Angel: *translating 2 Spanish reviews with glasses from movie chapters 7 and 8* Mm...mm-hm. Uh-huh. *puts down paper* I have already gone over both topics more times than necessary. Long story short, changing Ingenium's injuries from Stain would make the second half pointless or even not exist. Even if you took Tensei out of it, there's too much personal feelings to really...ignore, I guess. And I hate Overhaul with a burning passion that I don't care what happens to him, certainly don't care enough to change him not losing his arms. And also, Momo, Kyoka, and Mina I ship with other people than with OCs, plus it's a fucking superhero anime, which does not touch upon romance that much to be a major focus. Yes, Bakuza is a big change here, but there's also too many characters to juggle that much romance, at least for me. Personally, if someone does manage to do all this, more power to them. I can't even picture doing so because clearly, it would make the story much longer than it already is *points at word count of the story* You see that number? Probably would've been three times as much if I had done any of those changes. And I would've fallen behind on this story doing that.
Honestly, at this point, readers out there, would you have liked this story better if I made all those changes I just mentioned? Because I want to move on from this topic, and I can just reiterate what people say about it anytime this comes up. Just because these changes get suggested to me because 'oh, no one's ever written them', doesn't mean it makes me any more comfortable talking about them. It just seems like this person is pushing me to do them instead of doing them on their own when my life is busy enough. Or just for the sake of it, I don't fucking know anymore. And I certainly never asked for that kind of stress, I went through similar BS with Dr. Stone and I don't need it now.
Katsuki went flying towards Eijiro and Denki. "Look out!" Eijiro screeched as he and Denki jumped backwards to avoid it. Katsuki then crashed in front of them.
"That dude's controlling him!" Denki gritted his teeth as they were stuck. "What are we supposed to do about it?"
"You're asking me?" Eijiro asked in disbelief, since he was definitely not smart like Tenya or Momo. Red yarn wrapped around Denki's leg.
"Not good!" He cried out as he was then held by the arm.
"Yeah!" Eijiro gritted his teeth while he had been held by the waist. He struggled to break free, but it was a tight hold.
"Make your choice," Eijiro glared up at Mummy. "You can give up and willingly become my puppet...or I could use your friend to defeat you!"
"...Stop screwing around!" Katsuki suddenly yelled, holding up his right arm. A big explosion came from him, causing Denki and Eijiro to fly back. Mummy braced himself and gasped as his yarn fell around him while on fire. Katsuki was pissed as he looked towards Mummy while the smoke cleared away, attempting to recollect himself. "Mummy bastard! Don't underestimate me!"
The villain took a quick look to see that Katsuki's right gauntlet was completely gone. He sacrificed his own gear! He immediately swung more of his yarn towards Katsuki. He exploded it off and then moved his arm along another piece of yarn near him to burn it off. He let out a yell as Mummy jumped back, Katsuki using his Quirk to fly forward. The villain then panicked and got out a knife, swinging forward. Katsuki noticed it and moved to the side, landing on a broken wall. He used it to vault towards Mummy and then knocked him into a wooden fence.
"Got a lot of sweat stored up, you know!" He grinned widely while activating his remaining gauntlet. "And you get a maximum blast!" His gauntlet then powered up. "DIE!" He let out a huge explosion, sending Mummy flying as he couldn't move. A large fire surrounded him as his bandages completely disappeared. The objects he used went back to normal and landed on the road. Eijiro and Denki braced themselves from the wind, looking at what he did.
"Whoa, nice one, Bakugo!" Eijiro complimented while the building nearby was still standing.
"He kept collateral damage to a minimum too!" Denki looked proud of him.
"There you are!" Momo ran over to the boys, followed by Kyoka.
"You good?" She asked the three while Katsuki looked at the villain.
"Yeah," Katsuki moved his head a little. "That was too easy." He had to sacrifice a gauntlet, but he knew he would be perfectly fine with or without it.
"Are the islanders okay?" Eijiro turned to the girls in concern.
"Yes, we evacuated them to the western district," Momo informed before they heard an explosion, and they looked up. Katsuki was already flying away from them.
"Wait, where are you going?!" Kyoka shouted up to the boy.
"I'll leave the rescuing to you!" He then used his Quirk to pick up speed. "I'm gonna go crush the other villains," He gritted his teeth. If that villain was operating like that...then there's no doubt the others are the same. And that means...she won't last long He looked a little panicked while thinking of Izuka. She wasn't weak, but she certainly could get seriously injured if she was facing a villain much stronger. And he had no doubt that she, and Izuku for that matter, were doing just that. Damn these villains and damn her for making me think about it! He definitely didn't want to imagine what was happening to her...
Chimera growled while punching at Shoto's ice attack, causing it to break into pieces. He braced himself from the strong wind and cold, looking up in shock. Chimera was heading straight for him, and then Hanta used his tape to pull his classmate away. Chimera landed in the sand with a grunt.
"Damn it! He's holding us back with raw power!" Shoto looked up at the smoke in disbelief. He had never seen anyone do that before...
"Ida, any ideas?" Hanta wondered while people were still being evacuated behind the four.
"All we should be thinking about right now is how to keep this monster occupied," Tenya declared while Ochaco floated the injured Mashirao and Rikido to safety. Tsuyu and Koji were helping out too, but with how many people were on the beach, it was hard to get them out. "And buy time for the evacuation." Tsuyu flung her tongue to grab a little boy and pull him closer to the forest.
Chimera made the smoke clear with his fist, leaping towards the four. "BLACK ABYSS!" Fumikage screamed as Dark Shadow surrounded his body. The entity's hands reached out to the villain.
"Recipro...Burst!" Tenya swung his leg to hit a rock, sending the pieces flying towards the villain.
Chimera held up his leg, and stomped the sand in front of him. He sent a tornado of it towards the attacks, negating them completely. Tenya and Fumikage gasped sharply at how powerful and fast Chimera was.
"Not putting up much of a fight, heroes!" Chimera mocked while running towards them.
Shoto held out his left arm, a flame appearing to attack the villain. Chimera then opened his mouth, releasing a flood of fire, and it was much bigger to null out Shoto's. It headed towards him and he flinched, putting up an ice wall near the citizens. They all braced themselves from the intense temperatures, Mezo holding up his duplicate arms to shield them.
Ah...we can't keep this up forever Tenya glanced back at the citizens. Chimera could counteract anything at this point...no matter what they did, he would be able to stop it in record time...
Izuku braced himself while gritting his teeth. Delaware Smash...Air Force!
Izuka powered up her shooting star attack into her hands. Solar Star Gust!
Izuku's glove opened up while Izuka's hands glowed. Both of them fired at the same time, but Nine held up his big air shield. Izuka's two stars exploded into multiple ones. Both attacks got absorbed into it, and they kept firing, but it was the same result. "Weaponized blasts of air and a stored up queue of the stars," He murmured while assessing their Quirks. "Interesting uses of your Quirks."
The two then ran off in opposite directions to keep attacking. Nine held up another shield from his other hand to combat Izuka's attacks.
We can't let that guy get close to Katsuma or Mahoro! We've gotta keep him distracted!
Izuka eyed their opponent, gritting her teeth. I can't believe he's able to fend us off like this. I hope we can buy enough time so that Mahoro and Katsuma are far away from him!
Suddenly, a wave of yellow hit their feet, causing them to gasp as they were sent flying backwards in opposite directions. Nine shot off his lasers and Izuku kneeled in the air to avoid them. He moved his leg to avoid another one, only for one to hit his cheek. Blood came flying from it as Izuka gasped sharply. Nine then held out his other hand to shoot off more lasers at her before she had time to react. She curled up into a ball and then leaped backwards in an arc to avoid the lasers. As she faced Nine, a laser managed to hit her in the shoulder where her scar was, ripping off part of her top. The laser hit the middle of the scar, blood flying from it as she grunted in pain.
This time, it was a gust of wind! Izuku looked towards the villain wide-eyed. How many powers does this maniac have?! Izuku slid to a hard stop, smoke coming from him. Izuka landed safely behind Nine, who sensed her presence, so she wasn't going to be able to sneak an attack on him. We don't know what else he can do. Better to attack and find out than stay in the dark! He gritted his teeth while powering up. Izuka did the same, only with fire and ice appearing instead of her normal attack. She was on the same page as she didn't have to look to know what he was thinking. One for All...Full Cowling, 20 percent!
Solar Power! Fire and ice surrounded her arms and body completely. Nine examined Izuku with his eyes, glancing over to Izuka briefly.
"His strength suddenly increased...and she suddenly boosted her own abilities," He murmured as the two jumped forward.
With all the power we can use right now... Both of them thought in unison while Izuku jumped up, swinging back his leg. Izuka ran up while doing a quick twirl, flinging an arm up.
Saint Louis Smash!
Mercury Blast!
Both of them attacked, an explosion of fire and ice coming from their area. A huge gust of wind surrounded the smoke, as the flurry from the ice appeared, and fire flew around the tornado. Several trees went flying...as their attacks did nothing. Nine's shield was enough to embrace the impacts, much to their disbelief.
20 percent...isn't enough?!
Is this guy fire-proof?! She looked at Nine wide-eyed as there wasn't a SINGLE scratch on him. Even though her power could definitely break it.
"Interesting...these Quirks..." Nine reached out his other hand to grab Izuku by the face, dropping the shields completely. "I think they're worth stealing!"
"NO! IZUKU!" Izuka screamed as she launched forward, but Nine swung his arm back hard into her face. She winced as she was sent back flying hard into a tree, a snap being heard from her back landing roughly. The girl groaned as she was shaking, as her spine felt like it snapped in half so she couldn't get up or move much now. Blood was also coming from her nose. Green energy swirled around Izuku and Nine.
Izuku grunted as he couldn't get Nine to release him. He wants to steal it? Is that what he said?! So he does have the same ability as All for One...and he's going to use it on me!
Nine narrowed his eyes at the boy, and he sensed the other wielders of One for All. A gust of wind attacked, causing him to let go of Izuku thankfully. He landed near Izuka, whose face was planted into the dirt.
"I can't take it. No..." Nine looked down at his hands. "I don't have enough space for all of them. Or her own either," He glanced towards Izuka, knowing that he'd probably get the same result if he tried to steal hers. "Something is off..." Izuku couldn't stop shaking either. "It seems like these kids might have more than one Quirk as well..."
Come on, body...get up and fight! Izuku gritted his teeth, glancing at his sister and gasping. He could see her hands twitching as she was trying to move as well.
Stupid villain...come on, Izuka! You can't quit now! Is that what Katsuki would do?
He stared at the twins, now finding them a threat to his power. And he couldn't have that. "Their very existence is a miracle. Which means..." He held out his hands to the both of them. "I must eliminate them."
He used his air walls to send both of them crashing into grass. They gritted their teeth in pain as they even created holes in the ground from the impact. He pushed us with the wall of air...? He couldn't believe that Nine was capable of this...
"Oh no, look!"
The two gasped sharply at a familiar voice, looking up to see Mahoro and Katsuma. They looked down at the twins wide-eyed as they had heard the impact. "It's Mr. Deku and Ms. Callista!" Both of them ran down the small hill in concern.
"No...get out of here," Izuku murmured in pain as he tried slowly to get up.
"Don't worry about us, he'll get a hold of you if you stay here," Izuka grunted as her back was throbbing in pain, but she managed to sit up.
"But you..." Mahoro approached them both carefully.
"We're fine, just go!" Izuku instructed while Nine was heading their way. "He's after the two of you..." He slowly got onto his feet. Izuka managed to lift herself up using a flying star. "We can't let him-" A laser shot through his back from Nine, and then the same thing happened to Izuka's legs, causing her to fall to the ground. Mahoro and Katsuma watched in despair as the two fell backwards.
"Mr. Deku! Ms. Callista!" Mahoro screamed as they could barely stand now. They kneeled while bearing the pain, the kids looking at them with dread.
"Hurry...run!" Izuku signaled for them to go.
"He'll hurt you guys!" Katsuma looked at them in worry.
"I'm not having you go through this...if it means you'll survive..." Izuka coughed out some blood, and both of them didn't face the kids. They didn't want to see them like this...
Mahoro whimpered as she knew that the twins wouldn't be able to go on like this, and she couldn't watch it either. Nine approached the kids in silence. "No! We need help!" He reached out his hand towards them. "PLEASE!" She cried out while creating a big illusion of Izuku and Izuka. It was so big that other citizens and the evacuation team from the beach saw it.
"What are those...?" Mezo murmured in confusion as they stared.
"Deku and Mido...?" Ochaco blinked at the illusions. "Um..."
"SOMEBODY PLEASE! YOU HAVE TO PROTECT DEKU AND CALLISTAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Mahoro screamed as loud as she could...
