Chapter 6- The Visitor
Darkness filled the void, an endless black abyss with no beginning and no end. The emptiness stretched infinitely, and yet the shadows within seemed to pulse, alive with memories long buried. The silence was suffocating, oppressive enough to drive anypony to madness. But then, voices started to echo, each one distant yet hauntingly familiar, as if speaking from the depths of his mind.
"No matter what happens, we'll always be proud of you..."
"This will always keep us together... forever..."
"Starting today, we'll be the best of friends!"
"Get him out of here!"
"Noooo!"
"Flamebolt!"
Flamebolt's eyes shot open, and he bolted upright in bed, gasping for air. His breathing was ragged, and sweat poured down his face, his heart racing from the nightmare that still clung to him like a dark fog. For a moment, he sat there, disoriented, staring at the sterile white walls around him.
Slowly, his breath steadied, though pain radiated through his body, reminding him of the ordeal he'd just survived. He looked down at himself, seeing thick bandages wrapped around his leg, up to his hips. A dull ache throbbed through his body as he shifted. It didn't take long for him to realize he was no longer in the Everfree Forest. This was a hospital room—small, with a single bed, a nightstand with a lamp, and a window that let in the faint light of day. The air smelled of antiseptic.
It all came rushing back to him—the chase, the Timberwolves, and protecting the filly. Scootaloo.
His heart leapt, and without thinking, he tried to get out of bed. As soon as his hooves hit the floor, his legs buckled, sending him crashing to the ground with a heavy thud. His body was weak, dizziness hit him like a wave, but he grit his teeth and pushed himself up, leaning heavily against the bedframe. He wobbled, barely able to stand, but the thought of Scootaloo kept him moving. He had to make sure she was okay.
With shaky steps, Flamebolt staggered toward the door. Voices drifted through from the hallway beyond. He pressed his cheek to the door, his ear straining to catch the conversation. At first, it was nothing but muffled sounds, but as he focused, the words became clearer. He recognized the voices.
(Outside The Room)
In the hallway just outside Flamebolt's room, a group of familiar ponies stood in conversation with Doctor Horse, a unicorn with a dark brown mane, a lighter brown coat, and wearing a white lab coat over a blue shirt. His glasses reflected the harsh fluorescent lighting of the hospital as he flipped through a clipboard, referencing the patient's condition.
Twilight Sparkle, along with Applejack, Rarity, Apple Bloom, and Sweetie Belle, stood around the doctor, concern evident on their faces.
"How is he, Doctor Horse?" Twilight asked, her voice tinged with worry.
Doctor Horse adjusted his glasses, his horn glowing as he scanned the notes on his clipboard. "He's going to be fine," he said, reassuring them. "Aside from some minor blood loss and exhaustion, Flamebolt will make a full recovery, provided he gets the rest he needs."
Everypony let out a collective sigh of relief.
"That's good to hear," Rarity murmured, glancing down at Sweetie Belle, who had been unusually quiet.
Doctor Horse nodded. "Yes, it was fortunate that you brought him in when you did. Fighting off Timberwolves in the Everfree Forest, on his own no less, is no small feat. He's lucky to have escaped with only one serious injury."
Sweetie Belle, her voice small and guilt-ridden, spoke up. "He was protecting Scootaloo... If we hadn't gone into the forest, none of this would've happened."
Apple Bloom, standing beside her, added quietly, "Yeah, and now Scootaloo and Flamebolt are both in the hospital 'cause of it. We shouldn't have gone in there…"
Both fillies hung their heads, regret heavy in their eyes. Applejack and Rarity exchanged a glance before pulling their sisters close.
"Cheer up, Apple Bloom," Applejack said softly, giving her sister a comforting squeeze. "What matters is that everypony's safe now. That's the important thing."
Rarity leaned down to Sweetie Belle, wrapping her hooves around her. "Darling, please don't beat yourself up over this. Everything turned out alright. You and your friends are safe, and that's what matters."
Twilight, seeing the guilt weighing on the fillies, turned back to Doctor Horse, hoping to shift the conversation. "What about Scootaloo? How is her injury?"
Doctor Horse smiled slightly, flipping through his notes. "Scootaloo is doing well. She only suffered a minor sprain. The splint Flamebolt made helped reduce the swelling and kept everything in place. We've replaced it with a brace, and she'll need to wear it for a few days, but she'll recover quickly."
Twilight nodded, relieved. "That's good to hear. Thank you for taking care of her."
Before anypony could say more, the loud sound of hooves galloping down the hallway interrupted them. A panicked voice shouted, echoing through the halls.
"SCOOTALOO! Where are you?!"
Everypony turned in unison to see Rainbow Dash skidding to a stop at the end of the hallway, her eyes wide with panic, her wings flared as if she was ready to take off again at a moment's notice. She bolted toward the group, her voice trembling as she fired off questions.
"Twi! I got your message from Spike—where is she? Is she okay? What happened? Is she hurt bad?!"
Rainbow's words came out in a frantic rush, barely giving anypony a chance to answer. Twilight quickly stepped forward and placed her hooves on Rainbow's shoulders, steadying her.
"Rainbow, calm down," Twilight said softly. "Scootaloo's safe. She's going to be fine."
Rainbow Dash froze, her chest heaving as she took several deep breaths. Slowly, she started to calm down, though her eyes were still filled with worry. "She's… she's really okay?"
Twilight smiled, her voice gentle. "Yes, Rainbow. Scootaloo's fine. It was a close call, but Flamebolt saved her. She's resting now, and she'll be alright."
Rainbow Dash exhaled deeply, relief flooding her. She lowered her wings, though her body still trembled with leftover adrenaline. "I should've been there... I should've been watching out for her."
Twilight shook her head. "You couldn't have known, Rainbow. Flamebolt found her in time. He protected her."
Rainbow blinked, her eyes shifting toward the door to Flamebolt's room. Her expression was a mix of gratitude and uncertainty. "Flamebolt, huh? I guess I owe him... big time."
(In Flamebolt's Room)
After overhearing the conversation outside, Flamebolt let out a slow breath, relief flooding through him. Scootaloo was safe. That was all he needed to know. With that weight off his chest, his thoughts shifted to something else—his escape.
'Now that that's taken care of, I need to find a way out of here... before anypony notices me,' he thought, glancing around the hospital room.
He looked down at the bandages tightly wrapped around his legs and body. 'I'll have to ditch this place. I can't pay for this treatment... And if this hospital is like any of the others I've been in, they're gonna expect bits. I don't have any...'
His eyes landed on the window, the only possible exit without alerting anyone. He moved as quickly as his wobbly legs would allow, stumbling toward it. His body felt heavy, and every step was agony, but he couldn't stay. Hospitals meant attention, and he'd had enough of that for one lifetime.
Flamebolt carefully slid the window open, hoping the hinges wouldn't squeak and give him away. He peeked his head out, scanning both sides to ensure nopony was nearby. To his luck, it was clear, and even better, he was on the ground floor. Pulling himself out of the window was harder than he'd expected, his muscles protesting with every movement. But he managed to slip through, dropping to the ground with a dull thud. His legs buckled, and for a moment, he stayed there, catching his breath.
'Come on, get it together,' he urged himself, forcing his legs to push him back up.
As he regained his balance, he heard a faint, familiar voice. His ears perked up, and he turned toward the source—a slightly open window next to the one he'd just crawled out of. Against his better judgment, something tugged at him to check it out. With a quiet groan of frustration, Flamebolt pressed his body against the wall and crept toward the window, keeping low to avoid being seen.
(Inside Scootaloo's Room)
Inside the adjacent room, Scootaloo lay on a bed, her injured leg propped up on pillows to keep it elevated. Despite the size of the bed, it looked enormous next to her small frame. Rainbow Dash was the first to rush in, immediately wrapping Scootaloo in a tight hug, her face still lined with worry. The other Crusaders, Applebloom and Sweetie Belle, followed close behind, eager to check on their friend. Twilight, Rarity, and Applejack entered soon after.
Rainbow Dash wiped at her eyes, trying to hide the tears that were already spilling over. "Scootaloo, I'm so sorry!" she choked, her voice filled with guilt. "I should have been there to protect you… I wasn't, and I—" She stopped as another sob threatened to break through.
Scootaloo smiled up at her and hugged her back tightly. "It's okay, sis. I'm fine now... thanks to Flamebolt!"
Rainbow pulled back slightly, "I heard, can't believe the guy I raced saved you."
Scootaloo nodded enthusiastically. "Yeah! He risked his life for me, Rainbow! He fought off a whole pack of Timberwolves!" She looked up at the group, her eyes shining as she recounted the story.
The room fell into a stunned silence. Nopony had expected Flamebolt, with his brash attitude and sharp tongue, to be the one to do something so selfless.
"Well, I'll be," Applejack muttered, scratching the back of her neck. "Never thought I'd hear anythin' like that 'bout him. He sure didn't seem like the heroic type."
Rarity, looking equally surprised, added, "Indeed. With that temper of his, I would never have imagined he'd do something so noble... and for a filly he barely knew."
"He wasn't exactly nice," Scootaloo admitted with a small laugh, "but he went out of his way to keep me safe. You should have seen him when he took down those Timberwolves! His moves were awesome! He was, like, as cool as Rainbow Dash!"
Rainbow Dash's eyes widened slightly, though a small grin tugged at her lips. "As cool as me, huh?" She ruffled Scootaloo's mane. "Well, next time I see those Timberwolves, I'll show them not to mess with my little sister."
"I know you would have, Rainbow Dash," Scootaloo said, her voice full of admiration. "But Flamebolt was amazing. He took down the Timberwolves, and then when they put themselves together into something bigger, he fought it, too! It was almost as big as an Ursa Minor!"
"An Ursa Minor!?" the Crusaders gasped in unison, their jaws dropping.
"Yeah! But he wasn't scared at all. He just went for it!" Scootaloo's excitement grew with every word. "He wiped the floor with them, just like that!"
Twilight, intrigued by the description, furrowed her brow. "He fought something that big on his own?"
Scootaloo hesitated, her earlier excitement faltering. "I don't really know how he did it. I... kinda closed my eyes when he charged at the giant Timberwolf. I was too scared to watch. But when I opened my eyes, we were flying high above the trees… almost without a scratch..." Her voice trailed off, her gaze dropping to the blanket as she remembered the injury Flamebolt had sustained. "But then I saw he was hurt..."
Twilight stepped closer, her tone gentle. "Don't worry, Scootaloo. The doctor said he'll make a full recovery, as long as he rests."
That seemed to ease the weight in Scootaloo's chest, but there was still a lingering sadness in her eyes. "I want to thank him... for everything."
"You'll get your chance, squirt," Rainbow Dash said, smiling. "He's just next door, so when he's up and moving, you'll be the first to know."
Scootaloo nodded, her heart lighter at the thought.
(Outside The Window)
Flamebolt, crouched just beneath the window, heard every word. His expression softened as he listened to Scootaloo defend him, recount his actions with awe, and express her desire to thank him. A strange warmth settled in his chest, something he hadn't felt in a long time—a sense of being appreciated. But the moment was fleeting.
He clenched his jaw, shaking off the feeling. That's my cue to get out of here. He shifted, preparing to slip away before anypony noticed he wasn't in his room. But before he could make his move, the sound of knocking interrupted him. His gut instinct told him to stay put for just a little longer.
Inside the room, the door creaked open, and Doctor Horse stepped in, clipboard in tow. "Sorry to interrupt," he said kindly, "but Scootaloo, you have another visitor here to see you."
Everypony turned to the door, curious about who could be visiting. The door swung open wider, and in walked an older Pegasus mare. Her peach-colored coat was faded and worn with age, and her turquoise mane—streaked with gray—was tied in a frazzled bun. She wore a tattered, once-white apron, and her tired green eyes were framed by deep wrinkles, evidence of a life spent working hard.
Scootaloo gasped in surprise, her face lighting up. "Granny Care-Care!"
Flamebolt, crouched outside, frozen. 'It can't be...'
His chest tightened as recognition hit him, a flood of emotions crashing over him. He couldn't stop himself from peeking through the window, just to be sure.
(Inside The Room)
Apple Bloom furrowed her brow in confusion. "Granny who?"
The older mare moved past the group with surprising speed and gently pulled Scootaloo into a warm embrace. "Oh, my dear Scootaloo," she said softly, her voice filled with relief. "I was so worried about you!"
Scootaloo hugged her back tightly. "How did you know I was here?"
"The doctor sent a message to the orphanage," the mare explained, brushing a hoof through Scootaloo's mane. "I came as soon as I could. You should have told me where you were going, Scootaloo. I was scared to death when I found out you were in the hospital."
Scootaloo averted her eyes, guilt creeping into her voice. "I'm sorry I made you worry..."
The older mare hugged her tightly again. "Oh, I'm just glad you're safe."
The rest of the group watched the reunion with warm smiles, though Rainbow Dash finally broke the silence.
"Uh, sorry to interrupt, but... who are you?" Rainbow Dash asked, scratching the back of her neck awkwardly. "And how do you know Scootaloo?"
The mare broke from the hug and turned toward the group. "My name is Caring Heart," she introduced herself, her voice gentle but strong. "I'm Scootaloo's caretaker at the Ponyville Orphanage. The little ones there call me Granny Care-Care."
"Orphanage?" Twilight repeated, her voice soft with surprise. "I didn't even know Ponyville had an orphanage."
"We're on the outskirts of town, so we're a bit out of the way," Caring Heart explained. "But it's close enough for the little ones to get to school."
Twilight's expression fell slightly, guilt creeping in. "I had no idea..."
Scootaloo smiled, trying to lift the mood. "It's okay, Twilight! Granny Care-Care and the other ponies at the orphanage are my family. They've always taken care of me. It's not bad at all."
Caring Heart patted Scootaloo's head affectionately. "We do what we can. The little ones are a big help. I couldn't do it without them."
Applejack raised an eyebrow. "You mean you're takin' care of all them kids by yourself?"
Caring Heart chuckled softly. "Oh, I manage. Scootaloo and some of the older colts and fillies help watch over the younger ones. And while they keep themselves busy, I handle the cooking, cleaning and setting up activities for them. It's hard work, but I've been doing it for so long it's second nature."
Twilight, still processing this revelation, said, "That sounds like so much for one pony to handle. Are you sure you're managing alright?"
Caring Heart smiled warmly. "It's nothing I can't handle, Princess, but I appreciate the concern."
Outside of the room, Flamebolt listened to every word from his hidden spot by the window, his heart pounding. Hearing her voice again, knowing she had cared for Scootaloo, sent an overwhelming flood of emotions rushing through him. He could feel a lump forming in his throat, but he quickly pushed the feelings aside. This was too much. He had to leave.
He backed away from the window, ready to bolt, but the emotions swirling inside him made it hard to focus. Before he could fully take flight, a thought nagged at him—something that told him to stay, to listen. Then, Caring Heart's next words froze him in place.
"Scootaloo's told me all about you and your friends," Caring Heart said, addressing the group with a kind smile. "You've been such a good influence on her. Thank you for looking after her."
Twilight and the others smiled warmly, touched by her words. "It's nothing," Twilight said modestly. "Scootaloo's one of us."
"More than that," Rainbow added, ruffling Scootaloo's mane. "She's like a little sister to me."
Caring Heart beamed with pride. "She's lucky to have found such caring ponies."
Outside the room, Flamebolt felt his heart twist painfully. 'I need to get out of here... now.'
He forced himself to move, pushing his tired wings to lift him off the ground. Pain shot through his body, but he kept going, willing himself into the air.
Back inside the room, Scootaloo was beaming and excited at the thought of her friends visiting the orphanage. She stood on her good leg and peered out the window, hoping to enjoy the view. But her smile quickly faded when she noticed something in the distance—a familiar blue Pegasus struggling to fly away from the hospital.
"Flamebolt!" she cried out, her eyes widening in shock.
Her sudden outburst startled everypony. Rainbow Dash was the first to respond. "Scootaloo, what are you talking about?"
Scootaloo pointed out the window. "It's Flamebolt! He's flying away!"
Everypony rushed to the window to see. Sure enough, they saw the struggling figure of Flamebolt, barely managing to stay in the air as he flew further away from the hospital grounds.
Doctor Horse, standing nearby, gasped in disbelief. "What is he doing?! Nopony should be flying in his condition! His body hasn't fully recovered yet!"
Rainbow Dash narrowed her eyes, her wings already spread. "I'm going after him. I'll get him back." With that, she launched herself through the window, speeding toward Flamebolt in a flash of rainbow light.
"Good luck, Dash!" Applejack called after her as Rainbow Dash soared through the window in pursuit of Flamebolt. Shaking her head, she muttered, "What in the hay is wrong with that Flamebolt? He's crazy if he thinks he can just mosey on out like that."
Everypony gathered around the window, watching the scene unfold. But while they were focused on the sky, Caring Heart suddenly snapped out of her frozen state, her eyes widening in shock. "Did you say... Flamebolt?"
The group turned to her, surprised by the disbelief in her voice.
"Uh, yeah. He's the one who saved Scootaloo," Applejack explained, still confused by Caring Heart's reaction.
Without another word, Caring Heart quickly hustled toward the door, her movements unexpectedly swift for a mare of her age.
"G-Granny Care-Care?" Scootaloo called after her, confusion and concern lacing her voice. But the older mare was already out of the room.
The others exchanged bewildered glances, unsure of what had just happened.
Twilight was the first to speak up. "I'll go after her. You girls stay here." She gave them a reassuring nod before hurrying out the door to follow.
With Twilight gone, the rest of the group sat in silence, their minds racing. Scootaloo couldn't shake the growing unease in her chest. What's going on, Flamebolt? Why are you trying to leave? And why did Granny Care-Care react like that? Do... do they know each other?
In the hallway, Twilight hurried after Caring Heart, surprised by how fast the older mare was moving. "Ms. Heart! Wait—where are you going?" she called, her voice echoing down the corridor.
But Caring Heart didn't respond, her focus entirely on something ahead. She weaved past doctors and nurses without a glance, her hooves moving faster than Twilight would have expected. By the time they reached the exit doors, Caring Heart had broken into a full gallop.
Twilight's eyes widened. 'What in Equestria is going on?'
Outside, Caring Heart wasted no time. She spread her wings and took to the sky, her flight surprisingly steady for a pony of her age.
Twilight flapped her wings, taking off after her, her mind racing with questions. 'It can't be...' Caring Heart thought, her eyes locked on the figure in the distance. 'Could it really be him?'
(With Flamebolt)
Flamebolt gritted his teeth, pushing his body to keep going, but his wings burned with pain, and his strength was quickly fading. He glanced down, the ground below him seeming to spin as dizziness set in. 'Come on... just a little further...'
But it was no use. His wings locked up, and his body plummeted toward the earth. "Damn it... not now!"
Before he could brace himself for impact, a blur of rainbow streaked across his vision. Suddenly, he felt strong hooves grab him, pulling him out of freefall. He blinked, disoriented, and looked up to see none other than Rainbow Dash, her magenta eyes filled with determination.
"You really don't know when to quit, do you, hotshot?" she said, her voice laced with amusement.
Flamebolt blinked, his mind racing as she carried him effortlessly in her hooves. He recognized that feeling—the familiar scent of wind and adrenaline, the rush of being saved. He had felt this once before, long ago.
"You alright?" Rainbow asked, raising an eyebrow. "You've been staring at me for a while now."
Realizing how he must look, Flamebolt quickly averted his gaze, a flush of embarrassment creeping up his face. "I'm fine," he muttered. "Just... drop me already."
Rainbow chuckled, clearly enjoying herself. "What's the matter? Never been carried by a mare before?"
Flamebolt shot her a glare. "No, and I'd like to keep it that way."
"Alright, alright, princess," Rainbow teased, as she slowly descended to the ground, setting him down—though not as gently as she could have. He landed on his back with a grunt.
"Ow! Thanks for the soft landing," he groaned sarcastically, pushing himself to his hooves.
Rainbow smirked, hovering just above the ground. "You said to drop you."
Flamebolt shot her another look but didn't argue. He started limping away, determined to leave. "I've wasted enough time here. I'm not sticking around."
Rainbow's expression shifted, her tone becoming more serious. "Where do you think you're going? You need to go back and rest, Flamebolt. You're in no condition to fly."
"I'm not going back to that hospital," he snapped, his frustration mounting. "I don't trust hospitals. I don't have time for their schemes."
Rainbow tilted her head. "Schemes? What are you talking about?"
Flamebolt opened his mouth to respond but froze when he heard a voice call out—a voice he hadn't heard in years.
"Flamebolt!"
His body went rigid. Slowly, he turned his head, his heart pounding in his chest.
Standing just behind them was Caring Heart, her chest heaving as she tried to catch her breath. Her tired eyes were wide, disbelief etched across her face. Twilight stood a few steps behind her, watching the scene unfold.
Caring Heart took a deep breath, her voice trembling. "Is it really you? Are you...Flamebolt?"
Flamebolt didn't turn to face her, his body tense as if he were rooted to the spot. He could hear the emotion in her voice, the hope, the desperation.
"Please," she whispered, her voice breaking. "Please... look at me. Let me see your face."
Twilight and Rainbow Dash stood in stunned silence, watching as Caring Heart's composed exterior began to crack. Tears welled up in her eyes, spilling over as she stepped closer, her wings trembling.
"Say something..." she pleaded, her voice barely a whisper. "Please... just say something."
For what felt like an eternity, there was only silence. Flamebolt remained still, unable to move, unable to speak. His throat was tight, his chest aching as memories came flooding back. Memories he had tried so hard to bury.
Finally, after what seemed like forever, Flamebolt turned around. His movements were slow, reluctant, as if every step was a battle within himself. He didn't meet Caring Heart's eyes at first, keeping his gaze fixed on the ground. But as he looked up, their eyes met, and the emotion in his face was unmistakable.
A mixture of regret, pain, and something else—something deeper—shone in his eyes as he stood there, his voice barely audible when he finally spoke.
"H-hey... Granny Care-Care..." he stammered, his voice thick with emotion. "It's... been a while."
