Love.
I love him, love him more than anything else in this world.
"_" Huh? Of course not, I would never doubt him, after all, he had promise to follow me till the very end.
"_" Is my love wrong? He will never come back? Nonsense, my love is never wrong and he will come back, he promised me.
"_" What do I want? Isnt it clear already?
... I want to kiss him, show my affection to him, i want to hug him, touch him, feel his warm touch once again, hear his voice.
I want to meet him, even if its just a couple second. I will never leave my eyes off him again, I would never ever let him go again.
I promise that.
"_" Shut up, you know nothing about MY love.
"_" Would I sacrifice them?
... Of course yes, if it mean that I would meet him again, then its a small price to pay because...
After all, loving someone is and never will be wrong.
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"... Void." With that word being said, the entire messy, abandon cabin got swallow by a strong wind and have now become like an active warzone.
Once the wind die down, a figure could be seen standing in the middle of it, a male figure with white hair and a tanned skin while wearing a tight black combat suit along with a red shroud.
"Well well, it look like you improve this time by-" He said opening his eyes to see no one, not even sign at where his master is.
'Ok, deep breath Shirou, remember what Tohsaka teach you about Servant back in the war.' He thought to himself as he try to feel the connection between him and his master.
'Huh?' The more he focus, the more confuse he get, 'There is none, no connection to anyone, not even the grail, weird, normally there would be atleast one connection but this time... There was none.' The thought of being summon as a rouge servant cross his mind but he kept it in the corner of his mind for now as it is too quick to come to that conclusion.
After a while, he decide to observe his surounding in order to found out what exactly had summon him, 'Hmm, it look like an attack has occur here, likely the side effect of this summoning.' He thought to himself.
Seeing that his surounding no longer provide him anything useful, he decide to move the debris thats separating him and the outside world.
Immediately hitting him was the shining sunlight through the leaf of the forest, 'No animal could be seen, the mana around here... No, this isnt the age of gods at least.' He thought after a moment of observing the surounding area.
'This is no good... Maybe this summoning is a mistake, if so then I could wait and the Servant body mana will ran out, then-' Before he can finish his train of thought, his ear pick up a scream from far away.
His body react instinctively to the scream as he yell out in order to activate his skill, "Kōshukei no sejin." And with that give himself a buff to leap to the sources of the scream.
When he approach what seem like the sources of it, he saw three man, one of them is pinning a blond hair girl to the ground while the other one is ripping her clothes away and the last one is busy open their pant.
"Trace On" He said without a second thought and project two dao, one black, one white, and charge at the most defendless man out of the three, the one who is taking their pant off.
Then in a blink of an eyes, the man got knockout by Shirou using the white down. The next one he is targetting is the one pinning the girl down by kicking him in the guts knocking him out cold.
The final one surprisingly react in time as he pull out a sword from his back to attack Shirou who although surprise at the man fast reaction, still manage to deflect the sword in the man hand and splash him using the dull side of the black dao in the head, making him suffer the same fate as the other two.
'This is the strength of a Servant body... Amazing.' He thought to himself as his ear pick up a sound behind him.
When he turn around, he see a young blond girl with amethyst eyes, she wear a torned white fantasy military outfit with her long hair being lose and reaches her back.
"Are you alright?" He ask the girl lying in front of him as he dismiss Kanshou and Bakuya at the same time.
...
Silence fill the air as the girl seem to have trouble speaking to him.
After a long while, the girl finally break the awkward silence by answering, "I-I am f-fine, th-thank you fo-or asking." Her voice is shaking, although he doesnt need to really guess why.
"Glad that was the case, then can you stand up miss?" He ask while strech his arm out.
"Kitsuki, Kitsuki G-Ginhime ." She introduce herself and reaches for his hand to stand up, this time her voice sound a little bit less shaky, "Nice to meet you then Ginhime-san, my name is Shirou, Emiya Shirou, i did appreciate it if you can call me Caster." He said as he help the blond girl get up.
And done, chapter one rewritten complete, how do you feel about it. The original chapter had too much error plus it just doesnt fit with the rest of the fic anymore so yeah, anyway, just a head up, my English is like very bad cause English isnt my first language but I will try to make this fic feel as English as possible so enjoy.