[Planet Vegeta]

Bardock soared through the atmosphere of the planet, his armor battered and bloodied from the relentless battle against Frieza's soldiers. He fought with a fury, each strike sending his enemies flying. One soldier, desperate, fired a blast at him, but Bardock dodged it, closing the distance in an instant.

With a roar, he grabbed the soldier, throwing him into a cluster of others. Bardock followed up by releasing a devastating energy blast that obliterated the group, the explosion lighting up the battle field

"Come on, you cowards!" Bardock shouted, his voice filled with rage and defiance.

A soldier, wide-eyed with fear, turned to his comrades and asked, "Who the hell is this guy?"

The remaining soldiers, realizing they were outmatched, circled Bardock, grabbing hold of him, trying to restrain him in a tangled mass. As the ball of soldiers squeezed tighter, a deep, guttural voice broke through.

"Frieza!"

In an instant, the pressure inside the circle shattered as Bardock unleashed a massive burst of energy. The force of his power sent every soldier flying, their bodies crashing into others Bardock stood at the center, breathing heavily, his fury only growing.

"Look Zarbon seems like one the monkeys caught, on he seems like he trying to stop us," an ugly pink alien said

"Don't worry Dodoria too bad he can't do anything against our lord he'll die with his planet" The doors opened as Frizea came inside with his hover pod

"You're right Zarbon this monkey's actions will go in vain and I'll kill him and his filthy monkey race," Frieza says while chuckling the roof opens up as Frieza hovers up and looks at Planet Vegeta

Bardock finishing an enemy off looks at a spaceship and sees Frieza "You bastard our race is done serving under you and your father and this ends now, This is for all the people you made us kill!" Bardock forms an energy ball in his hand and he launches at Frieza. Smiling Frieza puts his hands out creating a red energy ball, and it expands bigger and bigger and bigger as it dwarfs the Saiyan

The attack instantly destroys Bardocks attack and continues toward him Bardock tries to hold it back but it's in vain it fully develops him what he sees is his son Kakarot whom he sent away with blond hair with a golden aura standing in front of Frieza " avenge our race Kakarot" Those were the last things Bardock thought before getting erased

The energy ball continues as Saiyans from Low to Elite walk outside to see the sky turn red many Saiyans have shocked expressions on their face one sayian named Gine thinks to herself that Bardock was right. The red ball breaks through the clouds as it impacts the crust of the planet and easily breaks its way through then reaches the core of the planet and eventually explodes

Scouters start to make noise as power levels on the planet. Start to disappear one by one "I definitely feel way better now" Frieza says while laughing knowing that the myth of the legendary super Saiyan is gone and he'll rule the universe without any worry

[Some planet far away]

"Did you hear that we got a message from the Frieza force that a meteor collided with planet Vegeta and killed everyone?" A Sayian man says "Impossible" another says Two Sayian kids sit below inside a destroyed home overhearing them

"I guess we're kinda lucky good thing we ignored the call to return to Planet Vegeta," The long-haired one said

"damn it now I can't be King Vegeta, I wonder if my brother died along with the others, not that it matters" One of the sayian runs down

"Raditz don't you have a younger brother"

"ye I do but he was going to be just a lower-class warrior he probably died in a sleeping Capsule wait I think my mother said she sent him off the planet oh well I don't care"

[in the middle of space]

A space pod is flying through space at high speeds as a baby is inside sleeping it takes many days but it finally reaches its destination a big green and blue planet with many moons and a very large star. The pod breaks through the atmosphere and heads to an island and it crash lands destroying trees and launching dirt around. An old man comes to see the noise as he looks at the pod walking towards it.

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I think 600 words first chapter is good I think I'm going to post daily until I put out a good amount of chapters and next chapter I'll try to do 1000 words

I finally completed my first chapter please tell me how I did and tell me if you see any problems and please give some feedback thank you and have a good great weekend