My Hokuto Academia


AN:

Hey, guys. It's me.

Okay, two recent reviews have made me take a step back at My Hokuto Academia. My dialogue is robotic and awkward; reads like a databook; Honestly, I re-read my first few chapters. Oh... boy. They are right.

I want all my reviewers to be honest with me:

- Is my dialogue really that robotic?

- Is my writing style really that terrible?

- If so, what would be your way to go about it?

- Again, I'm still looking for a BETA Reader. No one ever applied.