Welcome to a new chapter… and sadly… nobody won I mean… the closer there is is this:
AwakeningFates chapter 5. Jun 2
Makotos name was Kotaru. I wish you elaborated more on this. but whatevs
Soo… I'm going to do this… for next chapter same rules but if nobody gets it AwakeningFates will be the winner… so enjoy
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Chapter 6: Blood is thicker than water
Makoto woke up with a smile on his face it has been a couple of days since his testing. He felt rather today it was a free day with no classes. And because he also didn't have to do his job as a reaper, he had planned that he would visit his family… He really missed his sister and his dad…and… his mom… well he did miss his mom… but after the accident… she had changed a lot. Thinking about it then looked sadly. Before he slapped his face with both of his hand. He couldn't feel depressed, he was happy he was going to see his family. But after he thought that he heard his stomach give a hard grumble – "Yeah I agree with you… I should go eat something first"
After he said that he then took a quick bath and dressed himself. Before he left to the dining room – "good morning Naegi-kun" – Said Asahina as she got closer to him with a bright smile. Ever since that day Asahina had been strangely close to Makoto… Making some of the other girls Jealous. Makoto then greeted everyone until Maizono and him looked at each other… Before they both looked away… their faces red with embarrassment. After the kiss they both couldn't see at each other… while they both liked it… none of them had the courage to actually do the job and ask the other out…so they both just blush like little kids. Kyoko on the other hand would find this always suspicious… what was happening between the two of them?
"Hey Naegi-kun?" – Hina said blushing a little and getting his attention – "Actually Sakura and I are going to the mall to buy some exercise equipment… do you want to accompany us?" – she said blushing. Making Sayaka, Mukuro and Sayaka really angry and jealous. But Makoto just smiled sadly – "Sorry Hina… but today I promise my family I would go visit them" – he said shocking both Byakuya and Kyoko… and making Hina a little disappointed – "oh… it's ok"
"But what if I promise you I'll go next time… no excuses" – Makoto said getting Hina's attention – "do you promise?" – She asked, and Makoto nodded. Hina then felt excited – "Ok it's a promise!" – she said excited making both Sayaka and Mukuro jealous. Kyoko then stood up quickly getting everyone's attention – "Makoto can you follow me?" – she ordered surprising him who nodded and followed her… while this happened Byakuya just sighed.
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"Makoto are you sure you want to go there?" – asked Kyoko as they got outside. Makoto then looked at her and noticed she had a worried face – "Sure… I'm sure Komaru and dad miss me a lot" – he said smiling before Kyoko looked sad at him- "and your mom?" – She asked, and she felt bad when she noticed she had made him feel a little sad – "I don't know… but either way I promised Komaru I would go" – Kyoko could feel how sad he looked - "well It's that's true at least you should bite me" – she said whispering- "That way you cannot go hungry"- Makoto then looked at her
"Thanks, but no… Normally I would drink it because your blood is strangely delicious" – He said making her blush embarrassed – "But I don't want to ruin your day… also I think our stalkers would find out" – he said, and Kyoko sighed. Thanks to their years of experience they had noticed that Junko, Sayaka and Mukuro (who because her training was actually the best hiding) actually followed them and were watching them from a distance – "I don't understand why they are following us?" – asked Kyoko a little mad and Makoto just rose his shoulder. Makoto then checked his cellphone – "Ohh I'm late" – he said before he started leaving surprising Kyoko – "but Makoto you haven't eaten breakfast!" – she said loudly as he was leaving – "I'll buy something on the road!" – he screamed as he ran – "See you later Kyoko!"- he screamed making Kyoko sigh – "I hope he will be ok"-she said worried for him
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After managing to get on time to take the bus, Makoto the stop near his house. After a 5 min walk he then got to his house. As he saw the driveway he noticed that his mother car wasn't there… and he knocked the door – "I'm going" – he heard on the other side before the door opened – "who is it…" – his dad asked before he looked at Makoto waving at him – "Hi dad"- His dad then let out a wide smile
"Makoto!" – he said happily hugging him… Makoto then smiled embarrassed – "Is been a while since he you came here… come on inside" – his father said, and Makoto nodded and followed him. After they entered they both sat – "So… How is school?" – he asked as he looked at his son
"well actually school is great… I met a lot of people in it" – He then started talking about school and his friends – "Ahh I Even have Sayaka Maizono as one of my classmates" – Naegi said surprising his father – "Sayaka Maizono? The Idol that Komaru is always talking about?" – he asked, and Makoto nodded, his father then looked at him with a teasing smile – "she is really, pretty being she?" – He said making Makoto blush… - "it's not like that" -he said embarrassed before his father took a serious tone
"and how is your job?" – he asked him making Makoto serious as well – "It's been well, ghouls are still really easy to kill… but to tell you the truth right now I'm taking a vacation" – Makoto explained making his father nodded – "to be truthful when they told me about you becoming a vampire and becoming a Ghoul hunter I wanted to argue to let you live like a normal kid… but your determination to stop the ghouls actually convinced me to let you go" – he said and Makoto smiled sadly
"actually, I too want to live like a normal person… but the ghoul spread came from my blood… and I have to stop it" – he said, and his father looked at him – "Makoto… it's not your fault… What they did to you was monstrous" – Makoto the smiled – "Maybe so… but I have the power to stop it… so nobody has to suffer like me" – he said, and his father looked sadly at him. They then heard the door opening
"Dad we are home" – they heard Komaru as they entered the with bags of groceries. It was then that Komaru then looked at her brother – "Oni-Chan!" – she screamed excited as she jumped and hugged her brother – "Hi Komaru… how are you?" – he asked as he pet her head and she purred in happiness, she liked being petted by him – "I been great, school has been easy, and fun" – she said as she hugged him tightly. Makoto then smiled softly as his sister kept hugging him
"What is that thing doing here?" – they then all heard before they looked at Makoto's mom… when he looked at her… he felt in pain, her eyes, her eyes showed the same level of hatred than his coworkers. – "Honey what are you saying… that is no way to talk to our son" – Makoto's father scolded with a little anger – "Son… what son? My son died when he was 4… This monster is not my son"- She said angry his mother then looked at Komaru – "Komaru stop touching that… it will hurt you" – she said angrily and coldness on her voice making Komaru scared and let go Makoto. Makoto looked sadly and scared
"Mom… Is… me" – he tried to say before he looked at her and he felt afraid… you see working so long with people that hated him and mixed with his supernatural abilities he actually became able to read people wavelengths… and right now… hers where angry – "SHUT UP YOU MONSTER! I DON'T WANT TO HEAR ANYTHING FROM YOU!" – she said enraged making everyone scared except Makoto's father
"Martel that's enough!" – screamed Naegi's father shocking his wife. She then looked angrily at all of them and walked to another room. His father then sighed – "sorry about that Makoto" – he said looking at his now saddened two children – "It's ok dad… I mean… no biggy" – he said trying to smile but everyone knew it was forced… Making his father sigh again – "Hey kids how about we order a pizza? I mean I don't think your mother would want to make dinner" – Komaru and Makoto then smiled a little and nodded. His father then went to get the phone and called the pizza place
As they waited Makoto and Komaru looked at each other – "I'm sorry"-Komaru then said surprising and confusing him - "why are you apologizing?"- he asked her, and she looked sadly at the floor – "I don't know why mom feels that way but it's not fair how she treats you" – She said, and Makoto pet her head – "it's ok Komaru… The way mom thinks of me is something only she can decide… after all is her feelings" – Komaru looked how calm his brother was and it made her feel worse… how many people treated him like that, so he can be this accustomed – "Ohh I forgot to tell you something!" – he said getting excited and confusing her
"guess who a classmate of mine is?" – he said making her even more confused – "Sayaka Maizono!" – He said making her eyes widen – "REALLY?!" – She then said excited as she stood up – "Are you lying Oni-chan?" – He then pulled his phone and searched a selfie he and Sayaka took together – "It's really her!" – she then said taking the phone from his hands and looking at it directly – "Oni-chan you have to present her to me!" - she then said excited as she jumped up and down in excitement, making him smile – "I promise that next time I'll see if she comes with me" – he said making her smile
After that they just kept talking. Until they heard the doorbell ringing – "Hey kids can you please answer that? It's probably the pizza"- Makoto and Komaru then looked at each other and started laughing as they started walking to the door, not knowing that inside the kitchen their parents were fighting
"How can you call that thing your child Minato?" – Martel asked to her husband – "Our son died when he was kidnapped at 4 years old" – She said making Minato mad – "how can you say that when our son is right there… he suffered so much during those years of kidnapping… how can you just reject him?!" - he asked making her mad
"That Thing is not my son…. My son was a cute boy who was taken from us… that Vampire freak has no relation with me… I'll never accept it" – She said her eyes enraged… Minato knew that there was no way to change her mind
While they fought Makoto and Komaru finally got to the door – "what kind of pizza you think it is?" – Komaru asked while drooling and they opened the door. As the door opened Makoto's eyes started to widen…. Dr. Tsesuna and a Hooded man were there – "Hi… my cute lab rat" – Tsesuna said with a smile.
In less than half a second Makoto pushed away Komaru with his left arm as he blocked the attack of the hooded man with his right… he underestimated him since his strength managed to break his arm and send him flying with a sonic boom breaking every single wall until he ended in the backyard
As he flew back he noticed that the hooded Ghoul dashed to him, so he quickly did a backflip landing on the ground before he dodged his attack by jumping back, noticing that the ghoul had a mutated claw and kicked him as he did another backflip – "ONI-CHAN!" – Komaru screamed as her and their parents ran to the back – "Makoto are you ok?" – screamed his father before they both noticed his broken arm – "I'm ok… just don't get closer..." – Makoto said still looking at the hooded ghoul – "what was that? His skin feels hard" – he mumbled ad he looked at him
"do you like it my cute lab rat?"- Tsetsuna said as he slowly walked to the backyard – "Tsesuna… You fucking bastard" – Makoto said enraged shocking his family members… they had never seen Makoto like that – "aww that's the face I remember… you look just like when I turned you into your beautiful being" – Tsesuna said shocking Makoto's family. It was him he was the man that kidnapped Makoto and tortured him, Makoto then quickly looked at his family before barely dodging the ghoul – "don't worry my cute lab rat… I have no interest in your family… so please concentrate on your target" – he said as Makoto kept dodging the attacks
"Son… grab this" – Makoto's father screamed before throwing to him a Katana. And Naegi quickly grabbed it- "Hey you try and catch me!" – Makoto then screamed before Jumping on top of the house running away jumping in-house and house. The Ghoul then looked at him and followed him
"I see by doing this you reduce causalities" – Dr. Tsesuna said thoughtfully - "wait!" – screamed Komaru to him – "are you the man who kidnapped my brother?" – she screamed angry-making Tsesuna smile – "sorry but I can't answer you"- and from his lab coat a jetpack appeared before he flew following Makoto and his ghoul
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Sakura and Hina where walking in the park they had just bought training equipment. Sakura had noticed that Hina was a little bit silent – "Sakura… can I tell you a secret?" – Hina asked her confusing Sakura – "Of course Hina… You are my best friend… you can tell me anything" – Hina then smiled over that
"well… I think I like Naegi-kun" – Hina said as she was blushing surprising Sakura – "really?" – Sakura said confused… she knew Naegi was a good person, but she couldn't find a reason why would she like him – "well I mean I…" – and just as she was going to say more Sakura felt danger and Quickly pulled Hina as something fell into the ground making a hole
"Dammit, my ribs are broken" – Naegi complained as he stood, and blood came from his mouth, he then looked left and noticed both Hina and Sakura looking at him in shock – "Naegi-kun?" – Hina asked what was happening? Why was him hurt. Makoto didn't know what to answer, but then both him and Sakura felt a bloodthirst – "Hina, Sakura-san be careful!" – Makoto screamed as another thing fell from the sky making another hole and a shockwave of air and dust appeared
After Hina managed to see again she looked at the cause and her eyes widened – "what…. What is that?" – she asked afraid as she saw the claw. Hina then looked at Sakura who also was afraid – "you two… leave" – Makoto said shocking the girls – "don't worry I'll protect you" – he then said smiling at both of them and they both ran. Naegi then finally unsheathed the Katana his dad had given him and looked surprised over the refined blade. He knew his father used to do Kendo, but this blade looked beautiful. Makoto then looked with determination to the ghoul – "I will kill you"
The Ghoul dashed, and Makoto did the same swinging the blade…. And sliced off his claw – "was that enough?" – Makoto asked before he noticed that his claw healed instantly – "Guess not" – They then started attacking, Makoto quickly dodging the claw and attacking with his blade, his body felt like iron. Tsesuna was looking from the sky and smiled – "that won't be enough little rat. This Ghoul ability is to reinforce his own body… a simple blade won't cut him" – Makoto then jumped back and sheathed his blade, before taking a position – "what is he doing?" – Makoto was not moving, and the ghoul had dashed to him
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Flashback Makoto 4 years old
Makoto was in his father dojo looking at him the training he looked impressed over what his father was able to do, Minato then noticed how his son looked at him in awestruck and smiled – "Makoto do you like swordsmanship?" – he asked his son who nodded excited, Minato then smiled – "Someday I will teach you Moonlight style swordsmanship… but you are still too young" – he said petting his head – But I guess I can teach you this technique" – he said taking a position – "This techniques name is…"
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"Moonlight style … New moon slash!" – Naegi said quickly unsheathing his blade. And a wind shockwave appeared. After that everything stopped and Tsesuna looked confused over the dust covering them – "what are you doing attack him!" – he ordered the Ghoul before his eyes widened, one by one the trees started falling one by one and half of the ghoul fell to the ground Makoto had managed to slice him in half. Tsesuna then smiled – "Amazing Little Rat… you never stop surprising me" – he said before he left
Makoto on the other hand felt tired, his body felt heavy, he dropped his sword and fell to the ground unconscious. Just as this happened Kyoko and Byakuya got there with Hina and Sakura. Both Hina and Sakura were shocked over the destruction. But Kyoko dashed to Makoto – "Makoto!"
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Well this is the end of the chapter
Like I Said on the beginning the competition still stands… and if not… well AwakeningFates start thinking in what you want to add or change in the story as your prize