I love Suitor Armor, but only up until episode 107. After that, the author made very poor decisions with her writing. She had the option of ending the story peacefully, but instead she decided to make the story "edgy." Just because something is edgier doesn't automatically make it better. It's obvious to me that the author only did this in order to drag the story on further so she could make more money.
So here is my "fix-it" fanfiction that shows what the author could have done after episode 107.
"Lucia, if Lazuli has reached you and is giving you this message, it means she was unable to find Octavia and the others first. I made it back to my faction, but not before my sister had left with a small force to rescue me. She doesn't know that I am already gone. I sent Lazuli ahead because she is faster than me. I will try to get there in time but Octavia has a huge head start. If I can't reach her in time I need you to stop her. They will kill her. Please, Lucia, she is the only family that I have." This was the message that Lazuli carried to Lucia.
As soon as she got the message, Lucia ran straight to find Modeus.
"Modeus!" Lucia exclaimed. "The fairies are trying to rescue Quinn! They don't know they are already gone!"
"What do we do?" asked Modeus.
"Try to stop anymore bloodshed! I'll try to tell Octavia that Quinn is already gone," said Lucia.
Meanwhile, Octavia was roaming the hallway, not knowing what to do.
"Octavia! We searched everywhere, there isn't any sign of Quinn! We can't keep up the fight to buy anymore time!" said Onyx. "The second we were detected this was over. We need to leave before they activate too many wards!"
"We aren't leaving without Quinn!" said Octavia. "I just need a little more time. They have to be here somewhere."
"Quinn's not here!" Lucia shouted as she ran towards Octavia.
"What did you say?" asked Octavia.
"Quinn's…not…here," Lucia said between deep breaths. She was out of breath from running so much. "Quinn…already escaped from the dungeons. He's…gone."
"Who are you? And how do you know that?" asked Octavia.
"I…I'm one of you. I am a fairy," said Lucia, showing Octavia her ears.
Octavia froze for a moment, and then collected herself. "Let's retreat! We are done here!" she shouted.
All four of the fairies flew away, before any bloodshed could occur.
"What just happened?" King Reimund asked as he walked into the hallway with Krisi next to him.
"Quinn's friends came to try to rescue them, not knowing they already escaped," Lucia said. "They're gone now."
"Fairies broke into the castle?!" exclaimed Kirsi.
"Yes, but they weren't dangerous," Lucia explained. "They were just trying to rescue their friend."
"How could something like this happen? We need more security!" said Kirsi.
"Indeed, I believe the castle could benefit from more guards patrolling during the night," said Lord Ricon as he walked into the scene.
"No, I do not believe we need more guards," said King Reimund. "The fairies who broke in did nothing to hurt anyone. They are not the enemy. You, however," he pointed to Lord Ricon, "are the true enemy. You are fired."
"Fired?" Lord Ricon said. "But nephew, you can't mean…"
"It's not 'nephew,' it's 'Your Majesty,'" said King Reimund. "I no longer have any use for your services. You are to be removed from the castle immediately. Guards, take him away!"
The guards came and took Lord Ricon away, forcibly, as he kicked and screamed the whole time. The guards tossed Lord Ricon outside the castle gates. He would wander the streets by himself until he turned into stone. His elves would be adopted by Kirsi as her attendants, and she would help them learn to live independent lives outside of being slaves.
"How can you do that to your own family?" Kirsi said aghastedly.
"I have a new family now to take care of. You and Lucia," King Reimund said.
"But who will fight the war against the fairies?" asked Kirsi.
"Kirsi, the war ended a hundred years ago," said Lucia.
"What do you mean?" asked Kirsi.
Lucia and King Reimund shared a knowing look.
"I think it's time you saw what the world is like outside of the castle walls," said King Reimund.
The next day, Lucia and King Reimund took Kirsi out to town to take a look at what the world was truly like. They showed her the poor working conditions that elves lived through. They also took her to see V.
Kirsi reacted much the same way King Reimund did when she saw what fairies were willing to do in order to co-exist with humans.
And finally, during their visit with V, Lucia decided to tell Kirsi she was a fairy.
"I am a fairy," Lucia said as she took off her cloak.
Kirsi covered her mouth and started to cry. Then she ran over and gave Lucia a big hug. "This is what you've been hiding from me for so many years?! Oh Lucia, I had no idea! All those terrible things I've said about fairies, I take them all back!"
"You're…not upset with me?" Lucia asked.
"No, of course not! How could I blame you for wanted to hide this from me?" Kirsi sobbed. "I've been a terrible sister to you!"
"No, you haven't been a terrible sister at all! You're my best friend in the whole world!" Lucia said, also sobbing.
"We will make the world a better place for fairies and elves, I promise," Kirsi said.
"Head north until you find spring," was what Quinn had told Lucia to do. So she did. She headed north until she found the fairy faction. When she found them, she formally invited them to have an audience with the King.
Octavia came to the castle and spoke to the King during the People's Court. She told him how much fairies were suffering. King Reimund listened and decided to make Octavia his new second-in-command to replace Lord Ricon. They would be working together to make a better future for humans, fairies, and elves, co-existing peacefully with one another.
Lucia knocked on Norrix's door.
"Norrix, we need talk," Lucia said.
Norrix opened the door reluctantly. "Lucia…" he said.
"I know how you created Modeus," Lucia said. "It's obvious. Somebody had to die in order for Modeus to be created."
"…come on in. I'll tell you the details," Norrix said.
The floor of the room was scattered with empty bottles of alcohol. Lucia paid them no mind. She sat in a chair and allowed Norrix to tell his story.
"The fairy was already dying. There was no way to save him even if I wanted to," Norrix said. "I used his soul to create Modeus."
"Whose soul?" asked Lucia.
"I don't know his name. It was just some fairy Lord Ricon brought to me as spoils of war," Norrix said.
"Thank you for telling me the truth, Norrix," said Lucia. "In return, I will tell you my secret."
"I already know you are a fairy," said Norrix.
"What? How could you possibly know?" Lucia exclaimed.
"I saw you that night, while you were training. You were flying," Norrix said.
"You saw me?!"
"Don't worry, I won't tell anyone. I want us to be able to trust each other," Norrix said. "Who else knows?"
"King Reimund and Kirsi already know, and so do Baynard and Peres, and Modeus," said Lucia.
"Modeus knew?"
"He was the first to find out."
"I see…" Norrix was lost in thought. "You truly prefer Modeus over me. And I can see why. I won't try to get in the way of your relationship with him."
"Thank you Norrix." Lucia stood up. "I'll be taking my leave now. It's been a pleasure talking with you."
"And you too," Norrix said.
Lord Enver signed up to become a knight. He quickly rose through the ranks until he was a higher rank than his horrible brother.
That horrible brother now had to take orders from Lord Enver. It was truly magnificent.
"Why is it taking so long for you to become a knight, Peres?" King Reimund asked.
"Well…it's because…I want to stay with Baynard and be his squire forever," Peres said truthfully.
"But why?" asked King Reimund.
"Because we're dating each other," Baynard said.
"SHHHH! Don't tell him that!" Peres said.
"Oh, that's why. In that case, I'll leave you be," King Reimund said.
Peres was stunned. "You don't…disapprove of our relationship?" he said flabbergasted.
"Not at all. Love is love," King Reimund said.
"See, I told you it wouldn't be so bad if he knew the truth," Baynard said.
THE END