The ancient trees of Du Weldenvarden towered over Brom as he trudged through the dense forest, their canopies interwoven to create a living cathedral of branches and light. The air was thick with magic, the hum of it palpable in the stillness. He had been traveling for weeks, guided only by his instincts and the faint hope that Eragon might still be alive. The boy's sudden disappearance from Carvahall had set Brom's mind ablaze with possibilities—and none of them good.
Eragon had left Carvahall a thief, his neighbors said, heading south with stolen goods. But Brom had pieced together a different story. The thefts were a smoke screen. A way to divert attention. The boy had found a dragon egg, and if it had hatched for him, then Eragon would now be a Rider, untrained and thought had driven Brom relentlessly forward, through mountains and across rivers, to Ellesméra, where he hoped to find guidance—or answers—from Oromis, his old mentor and the last free Rider.
When the city came into view, Brom slowed, his breath catching at the sight of Ellesméra's living beauty. The elves had shaped the trees themselves into soaring structures, their homes and halls seamlessly woven from the trunks and branches. Soft lights glowed within the buildings, casting a warm radiance over the mossy ground. Elves moved gracefully through the city, their gazes curious but reserved as they noted his presence. Brom acknowledged them only with a curt nod, his focus fixed on the glade where he knew Oromis dwelled.
The faint pulse of Oromis's magic grew stronger as Brom approached, the familiar presence guiding him toward the heart of the forest. Memories of his own training flickered at the edges of his mind, unbidden and bittersweet. But when he reached the clearing, the sight that greeted him made him stop in his tracks.
Two young men sat cross-legged at the center of the glade, their faces set in concentration as they stared intently at each other. Between them stood Oromis, his calm, authoritative voice cutting through the quiet, guiding them as they engaged in a battle of wills. For a moment, Brom didn't see the boys. He saw himself.
The glade blurred into memory. Decades ago, he had sat where they were now, the weight of youth and ambition pressing heavily on his shoulders. Across from him had been Morzan, his closest companion, his rival in skill and magic. Morzan's mismatched eyes had gleamed with intensity as they had locked minds under Oromis's stern instruction, their connection crackling with raw potential. Back then, Brom had trusted Morzan implicitly, believing him to be an unshakable ally, a kindred spirit in the sacred brotherhood of Riders.
But that trust had been a lie. The memory shifted, growing darker, tinged with the bitterness of betrayal. Morzan's triumphant smirk as he unleashed his fury, not in training but in battle. The jagged scars he had left—not just on Brom's body, but on his heart. The pain of realizing that the man he had once called brother had become something unrecognizable. Something monstrous.
The image of the past shattered as Brom's focus returned to the present. His gaze settled on the two figures before him, and his breath caught.
Eragon.
The boy's identity hit him first, relief flooding through Brom like a wave. Eragon was alive. Brom's fears, the endless miles spent imagining the worst—captured, dead, or worse—evaporated in an instant. The boy had changed since Brom had last seen him. His frame was stronger, his posture more assured. Though still young, his face bore an intensity that spoke of struggles faced and overcome. Brom's heart swelled with pride and gratitude.
But his relief was short-lived. Sitting across from Eragon was another boy, and recognition struck Brom like a blow.
Murtagh.
His chest tightened, the past rushing forward with an almost physical force. It was as if the glade itself conspired to echo his darkest memories. Murtagh's features, sharp and intense, were a haunting reflection of Morzan's. Brom's thoughts churned as he struggled to reconcile the boy before him with the man who had betrayed everything they had stood for. It felt as though history itself had returned to taunt him, to test whether the mistakes of the past would be repeated.
And yet. . . Murtagh wasn't Morzan. Not yet. Brom forced himself to remember that this was just a boy, another untrained Rider with the potential to carve his own path. But the weight of Morzan's shadow loomed large, and Brom couldn't suppress the unease coiling in his gut. Would this boy follow in his father's footsteps? Or could he somehow break free of the legacy that chained him?
"Brom." Oromis's voice broke through his thoughts, calm and steady. The elder Rider turned toward him, his golden eyes gleaming in the soft light. "You have arrived."
At the sound of his name, both boys turned to face him. Eragon's eyes widened in surprise. "Brom!" he exclaimed. "You're here!"
Murtagh's reaction was more measured. He shifted slightly, his dark eyes wary as they studied Brom. He said nothing, but his tension was clear.
Brom stepped forward, his gaze fixed on Eragon. "You're alive," he said gruffly, the relief in his voice barely masked. "For weeks, I thought—" He stopped himself, shaking his head. "Never mind. What are you doing here?"
Eragon hesitated, glancing at Murtagh before answering. "I. . . it's a long story," he said carefully. "I didn't expect to see you here."
"I could say the same," Brom replied, his tone sharper than he intended. His gaze flicked to Murtagh, who held his ground, his expression unreadable. "And you?"
Murtagh's shoulders stiffened slightly, but his voice was even. "I'm here to learn."
Brom frowned but kept his tone neutral. "From Oromis?"
"Yes," Murtagh said simply, meeting Brom's gaze without flinching.
Brom's lips pressed into a thin line. He had questions—too many to ask in that moment. Instead, he turned to Oromis, who had been watching the exchange in silence. "We need to talk," Brom said, his voice quiet but firm.
Oromis inclined his head. "Of course. Eragon, Murtagh, continue your practice. Brom and I will speak elsewhere."
Eragon nodded hesitantly, his eyes lingering on Brom as the older man followed Oromis toward the edge of the glade. Murtagh said nothing, returning to his position as if determined not to let the interruption distract him.
When they reached a quieter corner of the clearing, Brom turned sharply to face Oromis, his expression a mixture of confusion and frustration. "What is going on here?" he demanded, his voice low but tense. "Why are Murtagh and Eragon here? And what in Alagaësia are you teaching them?"
Oromis met Brom's gaze with his usual calm, though there was a flicker of curiosity in his golden eyes. "They are here because they must be," he said evenly. "Both are Riders, Brom. Their dragons chose them, and with that comes responsibility. They are here to learn and to prepare for the challenges ahead."
Brom's jaw tightened. "Riders or not, you know who Murtagh is—who his father was. How can you trust him enough to teach him? And why didn't you inform me that Eragon was here? I've been searching for him since he disappeared from Carvahall!"
Oromis remained unruffled, his gaze steady. "I did not inform you because your path brought you here regardless. As for Murtagh, he is not his father, Brom. You of all people should know the weight of carrying another's legacy. Would you want to be judged solely for what Brom the Rider, or even Brom of Kuasta, once was, rather than who you have become?"
The words struck deep, and Brom's shoulders stiffened. He exhaled sharply, running a hand through his hair. "It's not that simple," he muttered. "You didn't see what Morzan became, the depths of his cruelty. I can't forget that. And I can't ignore the possibility that Murtagh could follow the same path."
"No, I did not see Morzan as you did," Oromis conceded, his tone gentle but firm. "But I see Murtagh now. He has made a choice to stand against the Empire, despite the burden of his bloodline. That choice is not insignificant."
Brom's expression remained conflicted, but he fell silent. He glanced back toward the clearing where Eragon and Murtagh were practicing, their voices faint but distinct in the distance. "Eragon's alive, and he's here," Brom said, almost to himself. "That's what matters. But I didn't expect... this."
Oromis's expression softened slightly. "You came here for Eragon," he said, more a statement than a question.
"Yes," Brom admitted. "I feared for his safety. He vanished from Carvahall, and I followed what trails I could. I thought he might have been captured—or worse." He shook his head. "Instead, I find him here, training alongside the son of my greatest enemy."
"And what will you do with what you have found?" Oromis asked, his tone probing.
Brom hesitated, his gaze dropping. "I don't know," he said at last. "I came here looking for answers. I thought you might still have something to teach me—something to help me protect him."
Oromis's eyes gleamed with a flicker of understanding. "You wish to fight again."
Brom's lips pressed into a thin line. "The war isn't over, Oromis. Not by a long shot. If Galbatorix has truly grown as strong as we fear, I can't stand by and watch others fight this battle without doing my part." Brom paused, a look of shame crossing his face. "And I encountered Kuvira. It was. . . humbling to realize just how much I've diminished."
A quiet moment passed between them, the weight of the past and the present hanging in the air. Then Oromis placed a hand on Brom's shoulder, his grip firm but not unkind. "You have not forgotten the skills of a Rider, Brom, but you have allowed time and regret to dull your edge. If you are willing, we will work to hone it again. The fire within you has not been extinguished, only banked."
Brom nodded, the tension in his shoulders easing slightly. "Thank you," he said quietly. "I need this."
Oromis inclined his head, his expression thoughtful. "There is another thing you must accept, Brom. Eragon and Murtagh are no longer children to be shielded. They are Riders now, with burdens of their own to carry. You cannot walk their paths for them, but you can guide them—as I will guide you."
Brom's gaze lingered on the elder Rider, and slowly, he nodded. "I'll do what I can," he said. "For both of them."
Oromis offered a faint smile. "Then you have already taken the first step." He gestured back toward the glade, where the faint hum of practice spells drifted through the trees. "Let us return. The future awaits."
Brom hesitated for only a moment before following. The path ahead was uncertain, but for the first time in years, he felt a sense of direction—a purpose that burned just as fiercely as it had in his youth.
~x~
The soft hum of the forest surrounded us, a constant backdrop to the concentration etched on Murtagh's face. His hands were raised slightly, palms out, as he murmured the words of the Ancient Language. His pronunciation was careful, deliberate, and as the final syllable left his lips, a faint shimmer enveloped him. The spell had worked. I couldn't help but smile at his determination.
"Good," I said, nodding approvingly. "You're getting the hang of it. The hard part is maintaining the balance. Too much energy, and you'll harm yourself. Too little, and the spell fizzles out."
Murtagh grunted, wiping sweat from his brow. "It's not easy," he admitted, his tone edged with frustration. "But it's working. I can feel it."
Saphira watched from a distance, her eyes half-lidded in quiet amusement. He has your stubbornness, little one.
I smirked slightly, but her comment triggered a memory that pulled me back to the moment when this all began.
It had been only a few days since Murtagh had used magic for the first time, though I hadn't witnessed the moment myself. When I came across him later, the evidence was undeniable—a shattered boulder, its jagged edges still warm to the touch, and Murtagh slumped nearby, his breathing labored and his face pale with exhaustion. His hands trembled as he clutched the ground, but there was a glimmer in his eyes, fierce and triumphant, that spoke of a victory hard-won.
That night, he came to me, his expression unyielding, his presence heavy with purpose. "You promised," he said without preamble, his voice quiet but firm. There was no anger in his tone, only determination. "You said you would teach me—help me become stronger."
It wasn't a question or a plea. It was a demand, one he felt fully entitled to make. And I couldn't deny the truth in his words. I had promised. Now, it seemed, he was ready to hold me to it.
I nodded. "I haven't forgotten."
"Then don't hold back," he pressed, stepping closer. "I've seen what you can do, Eragon. I've seen how far ahead you are. If I'm going to stand by your side in this war, I need to close that gap. You owe me this."
His words stung, but not because they were harsh. They were true. I had promised to help him, to share what I knew. And yet, a part of me hesitated. I thought of the spells Oromis had refused to teach me in the previous timeline—the same spells Murtagh now demanded. They were powerful, yes, but dangerous. The kind of danger that didn't just harm the body but could unmoor the mind.
"I'll teach you," I said finally, meeting his gaze. "But you have to trust me. This isn't something to be taken lightly."
Murtagh nodded sharply, his determination unwavering. "I trust you. Just don't waste my time with anything less than your best."
Now, as I watched Murtagh practice the very spells I had once longed to learn, I couldn't help but marvel at his progress. He had thrown himself into the training with everything he had, driven by a hunger to prove himself. To me. To the world.
"Focus on your intent," I reminded him. "The words are important, but they're only part of it. You have to believe in what you're doing. See it, feel it."
Murtagh nodded, his brow furrowing in concentration as he attempted the spell. His voice wavered, and the flow of the words broke unevenly, the energy dissipating before it could take hold.
"Stop," I said sharply, holding up a hand. "That won't do. The pronunciation must be exact, or the results could be unpredictable—dangerous, even. Precision is everything."
He clenched his jaw, frustration flashing across his face. "I'm trying," he muttered.
"I know," I said, my tone softening but remaining firm. "But trying isn't enough when it comes to magic. Focus. Feel the words, shape them with intent. Take your time and get it right."
He tried again, and this time the spell flared to life, the shimmer around him brightening briefly before fading. He exhaled sharply, his frustration clear, but I could see the progress he was making. Slowly but surely, he was closing the gap.
"You're pushing too hard," I said, stepping closer. "This isn't about brute force. It's about precision. If you try to force the spell, it'll push back."
"Easy for you to say," Murtagh muttered, though there was no malice in his tone. "You make it look effortless."
I opened my mouth to respond, but a voice behind me cut through the quiet.
"Because he has learned the cost of effort," Oromis said, his calm tone carrying an unmistakable weight. I froze, my heart skipping a beat as I turned to face him. He stood at the edge of the clearing, his eyes fixed on us, his expression unreadable. Glaedr loomed behind him, his massive form blending with the shadows of the trees.
"Ebrithil," I said quickly, bowing my head. Murtagh followed suit, though his movements were slower, more deliberate.
Oromis stepped forward, his gaze sweeping over the clearing, lingering briefly on Murtagh before settling on me. "I see you have been practicing spells to accelerate your growth," he said, his tone calm but with an undercurrent of warning. "A dangerous undertaking, if not handled with care."
I swallowed hard, my thoughts spinning. Memories of cautionary words rang in my mind—Oromis's grave lectures on the risks and folly of forcing growth. I braced myself for the rebuke I was certain would follow, my chest tightening with anticipation.
But the reprimand didn't come.
"Your approach is flawed," Oromis said instead, his voice steady, almost conversational. "The spells you are using will work, but they are far from efficient. Worse, they carry unnecessary risks—risks that can be mitigated with proper technique."
I blinked, the words struggling to find purchase in my mind. Surely I had misheard him. "You're. . . not angry?" I managed, my voice betraying my disbelief.
Oromis regarded me with a faint smile, though his eyes remained serious. "Why should I be?" he asked, his tone measured. "The pursuit of knowledge is not a crime, Eragon. It is, in fact, the very essence of being a Rider. However, it is my responsibility to ensure that your pursuit of knowledge does not lead to harm. If you wish to learn, then I will teach you."
For a moment, I could only stare at him, stunned. This wasn't how I expected this to go. I had been prepared for lectures, disapproval, even outright condemnation. Yet here he stood, offering not only acceptance but guidance.
"Master," I said hesitantly, "these spells are dangerous. They push the body and mind beyond their limits. Aren't you worried about what might happen?"
Oromis's gaze softened, though his tone remained firm. "What worries me is the harm you might bring upon yourselves if you continue with your current methods. The spells you attempt lack refinement. Left unchecked, they could cause irreparable damage. If you are to use such magic, it must be done correctly—or not at all."
Glaedr's voice rumbled in my mind, his deep tone as steady and weighty as stone. Growth is necessary, but it must be tempered with understanding. The power you seek will come, but haste will only lead to ruin.
I nodded slowly, the initial shock giving way to a cautious sense of gratitude. "Thank you," I said quietly, my voice heavy with the weight of what this moment meant. "I. . . I don't know what to say."
"There is no need to say anything," Oromis replied, his faint smile returning. "Words are unnecessary when action is required. If you are willing to listen, then I will show you how to pursue this safely and effectively."
Murtagh, who had been silent until now, finally spoke. "You'll teach us both?" he asked, his tone laced with cautious hope.
Oromis turned to him, his gaze steady. "Yes," he said simply. "But only if you are both prepared to heed my instructions and respect the dangers involved."
Murtagh nodded sharply, his determination clear. "I'll do whatever it takes."
Oromis inclined his head in acknowledgment, then gestured for us to sit. As we lowered ourselves onto the mossy ground, I couldn't shake the lingering astonishment at how differently this moment was unfolding. Oromis's calm authority filled the glade as he began to speak, weaving the Ancient Language into a lesson that resonated with both caution and possibility.
The path ahead was still uncertain, but for the first time, I felt like we might be on the right one.
Oromis gestured for us to sit, and we quickly obeyed, settling onto the soft moss of the clearing. He knelt before us, his movements graceful despite the years that weighed on him. "The spells you are using," he began, "draw heavily on your own energy. This is inefficient and dangerous. There are ways to lessen the strain, to balance the flow of energy and ensure that the body is not overwhelmed."
He began to speak in the Ancient Language, his voice weaving a spell with a precision and clarity that left me in awe. The words seemed to hang in the air, resonating with the very fabric of the forest around us. As he spoke, I felt a faint warmth settle over me, a gentle but unmistakable current of energy that seemed to flow in perfect harmony with my body.
"This spell," Oromis explained, his voice soft but firm, "is designed to distribute the strain evenly across your physical and mental faculties. It will allow for growth without compromising stability. But it is not without risks. You must always be mindful of your limits."
Murtagh watched intently, his eyes narrowed in concentration. "How do we know when we've reached those limits?" he asked.
Oromis's gaze sharpened. "You will feel it. A deep fatigue, a resistance that cannot be overcome without harm. When you sense this, you must stop. To push beyond it is to risk permanent damage—or worse."
Glaedr rumbled again, his voice heavy with authority. Your strength is not measured by how quickly you grow, but by how wisely you use what you have learned. Remember this, young ones. The road ahead is long, and impatience will only hinder you.
We nodded, the weight of his words settling over us. For the next hour, Oromis guided us through the spells, correcting our mistakes and refining our technique. His instructions were precise, his patience unyielding, and by the end of the lesson, I felt a newfound confidence in our ability to manage the risks involved.
As the lesson came to a close, Oromis rose to his feet, his golden eyes scanning the clearing. "Remember what you have learned today," he said quietly. "And remember that true growth comes not from magic, but from discipline and perseverance. Use these spells wisely, and never forget the dangers they carry."
Murtagh and I nodded in unison, our respect for the ancient Rider deepening with every word he spoke. As he and Glaedr departed, leaving us to our thoughts, I couldn't help but feel a renewed sense of purpose. We had taken another step forward, not just in our training but in our understanding of what it meant to be Riders.
Saphira's thoughts brushed against mine, warm and reassuring. You are growing, little one. Both of you are. But remember, growth is a journey, not a destination.
I smiled faintly, her words echoing in my mind as I turned to Murtagh. "Ready to try again?" I asked.
He smirked, his determination undiminished. "Always."
And so, beneath the ancient trees of Du Weldenvarden, we continued our journey, step by step, toward the destiny that awaited us.
~x~
The air around Rhunön's forge was thick with heat and the rhythmic clang of hammer against anvil. Sparks leapt into the air like tiny stars, casting flickering light over the tools and metal scattered about the workspace. I hesitated just beyond the threshold, reluctant to interrupt the elf who was so engrossed in her craft. She worked with the intensity of someone who did not merely shape steel but who wove pieces of her very soul into her creations.
Saphira rumbled softly in my mind, her tone amused. She knows you're there, Eragon. Waiting will not make your arrival any less noticed.
I straightened, taking a steadying breath before stepping into the forge. The air hit me like a wave—thick with the tang of molten metal and the earthy scent of burning charcoal. Rhunön didn't turn as I approached, her focus remaining entirely on the piece of steel she was hammering into shape. Her silver hair was pulled tightly back, and her muddy eyes gleamed with fierce concentration.
After a moment, she set her tools aside, the hammer ringing as she placed it down. Without looking at me, she said, "What brings you here, boy? I don't recall summoning you."
Her tone was brusque but not unkind, and I found myself fumbling for the right words. "I. . . I came to ask for your insight, Rhunön-elda. I thought you might wish to inspect my sword."
At that, she turned, her gaze sharp as a blade. "Your sword, is it? Let me see it."
I stepped forward, unsheathing Brisingr carefully. The blade gleamed with its characteristic iridescent blue, catching the light in a way that seemed almost alive. Rhunön's eyes narrowed as she took the sword, holding it with the ease of someone intimately familiar with weapons of its kind. For a long moment, she said nothing, her gaze fixed entirely on the blade as her fingers ran along its edges.
"This," she said at last, her voice quieter, "is remarkable. The craftsmanship. . . the balance. . . every detail is perfect."
I started to speak, but she silenced me with a sharp look. "But it is impossible."
Her eyes bored into mine, filled with something between suspicion and wonder. "This is my work—better than my work—and yet I did not make it. How can that be?"
I hesitated, unsure of how to explain. "It's a long story," I began carefully. "But—"
"Spare me your explanations," she interrupted, her voice cutting. "Words mean nothing to me if they are not the truth. I want to see it for myself."
My stomach twisted. I had expected questions, perhaps even accusations, but not this. To allow Rhunön into my mind was to bare everything—every memory, every thought connected to the sword. But I knew there was no other way to convince her. She would not accept anything less.
"Very well," I said, straightening. "I will share the memory with you."
Her gaze didn't waver. "Then get on with it."
I reached out with my mind, steeling myself as I touched hers. Rhunön's mental presence was like the edge of a freshly honed blade—sharp, unyielding, and utterly precise. There was no softness, no invitation, only a stark clarity that demanded I tread carefully. Still, I pushed forward, drawing forth the memory of Brisingr's summoning near Utgard.
I let her see it all: the moment of desperation, the overwhelming surge of magic, and the unbridled power that drained the life from the forest to forge the blade. She experienced it as I had—the blinding flash of light, the awe and terror of seeing the sword take form, whole and perfect, in my hands.
When the memory ended, I started to withdraw, but Rhunön's presence pressed against mine, insistent.
There is more, her thoughts cut through sharply. This sword did not come from nothing. There is a story behind your familiarity with it. Show me.
I hesitated, feeling a cold knot twist in my stomach. Sharing the memory of Brisingr's creation was one thing—sharing the truth of the previous timeline was another. But Rhunön's mind held no patience for hesitation or evasion. She would not relent until she had the full truth.
Taking a deep breath, I let the memory flow again, but this time I pulled deeper, showing her the truth. She saw the previous timeline: my journey to her forge in Ellesméra, my desperate need for a Rider's sword, and her refusal, bound by her oath not to forge again. She saw her solution—using me as a vessel, my hands wielding her tools, my voice speaking her commands, as she bypassed her oath through me. Together, we had forged Brisingr in the heat of her forge, shaping it into the perfect blade—a work of art that bore her skill and my will.
I shared everything, from the precise moment Brisingr was completed to the fierce pride in her eyes as she inspected the blade and declared it worthy. The memory ended with me holding the sword aloft for the first time, feeling its balance, its power, as if it were an extension of my very soul.
When the memory faded, I retreated, letting my mind return fully to the present. The forge was silent save for the crackle of flames, and Rhunön stood utterly still, her hands clutching Brisingr tightly. Her eyes, gleaming like polished mahogany, bore into me with an intensity that made me feel as though I were being dissected.
For a long time, she said nothing, and I could only wait, my heartbeat thudding in my ears. Then, at last, she spoke, her voice low and measured.
"So," she said, turning the sword over in her hands, "not only is this blade a masterpiece, but it is a masterpiece I have already made. A perfection I created despite my oath to the contrary."
Her tone was unreadable, but her hands trembled ever so slightly as she examined the blade, tracing its edge with a craftsman's reverence. "And yet," she continued, "this Brisingr was not forged by my hands. You brought it into being with magic, yes, but the soul of this sword—the mark of my craft—is unmistakable."
I swallowed hard, unsure of how to respond. "I didn't intend—"
She cut me off with a sharp gesture, her eyes narrowing like a hawk's. "Do not speak of intentions. What is done is done. But tell me, Eragon—when you called upon magic, when you spoke its name—did you know this blade would appear?"
"No," I said softly, shaking my head. "I didn't know. I didn't even think it was possible. I. . . I only meant to protect Saphira and myself. I thought I was summoning fire—nothing more."
Her gaze stayed fixed on me, unyielding and piercing. "And yet, this sword—this masterpiece—sprang into being from nothing but your desperation and the raw force of magic. It is as though it remembers you, Eragon, and you it. How can that be?"
I had no answer for her, and her words seemed to hang in the air, heavy and accusatory. After a long silence, she turned her focus back to Brisingr, holding the blade aloft so that its shimmering surface caught the light of the forge. Her expression softened, though her intensity did not wane.
"Brisingr," she murmured, her voice carrying a strange reverence. "It is perfect—flawless in a way that surpasses even my finest work. And yet..." She trailed off, her emerald eyes narrowing once more as though she were examining not just the sword but the mystery of its existence. "And yet, it is not mine. Not truly mine. It is an echo—a shadow of what it might have been had I forged it with my own hands."
The silence stretched, the air in the forge heavy with unspoken thoughts. Finally, she placed the sword carefully on the workbench, her fingers lingering on the hilt as though reluctant to let it go.
"This does not sit well with me," she said at last, her voice quiet but firm. "To have a weapon that bears my mark but was not shaped by my hands is. . . an offense to my craft. I cannot unmake it, nor would I wish to, but this imbalance must be corrected."
I frowned, confused. "Corrected? How?"
She looked at me then, her brown eyes, sharp and discerning, locking onto mine with an intensity that was almost fierce. "I will make you armor," she said, her voice steady and resolute. "A suit of the finest armor I have ever crafted. It will not erase what has been done, but it will balance what you carry. If you are to wield a blade born of my craft, then you will wear something forged entirely by my hands."
I blinked, caught off guard. "You would do that for me?"
She scoffed, the corner of her mouth twitching into a faint, wry smile. "Do not mistake this for charity, boy. I do it as much for myself as for you. If my work is to walk the world once more, I will ensure it is carried with purpose—and perfection."
I nodded slowly, her words sinking in. "Thank you, Rhunön-elda. I'll wear it with honor."
"You had better," she said briskly, her tone leaving no room for argument. Then, with a sharp motion, she turned to her workbench, retrieving a flexible tape made of fine silver wire and a small notepad. "Now, stand still. If I am to craft armor for you, I'll need your measurements."
"Measurements?" I asked, startled.
"Of course," she snapped, rolling her eyes. "What, did you think armor simply appears, perfectly fitted, as if by magic? Even magic requires precision. Stand there—feet apart, arms at your sides."
I quickly obeyed, standing still as Rhunön began her work. The silver measuring tape snaked around my chest, arms, and waist with practiced precision, her hands deft and assured as she recorded the measurements in a leather-bound notebook. Her gaze was sharp, each glance feeling like a blade cutting through any pretense or imperfection. She muttered under her breath as she worked, her focus so intense that it felt as though I were being dissected by her eyes alone.
"Lean but not weak," she murmured, more to herself than to me, as she measured the breadth of my shoulders. "The armor must not just protect—it must move with you. Full coverage without sacrificing speed. And the arms... yes, they'll need reinforcement here without impeding flexibility."
I stayed silent, knowing better than to interrupt her process. Rhunön's movements were deliberate, every motion calculated. Her mind was clearly racing, and I could almost see the design taking shape in her thoughts. Saphira's amused voice brushed against my mind. She measures you as though crafting a blade—every detail precise, every imperfection noted.
I stifled the urge to smile, holding still as Rhunön circled me, her fingers deftly manipulating the tape. When she reached my legs, she paused briefly, muttering something under her breath about ensuring proper weight distribution in the armor before moving on to the curve of my spine.
"Bend forward slightly," she commanded. I complied without hesitation, feeling the measuring tape press firmly against my back as she recorded the length and contours. Her muttering continued, each observation spoken aloud for no one's benefit but her own. "Your balance is better than most," she noted. "That's something."
Finally, she stepped back, snapping the silver tape closed with a flick of her wrist. She studied me for a long moment, her sharp gaze assessing the whole picture before nodding in satisfaction. "It will be strong," she said, her tone decisive. "Every piece fitted to your form, allowing complete freedom of movement. It will protect you without hindering you—and it will be worthy of a Rider."
"Thank you," I said earnestly. "Your skill is unparalleled. I'm honored by your willingness to help me."
She waved a hand dismissively, though her eyes lingered on Brisingr where it rested in its scabbard. "Spare me your flattery, boy. Words mean little. Use what I craft with the respect it deserves, and that will be thanks enough."
I inclined my head, the sincerity of her words striking a chord. "I will. You have my word."
Her gaze softened, just a fraction, before she turned back toward her forge. "Now go. I have work to do, and I craft best without someone breathing down my neck. The next time we speak, it will be to fit the final pieces. Do not waste my time."
I bowed deeply, recognizing the dismissal. As I stepped outside, the cool forest air was a welcome contrast to the heat of the forge. Saphira's thoughts brushed against mine again, her tone light and teasing. You've impressed her, little one. That is no small feat.
I smiled faintly, the weight of the moment settling over me. Rhunön's armor would not just be a protection—it would be a symbol of her trust and her unparalleled craft. Whatever lay ahead, I would wear it with purpose, honoring the legacy of those who had come before.
~x~
The clearing was bathed in the golden light of the setting sun, casting long shadows through the towering trees of Du Weldenvarden. The air was thick with the hum of magic, an ever-present reminder of the forest's ancient power. I sat cross-legged beside Saphira, her gleaming sapphire scales catching the light in mesmerizing patterns. Across from us stood Oromis and Glaedr, their presence as steady and imposing as the great oaks that surrounded us. Evandar was a few paces away, his regal bearing unshaken even in the face of Oromis's calm authority.
Evandar's green eyes burned with intensity as he addressed the group. "We cannot afford to wait," he said, his voice steady but edged with frustration. "The Eldunarí hidden on Vroengard are more than relics—they are our greatest weapon against Galbatorix. Every day we leave them unclaimed, we risk the Empire finding them first."
Glaedr's deep, resonant voice filled my mind, measured but firm. The Eldunarí are not weapons, Evandar. They are the hearts of dragons who made the ultimate sacrifice to preserve our legacy. To treat them as tools for war is to betray their trust.
Evandar inclined his head, though his determination did not waver. "I do not speak of using them recklessly, Glaedr-elda," he said, his tone softening slightly. "But their power cannot be denied. Galbatorix's strength grows with each passing day. The longer we delay, the more insurmountable our task becomes."
Oromis stepped forward, his golden eyes sharp and unyielding. "The Eldunarí entrusted their essence to the Riders, not to kings or armies. Their retrieval is not a matter of urgency but of readiness. This is a decision that rests solely with the Riders and their dragons."
Evandar stiffened, his frustration evident. "And what of the rest of us, Oromis?" he asked, his voice rising slightly. "Are we to sit idle while Galbatorix consolidates his power? This war affects all of Alagaësia, not just the Riders. We cannot afford inaction."
Saphira rumbled softly beside me, her tail curling protectively. We are not idle, Evandar. Preparation is not inaction. To act without wisdom is to court disaster.
I glanced at Oromis, his calm expression betraying no hint of doubt. "Evandar," I said hesitantly, "I understand your concerns. The Eldunarí are powerful, but Vroengard is dangerous. Its wards and traps are ancient and unpredictable. If we rush in unprepared, we risk not only losing the Eldunarí but also endangering everyone who goes."
Evandar's eyes locked onto mine, his frustration giving way to something more pleading. "Eragon, you've seen the damage Galbatorix can do. You understand what's at stake. Can we truly afford to wait, knowing what he's capable of?"
I hesitated, Saphira's steady presence grounding me. "I do understand," I said carefully. "But rushing into Vroengard unprepared would be a mistake. The island isn't just dangerous—it's deadly. We need to be ready."
Oromis's voice cut through the growing tension, his tone unyielding. "Evandar, you speak as though haste will solve all our problems. But it is haste that led to the fall of the Riders. Galbatorix's rise was born of impatience and pride—qualities we cannot afford to emulate."
Evandar's jaw tightened, his hands clenching into fists at his sides. "You speak of caution, Oromis, but caution will not win this war. Galbatorix does not wait. He grows stronger while we sit here debating the merits of inaction."
Oromis's gaze sharpened, his voice taking on a commanding edge that left no room for argument. "Do not mistake wisdom for inaction, Evandar. You stand before the last elder of the Riders, a mantle I did not seek but bear out of necessity. The Eldunarí are not yours to command, nor are they a prize for the taking. They belong to the Riders, and their fate is ours to decide."
Evandar stepped closer, his frustration boiling over. "And when, Oromis? When will you decide? A year? Two? How much time will you squander while Galbatorix tightens his grip on Alagaësia?"
Oromis did not flinch, his calm unbroken. "I will decide when the Riders are ready. Not a moment sooner."
The finality of his words hung heavily in the air, but Evandar refused to back down. "You speak of readiness, but the Riders are not what they once were. You train boys while Galbatorix commands armies. What chance do we have if we do not use every resource available to us?"
Glaedr's voice rumbled through the clearing, his tone laced with both authority and sorrow. The Riders were not destroyed because they lacked power, Evandar. They fell because they lost their way. The Eldunarí are not a solution to this war. They are a responsibility, one that cannot be taken lightly.
Evandar turned to me again, desperation creeping into his voice. "Eragon, you have seen the devastation Galbatorix can bring. You know what is at stake. Will you stand by and do nothing?"
I straightened, meeting his gaze with as much resolve as I could muster. "I will stand by the Riders," I said firmly. "This isn't just about winning a war, Evandar. It's about preserving what the Riders stood for—what they stand for. If we act recklessly, we risk losing everything."
Oromis stepped between us, his presence a wall of quiet authority. "Enough, Evandar," he said, his voice low but commanding. "You are a king, but here, your authority ends. The Riders and their dragons will decide the fate of the Eldunarí. And I have decided: no one will step foot on Vroengard until I deem it appropriate."
Evandar's shoulders sagged slightly, the weight of Oromis's words pressing down on him. "And if Galbatorix finds them first?" he asked quietly.
"Then we will face that challenge when it comes," Oromis said. "But we will face it united, with wisdom and purpose—not with haste and recklessness."
The clearing fell silent, the tension thick in the air. Evandar finally inclined his head, his movements stiff with reluctance. "Very well," he said, his voice tight. "But know this, Oromis: every delay, every moment of caution, risks the lives of those who fight for this cause. I only hope your wisdom does not cost us everything."
With that, he turned and strode out of the clearing, his silver hair glinting in the fading light. Oromis watched him go, his expression unreadable, before turning to me.
"You must understand, Eragon," he said quietly. "The Eldunarí are more than tools of war. They are a trust, a legacy that must be safeguarded. Their retrieval will come, but it must come at the right time."
I nodded, though the weight of his words pressed heavily on my shoulders. "I understand, Master," I said. "I'll do everything I can to be ready."
Glaedr's golden eyes fixed on me, his deep voice resonating in my mind. The path ahead is fraught with challenges, young one. But you have the strength to endure. Trust in your bond with Saphira and in the wisdom of those who guide you.
As we left the clearing, Saphira's thoughts brushed against mine, warm and steady. We will be ready, little one. Together.
I nodded, my resolve hardening. Whatever lay ahead, I would face it with Saphira by my side. And when the time came, I would prove worthy of the trust placed in me.
~x~
The forest clearing was silent, save for the rustling of leaves in the gentle breeze. Du Weldenvarden seemed to hum with its own quiet magic, a serene backdrop to the tension that hung between the two men who stood facing each other. Brom leaned against the trunk of an ancient oak, his arms crossed, while Murtagh stood a few paces away, his posture stiff and his expression guarded.
"I asked you here because there are things we need to discuss," Brom began, his voice low but firm. He was no stranger to difficult conversations, but this one carried a weight he hadn't faced in years.
Murtagh tilted his head slightly, his dark eyes narrowing. "And why me, specifically? Wouldn't Eragon be a more fitting audience for your wisdom?"
Brom exhaled sharply, shaking his head. "This isn't about Eragon. This is about you."
Murtagh's lips thinned, and for a moment, he said nothing. Then he crossed his arms, mirroring Brom's stance. "I'm listening."
Brom pushed himself away from the tree, taking a step closer. "You know who I am. What I've done."
"I know you killed my father," Murtagh said flatly, his voice devoid of emotion. "And I know you had good reason."
Brom flinched at the bluntness of the statement, though he supposed he deserved it. "I did," he admitted. "But that doesn't mean I don't carry the weight of it every day."
Murtagh's gaze didn't waver. "Good. You should."
The words stung, but Brom nodded, accepting them. "Morzan was my friend once," he said quietly. "My brother in arms. I believed in him, trusted him—until he betrayed everything we stood for."
"And now you see me and think of him," Murtagh said bitterly. "Is that why you called me here? To warn me not to follow in his footsteps?"
"No," Brom said firmly, his voice cutting through the growing tension. "I called you here because I see you, Murtagh. Not your father. You may carry his blood, but you're not him. And I don't want you to ever think you have to be."
Murtagh's arms dropped to his sides, his posture softening slightly. "You don't know me," he said quietly. "Not really. All you see is what I let you see."
"Then let me see more," Brom said, stepping closer. "Let me help you."
Murtagh's eyes flickered with something—anger, maybe, or doubt. "Help me how? By turning me into another Eragon? Another 'perfect' Rider?"
Brom shook his head. "No. Eragon is Eragon. You're you. And you're more than capable of being a Rider in your own right—of being better than any of us ever were."
Murtagh scoffed, but there was no real heat in it. "You make it sound so simple."
"It's not," Brom admitted. "But you don't have to do it alone. Oromis is teaching you the ways of the Riders, but there's more to being a warrior than magic and discipline. I can teach you what I know—the things I learned from fighting this war for decades."
Murtagh studied Brom for a long moment, his expression unreadable. "Why?" he asked finally. "Why do you care?"
Brom hesitated, then sighed. "Because I've seen what happens when someone walks this path without guidance. I've seen what it did to your father. I won't let that happen to you."
The honesty in his words seemed to catch Murtagh off guard. He looked away, his gaze settling on the ground. "And if I don't want your help?" he asked quietly.
"Then I'll respect that," Brom said simply. "But I think you do. And I think you're afraid to admit it."
Murtagh's jaw tightened, and for a moment, Brom thought he might walk away. But then he straightened, meeting Brom's gaze. "Fine," he said. "But don't expect me to be an eager student."
Brom allowed himself a small smile. "I wouldn't expect anything less."
The two men stood in silence for a moment, the weight of their shared history hanging between them. Then Brom reached into his cloak, his hand closing around something. When he pulled it free, the sunlight glinted off the blade of a sword.
Murtagh's breath caught as he recognized it. Zar'roc. His father's sword.
"This belonged to Morzan," Brom said, his voice steady but heavy with meaning. "I took it after I killed him, not because I wanted it, but because I couldn't let it fall into the wrong hands."
He held the sword out to Murtagh, his expression solemn. "It's yours now. Not because of who your father was, but because of who you are. You deserve to carry it."
Murtagh stared at the blade, his face a mixture of emotions—shock, anger, sadness, and something else Brom couldn't quite place. Slowly, hesitantly, he reached out and took the sword, his fingers curling around the hilt.
"It feels. . . heavy," Murtagh said quietly, his voice almost a whisper.
"It should," Brom replied. "It's a reminder of the weight you carry—not just the burden of your bloodline, but the choices you'll make moving forward."
Murtagh nodded slowly, his gaze fixed on the sword. "Thank you," he said after a moment, his voice barely audible.
Brom placed a hand on Murtagh's shoulder, his grip firm. "Don't thank me. Just use it well."
As the two men stood in the clearing, the sun dipping lower on the horizon, Brom felt a flicker of hope. Murtagh was not his father. And with guidance, he might just become something far greater.
~x~
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