Hello guys, its been a while. I just thought Id make a small update because of the time its taken me to get writing again. Ive had to deal with multiple life and medical problems the past couple months that has made it very hard to write. However Ive gotten back and currently about half way done with chap. 2
Im also glad for the posititve reviews, it makes me feel a bit better about the story :) Tbh I usually just read these kind of fics, however its my first time writing this, im a slow typer and have had alot going on so its been a bit much. Anyway i dont usually reply to reviews like this either but why not?
Reedz22- Cant promise that, it is a betrayal fic. BUT, Maybe she can?
Nithi velu- Yeah ive seen way too many bashing fics, however its usually overly so. There will be slight bashing, but you need to have a little in a betrayal fic. All i can promise is to keep it minimal and realistic like i planned.
Nagj Aoe- Sakura and Sasuke do seem like terrible friends, and they are. I gave a brief rundown of Naruto and Sakura's relationship early in the chapter when i introduced Sakura to the story. It dated back to her false confession to Naruto, which in my story, he accepted; because he didnt think she would lie about something like that. Thats why Sakura is a horrible friend, on top of what she and sasuke did. I Will, at some point, get to Sasuke's perspective. People make mistakes when intoxicated, and sometimes those mistakes are huge and hurt the people around you. Also the part about him smoking, it was stated in the very beginning that shikamaru got him into the habit after Jiraya died.
AlexGodz- Thank you, however i dont believe sasuke is too ooc if you think about it. I mean he got with her in boruto so he obviously has some feelings for her. The part about him actually getting drunk may be ooc though. All in all people make mistakes when theyre drunk, the line between right and wrong begin to blur the more intoxicated you get yknow? Same can be said for sakura.
That being said, I wont say much right now but this will be an evolving story. There will be drama, romance, angst, and action. Im trying to keep this as original, yet as realistic and as close to cannon as I can. I also want it to be known im not very good at dialogue, which is partly why I decided to write this story. Practice makes perfect right? Thank you to everyone for your support! Anyway, see you guys in a few days!