Primate Murder Through a Multiverse

by Geokit

Kisuke a normal human died and was given a second chance with a system to cause chaos in the multiverse read along as he becomes the ultimate faker... Wait, What do you mean he's pushing chaos off onto his companions? Discord Code: 9274TfZtf9 The discord is for my stories, so people can reach out to me and give feedback directly.

1. FYI

Yo! Little late addition, but because most of what I got on this site was negative-

Anyways, before getting into that.

So, just for anybody new going from here on out. FYI. I'm basically scrapping this book.

This originally started out as a school project to help me better both my English and Writing skills, and it really shows in the start.

Especially from where I was first posting it on Webnovel.

But I've gotten better as both a person and writer so I'm scrapping this in favour of basically redo-ing the whole thing.

Now, onto the other thing-

It hurt at times, but criticism is great! But what y'all are giving me so far is mostly just negative, not good criticism IMO.

Like no, "Maybe do this"

It's all just negative crap

And like

Criticism is great!

You're just not giving me anything constructive here

You're just going, "This is bad" and then leaving. Not even trying to help me improve.

Criticism is only great if it's constructive. Otherwise, it's just hot air.