wait to see you two again tomorrow."
"S-see ya, Hikki." That was embarrassing
"G-goodbye."
As we left Hikigaya-kun, we walked together to the station. I talked to Yukinon about Sable, as we board the train.
"Today Hikki was really weird. He was like woah…Then he was like eh…" I said. Yukinon looked at me weird. Did I say something weird?
"Well yes, he was strange today." Replied Yukinon.
"Well it was not bad, right Yukinon?" I replied
"W-well yes, it had a certain charm to it."
"Yes, like being call pretty." I said
"Yes, I did enjoy being called that. B-but it not like no one complimented before. Many of the boys and some girls in my pervious academies called me cute." Yukinon replied. I wonder if Yukinon still get confess weekly?
"That might be true but it is Hikki that said them. That's like suuuper rare." I told Yukinon.
"Well yes, coming from him those words do mean a lot. Now that I think about it." Right!
As we continue our talk, we enjoy the warm atmosphere. Then we separated to our respected path to our homes. When I got to the door to my home, I can hear Sable barking. It really was a good day. To spend my time with the people I love. I can't wait for tomorrow.
_ Bonus: Hiratsuka-sensei POV
It been a bad day, I have a hangover. Yesterday, I went for drinks and maybe find a guy. I got drunk and two guys took me home. Sadly, they were just scum that saw a beautiful drunk woman and wanted to take advantage. In my drunk induce anger, I beat the crap out of both of them. Thinking about that just making me angry, well let take it out on him. I guess I'll check up on those kids. I pick some document up just to look professional even though I'm not doing anything at the moment. I walk toward the club room. As I turn the corner, I saw Yuigahama-san walking through the hallway. When she spotted me, she just started to waved at me. I was going to pass her when she seems to just remember something. And called out to me. Really now this child, can be forgetful at time.
"Hiratsuka-sensei, do you have a minute?" Ask Yuigahama-san
"What is it Yuigahama-san?" I replied.
"Yukinon, want to talk to you about Hikki" What did that brat do this? I'm so going to punch you.
"What did Hikigaya do this time?" I asked
"Well Hikki was like whoa! And then he called us beautiful. Then Yukinon and me were shock. Then I was like what. He said that." Really Yuigahama-san, please use words. Your grades are not good in literature. You need to study more. I'm worry that you are not going to pass. Well with Yukinoshita and Hikigaya-kun, you can easily get good grades if you study with them. Do you even know how to study? Just don't take after them. They are smart but their essays just reflect their personality. One rotten and another one just cold…
"Yuigahama, I don't really understand what you said." I replied.
"Hikki, called Yukinon and me beautiful" What?! He did? Now that is a surprise, that boy rather keep those comment lock away because it is embarrassing but he does read light novel in public that are more embarrassing covers on them.
"I see… Well I'll have Yukinoshita explain" Yeah Yukinoshita might be a better choice to explain. What Hikigaya really say. I doubt Yuigahama heard right and the fact that she like him might ruin her reasoning.
We walked back to the club room. I open the door and it seems that Yuigahama was behind me. I walked toward the table and place my papers down on the table. Then I ask, "So, what is going on with Hikigaya-kun? Yuigahama was telling me, he changed and saying weird things."
Yukinoshita started to explain it to me. She told me how he called both of them beautiful. That was really shocking that he did that. Well those two, do have a thing for him. And I guess that remark might be weird but I guess it made them happy. I wish someone say that to me. Ah! It seems that Yukinoshita is about to conclude her explanation. I guess I have to replied, "H-Hikigaya said that?"
"Yeah…" Replied Yuigahama-san
"Yes." Replied Yukinoshita
"Hmm… Yeah I wonder what gotten into him? Well let me go find him and see what the problem is."
I approach the door, open it and walked out. There he was standing. I walk toward him
"I heard about what you said, Hikigaya-kun. Is everything alright? He just nodded, now I'm a bit worried that he did not replied to me. That boy always has smartass remark. I got a bit closer to him. "Are you sure? I want to help you?
"I'm fine now that you are here" Replied Hikigaya-kun. This boy is sly to think he would use a pick-up line. Well sorry to inform you but those kinds of words don't work on me. I heard thousand of them from crappy men before. I place my hand on his shoulder and looked into his eyes.
"I have heard my fair amount of pick-up lines. Sadly, those relationship did not last long. Well I have some resistance built up against that kind of smooth talk." Ouch! That hurt, why did I add the part of failed relationships. I feel sad now.
"Those guys didn't know what they had." Sadly, those words hurt too. I gave a small smile but one way to fix this. He had that face that says that I'm old and experience. I have to punch him. I tighten my grip on him. Yes, a good punch to the gut will teach him that using pick-up lines on others for kicks is terrible. And for calling me old was a mistake.
"Now then Hikigaya-kun, I'm gonna have to punch you to try to fix your problem. I also have to get you back for referencing my age…" Brat calling me old. "This one will be especially hard. So, prepare yourself, Hikigaya-kun!" Drawing my arm back to throw the punch. Putting strength in shoulders and twisting my abs. It is ready. I threw it at him.
"Age does not matter to a beauty like you!"
BA-THUMP
I stop my punch, centimeters away from his face.
BA-THUMP
My heart… I was shock. I can feel that my mouth was open and I'm turning red. That was a direct hit. If I was the Death Star, I would have been destroyed.
BA-THUMP
I took a step closer to him. My heart might be beating faster and louder. I was getting too close to him. I can see his small facial hair under his nose. The smell of ocean, I expect that was his body wash gives off and MAXX Coffee.
"W-what… Really?" Is what heard from him. I'm not sure why?
BA-THUMP
Stop my heart! I don't know what I will do if he hears you. Should I ask him. Well as a teacher it is pretty bad to have that kind of relationship. A teacher-student romantic relationship is bad in our society. B-but this a relationship between a man and woman… No, I really should not ask him… Maybe I should.
BA-THUMP
"H-Hikigaya-kun…" Am I really going for it. "Y-you want… Umm…" No, I can't say that. In the end we are teacher and student. "…Never mind"
I walk back to the club room, open the door to see the girls sitting down.
"Sorry, Yukinoshita and Yuigahama… I-I can't do anything against that."
I might have been a bit happy with Hikigaya-kun words. Stupid brat. Hurry and graduate so we can go a date. I walked away, with a pep in my step. I turn the corner when I recalled his remarks again. I started to bang my head against the wall. Maybe I really should have asked him out. What will happen to me if someone else takes him. Stupid Shizuka! Stupid! Stupid! You're still young, you might fine a good guy. Stupid! You cannot have gotten captivated by his sweet words. Stupid Hachiman! Making me embarrass. I'm a bad teacher for trying to ask him out.
"Hiratsuka-sensei?"
I stop and turn to look at Yukinoshita. I clear my throat. And ask her, "Yukinoshita? What are you doing here?"
"I was looking for you to return your paper." She replied.
"Ah! I forgot about them. Thank you." That's right had some document in my hand. I take them out of her hand. I guess I'll leave but as a woman and a victim of Hikigaya-kun I feel like it is right to warn her.
"Well I'll take my leave but before that Yukinoshita. Be careful with Hikigaya-kun" I told her, before leaving her behind.
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I found myself in my home. I have a cup of ramen sitting with boil water cooking the noodles in front of me. A nice cold beer in my right hand. A box of Christmas cake that pass its expiration date in front of me. It not like I'm going to eat it but I just wanted to reminisce the good times like the Christmas party with those kids. I glance at the pile of beer cans beside me… I really should have asked Hikigaya-kun out. Making your female teacher blush. Boy! When I get my hands on you, I'll have you give me a back massage. I guess I also should prepare a marriage certification too. I can see a bright future ahead me. I really do love those kids. I can't wait for the next day.
Well I wrote a lot. Anyway, thanks for the reviews. Also, the concept of POV is hard for some to understand. I'll give you guys a head up on the current materials I'm working. So here is the list below.
So, read the material (like most of my professors tell us to do)
Next chapter is from the light novel/anime. Ramen…
"Box Step" by Some Chinese Guy
"Blue Moon" by Lose- Please finish this. I like it so much.
"My Clubroom's President is Far More Broken Than I Expected" by FireHero- I'm just taking shot at both author and author of "Shiori-san to Hikigaya-kun" by Veltus because they made something great and had not updated it.
"Growth" by Achoopredator- OCs' POV (I want more but yeah I guess I finish this for own goal)
Also read the cultural event thing from the light novel or watch the anime… Saki's POV
"One Thing Leads to Another" by Azulito