Aap logo ko cid ka first episode kesa laga?? specially Abhijeet ka character ?? mujhe kuch chize thi jo pasand nahi aaye.. jese abhijeet ka daya par goli chalana..abhijeet ka jail mai hona starting mai to mujhe sab drama laga tha lekin end mai pata chala sab kuch real tha...(Bhale hi daya ko abhijeet ki chalai goli nahi lgi lekin goli to chalai thi abhijeet ne daya ko marne ke liye hi)
Angshupriya Saha : I think ACP Sir ka dil jeetne ke liye Abhijeet ki ye side bhi rakhna jaruri tha. baki abhijeet mature bhi hai. Dhire dhire aapko sabhi shades nazar ayege abhijeet mai...abhi just start hui hai story i hope aapko aaj ka episode pasand aayega.
Aaj ke chapter mai mistakes ko ignore karna plss...maine jyda detailing mai nahi likhi hai story or plss atleast 20 Review to dijiye aap log...bahut confusion rahte hai aise story likhne par jab review nhi milte...i feel aap logo ko story pasand nahi aa rahi..koi dusri story start kaun??
The First Test Begins
Abhijeet (With Smile) : Vese to aap log jaan hi gye honge lekin mai ek baar fir apna intro de deta hun. I'm senior inspector Abhijeet. Ab plss aap log bhi apna intro de dijiye.
Purvi (Little shy tone) : hllo sir my name is Purvi..umm inspector Purvi Abhijeet smile
Pankaj (Excited) : Or mai pankaj aap jab bhi kabhi bore ho to mujhse baat kar sakte hai. Mere rahte yahan kabhi koi bore nahi ho sakte daya glare him pankaj hide his eyes.
Abhijeet (With great smile) : Very good fir to apni khoob jamegee and he give high hi Fi.
Shreya (Little hesitant) : Hmm...Sir I'm inspector Shreya (with small smile) aapse milkar acha laga daya looked at her with disbelief eyes.
Freddy (ignore daya) : Sir Hello, my name is Freddy. ACP sir ka fav hun mai
Pankaj (Shocked) : Ye kab hua everyone smile Freddy glare him.
Abhijeet (To Daya) : Tum nahi doge apna introduction
Daya (Forcefully smile) : hnn kyun nahi... Maiiii
ACP Pradyuman (Proudly) : Senior Inspector Daya Abhijeet looked at him Cid ki Shaan hai daya. Khud apne dam par yahan tak pahuncha hai or ye post hasil ki hai daya ne (pointed his chest) yahan par goliyan khai hai humare daya ne or tab jakar use ye post mili team looked at each other they feel bad for Abhijeet (Hate tone) Tumhare tarah vo kisi ameerzade ke aulaad nahi hai jo apne paiso ke dam par ye post hasil kare Abhijeet hell shocked
Abhijeet (Shocked) : Ye aap Kya bol rhe hai. Mai to ek...
ACP Pradyuman (Cut) : Rahne do tum bahut ache se janta hun mai tum jese ameerzado ko ager dig sahab ne mujhe majbur naa kiya hota to mai kabhi tumhe apne team mai naa rakhta
Abhijeet (Hurt Tone) : lekin kyun? Or aapko kisne kaha ki mai ek ameeebaap ki aulaad hun (took a deep breath) chalo maan bhi liya ki mai hun ameer baap ki aulaad lekin tab kya? Usse ye kaise sabit hota hai ki mai cid ke kabil nahi
Daya (try to calm down) : Abhijeet rahne do. abhi ye baten nahi karte hai. aaj tumhara pahela din hai tum aaram karo.
ACP Pradyuman (chewing) : Daya ye bureau hai koi park nahi jo jab chahe tahele or aram karen daya looked down (To Abhijeet) Ager Tum sach mai es post ke kabil ho to sabit karo mujhe ye baat..
And he take out the file of an old unsolved case which they have carefully selected for Abhijeet. The case is of a high-profile robbery in which no concrete evidence was found. ACP think that Abhijeet should not be able to solve this case and it should be proved that he is not worthy of CID.
ACP Pradyuman (Firm tone) : Ye lo solve karo ye case or sabit karo ki tum Cid or es post ke kabil ho. And he gave file (Warn tone) 24 ghante deta hun mai tumhe ye case solve karne ke liye. vo bhi bina team ke help ke. Tumhe ye case akele solve karna hoga Team hell shocked
Purvi (stunned) : Sir lekin ye to ACP show his hand Purvi become quite
Daya (Pov) : Ye sir kya kah rhe hai. Abhijeet akele kese karega.
Abhijeet (with confident) : Thik hai sir mai wada karta hun mai ye case akele solve karke dikhaunga.
ACP Pradyuman (tease) : Or Ager nahi kar paye to
Abhijeet (strong tone) : Mere dictionary mai naa word hai hi nahi
ACP Pradyuman : To jao tumhara samay shuru hota hai ab... Abhijeet nodded and went towards his desk.
Abhijeet reads the details of the case and analyses the codes and clues.
After some time abhijeet enter acp cabin.
Abhijeet (excitedly): Sir, Es Case mai maine ek nayi baat notice ki hai!
ACP Pradyuman (coldly): Pehle knock karna seekho. Tum CID bureau mai ho kisi playground mai nahi Abhijeet gets embarrassed
Abhijeet (professional tone): Sorry, sir. Lekin yeh dekhiye, yeh jo robbery ka pattern hai, woh ek purani gang ke method se match karta hai. Agar hum un par focus karein, toh shayad ek breakthrough mil jaye! ACP read the File
ACP Pradyuman (thinking): Yeh ladka itni jaldi itna bada clue kaise dhoondh sakta hai? (to Abhijeet) Thik hai, tum es gang ka pata karo or hnn dhyan rahe tum team ko Esme involve nahi kar sakte tumhe ye case akele solve karna hai Abhijeet simply nodded and he turn to leave (Strict/concern tone) Abhijeet mujhe samay samay par apni locations or case ke bare mai batate rahna Abhijeet Nodded and without saying anyword leave from there
ACP Pradyuman (Thought) : Ese kya ho gaya bina kisi bakbak ke chale Gaya kahin maine kuch jyada hi to nahi bol diya and he took deep breaths
The Site Visit
(Robbery Location)
Abhijeet, using all his energy, starts solving the clues one by one. With a simple theory, he finds a complex link which is directly connected to the planning of some gang. The name of this gang is "Black Viper", who is expert in hiding anything and achieving his goals.
Abhijeet track the location of the gang, Which becomes very difficult for him because the gang works very secretly and no one can trace them.
Abhijeet (on call) : Sir mujhe gang ki information mil chuki hai mujhe unke adde par Jana hoga.
ACP Pradyuman (stern tone) : Yeh koi film ka scene nahi hai Abhijeet. Tumhe pata bhi hai ki yeh gang kis level tak dangerous hai.
Daya (mocking tone) : Tumhare paas itna experience bhi nahi hai, Abhijeet. Tumne kabhi aise cases handle nahi kiye honge. Tum ek kaam karo hume location send karo hum log wahan aate hai tum akele andar mat jana.
Abhijeet (Low tone) : Etna time nahi hai daya mujhe andar jakar un par nazar rakhni hogi. Mai aap logo ko location send kar deta hun aap log warehouse aakar unhe gher sakte hai and he immediately cut phone
Abhijeet slowly reaches the warehouse and hears the voices of some people there.
Inside the warehouse, Abhijeet meets some criminals who are storing illegal weapons and stolen secretly overhears their feels that the gang is getting ready for next attack.
Abhijeet (whispering into his mic): Sir, yeh log kuch bada karne ki taiyari mai hai ye koi choti moti robbery case nahi hai in logo ke pass illegal weapons bhi hai.
ACP Pradyuman (in a call): Abhijeet hum pahunch chuke hai or warehouse ko humne charo taraf se gher liya hai tum chinta mat karna Hum andar aa rhe hai And cid team enter the warehouse and catch the gang
Daya (worried tone): Tum thik ho abhijeet nodded
Abhijeet (Innocent tone): (To acp) Ab to aap nahi kahenge naa ki Mai kabil nahi hun ACP didn't said anything
ACP Pradyuman (Whisper to daya) : Tum eske sath hi raho dekho kahin chot to nahi lagi. Mujhe kuch kaam hai daya nodded
Daya (little hesitant) : Congratulations Abhijeet tumhara phela case vo bhi bina team ke ... (With formal smile) shayad tum sach mai kabil ho
Abhijeet (Silent tone) : Chale bureau daya nodded
In bureau
DIG Sir (Firm) : Pradyuman tum etne insensitive kese ho sakte ho aaj uska first day tha or tumne aaj hi use etne dangerous gang ke piche laga diya. vo bhi bina team ke invlovement ke (angry) Pradyuman aaj ager use kuch ho jata to tum jante ho tum kitni badi musibat mai padh sakte the.
Acp Pradyuman (irritated tone) : Sir aap khamkha baat ko bada rahe hai vo thik hai aap chahe to baat karke dekh lijiye usse.
DIG Sir (stern tone) : Vo to mai krunga hi lekin usse pahele mujhe ye batao tumhe usse problem kya hai . Aaj se phele bhi cid mai baki log aaye hai fir tumhe abhijeet se etni chid kyun hai?
Abhijeet , daya and whole team reach bureau.
ACP Pradyuman (Took a deep breaths) : Kyunki Sab apni mehnat ke dam par yahan pahunche hai sir, un logo ki aadhi umar beet jate hai padhai or training mai or aapne us ladke ko direct team ka hissa bana diya hai. Jo abhi puri tarah se adult bhi nahi hua hai.
DIG Sir (Meaningfull stone) : Pradyuman tum use Pehchnane mai dhokha kha rahe ho.
ACP Pradyuman (Hate tone) : Sir, Maine bhi apne baal koi dhup mai safed nhi kiye hai. khub janta hun abhijeet jese ladko ko aaj ager vo yahan hai to sirf apne paiso ke dam par. jarur kisi ameerzade ka beta hoga
Abhijeet (Hurt tone) : Ameer baap ka beta hona gunah hai kya Sir Acp And dig turned and shocked (to acp) Ager hannn Fir to aap apne bete se bhi nafrat hi karte honge naa.
ACP Pradyuman (Shouted) : Abhijeettt everyone got afraid (Chewing) Tumhare himmat kese hui mere bete ko bich mai lane ki.
Abhijeet (Fake smile) : khud ke bete par baat aaye to laga na aapko bura (Dreamy tone) mai bhi to kisi ka beta honga na sir.
ACP Pradyuman : Bahut shouk hai naa tumhe cid team ka hissa banne ka to thik hai (to Dig) apne mujhe 6 mahine diye the naa sir mai aapko 6 din deta hun or es bich mai ese nhi nikalunga ye khud cid chodega. dekh lena and he rush from there.
Daya (Angry tone) : Abhijeet ye kya tareeka hai acp sir se baat karne ka. senior hai vo humare. abhijeet looked down.
DIG Sir (strictly) : Abhijeet jao or Pradyuman se maafi mango..
Abhijeet (tired tone) : Par sir
DIG Sir : Behas nhi Abhijeet jao abhijeet nodded simply
Abhijeet (Whisper to himself ) : Kya jarurat thi abhi tujhe us khadoos acp se bahas krne ki..ab jakar maanan padega. hey bhagwan mere raksha karna. everyone nodded dissapointed
Abhijeet slowly Enter Acp Cabin. Acp looked at him but ignore
Abhijeet (Sad tone) : I'm sorry mujhe aapse es tarah baat nhi karne chahiye thi acp turned his face otherside and read some file
Abhijeet (pov) : Waah kya jamana aa gaya hai gussa mujhe hona chahiye tha or ulta ye ho gye hai. Dig sir ka order hai esliye manana to padega hi.
(To acp) Sir aap naraj ho acp didn't say anything Acha sir aap ek kam kariye aap mujhe maar lijiye mai kuch nhi kahunga. lekin Sir gussa thuk dijiye naa ho gye galti aage se nahi bolunga
Team and Dig Stand outside and watch
Freddy (low tone) : Sir aapko kya lagta hai acp sir maaf krenge abhijeet sir ko.
Pankaj (low tone ) : Sir mai 1 hazar rupye ki shart lgata hun acp sir abhijeet sir ko pakka dantne wale hai.
Daya (Whisper to duo) : Freddy pankaj tum dono acp sir ko jante nahi ho kya. acp sir etne gusse mai hai ki vo abhijeet ko dantna to chodo usse baat bhi nahi karenge. Chalo lagayen 2 hazar ki shart
Freddy (Low tone) : Sir mai aapse koi shart nhi lgane wala aap humesha jeet jate ho.
DIG Sir (Stern tone): chup ho jao tum sab mahaul etna serious hai or tum log yahan shart lga rahe ho. acp to abhijeet par bekar hi shaq karta rahata hai mujhe to ab tum logo par doubt hone laga hai Team looked down. (disappointed) Chalo sab log jakar apne apne kaam par lag jao yahan koi film nahi chal rahi hai . Mai bhi chalta hun everyone nodded and he leaves from there.
Inside Cabin
Abhijeet : Sirr Kuch to boliye. Mai dil se aapse maafi maang raha hun (Sad tone) mujhe aapke bete ko es tarah bech mai nhi lana chahiye tha I'm So...
ACP Pradyuman (Cut) : Mera koi beta nhi hai Abhijeet hell shocked
Abhijeet (Shocked) : fir aap
ACP Pradyuman (heavy tone) : Mera beta es duniya mai nhi raha
Abhijeet (Shocked) : I'm sorry Sir ... I'm Really Really Sorry mujhe nhi pta tha
ACP Pradyuman (closed his eyes) : Maine apne hi hatho use maar dala abhijeet didn't understand (teary tone) Apne hi hatho sab tabaah kar diya maine and tear fall from his eyes
Abhijeet (confused) : Kya matlab
ACP Pradyuman (Wipe his tear) : Kuch nahi.. he turned and see his face (worried tone) Tumhe chot aaye hai Abhijeet ...tum ek kaam karo hospital jakar checkup kara lo
Abhijeet : Sir, I'm alright
ACP Pradyuman (strictly) : Cid mai rahna hai to fit rahna hoga ab jao abhijeet nodded and leave Acp closed his eyes (To himself) Kash Maine apne bete ko us din kisi or ko naa sounpa hota to aaj shayd mera beta zinda hota and tear fall from his eyes
In Hospital
Lady (Loudly) : Aap aise kaise kah sakte hai Maine kaha na mera beta zinda hai aap log mujhse juth kyun bolte rahte hai
Doctor : Hume juth bolkar kya milega madam. Aapka beta mar chuka hai.
Lady (shouted) : juth hai ye tum sab juth bol rahe ho. Mai nahi mante.
At the same time abhijeet enter in hospital
Person : Bechare ourat roj yahan aakar apne bete ke bare mai puchte hai.
Person 2 : Lagta hai apne bete ki mout ka bahut bada sadma laga hai es ourat ko.
Abhijeet listing all this.. he confused.
Doctor (to lady) : Yahan nhi hai aapka beta humne kitni baar aapse bola hai vo mar chuka hai aap apna or humara time vaste mat kiya kijiye.
Lady (Shouted) : Mara nhi hai mera beta aap sab juth bol rhe hai. btaye kahan hai mera beta use mere jarurat hoge
Doctor (Angry tone) : Security Le jao ese yahan se.. aayenda ye ourat yahan andar nhi dikhni chahiye
The security guards come and drag the woman out of the hospital
Lady (shouted) : Chodo mujhe...mujhe mera beta chahiye maine kaha chodo mujhe..
Abhijeet came between and saves the woman from the security guard
Abhijeet (angry tone) : Kya ho raha hai yahan chodo unhe and he softly hold lady hand (to doctor) ye sab kya ho raha hai yahan.
Doctor : Ye ourat pagal ho chuki hai. Baar baar apne mare hua bete ke bare mai puchne aa jati hai hospital. (To lady) Dekhiye madam aapka beta mar chuka hai aapko accept karna hai karo nahi karna mat karo humara picha chod do bus
Lady (crying) : Juth hai ye sab tum juth bol rhe ho mai janta hun Mera beta zinda hai. Koi mere baat mane ya naa mane lekin mera dil kahta hai mera beta zinda hai (breathing fastly) z..zz.zin .da h..hai..m..me.. mera...be..ta
Abhijeet (concern tone) : Thik hai aap shant ho jayea (to all) aap sab jayea apna apna kaam kariye. mai hun inke sath
Everyone leave from there
Lady (worried tone) : Beta tumne unhe jane kyun diya vo log juth bol rhe hai mera beta mara nhi zinda hai mera beta
Abhijeet (hold her hand) : Ager aisa hai to mai aapke sath hun maa ji . hum milkar dhundenge aapke bete ko
Laday (in hope) : Tum dhundhoge mere bete ko. abhijeet nodded Vo mil jayega naa.
Abhijeet Nodded yes
Abhijeet (caring tone) : Aap ayea or bathiye yahan He makes her sit in the chair or ab btayea hua kya hai exactly
Lady (teary tone) : Delivery ke time mujhe ache se yaad hai mera beta zinda paida hua tha. uski saanse chal rahi thi vo mara hua paida nahi hua tha lekin ye sab log kahte hai maine ek mare hua bachhe ko janam diya tha. in logo ne pta nhi kahan chupya hai mere bete ko
Abhijeet (confused) : Aise kaise ho sakta hai... kab ki bat hai ye date yaad hai aapko
Lady : Hnn.. mujhe aaj bhi ache se yaad hai vo tarikh ... (After a pause) 21 december 2006 Abhijeet stunned
CID Bureau
Daya (impressed tone) : Sir aapko nhi lgta Abhijeet ne aaj jo kuch bhi kiya vo sach mai kabile tareef tha. usne pura case akele handle kiya.
ACP Pradyuman : Daya aaj jo kuch bhi hua vo ek tukka bhi ho sakta hai tumhe etni jaldi impressed hone ki jarurat nhi hai daya looked down and he nodded slowly suddenly his phone ring (on call) Kya mai abhi ata hun and he cut phone.
Daya (tensed) : Kya hua sir sab thik hai
ACP Pradyuman (Rush tone) : Daya mujhe kisi urgent kam se jana hoga.. yahan sab tum sambhal lena. and he rush from there.
In Hospital
Abhijeet (hell shocked) : Kyaa, etne saal ho gye or aap... (Took a deep breath) Mujhe lagta hai aapko vakai mai koi misunderstanding hui hogi
Lady : Nahi beta mujhe galtfehemi nahi ho sakti...(While crying) 9 mahine maine use apne kokh mai pala tha mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai uska vo rota hua chehra...vo us samay zinda tha behosh hone se pahele maine khud dekha tha use.. ye sab log juth bol rhe hai sab juth
Abhijeet (Worried tone) : Acha thik hai aap stress mt lijiye . ager apka beta sach mai zinda hai to mai apse wada karta hun vo jahan kahin bhi hoga mai use dhundh kar launga aap pls chinta na karen
Lady : Tum sach bol rahe ho naa. Tum dundhoge mere bete ko abhijeet nodded yes
Abhijeet (with smile) : Chaliye abhi mai apko ghar drop kar deta.
After Sometime they reach home..
Abhijeet (caring tone) : Ab mai chalta hun aap tension mat lena mai jaldi hi aapke bete ko aapke pass le aaunga.
Lady (with smile) : Mujhe tum par pura bharosa hai beta and she patted his cheeks chalo ab mere sath andar chalo mai tumhe aise bina khana khaye nahi Jane dungi
Abhijeet : Arre nahi Maa ji mai abhi duty hour mai hun mujhe office report karna hoga aap aaram kijiye es wakt.
Lady (stubborn tone) : Kaam baad mai bhi hota rahega abhi Mujhe kuch nahi sunna tum mere sath chal rahe ho matlab chal rahe ho chalo.
She started to go towards the house . When she turned she saw Abhijeet still standing along with the car. She signaled him to come. He nodded and silently followed instructions.
They Reach the door and both entered inside the house.
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Abhijeet (shocked) : Aappppp
Koi new story start karun duo based?? es story par mujhe response kuch khas nhi mil raha mai soch rahi hun ese chod kar daya abhijeet ki dosti par based koi new story likhun? kesa rahega?
