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Only thing I'd want to do for the story is for Makoto and Sayaka to stay together)

But… sadly not this chapter… well, maybe a little.

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Chapter 8: Before BIHP part II

Makoto (6 years old) woke up weakly his face showing his lack of soul, his body weaken and looking like e dried skeleton. He did the same routine he had been doing for the past year. First, he checked his right leg… then his right arm… next his left arm… everything was in place. He then tried to stand, while holding his nightstand. After he finally stood up, Makoto then quickly lose his balance and fell to the ground, hitting him in the face. Makoto then looked at his legs and noticed that his left leg was missing… he had forgotten… they cut it off yesterday

You see after finally turning into a vampire Makoto was experimented every day. They wanted to test how immortal he was. One day they cut his arms, another day they would tear his innards. Some days they would take his heart, and sometimes they would take his head off. It was to the point that he no longer felt pain… Makoto then noticed that the door opened and a couple of men and Dr. Tsesuna entered – "good morning my cute vampire how are you feeling?" – he asked to the broken-down Makoto who just looked at him not answering. Dr. Tsesuna then looked at his missing leg with curiosity – "well your leg is taking more time to heal than last time… could it be the lack of food?" – he asked. After all other than torturing and slicing him apart, they have also been starving him without food or even blood for experimentation. Dr. Tsesuna then looked at one of his guards – "take him" – the guard then nodded and tied a leash on his neck and pulled him up almost choking him and they pulled him outside. They then started walking to another room as Makoto was gasping trying his best to breath – "Impressive" – said Tsesuna as they walked, and he looked at Makoto – "a normal child would have his neck broken or he would choke to death but somehow he is able to stay alive even when he doesn't even oxygen

After a while they finally got on front of an iron door… the other guard then opened it and the first one threw Makoto inside. After he fell Makoto started coughing hard as he regained his breath. As he coughed Makoto then looked around the room noticing a small girl (not older than 3) crying in fear – "I see you saw your meal" – he said shocking Makoto who looked at the scared small child

Makoto then shook his head and started dragging himself outside before one of the guards kicked him in – "Ohh my guinea pig, you don't have to be scared what is in front of you is only food" – he said calmly before snapping his fingers/ One of the guards then walked inside and walked to the child with a knife who tried to escape to no avail. Makoto then saw with terrified eyes, how the guard grabbed the kid and slit his throat and the kid dropped dead in the ground. Makoto felt nauseous, but his stomach was too empty to throw up.

But after a couple of second Makoto felt a warm delicious smell pulling him in. He then slowly turned his head and noticed the warm blood pouring from his neck. His heart then started pounding. The warm red plasma-like liquid was filling the floor. He couldn't resist it anymore as he drags himself to the kid. He hated himself for even thinking like that… but he was so hungry

Makoto then bowed to the level of the kid and the intense smell of the blood brought out the feral hunger in him. Makoto then licked the blood on the floor. It felt so warm… so gentle… so delicious. Makoto then lost it and decided to bite the corpse and started drinking her blood

Tsesuna then looked and grinned – "feeling hungry?" – he joked as he saw tears falling from Naegi's eyes while he drank the blood. While it tasted marvelous, his guilt got the better of him. But to the surprise of the guards and the interest of the Dr. Makoto's leg grew immediately after drinking – "Well done my cute guin…"

*BOOM*

They all then felt a huge shake on the floor and the whole place now shining red as the alarm sounded – "what is happening?!" – asked the Dr. to one of his guards as he pulled his radio to listen - "We are under attack!" – he said surprising them – "the Togami corporation has found our base and it's trying to bring us down" – Tsesuna then looked angry before he gave a hard breath – "tell our people to try and save everything we can… and for you two. The guinea pig is your main priority" – he said pointing at Makoto with his cane before he started to leave – "where are you going, sir?" – Dr. Tsesuna then looked at them – "I have to go get my research. Don't let the guinea pig out of your sight" – he said, and he left. The two guards then looked at each other. One of them then pulled out his gun while the other one grabbed forcefully Makoto's arm and pulled him

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"are you sure you should be here Kijo?" – Asked Jin as they infiltrated the base with their elite squad – "isn't the boss supposed to stay away from problems?" -Kijo then looked directly at Jin – "No… This was something my father started… I have to finish it Myself. Now that Even I have a kid… I don't want those children to feel that pain anymore" – he said with a stern look surprising Jin before he smiled – "then let's finish it" – he said

While the teams of reapers infiltrated the base Jin, Kijo and some other people were dealing with helping the still living children get out. And while some of them had injuries most of them were ok – "Here, Follow the line, don't worry we'll take you back to your parents" – Kijo said surprising Jin. It was then that Jin felt someone pulling his pants softly and turned around seeing a small girl looking at him with pleading eyes – "Please help him?" – she said getting the attention of both of them – "who is him?"- Jin asked but she just shook her head – "I don't know his name… but I have seen him… they are always hurting him bad" – she said crying surprising both of them. Jin then helped her calm before Kijo looked at the other helpers – "Take care of the children, Jin and I are going to deal with something"- he said before Jin guided the girl to the helpers and they both left

Jin and Kijo then walked through the hallway searching around while the guards and the reapers when they noticed a couple of men dragging a soulless kid who was not resisting – "Stop!" – said Jin getting Kijo's and the guard's attention who started running away with Makoto. Quickly followed by Jin and Kijo.

They all started running as he dragged Makoto. Kijo then quickly pulled his gun but was stopped by Jin – "Kijo stop… what if you hit the kid?" – Jin said. While this was happening, Makoto was just looking around… his eyes cold and soulless, like he didn't care what happened to him. But in a quick flash of light, he noticed Kijo and Jin… their eyes…. Their eyes, unlike the adults he had seen before, they were not cold. Makoto didn't know why he did it, but he struggled and pulled himself free before running to where Jin and Kijo where, surprising everyone

"that damn brat!" – screamed one of the guards – "Shoot him! We can carry the body later" – he screamed and the other one with his gun out, then aimed at Makoto to the shock of Jin and Kijo – "Kid… duck!" – screamed Kijo before the guard unloaded his whole magazine on Makoto, who fell to the ground limp. The other then started running in order to retrieve Makoto's body when he himself got shot in his face. The other guard then looked for a couple of seconds at Kijo who was now pointing at him – "Big mistake" – and Kijo shot him

Jin quickly then ran to the boy to see if he was ok. But seeing his bloody body on the ground he felt an intense pain – "God Dammit!" – he screamed as he punched the ground angry – "dammit he was right there… why couldn't we save him?" – Kijo felt the same regret until his eyes widened in shock

Jin then felt a small hand petting his head. He then looked confused and noticed Makoto was petting his head… Seeing this his eyes widened. And the three of them just stayed silent in surprise. After a couple of seconds Jin noticed that, unlike his shirt, his body had no bullet wounds – "are you ok?"- asked Jin, not believing what he saw. The kid didn't answer… he just nodded – "are you sure?" – he asked, and Makoto nodded again

"ok… I guess?"

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"So, he is a success?" – asked Jin as both he and Kijo, looked at Makoto behind a one-way mirror silently playing with a ball – "are you sure?" – he asked him. And Kijo nodded – "the scientists we managed to capture, explained about the process, the number of failed test subjects. And what have they done to this kid" – he said before reading from a clipboard – "dismemberment, torture, starvation, organ transplants and even more and more horrific painful punishments" – he explained while Jin looked more and angrier – "if it wasn't because of the success, he would have died horribly at least 20 times… no wonder he no longer talks" – Kijo said trying his best to not get angry… while Jin looked furious – "this poor child… how much did he have to suffer?"

As he said this they heard the door to their room open and saw enter Sinon Yukisa (Jin's wife) with Kyoko and Byakuya, the moment Kyoko saw her dad, she smiled and ran to him hugging him – "Honey? what are you doing here?" – Jin asked as he pulled Kyoko up – "well we were walking near here as I was babysitting the kids and we decided to visit" – she said before she looked to the window – "wait isn't that Naegi-kun? He disappeared 7 months ago" – she asked surprised surprising both the men – "how do you know him?" – asked Jin when Sinon looked at Jin – "well he used to be in Kyoko's class before he disappeared" – she explained – "why is he here?" – she asked. Jin then let down Kyoko who walked to Byakuya. And Jin then explained to Sinon what happened… Sinon then looked shocked as she heard all of this in shock

"So… what are you going to do to him?" – asked Sinon a little scared over their answer… they then looked at each other – "we don't know. We never expected this" – as they kept thinking they heard something weird in Makoto's room

"Hi, I'm Kyoko and this is Byakuya… what's your name" – asked Kyoko to Makoto

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While their parents talked about really boring things she couldn't understand. Kyoko decided that she and Byakuya were going to talk to the boy. Kyoko then walked to Byakuya – "hey Byakuya let's go play with that boy" – she said and Byakuya looked confused – "Don't you see we can't… there's a reason he is locked up, we have to stay here" – Byakuya said and Kyoko sighed- "that's boring… well I'm going" – She said and she started walking to the door connecting to Makoto's room – "Kyoko you can't do that"- Byakuya said before following him. Kyoko then opened the door and entered followed by Byakuya. Makoto then noticed them entering and looked at them confused

"Hi, I'm Kyoko and this is Byakuya… What's your name?" – she asked, but Makoto didn't answer… he just looked at them confused, making Kyoko a little mad – "hey you have to answer" – she said mad but Makoto didn't answer - "Kyoko…maybe he doesn't talk, because he can't" -Byakuya said and Kyoko looked surprised – "so he is a mute?" – she asked but Byakuya just rose his shoulders – "well, either way, let's play!" –she said as she pulled Makoto up who pulled no resistance

Kijo, Jin, and Sinon looked surprised as the three children started playing… or what it looked like playing. While Kyoko and Byakuya played Makoto just looked at them playing – "maybe we should let him walk outside" – Sinon said surprisingly both adults – "What do you mean? We can't let him outside… we don't know what he could do"- Kijo said while Sinon kept looking at the kids – "well, he doesn't look so harmful" – she said smiling – "Maybe if he gets out he would open more to us… after all apparently, he thrust both of you"-she said while they both looked at each other… after all she was right. Makoto did go to them when the crisis happened

Maybe they could give it a try

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Well this is the end of the chapter

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