HALLO THIS IS MY FIRST STORY I WRITE

Sakura wars was game I never know it was exist I thought it was anime at first then I realize it was original game for Saturn I played the English patch of the first game and a had a blast it was great game I was In depression at that time and this game was fantastic story and gameplay was fun and all the characters were great from the protagonist ogami and heroine sakura to manager yoneda this game was my friend to this day I keep play it till now this is my adaption of the first game I hope you like it before any thing all rights to the story and character belong to sega and original creator I do not own it nor i believe i am better writer then them i just want to share my adaption with all of you

and one Last thing most characters will be different from origin especially ogami because I want to make all characters good and add some elements to the story and romance to it and don't think the origin story is bad it just feel like it could add more alright without further ado I hope you all like it if there any problem with my writing please share your criticism and if some plot points a forget to include I would like to know

Thank you