okay, this is a repost! I decided to touch up the spelling errors and what not!
Luffy found himself walking through the jungle, he was on his way home, he yawned as he walked, suddenly. Something hit him on the head, causing him to groan lightly.
"Ah, hey!"He yelled. Looking up, he thought one of the stupid monkeys threw something at him like they liked to do, this stupid jungle sucked.
He looked down and noticed it was some sort of fruit, he bent over and picked it up, dusting it off with his elbow. The fruit was beat red with strange black patterns.
"Hmmm, mystery fruit," Luffy shrugs and takes a bite, he casually eats the fruit, completely ignoring the taste.
Soon after.
"I'll do it!"Luffy yelled, holding up a knife.
"Hm? What do you plan to do with that?" Shanks wondered, well he didn't have to wonder anymore, because Luffy jammed the knife deep into his eye, much to Shanks' utter terror.
"You idiot!"Shanks yelled.
Moments later, Luffy was holding back tears as shanks stitched him up. "See? Doesn't hurt." Luffy managed to force out, Shanks just sighed.
"Luffy you dummy, you coulda lost an eye." Shanks said, flicking his forehead.
"I was aiming for it, it was the only way to get you to see that i'm not just a kid,"Luffy huffed.
"Quit pouting, here. Have some apple juice,"Shanks said.
"Oh thanks!"Luffy smiled, happily drinking his apple juice, Shanks just bursted out in laughter.
"Ha! What kind of pirate drinks apple juice! You really are a kid!"He laughed.
"You jerk!"Luffy yelled in anger. "You tricked me!"
Suddenly, the doors swung open, shortly after, 5 men walked in, all with smug faces. They.
"Oi! Wench! Give us 10 cases of your strongest sake!"The man in the middle, probably the leader yelled.
Makino forced a smile, this guy would be trouble. "I'm sorry, we're out of sake,"She replied.
"You take me for a fool? What are they drinking?!"He demanded, pointing to Shanks and his crew.
It's sake, but we're out."Makino responded calmly.
"Sorry bout that friend, looks like we bought the place dry, I can let go 5 barrels for ya,"Shanks said.
"10,"He demanded.
"Don't push your luck,"Shanks grinned. The man growled. And snapped at his men, telling them to take the barrels, they did, and he walked off, mumbling to himself.
"Wow that was so cool!"Luffy said with starry eyes. "You beat him without even fighting!"He said, mouth agape.
"You can see into the eyes of a man, and determine if he's a true killer, that guy is just a bully."
"I wish I could be that cool!" Shanks just grinned, he blinked when he turned to look at Luffy, or more like…look up? Luffy had become massive, standing 10 feet tall, he had bulging muscles, his skin was grey, he had razor sharp teeth, two horns coming out of his temples, two long, razor sharp fangs curving from his bottom jaw. He had massive, razor sharp claws to match.
"Woah,"Shanks gasped.
"Hey, why're you guys so short?'luffy asked.
"We aren't, you just grew about 10 times your size."Shanks shrugged with a smirk.
"Eh?"Luffy turned to Makino, who after her initial shock, took a clean plate and showed him his reflection. He. was. HUGE And..
"Ohh! cool!"Luffy yelled "I'm a total badass!"
"Luffy,"Lucky roo started. "Did you find a weird looking fruit?"He asked.
"Uh huh, I ate it,"Luffy's voice rumbled.
"Of course you did,"Shanks and his crew face palmed. "Welp, now you really are an anchor!"Shanks laughed.
"What do you mean?"Luffy wonders.
"A devi; fruit user can't swim!"Shanks Laughed. "Roo, get the encyclopedia, we may be able to find out which he ate." Shanks said, Luckily for them Roo always kept it on him, he flipped through the pages, looking for the fruit he described.
"Here, the hito hito no mi, model Otakemaru, this is a strong one, in line with the likes of the azure dragon," Lucky said.
"Hmm, who's ota...Ote...,"Luffy tried.
"Otakemaru," Makino finished with a giggle. "He was a fabled demon known for his immense power and lust, he had a thing for pretty women."Makino comments.
"Wait, am I gonna become a perv?"Luffy whines
"Probably,"Shanks shrugged. "Mythical zoans tend to change their users personality a bit, chances are you'll be really into fighting too, Otakemaru was powerful beyond reason, strong enough to shake the heavens, fire hot enough to kill anyone, he could control the weather too, and carried around a sword instead of a club, like most of his oni brothers and sisters," shanks listed off, he was just reading from the book.
"Can he really do all that stuff?"Yassop asks curiously.
"Look at Kaido,"Benn responded with a shrug. "If we know anything about devil fruits its that they are very…literal." He said.
"Better be careful Luffy, that's a huge amount of power you got there," Shanks mentions.
"Hmmm okay! So how do I turn back?"Luffy wondered,
"Just think about turning back,"Shanks responded, Luffy just nodded, he began to shrink slowly, till he was back to his normal self.
"Hm, that was…interesting,"Luffy admits.
Shanks smiled. "Try to get a hang of your powers kiddo, in the meantime, we have to leave, but don't worry, we'll be back in a few months,"Shanks assured. Luffy just pouted but nodded.
"Okay then, Makino! I'm gonna go train," Luffy said with a smile.
"Don't go too long or you'll miss dinner,"Makino points out.
"Like Luffy would ever miss dinner,"Shanks snickered, causing his crew to laugh
3 months later.
Luffy was getting the hang of his powers, he was training to control them, currently fighting in his oni form, he could control it all, every single element, even earthquakes, that was the one he was really trying to get a hold on, Luffy cocked his fist back, the ground rumbling.
"'Quake fist!"Luffy yelled, cracking the air, causing the entire island to rumble, the water rose up as a massive tsunami. Exciting the entirety of foosha.
"Woah, okay…earthquakes are a little dangerous,"Luffy gasped.
30 minutes later.
"Luffy, was that earthquake you?"Makino asks.
"Sorry! I didn't break anything did I?"Luffy asks.
She just shook her head. "No, everything in the village is fine, but you should be more careful.
"I thought I was! I was all the way across the island!"Luffy whined.
Makino giggled. "I think the whole island felt it,"She said softly.
"Wow,"He gasped, suddenly. Men walked into the tavern, those same men from months ago.
"Hmph, those pirates are gone eh? Smells better already."He grins.
"Tch,"Luffy didn't know why but he got angry, really angry, he dashed forward jumping in his face, before the bastard knew it, his face was caved in, blood flew out as he crashed onto the ground in a hap, the men around him gasped in shock.
Luffy growled and looked up, eyes beat red. "Don't talk about Shanks!"The men could swear they were seeing death itself, there eyes rolled and in a split second, they fainted, foaming at the mouth.
"Hmm, no wonder they didn't greet us at the docs,"Shanks smirks, Luffy snapped back to reality, realizing what happened.
"D…did I do that?"Luffy gasped, staring at the corpse beneath him, his face looked dented, opened up, blood and brain matter everywhere.
"did…I do that?""He gasped.
"Yep, guess you weren't lying about that pistol fist eh?"Shanks jokes. "You okay Makino?"Shanks asks.
Makino nodded. "I'm okay," She said softly.
Shanks turned his attention to Luffy, he got down on one knee and put a hand on his shoulder. "Look kid, you did what you had to do, frankly he was gonna become a problem,"shanks admitted.
"But I…killed him,"Luffy said. Staring at his bloody hand.
"If you want to be a pirate, you'll have to take lives. The fact that you're conflicted shows you'll be nothing like this man. Although, you could always collect his bounty~" Shanks smirks.
"Bounty?" Luffy blinked.
"Yep, his name was higuma the bandit, he had 8million berries on his head."
"Woah, really? That's so much! I could pay off Makino's treasure tab and still have a ton!" Luffy gasped.
"I recommend getting a good weapon." Shanks suggests. "I'll take you if you want."
"Okay!" Luffy said excitedly.
And so the two went. They turned in Higuma's bounty, and Luffy payed Makino back. Despite her insisting he really didn't need too. He paid anyways.
He still had 7 million 900 thousand berries. Left over, he was sure he could get a good weapon with that.
They headed to a black smith together. Walking in.
"Hello there! Always nice to get customers!" An older woman said with a smile.
"Hi! I'm looking for a sword, a really good one!" Luffy said.
The woman looked at him, then at Shanks, gasping.
"Yo," Shanks waved.
"You're…red hair shanks…?" She gasped.
"Yep, but the kids paying for himself." Shanks points out.
"I'm gonna be king of the pirates, so I need a really good sword okay?" Luffy said, lifting up a brief case, he opened it on the table. Her eyes widened.
How could a brat have so much?
"You're a special one huh? I have a special one for you." She smirks and grabs one off the wall it had a black sheath with a red guard. She drew the blade, it was blood red. It hummed with power.
Luffy's eyes widened, his eyes shone red. Shanks just grinned. The sword was reacting to him.
"Muramasa," The old woman grinned. "It's said these blades chose its user. It's killed everyone that's touched it. Because I was its previous user. But…it's looking for a new owner." she said.
Luffy reached out and grabbed it without thinking. "Hm, it likes me." He smirks, lifting it up.
"Be careful, cursed blades like that tend to suck up your haki. And over cut." Shanks said. He remembered Enma.
"What's haki?" Luffy asked innocently.
"He doesn't know what Haki is? Yet the sword reacts to him so strongly?" She gasped.
"Your grandfather will teach you. How much for the blade."
"50million berries." she said.
"50?!" Luffy gaped. "I only have 8!" he whined.
"I'll pay for it." Shanks said simply.
"Really?!" Luffy gasped.
"Best not to piss off a sword spirit, it. Clearly wants you. Muramasa is yours." Shanks said. The woman just grinned.
An hour later.
They got home, and shanks decided to go for one more walk with Luffy.
"I'm gonna introduce you to someone, her name is Mihawk. She owes me so she'll gladly train you."
"Uhm, who's Mihawk?" Luffy asks.
"Worlds greatest swordsmen." Shanks said with a grin. "And, one more thing." Shanks took his hat off. And gently placed it on Luffy's head.
"Huh?"Luffy gasped.
"Hold this for me, till you become a great pirate. We'll meet again."
Luffy looked up at Shanks and smiled. "I promise I'll make a crew even stronger than yours!" Luffy yelled excitedly.
"Can't wait to see it." Shanks smirks.
A few months later.
"You foolish boy! You went and ate a devil fruit?!" Garp yelled.
"Hey it's no big deal! I'll just be a pirate that won't fall off his ship!"
"You brat! You'll be a marine and like it!" Garp yelled.
"I'll never be a marine!" Luffy yelled.
"Damn it Luffy! If you want to be a pirate then I can't train you like I want too!" Garp yelled.
"That's fine! Shanks said he's sending his buddy Mihawk over to train me!" Luffy said with a smile.
"The swordsmen?!" Garp yelled.
"Yeah! she's on her way!" Luffy smiled. "I promise I understand, you can't train a future criminal, but it's okay, I'll be fine. But if you force me to be a Marine I'll be miserable." Luffy said.
Garp crossed his arms. He could tell the brat was telling the truth.
"Hmph, fine." He finally grumbled. Mihawk wasn't the worst person to train Luffy, he would have eventually thought of him what with that sword the brat likes to swing around.
A week later.
Mihawk had arrived in all of her beauty, she was tall, busty. And simply radiated power.
"Hello young man, so you are the boy Shanks gave his hat too,"She said with a smirk.
"Yep! I'm Luffy!" He greeted.
Mihawk eyed his sword. "May I see that blade?"She asks calmly.
"Hm? Muramasa?"Luffy said. Drawing the sword. "I can't really use it, it drains my haki a ton,"
Mihawk just smirked. Crossing her arms under her breasts, "Now…where did you manage to get a supreme grade sword?"
"Supreme?"Luffy blinked. "The lady said it was a great grade."
"It's likely she didn't know what she had, or…she was simply trying to get rid of it, if a cursed blade doesn't like it's owner it drives them crazy, have any bad dreams?"Mihawk asks.
"Nah,"Luffy shrugged. He said with an innocent smile.
Mihawk smiled back. "It's chosen you then, It is testing you by drawing out your haki, if you aren't careful it will kill you," Mihawk said. "But worry not my dear pupil, I'll help you tame that blade of yours,"
"Okay sensei!"Luffy said excitedly
Years later.
Luffy is 17 years old. Mihawk had decided she taught Luffy all she could, and left. Not after one good spar. That ended up causing a permanent fissure in the Jungle. A historical monument, if you will. Luffy left that fight with a scar across his chest.
Luffy had grown into a fine young man, he was. . He had an impressive body, strong. Showing his dedication to his training.
"You've grown so much, honestly I still can't believe it." Makino said with a smile.
Luffy smiled back sheepishly. "Heheh, it took a lot of hard work, Mihawk was a really good trainer. Now the rest is up to me." Luffy said.
Makino nodded. "You'll be leaving soon right?"
"Yeah. Like we all promised." Luffy said.
"Well, before then, I'd like to…teach you something myself." Makino smiled.
"You can teach me to fight?" Luffy gasped. Makino giggled.
"No, not that. Follow me." She made sure to close the bar. Before heading upstairs, all the while swaying her hips for Luffy, who definitely caught it, or…his inner Demon did.
Makino led Luffy to her room and closed the door. Biting her lip. "You've gotten good control over your devil fruit, all aspects except one. That lust. Of yours." Makino stated.
"Uhm…I don't do it on purpose." Luffy admits. "It's hard to train that particular part of my powers…"
Makino smiled. "Demons Like women. And women like demons, it's not a bad thing. But if you aren't careful. Your demon side could…hurt someone." Makino said. "Otakemaru wasn't known for his gentle nature, however…we're gonna practice that now." Makino smiles. Dropping her clothes, giving him full view. His eyes widened. A deep blush on his face.
"P…practice?" Luffy stuttered. He felt his pants tighten.
"Mhm, for the next few days…you're gonna practice sex With me. I'm gonna teach you how to dominate and own a woman." Makino said, stepping forward. She pressed her bare chest against Luffy's bare skin, he was only wearing a red jacket. He could feel her hard nipples against his strong chest.
Makino cupped his face and leaned forward, she had to tippy toe as Luffy had grown quite a bit, she pressed her soft lips against Luffy's, his eyes widened in shock and she wrapped her arm around his neck, moaning deeply into the kiss.
The kiss lasted a few moments, it was electrifying, her lips were so sweet, Luffy wrapped his arms around her waist, sticking his tongue down her throat, she happily gave him full control, his devil fruit seemed to give him natural experience, eventually, Makino pulled away from Luffy's lips, taking a few deep breaths.
"How…huff, was that?"Makino asks between breaths. Her face was dusted red, so was his.
"Intense…"Luffy huffs.
Makino smiled. Leaning in and kissing his neck, "Mnnn,"Luffy groaned, she trailed kisses down his chest, Makino grinned and took his jacket off, she tossed it to the side and leaned down, she unbuckled his pants and pulled them down, what popped out was honestly shocking, he was…HUGE Her eyes widened as she glared at the throbbing slab of meat she was about to put in her mouth, she bit her lip and blew against it, Luffy groaned a bit and his cock jumped a bit.
"Sensitive are we?"Makino giggles, she then slipped her tongue over the head of his cock,He arched his head back, it took everything not to cum on the spot, and Makino could tell.
"I won't make fun of you if you cum sooner than you want, you're new, we'll work on stamina, later~"Makino opened her mouth and took his cock deep down her throat, she was able to take a few inches before she choked, she brushed her hair away and held her shoulder a bit as she took him.
"Hnnn, Makino…"Luffy moaned, placing a hand on her head, Makino smiled with her eyes, bobbing her head up and down.
'Darn it, he's too big…Makino thought to herself, she pulled away, taking a few deep breaths
"Huff….did that feel good?"Makino asks.
"Amazing…"Luffy said awestruck as her drool dripped down his dick.
Makino too a small breath. "Phew, you're even bigger than Shanks,"She giggles. She was with Shanks? Luffy had no idea why, but that pissed him off, Suddenly. He gripped her hair.
"Owe! Luffy~"She whined. "Oh- Mmmph"She gagged as he forced her head down onto his cock, he forced her half way, She gripped his strong thighs as he began roughly face fucking her.
'He's gonna choke me! Did he get jealous when I mentioned Shanks?' Makino wondered as she slurped and gagged on his dick, he made her took more and more each time. 'It makes sense, I know better than to mention another guy during sex, oh well~'
Makino wasn't complaining at all, she loved the aggression, the way Luffy grunted, the way he forced her all the way to his pelvis with each thrust, spit coated his dick and dripped off his balls.
"Glurk glurk glurk, sluuurp,"she choked, her eyes rolled as he held her head to the base. Her make up began to run down her face as she teared up.
"How's that huh? Shanks can't dominate you like this right slut?"Makino growls, Makino didn't think he knew those words, it was turning her on, making her nether regions dampen, she was losing air as her nose pushed against his pelvis. Eventually she had to tap on his thighs
Luffy realized he was choking her and pulled out. Letting her breath. "Pwah!"She breathed out, there was a layer of spit dripping off his cock.
"Sorry, I got carried away," Luffy realized.
"Huff…huff…don't be sorry, that's how you should treat women~"Makino smiled. Kissing his cock.
"It's okay, fuck my face tilly ou cum, I'm ready now."She promises, Luffy nods and grabbed her heads, Makino opened her mouth wide, sticking her tongue out. Fuck she looked pretty, her make up was smeared everywhere, spit went down her chin.
"Ahhhh,"It was like Makino was ready for a dentist appointment, Luffy couldn't wait anymore, he jammed his cock down her throat in one thrust, he then began to bob her head up and down, causing her to make loud gagging and slurping noises, he forced her from the tio, all the way to the base, his fat balls slapping her chin.
"Glurk, glurk, glurk."She choked.
'Cum already, how does he have so much damn stamina for his first time? He didn't do anything with Mihawk of Uta, I can tell, he's a natural born beast!' Makino thought in her head, the throat fucking lasted for a few more minutes. Luffy let out moans and groans. While Makino gagged and choked.
"Gonna…cum!"Luffy groaned. He clenched his eyes and came, it was his first time ever cumming, and there was a lot, her cheeks puffed out, her eyes rolled as he flooded her throat. She did her best to swallow his thick, salty cum.
There was just so much, it even began to leak out her nose, Finally she pulled away for air. "ahhh!"Luffy moaned as he let out a few more stands of hot jizz on her face.
Luffy could see Makino swish a mouth full of cum in her mouth, she made audible gulping noises as she began to swallow. "Ahhh!"She breathed out, sticking her tongue out to show that she swallowed it all, she even began to wipe the cum on her fingers and lick them lean. Makino smirked, he was still rock hard.
"Do you want to continue?"Makino asks with a smile.
"Yes…"Luffy huffed.
Makino giggled and stood up, she lay down on her bed and spread her legs. Spreading her folds for him.
Luffy's cock throbbed as he stepped forward and dropped over him.
"We'll practice foreplay later, besides…I bet this big thing will be plenty for me,"Makino smiled.
"I'm not sure what to do…"Luffy admits.
Makino giggled and cupped his face, she grabbed his huge cock and pressed it right against her pussy. "Thrust." Makino said simply, she should have told him to be careful, cus he speared her in one, powerful thrust.
Makino immediately clamped down onto Luffy's length, it was like he knocked the wind out of her. More importantly…a wave of pleasure shot through her, her head flung back and her back arched.
"Ohhhh fuck!"Makino cried out, her body began to shake, her pussy trembled intensely. 'Fuck…did he make me cum in one thrust?' Makino thought in shock, she was on cloud fucking 9, her stomach bulged out.
Luffy wasn't faring much better, this sensation was intense, he fletcher folds wrapping around her, it was so hot.
"Makino…"Luffy groaned.
"It's…okay,"Makino panted. "Mnnn, move your hips back and forth…not too hard."She huffed.
"Okay…"Luffy pulled his hips back, Makino let out a gasp of pleasure before he plunged his cock back into her cunt.
"Ahhh!" Makino cried, Luffy leaned close to Makino, starting at a nice, firm pace. Giving her deep long strokes, Makino moaned and squirmed around him. Luffy growled as she wrapped her arms around his back, dragging her nails across them. Causing red streaks to form on his back.
"Luffy…"Makino moaned into his ear. "Harder." She whimpered. Luffy didn't need to be told twice, he began to fuck her harder as she asked. Pumping his hips back and forth harder and harder, every thrust kissed her womb,. It was so big, Makino and luffy's moans mixed together.
"Fuck…fuck…fuck!" Makino cried out, arching her head back. "Cumming, cumming!"She wrapped her legs around him and came again. Letting out a loud cry of pleasure, no man had ever made her feel like this.
"Shit…Makino…I can't…"Luffy moaned.
"It's okay,"Makino moans, kissing Luffy's cheek "cum…Cum deep inside, , mmmn…I wanna be pregnant before you leave okay?" She whispered/Moaned into his ear.
Luffy picked up the pace, his hips moving faster and faster, Makino made sure to lock her legs around him, she refused to let a drop leave her cunt, and sure enough, with a loud moan he came, and she came, juices mixed together as they held onto each other, Haki flooded the room, it was driving Makino crazy.
"Luffy! So hot!"Makino cried.
"Makino!"Luffy cried out in pleasure, this orgasm was even harder than before.
As the orgasm died down, Luffy pulled out of her pussy, some leaking out, Makino spin them around and leaned down, she began to lick up and down his huge cock, cleaning her sweet juices, much to Luffies delight,
They continued all night.
Makino rode Luffy hard, giving him a damn good view, He throat fucked her a few more times, she taught him doggy style, prone bone, he even lifted her up and Really layed into her. They went for hours, till night became day. Finally they were spent, covered in each other's love making, they fell asleep together
Aaand end! Good lord this had so many errors! I have no idea how I decided this was okay to publish, lol anyways, hope you enjoyed!