Here it is, my rewrite of (the Grimm Tamer) so for the changes I did I went with my original weapons and just corrected some grammar reason this took so long is because I wanted to try my original first chapter but I just couldn't write I said I'm a little rusty so hopefully this is better, I'll be using some elements from the actual show and YouTube, Celtic Phoenix, fixing RWBY. A really good series I recommend.
"Normal talking"
'Thinking talking'
Communication devices
(Normal POV)
(Early evening)
The vale forest trees and ground were filled with an array of pink, red and white flowers in bloom for the season of spring turning to summer, with the golden light of the setting sun creating a picturesque scene.
Among this portrait setting are two giant wolves. Standing almost 5 feet tall With a perfect inverse of black and white fur on their bellies, tail tips, face masks, inner ear fur.
One has gold colored eyes wearing a white collar with a tag that reads Skoll. While the other has silver eyes and black collar with a tag that reads Hati.
Skoll was rolling and stretching in the grass and flowers, groaning happily.
Hati stood on his hind legs, barking and wagging his tail at a squirrel running along the tree branch.
Pushing off the tree following it on his hind legs, tripping over Skoll.
As soon as he hit the ground Skoll pounced on him and the two wrestled each other over the area.
Their wrestling stopped when they landed in front of a pair of armored Black leather boots. Both wolves laid on their backs and looked up at a 6'3" man wearing full body chainmail. A chest and back plates connected by shoulder straps.
Large Gauntlets stopping at the middle of his forearms with white fur ends.
A helmet with a downward wolf skull mask hid his face and chainmail veil attached to the back of the helmet to his back.
Attached to his hip is a bandolier with several special canisters with different elemental symbols on the front and two medium pouches on the back. Tassets covering his thighs, a patch of brown fur beneath them.
The helmet and plate armor have the same color pattern, black with a blue trim while the chainmail was all black.
Attached to his back are four mechanical arms each holding four identical 3 foot long 3B falchion swords with black and white Damascus patterns on the wide blades. The handles are a hand and a half design with a grooved spiral twisted guard, blue scaled handles and upward crescent base and triangular crown on top for pommels.
The arms were hidden under a dark brown furred cape with a dark red underlining.
Kneeling down and scratching their necks, causing them to wag their tails and groan happily.
"There's a city up ahead. We'll be there by nightfall and camp there for a while." Standing and walking in that direction.
The wolves rolled to their feet shaking the grass and flower pedals off before following.
(The city of Vale)
The shattered moon and city lights pushed back the darkness along with the many street lights and shops of vale.
The front window of a From Dust till Dawn shop shattered. In front of the store was a goon in a black suit knocked out by a girl in a red hood.
She stood 5 '4 " with rose red hair with black highlights that reached below her chin. Wearing a black long-sleeved blouse and a combat skirt with red trim on the edge, a black waist cincher with red lacing up the front combat boots with red soles with thick black stockings.
A silver fiery rose medallion on a bandier of bullets around her hips. The outfit outlined her figure and her ample chest nicely. She is definitely what one would consider beautiful, especially with those silver eyes.
She unfolded a GIANT black and red mechanical scythe/sniper rifle, she spinned the scythe around before digging the point in the ground pointing it towards the shop and the rest of the men inside.
"Ok?" A 6'0" green eyes bowler hat man in a white suit, black gloves and silver scarf. Looking at the rest of his men.
"Get her!?" The rest of the men charged out of the shop and surrounded her, drawing guns and red machetes.
The closest goon slashed at her, using her scythe to dodge the blade and spin kicked him away using the momentum she pulled the scythe out of the ground and launched into the air.
When she landed the rest of the men surrounded her, firing off a shot from her scythe/gun she used the recoil to twirl around and knocked one goon into the air and slammed the blunt end on top of another goon.
The last goon pulled a machine gun on her, using her gun's recoil to dodge the goons bullets, before launching towards him, sweeping his legs and hammered him to the ground, landed at Roman's feet.
"Well you were worth every penny truly you were." Torchwick groaned looking over the unconscious goons.
"Well Red, it's been an eventful evening." Dropping his cigar and putting it out with his cane; before raising it toward her and popped the lid off the end into a sight.
"But I'm afraid this is where we part ways." He fired off a blazing shot, but she was able to dodge it by using her gun's recoil to launch into the air.
Torchwick ran down the street and was tackled to the ground by Hati, pinning him down with his paws on his shoulders.
"Get off me you damn mutt!" Torchwick tried to strike him with his cane, but was stopped by Skoll, biting his cane hand, pulling his arm out, causing him to yell in pain.
Looking at them, he realized who these wolves were. "Oh, no!" he groaned, dropping his head on the ground.
"Hey Roman." Torchwick looked up and saw the armored man walking up behind Hati. "How have you been? We've really missed you. Didn't we guys?" With a sarcastic voice, patting Hati's head, who growled more intensely.
Torchwick started to get worried.
Kneeling down to the side of his head. "I think you know your options, A?" Pulling out a pair of cuffs and dangling them over his head. "Or B?" Bring his other hand about to snap.
Skoll's teeth sank deeper into his hand and Hati claws dug deeper into his shoulders. "Alright, you win." He groaned, Lifting his free hand.
Cuffing his hand and motioning the wolves to release him, Skoll took the cane in his mouth, cuffing him and pulled him to his feet.
The wolves gathered around their master and growled lightly. Turning to them growling at Ruby, weapon in hand, worried looking at the wolves.
The armored man looked at her and saw no hint of aggression within her.
"Sorry I didn't mean to steal your kill." Walking towards her, pulling Torchwick along. Skoll and Hati looked confused but followed.
"I wasn't gonna kill him!" She defended, also sensing no hostility towards him she put away her scythe and met him halfway.
She looked at the wolves awed at how big they were while also finding them adorable. She really wanted to pet them but she restrained herself.
Turning her attention away from the wolves to the armored man with sparkles in her eyes at all of his gear.
"That was very impressive, you're an amazing huntress." He praised with a kind tone, causing her to blush.
"Actually I'm not a Huntress, but I will be." Ruby answered eagerly.
Looking over at her and seeing her work. "Well I'd say you're on your way."
Ruby really brightened up at the compliment.
"Aw, it's so good to see you making new friends, Fido." Roman commented, catching their attention. "As sweet as this scene is, I'm afraid I have to be off." He tossed his cuffs at the armor man. The wolves went to pounce on him again but Roman pulled a remote from his right sleeve and pressed the button.
The man covered his head and dropped to the ground yelling in pain. Skoll And Hati did the same, trying to cover their ears; whining in pain.
"What is it? What's wrong?!" Ruby asked, confused, unfazed by what's happening.
Ruby looked to Roman only to find him gone and the device on the ground; she looked up to see him grappling up the building.
With a frustrated growl she twirled Crescent Rose and stabbed the point through it.
The three dropped their hands and breathed heavily.
Ruby knelt down and placed a hand on his shoulder. "Are you okay?"
"Yeah. I'm fine." Grunting in pain; looking at Ruby. "Stop him!" She nodded and disappeared, leaving rose petals behind.
Roman ran across the rooftop, Ruby reached the roof and fired a shot near his feet, stopping him.
"You're persistent, I'll give you that." Was his only comment. Before a bullhead pulled up behind the building, Roman jumped onto the open door on the side turning back to Ruby pulling out a red dust crystal.
"End of the line red!" Tossing the crystal, but before it could reach her, a sword flew past her and sliced the crystal in the air and Roman barely dodged it.
The sword spun around and flew back, Roman barely dodged it.
Ruby followed it to the armored man's mechanical arms right hand. Holding two others the white pattern on both blades are now red.
"You hurt my wolves, you're not going anywhere!" Throwing both swords at the bullhead and returning to his hand. Each time they stabbed into and out of the bullhead they would create a fiery explosion shaking the bullhead violently.
Torchwick stumbled up toward the cockpit.
"We've got hunters!" The pilot got off her seat and went to the hatch, Torchwick grabbed the steering wheel and leveled the carrier.
Jaune and Ruby saw in the opening a new figure that's face was covered by the shadows of the shuttle, with only her feet and bottom half of her red dress with golden flames visible. She launched a fireball from her hands.
Crossing the swords and slashed the fire ball Flakes from the fire sprinkled the ground, lifting her hand causing the ground to start glowing. Leaping away before it exploded.
"You like fire!" The blades turned to a 5C design and The red turned purple, the black pattern evaporated turning the whole blade purple.
With an overhead throw he threw them over the carrier. One hit and stuck at the top of the carrier, the other went past the carrier and pulled in and stuck behind it.
Drawing a third sword, blade matching the other two lengthening it to 5 feet. Hovering it over the debris from the roof; the debris started to gather around the sword, following just behind it before throwing.
She tried to stop it with a fireball but the sword sliced stabbed through it and stuck into the carrier.
The blades created a gravitational field that pulled the debris around the carrier over and over, striking and increasing in speed with every pass.
"I call this Cronus's ring." He proudly explained to Ruby who was in awe of the sight.
The woman created a massive ring of fire destroying the blades and the debris, the handles fell to the ground.
Ruby snapping out of her trance turned her scythe into a sniper rifle and started blasting, she created a fire barrier in front of her hand and blocked them.
Drawing his fourth and final sword and was about to throw it when he noticed several spots started to glow under them.
"Get out of the way!" Dropping the sword before leaping toward her shoving her out of the way, covering her with his body from the explosion.
His back slid across the roof, slamming into the ridge watching the bullhead escape.
'Damn it!', he growled frustrated before noticing Ruby shaking on his chest, "Hey, you okay?" A hint of worry in his voice.
She lifted her head, her hair covered her face and eyes.
"That. Was. AWESOME!" She shouted with a voice of absolute joy sporting the brightest smile he has ever seen.
"Those swords! That attack GAH it was all so cool." She mumbled on and on, throwing her arms around, imitating metal clashing and explosion sounds reenacting the fight.
Ruby finally calmed down from her rant and breathing from all the excitement before noticing how close their faces were to each other and she was straddling his hips under her skirt.
With a squeak she leaped off him and fixed herself, blushing profusely. "Hey, What happened to your wolves?"
Before he could answer, they heard a bark from above, looking up to see both wolves floating in the air with a purple aura around them, both just smiling and wagging their tails in the air.
"I believe these are yours?" the two looked down to the voice. Belonging to a very gorgeous blonde haired, green eyed, 6'0" woman in a white long sleeve pleated top showing a generous amount of her impressive cleavage, a black and purple cape with several arrow like tails, a black pencil skirt, stockings and heeled boots. Her arms were crossed over her chest and sporting an angry look, with a riding crop in her right hand.
"Oh no." still lying on the roof when he realized who this was, while Ruby's eyes just shined, staring at the woman.
"You're Glynda Goodwitch? Can I have your autograph?!"
(Vale Police station)
The armor man was sitting in an interrogation room. wolves' and swords confiscated, still wearing his helmet; police couldn't remove it.
After Goodwitch finished interrogating Ruby she entered the room he was held in, circling the table, staring at her tablet seeing the whole fight on it. "Your actions tonight will not be taken lightly, you could have truly harmed young Ms. Rose and any bystander."
"They had a carrier, and he hurt my wolves. What was I supposed to do? Let them go? A Huntsman is supposed to stop jerks like that."
"Your loyalty to your pets and your ideology is quite admirable." She felt an angry aura from him, after that comment.
"But that doesn't excuse your actions, because you are not a certified huntsman and that isn't even the worst of it." Looking at her tablet showing a list of actions he caused across the kingdom.
Tense build up in the room, both of them could sense the urge to fight between each other.
Before the door opened and broke the tension. Showing a 6 '1'' man with silver hair, glasses and a black and a green and black suit, holding a cane in his right hand and coffee mug in his left hand, Skoll and Hati followed behind him.
Their ears perked up and tails wagged at the sight of their master and rushed straight towards him, Glynda barely got out of their way, knocking over the spare chair and table.
kneeling to them and wrapped his arms around their necks, almost knocking him over, petting their necks and faces.
"Hey my boys. My boys! You guys okay, huh? Did that jerk hurt you?" examining them for any damages while petting them, while they whined happily to be with their master.
Glynda and Ozpin just watched the display of affection and couldn't help but smile at the sight, Glynda was especially touched.
Ozpin flipped the table back over and picked up the chair and sat down across from him, placing the mug on the table. "It has been quite some time since I've seen you. Jaune Arc."
Jaune stopped his petting and looked up at the man, taking a moment before realizing. "Ozpin?" Receiving a nod from him. Jaune lightly chuckled before standing up and grabbed his chair and sat at the table, the wolves sat at his side
The chainmail beneath the helmet loosened, sliding it back hanging off his shoulders like a hood while taking a cloth off his eyes over his forehead.
Relieving a handsome young man with bright blue sapphire eyes, a slashed scar over his right eye. Blonde beard and hair tied in a "Warrior wolf tail". Two black wolf ears with a white inner fur popped up from the top of his head.
Ozpin Just smiled at the boy, while Glynda was more shocked by how willing he was to show his face and how handsome it was.
"How long has it been?" Jaune asked, sporting a smile.
"You were 13 years old when you went on your journey, you truly have grown into quite the man." praising him with his own smile "Have you found anything?"
Jaunes' ears dropped and frowned. "Nothing. Traveled every corner of every kingdom for nothing." Skoll and Hati looked at him and whined at him.
"Well not everything was lost." His ears perked up at looking at the two with a smile petting their heads and cheering them up.
"I am sorry to hear that my boy, many quests for knowledge may not give us the answers we seek, but can give us a new meaning to life."
"Unfortunately said journeys can come with a serious price." Ozpin explained with a serious tone, leaning forward and resting his elbows on the table, interlocking his fingers in front of his face. "What am I to do with you?"
"Good question." Jaune's face turned serious while Skoll and Hati turned their heads to him, ears dropped, growling quietly, Goodwitch reached for her riding crop anticipating an attack while Ozpin remained calm and unfazed by the situation.
"Mmm. Perhaps. I should enroll you in my school." His response, earning a surprised/shocked expression from Jaune and Glynda.
Jaune laughed hysterically for a few moments before stopping when he saw he wasn't laughing. Quickly gathering himself and clearing his throat
"Okay? First of all I'm 20 years old, A Little too old for school, second I'm pretty sure the Metal Man, the Jolly Dust Man and the Ivory Tigress will cause some issues and Third, I'm pretty sure I'm more skilled than any student." Holding a finger for every point he made. "See any issues?"
"Not at all. Certain age groups aren't really something I consider when looking for new students. In fact Miss Rose is 17 and I just enrolled her." Turning to Glynda. "Why, Professor Goodwitch was one of our youngest students to graduate, at only 13 years old." Oz explained.
"Really?" Jaune asked, looking at her. "Brains, Talent and Beauty. What a Deadly combination."
Winking at her, she averted her gaze elsewhere to hide her blush and smile.
"As for Ironwood and the Schnee's I'll be sure to keep them at bay, the Fang might be another story, but not impossible and instead of you learning to be a huntsman, think of it as a way to teach them on their level and who knows maybe you could learn something from them after all Old dogs can still learn new tricks." Giving a smirk after the joke.
Jaune laughed at the joke. "And this has nothing to do with my abi…"
"I assure you young man, my intentions are purely to help my students to become the best they can be… and for you as well." Oz added.
That last line caught Jaune's attention. "Me? What are you talking about?"
"Many stories of your adventures are less than pleasant and I'm not talking about the adventure and actions in them; but more how witnesses have seen him not only. She has been in contact with me and…. Well that is quite a long time for anyone to be away from family."
That hit Jaune, deep! Trying his best to keep his composure but his dripping ears and tears building in his eyes told another story.
Ozpin placed a comforting hand on his and sported a comforting smile, while Goodwitch had her own concerned look on her face.
Jaune looked to the man, feeling a sense he was telling the truth. Turning to both his wolves, placing their heads on his lap, smiling at their affection. Looking back to Ozpin.
(Two weeks later, VTOL is en route to beacon.)
"Oh I can't believe my baby baby sister is going to Beacon with me!" A 5'10" large breasted woman with long curly golden hair and lilac eyes brought Ruby into a back crushing bear hug.
She wears an orange scarf and brown top with puffy shoulders over a yellow tube top, with a yellow fiery heart over her left chest. a pair of yellow bracelets over black fingerless gloves. A pair of black biker shorts and brown knee-high boots over orange socks, the whole outfit did a good job showing off her muscular yet curvaceous figure and lightly tanned skin.
"Yang can't breathe. Can't breathe." Ruby gasped.
"Oops, sorry." Putting her down and smiling, her smile disappeared when she noticed Ruby looked worried. "Hey aren't you excited, you're going to be the bees knees at this school."
"But I don't want to be the bee's knees, I want to be a normal girl with normal knees." Ruby explained, causing Yang to frown at her.
"I got moved ahead a whole year. I just don't want people to think I'm special." Pulling her hood over her head. Yang placed both hands on Ruby's face.
"But you are special. Especially to me." Reaching to pulling her hood down, earning a smile from Ruby.
"I think you're great too." Ruby turned towards the voice and saw a familiar set armor, the chainmail was yellow and plates were now white with a blue trim. Leaning against the wall hunched over.
Ruby walked towards him. "Umm do I know you?"
He looked up from the ground and looked at her with a playful frown. "Geez Red forgot me already, after ruining that jerk Torchwick's night."
The gears in her head clicked, stammering out words to try and make a sentence before squealing happily and leaped at him, wrapping her arms around his neck in a hug. "Oh my Oum, I thought I'd never see you again." Jaune grunted at the hug but happily returned it.
Exiting the hug. "How have you been? What are you doing here?" She excitedly asked, noticing his ears. "you're a Fanus?"
Looking at his ears and twitching them. "Yea. Is that a problem?" He asked with a worried face.
"No no no!" Ruby panicked and waved her arms. "I love Fanus. I think they're great and their features are so cute. Not that I view them as animals or pets." she rambled on and on trying to correct herself but sounding more and more racist. She stopped when Jaune placed a hand on top of her head.
"It's okay Ruby." lowering his head to hers with a smile. "You're the furthest thing from a bigot I've ever seen." Ruby smiled at his comment, blushing slightly. Before she was suddenly pulled back.
"Huh Ruby, care to introduce me to your tall, handsome, blonde, friend." Yang asked. Peaking over her sister's shoulder and eyeing Jaune up and down, liking what she saw.
"Oh right, this is huh…. I'm sorry I never got your name."
"Oh. I'm Jaune, Jaune strife. And this equally attractive huntress is?" Jaune asked, playfully teasing Yang back. Causing both girls to blush.
"I'm Yang, this adorable Little huntresse's big sister." Nuzzling her sister's cheek with hers, while Ruby tried to push her face away.
"An older sister? Beacon is really going to have their hands full. Seeing how destructive this one is." Referring to Ruby.
Ruby gasped at that. "I'm not destructive!" Finally breaking Yang's hold.
"You practically destroyed that dust shop." Jaune explained, Ruby's face turned red with frustration.
"You were the one with that "Cronos ring" and throwing swords everywhere." Ruby argued back.
Yang the whole time couldn't help but chuckle at their antics. 'Looks like you're already making new friends, Ruby.' Looking at Jaune admirably, a bell rung before a hologram of Glynda appeared caught their attention.
Hello. My name is Glynda Goodwitch. You have the privileged few to attend of prestigious academia. Our job is to guide and prepare you to protect the world. The hologram disappeared and the windows cleared showing the kingdom.
Ruby and Yang ran to the window and were in awe of the sight. While Jaune quickly ran to a corner of the carrier.
BLAHH*
"So much for the view."
"Ew Yang, it's on your shoe."
"Gross Gross Gross, get it off, get it off." Yang hopped on one leg; extending the other leg towards Ruby.
"Ew, ew, don't touch me with that!" The two bickered as the carrier started to descend to the landing pad.
Here it is chapter one. Hope it was good. Like I said, I'm A Little rusty. Jaune's armor is based off of Deadwing bounty hunter on theKing68 deviantart, minus the big shoulder pads, helmet has a wolf feature and no horns with the designed color scheme. The sword handles are based on Shadiversity fixed Warcraft swords. And the blade designs are based on the Elmslie typology of single edge medieval swords.
Also I'm making beacon more like a college then a high school, and some character features to make them more distinct, just little things like Ruby's hair (I never got why she was the only whose hair didn't match her color.) and Yang's physique and skin complexion (Just made her more muscular and tanner.)
Reviews will be appreciated. Till next time.