PS: It has been Such a long time since ive made a story for All of my Loyale fans or maybe ur not so loyal i dont know But if Any of u are still arounde then im suiper Diaper happy and it would Rely make my day anyways so PPS:

PPS: anywheis So I have herd about new game callewd Dragon age where guys fight wit swords and stuff and fight mosters isnt that a cool ideaa? but i hear peple dont really like the New one APARENTLY (BUT I ONLY HEARED THIS FROM HERESAY SO PLEASE PUT DOWN UR PITFORKS BEFOR YOU SCEWUR ME DONT MEAN ANY OFENSES IT IS ONLY WHAT I HEARED!)anyway i Never seed this game but my frend played it once and i think 'game about dragons sounds funny' and may be I Buoy it for my son

'I have heared About the dragons. Their evil'

Jack Thompson- night of tkingdom ricoceheted with Rage ass he stared at his Bludy hand. He wasd strong becase Ever sinse he was a Baby hed trayined with him sword Escalbiur hed find in the gutter outside his house one day on a rainy day and he thinked it cool. anyway 3 goblins came runing and he kiled them with his sword but then anohter goblin came by escept it was a troll. "SHITE!" Jack Thompson- backfliped out of the. way But then the troll threw milions of littke rocks "ROAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR!" but Jack Thompson-do like Neo in The Matrix and time slowed down and he Doged them all but did a somersault sord slish through the big ugly Troll. "...No tim for you Im on a mission u stinking troll!""

deeper in the Area was a evil Wizrad.

Jack Thompson- said "So your the one making all the bad Huh?"

"No"

"WHAT!"

KKKKKKKKZRAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP sodennly a bunch of Litning bolts made out of... BLOOOOOd come flying out of him handx toward JackThompson- who cant dodge and then the wWizard begin to laugh. "Hahahahaha did you REALY think you... YOU OFF ALL PEOPLES... could face the dark wizard Evrol and come out of it alifve? ludacris fool i Will stop you into the dirty."

Jack Thompson- yells at Egrol

"Your magic dont work on me fool." and then he kills the wizrad with frontflip attack.

CHAPTER 1 END

NEXT TIMEON DRAGON AGE

Jack Thompson- continue his mission.

PS: i Have been practising my writeing again... In fact... going to teach how to spel and writing storys... huuuh... i have Came far