Written by: "Just a Complicated Person", "Konge", and "Fun But Shy Girl"
After being a couple for nearly two years, Ramona and Jackson are happier than ever, enjoying each other's company with every free moment they can. After the two graduate from college, the two move in together. One evening, when they go home to their apartment: Jackson asks Ramona to take off all her clothes alongside him in the entryway. Excited for what this unusual request could involve, Ramona fulfills Jackson's request. Then once the two young adults are nude, Jackson asks Ramona to put on a blindfold. Even more excited as to what could be coming, Ramona quickly does this as well. Soon, a naked Jackson is leading a blindfolded naked Ramona in their shared living room.
"One sec, Ramona, let me get the door to the room..." Jackson says as he opens it. Ramona just stands there, still with her blindfold on.
"So why the blindfold, Jackson...?" Ramona asks.
"You'll see... come on in... here, let me lead you... Okay... now you can look..." Jackson says.
Ramona takes off the blindfold, and she gasps.
"W-wow..." Ramona says with a very surprised expression.
The light is dimmed in the living room, and on every surface, the coffee table, dining room table, basically everywhere, even on the floor there are lit candles making a golden glow in the room.
"Other than all these lit candles being a fire hazard... why did you do this...?" Ramona says with a big smile.
"Just an idea I had before I picked you up from work. You like it?" Jackson says.
"I love it..." Ramona says and hugs Jackson.
"Come here... watch your step..." Jackson says and leads Ramona over to the dining room table tip toeing around all the lit candles on the floor.
"I thought you might enjoy a special birthday dinner in your birthday suit. Now... let me serve you your special meal my love..."
Ramona sits down and Jackson disappears into the kitchen and then comes back with serving tray and two plates with pasta with tomato sauce and small meatballs.
"You cooked? Wow, Jackson..." Ramona says impressed.
"Yeah, my mom's recipe...with a twist..." Jackson says and hands her a plate, and takes the other one for himself.
He then opens a bottle of wine, and pours up a glass for Ramona first, and then himself.
"Cheers." Jackson says, raising his glass toward Ramona.
"Cheers." Ramona says and the glasses clink, and they smile at each other, taking a sip.
The two naked young adults then begin to eat, and as Ramona takes the first bite, she makes a face of surprise, and then she smiles at Jackson.
"Oh, my God... so good...!" Ramona says with food still in her mouth.
"I'm glad you like it... I have been practicing in secret to get it just right..."Jackson says and takes a big bite himself.
They eat up, and Ramona wipes her mouth with a napkin.
"S-sorry, Jackson... I really was hungry, I ate so fast... but it tasted so good...!" Ramona says and Jackson smiles at her.
"Good to hear... ready for dessert...?" Jackson says taking her plate.
"I shouldn't...but what the heck, bring it on out..." Ramona says and Jackson goes to the kitchen and comes back with a big banana split, one for each, with three scoops of ice cream and whipped cream on top, and a cherry.
"Okay... the way you're feeding me, if you keep this up, I will be gaining weight, Jackson..." Ramona says and smiles.
"It's okay...we can work out later..." Jackson says and winks at Ramona, and she can't help but smile at his corny remark.
"Yeah, maybe... if I don't get a sugar crash from this big dessert..." Ramona says and takes a spoon beginning to eat the dessert.
"More wine...?" Jackson says and Ramona nods, with her mouth full of banana split, ice cream and whipped cream.
Jackson pours her a glass and she takes a big sip, drinking it all as she can feel something against her teeth.
"What the...?" Ramona says and sets down the wineglass.
Because the light is so dim, and the candle lights only show a little she takes two fingers down in her wineglass and picks something up, Ramona looks at the object and makes big eyes. In her hand is a diamond ring, not that big, on a silver frame and as Ramona looks over at Jackson, he goes over to her... and slowly gets down on one knee, while Ramona takes her other hand up to cover her open mouth.
"O-oh, my God...!" Ramona says as she falls to the floor in front of Jackson and looks at him.
"R-Ramona...I have waited so long to ask you this..." Jackson says and slowly takes the ring out of her hand and shows it to her stretched out, his hands are shaking ever so slightly, and Ramona is tearing up, and looks at Jackson.
"W-will you make the happiest man on earth and marry me...?" Jackson says, also tearing up, and he gulps, getting a big lump in his throat.
"I...I..." Ramona says, and a tear run down her face.
"Yes." Ramona says with a straight face.
"Y-yes?" Jackson says with a uncertain mine, repeating it, just to be sure he heard correct.
"Yes... now come here!" Ramona says and with two hands she grasps the back of Jackson's head and presses his lips against hers, giving him a big kiss. Ramona keeps her hands on Jackson's neck as their lips part.
"Y-you really mean it...? You'll marry me...?" Jackson asks. Ramona smiles at him, looking straight into his big blue eyes and she giggles.
"Yes...I'll marry you, silly, I love you..." Ramona says and kisses him again. Jackson has the biggest smile and looks into Ramona's big brown eyes.
"Thank God... I love you so much Ramona... I don't know what I would have done if you had said no..." Jackson says as a tear runs down his face. Ramona wipes it away, holding her hands around the edges of Jackson's face.
"But I didn't..." Ramona says and they kiss some more, tender and lovingly.
Jackson then picks up Ramona in his two arms as he carries Ramona to their shared bed. Ramona keeps her hands around Jackson's neck, while looking lovingly into his eyes the whole time she is being carried. Jackson then places his naked fiance on the bed, and gets on all fours on top of her. Jackson then takes a moment to look down at Ramona's nude form before him as Ramona gazes up at him. Then Jackson simply said, "God, you're beautiful."
Jackson then slowly moves his body downwards, and then... Jackson pushes his long hard penis into Ramona's smooth clean-shaven vagina. Immediately Ramona wraps her arms around Jackson's back as Jackson began to pump his hard member into her body. As Ramona felt Jackson's manhood push deeper into her womanhood, she said, "Ohhh! Oh my God! Oh my God! Oh my God! Ooooohhhhhhhhh! Jackson! Oooohhhhhh! Oh God, it's so tight. Ooohhhhhhh!" Jackson then began to push his penis into Ramona's vagina faster and harder as he said, "Ohhhh! Oh Ramona. Ohhhh! Oh God, yes! Ohhhh! Oh, I love you. I love you Ramona! I love you so much! Ooooohhhhhhhh!" Ramona then bent her knees and wrapped her legs around Jackson's legs as she said, "Oh God! Yes! Harder Jackson! Harder! Harder! OH GOD, YES! OOOHHHHHHH!" Jackson then brought his hands to Ramona's butt cheeks and began to squeeze them. Ramona's body began to shake hard as she held onto Jackson even tighter. Then a shaking Jackson said, "Oh God Ramona! It's about to happen. Do you want me to pull out or..." Ramona grabbed Jackson tighter than ever and said, "NO! I know we both agreed you should always pull out, even though I'm on the pill just to be safe... but tonight... on my birthday... I wanna feel your love inside me Jackson Fuller so bad. I WANNA FEEL IT SO BAD!"
Then Jackson and Ramona began to shake harder than ever as Jackson said, "Oh God. Here it comes." Then Ramona said, "Oh God. I'm about to come as well. I..." Then Jackson and Ramona both yelled, "Oooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh!" Then at the same moment, the two lovers both experienced a share orgasm. Jackson and Ramona both shook as they felt their fluids be released and leak out a bit between their penis and vagina respectively. Then after a seemingly long moment of shaking... it ended. Jackson pulled out of Ramona and then lay next to her. Jackson now looked exhausted while Ramona had a big grin on her face as she said, "Wow. Ohhhhh wow. Jackson... that was beyond amazing." Jackson then smiled and said, "Oh, you were beyond amazing Ramona. Sorry, if it all happened too fast, but..." Ramona put a finger on Jackson's mouth as she got on her side and said, "It's okay. We've got the rest of our lives to learn how to drag it out on longer." Then Jackson smirked as he gave Ramona passionate kiss.
Then once the kiss ended, Jackson said, "So... I guess it's gonna be awkward when we tell our parents we're engaged now." Ramona raised an eyebrow as she said, "We've been living together for a whole year now Jackson. Do you really think our parents bought the whole we're just friends sharing rent story?"
Jackson and Ramona were in the living room of the Fuller home as DJ, Steve, and Stephanie sat on the couch facing them. Jackson and Ramona had worried looks on their faces, as a furious looking DJ screamed, "You two were fucking behind our backs this entire time!?" Then Stephanie glanced at DJ with a smirk as she said, "Come on DJ. They were unrelated teenagers living across the hall from each other just as they were hitting puberty. Of course they were gonna hook up. I would've done the same thing at their age... and honestly, I totally did when we hosted that hot foreign exchange student for three months after you went to college." DJ then turned to look at Stephanie with fury in her eyes as she said, "Not helping Steph!"
Jackson meanwhile had a guilty look on his face as he said, "Look mom. We're sorry we pretended we weren't being intimate all these years, but we didn't think you'd understand how we felt." Ramona then looked at DJ with sincerity as she said, "But trust me when I say, I love your son very much and I promise you I wouldn't have accepted his marriage proposal if he hadn't behaved like a proper gentleman during the time we've been dating." Steve then held DJ's hand as he said, "Come on Deej. Look, I'm not a fan of the fact that their relationship was built on lies... but they're being honest with us now. Besides, the two of us know a thing or two about how it feels to not admit our feelings."
Jackson then had hope in his eyes as he said, "Look, we're telling you all this now, because we are gonna get married, and we want you to be a part of our wedding and our life together. So... are we cool?" DJ made a big sigh, and then said, "Of course we are. I'll always love you both. Come here you two." DJ then stood up and hugged both Jackson and Ramona. Once the hug was over Jackson looked at Ramona as he said, "Wow. Guess we got the hard part over with, huh?" Ramona then rolled her eyes and said, "No, we haven't. Now we have to break the news to my family."
Jackson and Ramona were sitting on the living room couch in the Gibbler home as Kimmy and Fernando were both holding a large book in front of a freaked out looking Jackson. As she held the large book, Kimmy said, "And this is what my grandmother looked like as we helped her out of the bath a few days before she died." Fernando then held Jackson's head in place as he said, "And this is a picture of my great grandmother sun bathing at her favorite nudist colony in her final days." Ramona covered her face in humiliation as a freaked out looking Jackson said, "Ahh! Why are you showing me this!?" Kimmy then closed the large book as she said, "Because we want you to have a sneak peak of what Ramona is going to look like when she is old." Fernando nodded his head and then said, "That's right. You might think of her as your smoking hot Latina babe. But are you going to take care of her when the wrinkles come in?" Kimmy then grabbed Jackson's face as she said, "Will you still love her when her butt is the size of a bronco?" Jackson then tried to back away as he said, "Mr and Mrs Gibbler, I love your daughter. She is the most important thing in my world. I promise you, I will continue to love her no matter how much hair she loses, no matter how many wrinkles she gets, and no matter how much weight she gains. Ramona is the most important person in my life." Fernando then smiled and said, "Jackson... that's exactly what I wanted to hear from my future son-in-law, and the soon to be owner... of this home."
A surprised looking Jackson said, "What?" Kimmy smiled as she said, "Yeah. Me and Fernando are about to retire and see the world. We were thinking about giving this place to Ramona, but we didn't want her to have it if she was going to be living her alone. But now that you are two are getting hitched, it's all yours Mister and Mrs Jackson Gibbler." Jackson looked both amazed and confused as he said, "I don't think I'm gonna make that my new name, but: oh my gosh, thank you so much! Wow!" Ramona looked at Jackson with amazement as she said, "We're gonna finally have our own place! We have everything we need now." Jackson smiled as he and Ramona hugged and kissed one another. Suddenly Jackson heard his cell phone ring. Jackson looked at his cell phone screen and suddenly had a look of shock on his face. A concerned looking Ramona said, "What? What is it?" Jackson then turned to Ramona with a worried face as he said, "This says... it's Lola. But... we haven't talked in over five years. Should I..." With reluctance, Ramona nodded her head and said, "Go ahead. Answer it." Jackson then answered the phone and said, "Hello? Yes. Lola, are you... Wait. What? What!? Okay. I'll... I'll be there as soon as I can." Jackson then hung up his phone as Ramona said, "What? What is it?" With a concerned face, Jackson said, "It's Lola. She got into a car accident and is really hurt and says she needs to see me."
Jackson walked into a hospital room and saw Lola lying in a bed. She was wearing an arm cast and two leg casts along with small cuts and bruises covering most of her body. As Jackson sat near the bed he said, "Lola. I came as soon as I heard." Lola made a small smile as she slowly said, "Jackson. Thank you for coming. I didn't know who else to call." With worry across his face, Jackson asked, "What happened?" Struggling to talk, Lola said," Drunk driver. Drove completely off the road and came onto the street I was driving on. I've been bleeding a lot internally. Doctors aren't sure if I'm going to heal up well enough and make it through." Jackson had a sad expression on his face as he said, "Lola. I... I'm so sorry. Are you parents coming?" Lola turned her eyes away slightly as she said, "No. They haven't talked to me since they disowned me about five years ago." A confused looking Jackson then asked, "What? Why would your parents disown you?" Lola then had tears come out of her face as she said, "Because I... because it was out of wedlock and... Oh God Jackson. I'm so sorry but... she has nowhere to go now and... I should've told you before but... you have to know the truth now." Jackson looked confused as he said, "Know the truth about what?" Lola then looked directly into Jackson's eyes as she said, "Jackson... when I told you my pregnancy scare was a false alarm five years ago... I was lying. I actually was pregnant. Jackson... you're a father."
TO BE CONTINUED...
*Author's Note - Special thanks to Konge for writing the first draft of the marriage proposal scene. Additional special thanks for "Just a Complicated Person" who originally came up with the ending twist of this chapter, and the backbone idea for where the rest of this series is going...