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now please note I am new to writing fanfiction
and spoiler warning to anyone who has not seen Ben 10 or Max Steel the 2013 version or Sym Bionic Titan or Invincible
chapter 1 just the beginning
Maxwell McGrath or as he likes to be called Max McGrath is a young man of 16 Max is a tall, skinny teenager with an athletic body type. He has brown chestnut hair and blue eyes. Max wears what looks like normal teenage clothes, consisting of a blue jacket a white watch, black jeans and white shoes
Max recently moved to copper canyon and started his sophomore year at Copper Canyon High School
Copper Canyon is a town and canyon that is located in the United States. Copper Canyon is a half city and half canyon. Copper Canyon is located near the Pacific Ocean
everyone thinks max is just a regular Human teenager what no one knows is that Max McGrath son of Molly and the late Jim McGrath is actually Max Steel Earth's newest superhero Max's father Jim McGrath was a brilliant scientist he helped founded the secret organization known as N-Tek a very secret
organization that works to solve the big problems global warming alternative fuel sources and N-Tek also helps protect the Earth from threats like alien Invaders they also sometimes help the other heroes of the world Max works with N-Tek years ago during one of Jim's experiments there was an accident at N-Tek and Jim did not survive but long before Jim perished Jim has found a way to create a powerful energy known as turbo energy that same energy was involved in the accident that took Jim's life Max was just a baby at the time so he never knew his father and thanks to that accident Max was exposed to Turbo energy as a baby and now Max generates Turbo energy
thanks to Turbo energy Max has access to special powers but Max's powers are unstable so max can't control his powers and bad things can happen if Max's Turbo energy goes out of control but thanks to the help of a very special partner of his Max is able to control his Turbo energy powers and uses those powers for the greater good he is known as the hero Max Steel N-Tek has access to very advanced technology N-Tek technology is more advanced than what the military has access too N-Tek is probably more advanced than all the other known organizations on Earth combined the only known organization that might have technology as advanced as N-Tek is the Global Defense Agency or for short the GDA the GDA helps protect the world from any threat whether it be human alien or otherwise
the GDA also works with superheroes like the mighty Omni man the world's most powerful hero to help protect the Earth the GDA also supports the world's number one superhero team the Guardians of the globe who Max idealizes Max knows about the GDA thanks to his uncle Forge Ferrus who is Commander in Chief of N-Tek the GDA director is known as Cecil Stedman and even though Forge doesn't exactly get along with Cecil for his own reasons when it comes down to it Forge and Cecil will put aside their differences to help protect the earth and it's people
today at Max School Copper Canyon High School outside the school Max and the other students were preparing to go home thanks to a robot attack that happened at the school the students were allowed to go home early the strangest thing about this attack besides the fact the school was attacked by robots was that the robots were after Butch
one of the school's bullies Butch who's real name is Bartholomew is a bulky student with an athletic body type and same stature as Max. He has brown hair with a pompadour, brown eyes and uses golden earrings. He wears a yellow polo shirt with the numbers "89" in white in the right part of his chest, and wears blue jeans and white shoes.
Butch has it out for Max ever since the first day of school max will never forget that day but now it's time to focus on today the only reason why the robots must have been after Butch is because whoever commands the robots must think he is Max Steel recently Max along with his partner has been let's say not keeping a low profile posing for pictures and appearing on the news Forge warned Max and his partner unwanted attention attracts unwanted trouble Max hates to admit it but his uncle May have been right because now everyone could be in danger recently there was a fire at Copper Canyon High School Max went in as himself and not as Max Steel and saved his girlfriend Sydney Gardner and Butch who were in the School at the time everyone thought Butch saved Sydney after saving Butch and Sydney Max left and no one saw him Butch took the credit for saving Sydney making everyone think he is a hero and during the robot attack everyone was knocked out thanks to a knockout gas that was released from a bomb under a table in the cafeteria where Max Butch and Sydney were sitting everyone was knocked out except for Max thanks to his superhero suit otherwise known as the steel suit a full body armor that takes form of close-fitting black-white-blue suit. Max changed into the steel suit before the Knockout gas could knock him out The suit is designated to help Steel Max's alien partner harvest Max's T.U.R.B.O Energy as well as create a field that can mask Max's T.U.R.B.O Energy to a certain extent so nobody can track Max's Turbo energy the robots came for Butch and would have took him if it wasn't for Max saving him but since everyone was knocked out no one saw Max so when everyone woke up they saw Butch laying on Destroy robot parts and assumed he saved the day again now whoever commands the robots will definitely think Butch is Max Steel putting Max his friends and all the other students on the bus in danger Max tried to warn Butch but he didn't listen
Butch Thanks Max is jealous because he's hailed as a hero and Butch thanks Max is worried about him stealing his girlfriend Sydney from him whether that's true or not Max has bigger issues right now everyone could be in danger with Butch on the bus
Max takes a empty bus seat there is no one sitting beside Max man the dumb glaute won't listen said max
I run a complete diagnostic on this bus and there's nothing out of the ordinary said a voice only Max could hear this voice belong to Steel who is Max's partner Steel is a bio robotic alien life form that's known as a Ultralink
Max and Steel are ultralinked as a ultralink Steel is designed to absorb
and control the energy of his host
steel helps Max Control his turbo energy Max generates the power steel has the the alien Tech to control it together the Duo can take on awesome Turbo Modes they take on the bad guys and Save the world just max and steel doing hero stuff together they are Max Steel so far they only have 2
Turbo Modes at least for now
because of their bond Max and steel have a mind link of sorts unfortunately because of their bond this means they are stuck with each other forever but they need each other without Steel Max has no access to his Turbo Modes and has no control over his Turbo energy they can only be apart for 8 hours if Max overloads he could explode like a bomb destroying himself and anyone else nearby and without Max's turbo energy steel will shut down permanently and in order for steel to get energy from Max and in order for Max to access all his powers and not explode Steel must link to Max's chest fortunately when Steel links up with Max no one can see that he is there and fortunately Max and steel have become best friends unfortunately when Max talks to steel Max sometimes fails to realize it looks like he's talking to himself because of this people who hear and see Max think he is actually talking to himself and just being weird but Max has bigger problems to worry about in his life the life of a superhero is not a easy life
Steel and Max are almost always together during the day and they are together at night as well so max doesn't have to worry about exploding and steel doesn't have to worry about shutting down permanently
Steel did know Max's father and his uncle Forge and Steel knows Max's mother Molly they all go way back but ever since the accident happened Steel was thought to be gone forever until recently Max will never forget the day he met Steel but that's a story for another day
right now Max sighs in relief after hearing what steel said
yeah you know maybe as long as we keep moving well be okay
meanwhile on another part of the bus two male students who are sitting next to each other are having a conversation
both are either 16 or 17
so what do you think about that new superhero Max Steel said the male student with the brown hair he is wearing a light red shirt and blue jeans this is William Clockwell a regular High School student
William is talking to his best friend a young man who's about the same age as him and wears a yellow collared shirt but he also wears a striped dark blue sweater on top of that yellow collared shirt this young man also has beige pants this Young man has brown eyes and black hair his name is Mark Grayson and he is the son of the world's most powerful hero Omni man of course no one knows he is the son of the world's most powerful hero
well they certainly made quite the debut defeating a villain who gave even the Guardians of the globe trouble and remember that giant blue explosion in the sky said Mark
yeah that was quite the light show said William
yeah agreed mark
Max Steels no Omni man but I bet they will do well on their own and if they join a team even better who knows maybe Max Steel will join the Guardians of the globe said Mark
yeah maybe agreed William
William realized something hey I realized you said they said William
Remember the Little Robot guy name Steel said Mark
oh right I keep forgetting Max Steel is a Duo said William
as William and Mark continue their conversation on another part of the bus two young ladies who are also sitting next to each other are also having a conversation
one of the Young ladies has red hair and green eyes her name is Samantha Eve Wilkins but she just likes to be called Eve what no one knows is that she has special gifts and right now she can't believe what she just heard her friend say
I'm sorry can you repeat that said Eve
I said do you think Butch could be Max Steel or maybe he could be some other superhero
said Eve's friend
Eve laughed
you seriously think Butch could be Max Steel or any other superhero said Eve
yeah I mean he did save the day twice already said Eve's friend
please there's no way Butch is any superhero we don't know what really happened said eve
even if you were there you would have been knocked out like the rest of us but you weren't there said Eve's friend
I didn't feel like eating the cafeteria food today for lunch said Eve
what Eve's friend didn't know was that Eve was lying she had something super important to do during lunch but she couldn't tell her friend what it is but Eve did have to use her gifts to get what she needed to do done
what are you guys talking about said an African-American girl who is wearing a three colored shirt that had light green red and pink on it she also had white pants she also had earrings and she was wearing two kinds of different necklaces she is in the bus seat behind Eve and her friend
I think Butch could maybe be Max Steel or some other superhero Amber said Eve's friend
Amber laughed okay I admit maybe he saved Sydney when the school was on fire but we don't know what really happened while we were all knocked out maybe those robots malfunction and I admit maybe you could be right I mean I don't think anyone would expect a bully to be a superhero but again we don't know what really happened said Amber
I bet you guys next time there's trouble and we are all awake to see it Butch will get totally scared and will not end up saving the day said Eve
Eve's friend said the losers have to give whoever wins 20 bucks
I'll take Eve's side on this one I'll take a chance here said Amber who was willing to bet Butch would not save the day
Eve's friend said yes with money I'll make from winning this bet and the money I'll get from my job this week I'll enough money to get this cute dress I saw in the mall last week
Eve said you better be ready to pay me and Amber both 20 bucks when you lose
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while Eve Amber and Eve's friend continue there conversation
Butch continued to brag to Sydney who he was sitting next too on the bus about how he defeated the robots even though he knows he really didn't save Sydney when the school was on fire or defeat the robots
Sydney Gardner Max McGrath's girlfriend has brown eyes and blonde hair with a ponytail and bangs. She is a skinny student and almosts has the same stature as Max.
Sydney has two different necklaces on her one decorated with white balls and the other being brown with a pendant, she has on a white shirt over a green t-shirt, two braceletes in each arm, blue jeans, and white shoes.
and I was like take that metal heads said Butch but Sydney like Eve didn't believe Butch beat the robots maybe he saved her when the school was on fire but she seriously doubt he beat those robots but there was nothing she could do to prove it
back with Max and steel
so far so good said max
don't jinx it said Steel
suddenly the Bridge leading to another part of the Copper Canyon that the school bus was supposed to cross exploded the bridge was destroyed seeing this the bus driver tried to stop the bus fast so everyone would live unfortunately the bus driver did not stop the bus fast enough and the bus was about to fall off the edge of the destroyed Bridge the students screamed fearing this was the end
what no one saw is that someone with superhuman strength appeared behind the bus and stop the bus from falling off the edge of destroyed Bridge that person pulled the bus back it was over the students thought they were safe
they were wrong the same person who saved the bus grab the front bus window and ripped it off and came through the destroyed window to everyone shocked especially Max and steel it was a tall man in a high-tech black battle suit with a few blotches with red in it
this was Miles Dread one of the co-founders N-Tek and Max and Steels arch enemy former friend of Jim and Molly McGrath Max's parents and former friend of his uncle Ferris Dread is a brilliant scientist he was able to build a device that could store turbo energy so Dread could use it for his own purposes he used that same device which caused the accident which took Jim McGrath's life Max knows this Dread told Max himself Max will never forget when dread told Max the story of how he became who is today but right now Max needs to focus he knows this but that doesn't change the fact that he is still shocked that Dread is alive he thought he finished him last time for good
Max and steel say at the same time Dread
Dread turns to the bus driver who passes out after seeing the villain and who could blame him dread is known as one of the world's most dangerous villains on his debut day which was on the same day as Max Steel's debut dread by himself gave the Guardians of the globe the world's greatest superhero team trouble
hello Kiddies said Dread who starts to walk on the bus
Eve couldn't believe this one of the world's most dangerous villains is on her school bus and there's nothing she can do she knows she can do something because what no one on this bus knows is that she is the superhero Atom Eve
she has the power to manipulate molecules she can create constructs and fly and do other amazing things but right now she's never felt more powerless
Eve knows if she does anything right now her identity will be exposed not just to the other students but to a super villain her friends and family would be in great Danger and then there's the fact Eve doesn't even know if she can defeat dread he went Toe to Toe with the Guardians of the globe all by himself she will never forget that day when she saw it on television maybe she can at least buy time for the other students to escape and buy time for other Heroes to show up right now she might not have a choice she can't let this monster hurt her classmates
with Mark Mark wished he had his dad's Powers right now everyone's in danger and he can't do anything what no one on this bus knows is that Mark is the son of the viltrumite superhero Omni man viltrumites are race of aliens that look just like humans but have amazing powers and his father is one of them he came to this planet to protect the earth and it's people from threats even though he is the son of omni man Mark has yet to unlock his powers he's only half viltrumite the other half is human he gets that from his mom so there's only like a 50% chance he'll get his dad's powers but right now Mark wishes he had them or better yet if only his dad was here
if anyone tries to call for help it will be the last thing you do said dread none of the students tried calling for help using their phones fearing what the villain will do to them if they try
back with Max no way dread but dreads dead said max
if so he looks remarkably well said steel who was only joking to hide his fear just like his partner steel can't believe dread is alive
it's over come quietly and I'll allow your classmates to live said dread
Max turns to look at his classmates who are all afraid Max gets up from his bus seat he doesn't like it but maybe if he does give into dreads demands he will keep his word and spare his classmates last time Max had his Steel suit on dread couldn't see what Max looks like but now it sounds like Dread figured out what Max looks like without his Steel suit on
but to Max shock and confusion dread walked past him and was heading over to Butch Max put all the pieces together the fire at the school and the robot attack it was all dread in an attempt to find out Max Steel's true identity but because Butch was the one being held as a hero especially after defeating those robots dread must think Butch is Max Steel
dread approaches Butch
you've lost Butch said dread
Butch who looks scared is now also confused
dread laughed a little
you do remember these don't you said dread who believed Butch was Max Steel dread was referring to the energy siphons on the Palms of his hands that are part of his battle suit just like the siphon that is infused permanently to his body thanks to the accident at N-Tek the siphons on the Palms of his hands also absorb turbo energy turning it into negative turbo energy which unlike Max Steel's turbo energy which is blue dreads negative turbo energy is red
dread grabs Butch by the head putting his left hand on the left side of Butch's head and the right hand on the right side of Butch's head in an attempt to absorb turbo energy from Butch
Butch screamed fearing the villain was about to end his life
but to dreads confusion and anger he was not absorbing any turbo energy from Butch dread in anger contacted his evil Lackey Jason Naught through the communication system in his suit
Naught is a tall and slender adult man who has black hair and is wearing a businessman suit with a red tie and a pocket to put his red hanky in and thanks to working with Dread for all these years Naught has special abilities that normal humans don't and he was just enjoying eating a sandwich while looking at his phone with his feet resting on one of the computers of dreads evil lair
until suddenly
he heard his evil master call for him in anger
Naught what is this you said you found him said dread who in anger picked up Butch by the head
Naught dropped his sandwich and nearly dropped his phone lucky for him he caught it
Naught said to his evil master I did that is him that's Max
Butch heard what Naught said and said to dread did you say Max that's Max right over there Max McGrath Butch pointed to Max and Dread turned to look at Max and realized what Butch said
McGrath said dread who dropped Butch and went directly to Max and looked at Max and continued speaking as in Jim and Molly McGrath former N-Tek agents pioneers of Turbo energy
dread was starting to put all the pieces together and dread laughed a little how could you have been so blind Naught said dread
back at dreads evil lair Naught was scratching his head in confusion not getting what his master was saying
it's obvious said dread
yes you do look like your father said dread to Max dread could see the resemblance between Jim and Max and Max has been looking at dread with an angry face since dread turned to look at him and is still looking at the villain with an angry face even though the villain is right in his face
dread continued speaking oh little Max McGrath or should I say Max Steel to see if he was right or not dread knocked max out of the bus with a swing of his arm Max was knocked out of the bus and knock straight into copper Canyons Canyon and was falling to his death
everyone was shocked and horrified even Butch he didn't like Max but he didn't want to see him dead
Max siad Sydney who feared her boyfriend was dead
with Mark he really wished he had his dad's Powers right now so he could stop this villain he didn't know Max but Max had a life and everyone deserves to live their life
with Eve if anyone was looking at her they would have noticed a little bit of pink energy starting to generate in Eve's hands Eve was horrified and angry to see what dread did to Max she didn't know Max but Eve couldn't stand back to see people get hurt or die this was it she was about to reveal herself in order to try to stop this villain she couldn't let him get away with this and she definitely wasn't about to let him do the same thing he did to Max to the rest of her classmates
or not said dread who look like he was about to leave but who really knows he could just be getting out of the bus so he can knock the bus off the cliff with the rest of the students in it that was until dreads stopped after hearing a familiar voice
Dread said the familiar voice
dread along with everyone in the bus look to see it was the superhero Max Steel in one of his Turbo Modes it was turbo flight mode turbo flight mode like all his other Turbo modes is mainly white and it also has the colors blue and black in different areas all of Max Steel's Turbo Modes the ones he shown so far looks similar in color but look different in the looks Department this mode has wings that allow Max to fly at great speeds and fly at Great Heights in this Turbo mode according to steel Max so far can fly up to 800 miles per hour and Max Steel was coming out of the same Direction Where Max McGrath was was meeting his end coincidence dread thinks not this just confirms it Max McGrath is Max Steel
Sydney was shock was the villain right is her boyfriend Max Steel
would you care to step outside said Max in heroic banter
dread replied to the hero in villain banter by all Means
dread punched a hole through the roof of the bus and jumped through the hole it's no surprise by now thanks to his suit and thanks to the Turbo energy that powers dreads suit which dread stole from Max gives dread superhuman abilities that same energy also keep dread alive otherwise he'll die
dread landed on the roof of the bus
with Eve she was glad Max Steel was here true it means the villain was right about Max being Max Steel but at least her identity is safe Max identity not so much and Eve knows everyone's not safe yet Max Steel still needs to beat dread and if it looks like he's not going to be able to defeat dread and if no other Heroes show up Eve knows she still might have to step in
with Mark he was glad Max was alive true this means his identity is revealed but at least he's alive Mark realized this was his chance to call his dad if he's not doing anything and he was about to get his phone but then he remembered he forgot his phone at home and William got his phone confiscated in class earlier today for using it during class looks like it's all up to Max Steel now to save them all Mark only hopes the new hero can step up to the challenge again and defeat dread
I thought we settled this said Max who flew at dread Max managed to get a grip on the villain and flew him into the air dread struggled a little
remember when I overloaded you with turbo energy and you exploded into a zillion pieces said max
Max charged his fist with turbo energy and struck dread knocking him into the sky a little Max flew below dread picking up the whole villain's body above himself in midair
but hey if you want to Repeat Performance no prob said max who threw the villain at one of the mini Rock formations Max then flew at dread to attack again
but dread caught both Max's fist and the two were locked in a brawler lock and while turbo flight mode does give Max some level of super strength the level of strength Max gets from flight mode is not enough for Max to overpower dread in a brawler lock but he did manage to push dread back a little
there'll be no repeating what happened last time said dread who used his Superior strength to overpowered Max and knocked him toward the bus
Max recovered quick and looked up he could see dread flying towards him by using his negative turbo energy by firing it out of his hands down so in a way he could fly
I've made some modifications to my battle suit now there's no such thing as too much turbo energy said dread
the mouth area of dreads battle armor opened to reveal another Energy absorber just like the Energy Siphon device infused into dreads chest and the energy absorbers in dreads hands the one in his mouth area also helps dread absorb Max Steel's turbo energy
and dread just used the energy absorber in his mouth area and the ones in his hands and the Energy Siphon infused in his chest all at the same time draining a lot of Turbo energy from max weakening him
yes siad Dread who after absorbing so much trouble energy transformed he became bigger and glowed more and the plates of his black armor expanded and partially covered his body this form is Miles dreads turbo energy mode in this form dread is far more powerful in every way the last time Max faced him in this form he barely won and that was when he had the help of the Guardians of the globe and the GDA and N-Tek and Max only won because he overloaded dread with Turbo energy but according to dread that's not going to work this time
Dread then picked up Max and flew into the air this time dread flew into the air using the jet boots in his feet dread put Max over him and through Max to the ground creating a mini crater
before Max could recover dread flew down he quickly picked up Max again and flew into the air again max retaliated by giving dread a upward punch to the chin unfortunately that barely got a reaction out of dread and he retaliated by hitting Max on the head knocking him back to the ground Max landed back in the mini crater but the crater became bigger and deeper because of Max being knocked back into it
I can handle all that you have and more said dread who flew down quick before Max could recover dread grabbed Max by the leg and started slamming Max into the ground first dread slammed max into the left side of the crater and then the right dread let go of Max's leg Max was starting to get up but dread started draining Max's Turbo energy again using one of his hand energy drainers making Max weaker and Dread was about to continue draining more Turbo energy from Max
until Sydney stepped out of the bus and bravely went to dread and said let him go
Dread turn to see Sydney and said hmm this kitten's Got Claws said dread who was not even a little bit intimidated by the weak normal teenage girl
dread shot a energy blast near her knocking her to the ground Sydney screamed
no siad Max who was watching from the crater he was too weak at the moment to stop dread
dread who now has his focus on Sydney said you want to be brave little girl let me tell you something the brave are the first to die
dread started powering up energy in his hands he was about to unleash a attack on the poor defenseless girl
everyone on the bus who was watching the battle feared what was about to happen to Sydney Eve could see Max Steel was not likely going to be able to save Sydney because he was too weak from dread draining too much of his energy Eve was about to step in
no screamed Max who feared his girlfriend was about to meet her end
dread fired his negative turbo energy blast at Sydney who feared this might be the end of her life and closed her eyes
but the blast never came Sydney open her eyes and to her shock and to Max and steels shock and to everyone's shock including dreads
someone shielded Sydney from the blast whoever this hero was he did not look like a human whoever it is was at least 6 or 7 feet tall
His body is overall indigo, with several dark lines and spots. His hands and face are magenta, and he also sports six magenta crystals on his back, two on his chest, and one on the top of his head that resembles a horn
his face consists of a mouth and one large green eye at the center and he had what look like a badge on his chest the colors of the badge were black and green and the shape of the badge was circular and the symbol of the badge look a hourglass
who are you siad Sydney to the never before seen hero who Sydney could have sworn was glowing and was rainbow colored just a moment ago before turning back to his natural color
the new hero turned to Sydney and said names Chromastone Miss said the new hero who identified himself as chromosome
are you okay asked Chromastone
yes thank you for saving me said Sydney
but you won't be okay said dread
I don't know who or what you are but you just made your final mistake said dread
dread started to generate more energy so he could unleash another blast only this one would be a lot more powerful then the last one was dread fires the more powerful attack at the new hero dread assumes this new hero has decent enough super durability to take a not too powerful energy blast
but dread believes the amount of energy he's put into this blast should be more than enough to finish this new hero and make this new hero regret stopping his last attack from hitting his attended Target
the more powerful energy blast hits Chromastone
no siad Max fearing the worst but to everyone's shock
the more powerful negative Turbo energy attack did nothing to Chromastone the attack Just disappeared and chromostome
started glowing and turned rainbow colored again
dread tried attacking chromastone again
and again with his energy attacks but none of them seem to work on this new hero
dread stopped attacking and came to a conclusion
you're absorbing my energy aren't you said dread
Chromastone said yep thanks for the juice
dread said absorbing energy is my thing
Chromastone siad pretty sure you can't sue me for having the same power as you
how about we take this to court joked Chromastone
Chromastone blasted dread with his own energy attack from his horn Crystal because it was not turbo energy dread could not absorb the attack and because he did not know the new hero could shoot his own energy attack dread was taken by surprise and he was blasted straight into the wall of the canyon forming a hole dread got out of the hole and started flying back to the battlefield and said if I can't hurt you with my energy I will just tear you apart with my bare hands
come on new guy let's take him together said Max to chromastone
Max was finally able to recover from dread taking so much of his Turbo energy and was about to attack dread
no Max he'll only get stronger said Steel
Max stopped his attack
we need a new strategy said Steel
you're mine now Max Steel said dread who kicked Max Max was sent back and would have hit the bus if not for Chromastone stopping him from hitting the bus by catching him
thanks said max
don't mention it said chromastone
as for you said dread to Chromastone
I'm going to make sure you regret being a hero siad Dread
Chromastone got in front of Max and started charging his energy Chromastone fired a huge Blast from his horn Crystal
but this time dread was prepared and put his arms up to Shield himself he was pushed back a bit and chromastone did not stop firing he just kept firing energy from his horn Crystal and kept adding more energy to the energy blast attack which made the energy blast attack bigger but at best he was just slowing dread down dread just kept pushing through the blast taking it and slowly moving
towards his opponents
any ideas on how to take this guy down my energy is going to run out soon said chromastone
Max said I'm open to suggestions
if he can't get in close he can't power up siad Steel
what do you say Steel up for some heavy lifting said max who got an idea
oh absolutely said Steel
Max went to Chromastone and whispered his plan to him
Chromastone siad all right let's do it because my energy is about to run out
the moment Chromastone said that his horn Crystal stop glowing and the energy blast that was slowing down dread stopped firing
now you're both done for said dread
go turbo said max Max transformed there was a bright blue light energy was circling around Max when it was over Max changed he was no longer in his turbo fight mode he was now in Turbo strength which was bigger had more mass but still have the same colors as turbo flight mode but this turbo mode look like it was built for heaven lifting and in this form Max could jump great distances
let me give you some extra muscle said Chromastone
Chromastone press the strange symbol on his chest there was a bright green light
what are you doing said max
when the green light faded standing in Chromastone place was a four armed red creature with green eyes and wearing gold wrist and ankle bands and wearing black underwear that has a gold waistband and has two golden sashes that go across his chest and has black hair that is formed into a ponytail and has the same black and green symbol as Chromastone did on his chest
wow said Max and steel at the same time they were shocked
back on the bus the students who were watching the fight were shocked as well
you're not the only one who can change forms meet Fourarms siad Fourarms to Max Steel
dread said I admit I didn't see that coming maybe I'll keep you alive so I can study you
max siad let's do this using the power of Turbo strength mode Max jumps on one of the rock formations
four arms using the strength of his strong legs did the same thing as Max jumping on the same rock formation
Max throws a boulder at dread dread caught the boulder
he was pushed back a bit but he was still standing dread then powered up the boulder with his negative energy and shot it back at Max who ducked down to Dodge the attack which barely missed
dread mockingly laughed at Max's attempt to attack him but what dread didn't know was that this was Max's plan to drain dread of his negative turbo energy by throwing Boulders at him dread would waste energy destroying the boulders making it easier to defeat him once he's back in his less powerful form
Fourarms using the strength that came with this form through another Boulder at dread who in response charged up energy in his chest and fired a big blast of negative turbo energy at the boulder destroying it hitting Fourarms knocking him to the ground
the impact of dreads negative turbo energy laser hitting the Canyon wall started a reaction causing a avalanche and making the area Shake causing the bus to fall a little closer off the edge of the destroyed Bridge
both Max and Fourarms barely Dodge the Boulders that were going to hit them Max picked up another smaller Boulder and threw it at dread who shot another energy attack destroying the boulder then dread charged up energy in his hands and shot an energy attack from both his hands at Max Steel who got hit by dreads attack and Dread also shot energy at Fourarms who barely Dodge the attack
he's too powerful said max who realized his plan was not working
Fourarms said well we need to do something
turbofy me said steel who came out Max's chest steel has white armor a blue color scheme and has a big blue eye he has two pointy arms and his back has a blue v-shaped mark steel the ability to fly as long as he has enough Turbo energy
Wait, I thought the point was not to use
Turbo energy on him said max who knew what Steel wants him to do Steel wants Max to do their turborag move but that move requires using Turbo energy
Who said we're using
it on him said Steel
Steel points somewhere Max follows were steel is pointing steel is pointing at a bunch of boulders stack together on a rock formation not too far from dread like just above him
okay said max who understood what steel plan was Max grab Steel by both of his pointy arms and steel took a stance of some kind Max charged steel up with turbo energy and threw him like a frisbee at dread who Dodge the attack steel flew up and was stuck between the boulders
you missed siad Fourarms
you missed Max said dread mockingly
oh no he didn't said Steel who used the turbo energy stored up in himself to caused a mini explosion breaking apart the boulders that were stacked together
causing them to fall upon dread a lot of the boulders hit the villain and Dread had to defend himself he managed to hit away some of the boulders but in the process this caused him to lose a lot of Turbo energy reverting him back to his previous form
no said dread who realized he was back in his less powerful form
Fourarms seeing this jump to where dread was the hero did a perfect air kick knocking dread to the canyon wall causing boulders to fall on him
back in the bus the students are still watching the fight one of the students said whoa
if Max can be a hero so can I said the same student who said whoa
this student was a tall slender teenager who has Brown shoulder length hair dark brown eyes and wears a dark green cap and he wears a long sleeve black shirt with a white t-shirt with a brown lozenge pattern and he wears dark green jeans and brown shoes
this was Kirby Kowalski one of Max's best friends he usually hangs out with Max and Sydney
Kirby slides the bus driver on the floor and takes control of the bus controls
I'm getting us out of here said Kirby
back at the battle Max Steel jumps right back to the battlefield next to Fourarms Steel was back in Max's chest
dread uses his energy to free himself from the boulders that fell on him
max and Fourarms look around to see if there are any more boulders to throw at dread there are not any more boulders
out of ammo what a shame said dread mockingly
max and fourarms take Battle stances
fortunately I have tons said dread who was referring to the school bus full of innocent High School students to use to his advantage
oh no siad Max and Fourarms at the same time
dread uses his negative turbo energy to perform a form of energy telekinesis to bring the bus to him the students screamed fearing the worst
Hold on said Kirby who was at the bus controls Kirby made the bus move in reverse
dread was surprised by this and was unable to use his power in time to stop the reversing bus from hitting him knocking him off the cliff dread grabbed onto the edge to keep himself from falling
Kirby open the school bus Oops said Kirby
the students realized Kirby saved them and started chanting for Kirby
Kirby Kirby Kirby said the students
Kirby stood up enjoying the praise from his peers
a big green and white helicopter of some kind suddenly landed on the battlefield out came soldiers in white and green battle armor holding advance weapons these are N-Tek soldiers from N-Tek they were being led
by a tall man with a muscular body he also has black hair and an unshaven beard and he's wearing similar armor to the other soldiers except this one is damaged it looks like someone made a big deep scratch in it this man is forged Ferris brother of Molly McGrath and Max's uncle and commander-in-chief of N-Tek
during the fight Steel contacted N-Tek
it's over dread said max who approach dread who was still hanging on to not fall into the canyon
it's not over don't you realize I Know Who You Are Max McGrath said dread
is it true is that really you in there Max said Sydney
whoo now that was one long schlep siad a voice everyone turns to see Max McGrath alive and okay climbing up the canyon he'd somehow survived possibly grabbing a branch or something and somehow he climbed all the way back up
what how siad dread who couldn't believe he was wrong he was sure Max McGrath was Max Steel but seeing the two together at the same time in the same place only means one thing Max McGrath is not Max Steel
who am I supposed to be again said Max the superhero what no one knows besides Max and steel and Forge and the N-Tek agents was that the Max McGrath who just climbed back up the canyon is actually a holo-bot a special type of robot that uses advance hologram technology to take the form of the selected individual it even sounds like the selected individual Steel came up with a plan to use a holo-bot to make it look like Max Steel and Max McGrath are not the same person so steel contacted N-Teks chief science officer so the plan could be done
looks like someone was wrong said Fourarms with a smirk
Forge and his N-Tek soldiers approach dread
don't move said Forge to dread as he and his soldiers aimed their weapons at the villain
dread looked around and could see there was no point continuing this battle he would now have to battle Max Steel the shapeshifter and N-Tek if you were to continue he would most likely lose especially since for all dread knows
N-tek probably contacted other superheroes like the Guardians of the globe and there was no way dread was going to allow himself to be captured
dread let go of the canyon Edge while laughing
everyone assumed dread was committing suicide deciding to rather die than be captured but then suddenly as dread was falling a black high-tech aircraft of some kind appeared out of nowhere and caught dread dread escaped
ah crud said Forge who was disappointed that dread got away
Fourarms said well looks like my job is done here
Max approached Fourarms and said thanks for the help Max Held out his hand for Fourarms to shake Fourarms shaked Max's hand
no problem siad Fourarms
Max said I got to ask who and what are you some kind of mutation
Fourarms siad let's just say I'm not from your world
wait you're an alien said Max and steel at the same time in shock
until next time said Fourarms who jumped off the canyon Edge everyone look to see Fourarms falling then there was a bright green light and Fourarms became Chromastone again Chromastone was flying to where who knows he kept flying higher and higher until he was gone out of sight
max siad I have a feeling we're going to see that guy again
me too said Steel
max Steel and forged walk away
Sydney approached the fake Max McGrath believing the fake Max was the real max
Max I'm so glad you're okay said Sydney who was glad to see her boyfriend was alive
I was so worried about you said Sydney
oh really but uh what about Butch siad the fake Max McGrath
what about him said Sydney in confusion
well I thought you liked him now I mean he did save your life said the fake Max
that's what he says which is why I agreed to tutor him in French I didn't tell you because he was embarrassed about it siad Sydney
Sydney grabbed the fake Max's hand but it's not like he's some superhero cuz trust me he's really not said Sydney
the fake Max smiled after hearing what Sydney said
as for Butch he was cowering under the school bus
Butch reacted afraidly as someone approached his cowardly spot ahh siad Butch who looked to see it was just one of the female students on the bus
you can have your autograph back Butch I'm a Kirby fan now said the female student the female student then crumbled up Butch's autograph and dropped it on the floor
ahh siad Butch who feared his Fame was over after showing everyone he was a coward during this incident
meanwhile with Eve and Amber and Eve's friend
looks like you owe us both 20 bucks said eve and Amber at the same time
dang it said Eve's friend
I like hanging out with you Max said Sydney to the fake Max
and I like hanging out with you like really really really like it said the fake Max
hiding behind the rocks nearby behind Sydney and the fake max was Steel who was not in Max's chest the real Max and a tall slender young man with black messy hair with the sides shaved and he has brown eyes and he is wearing green and black N-Tek armor with protective armor on his chest and on his abdomen and on his shoulders, biceps and triceps and he is wearing headphones around his neck and wearing a lab coat with the sleeves cut off and he is wearing blue jeans with a black belt featuring a star emblem and he is wearing black and white shoes. he looks like he could be 18 or 19 years old this is Roberto Martinez also known as Berto N-Tek chief science officer and a friend of Max and Steel Max's father used to be the chief science officer of N-tek but since Jim is gone Berto is now the chief science officer of N-tek
whoa whoa whoa dude easy one really was totally enough said max to Berto who was using the remote that controls the fake Max to make the fake Max say whatever he wanted the real Max was back in his civilian clothes
hey you called me now is there anything else you want me to say siad Berto
Max looked to see the fake him holding hands with Sydney the fake Max was working Sydney had no idea that Max was a fake
Max then looked at the direction of the school bus to you his peers praising Kirby for saving them everyone was lifting Kirby up together and throwing him in the air repeatedly
Kirby Kirby Kirby said max peers in Union
Max said Nah I think that says it all
all right Berto I'll give credit where credit is due said Forge who took the remote that controls the fake Max from berto before Forge didn't think these Holo bots Berto created would be useful but after using a holo bot to keep max identity safe he realizes he may have been wrong
Maybe this bot does have some practical applications said Forge who pressed the big green button on the remote that controls the fake Max
whoo chief watch that button siad Berto to Forge in a worry tone because Forge unlike Berto doess not know how the remote works
back with the fake Max and Sydney because of Forge pressing the button on the remote
the fake Max started doing a silly dance and Sydney couldn't help but laugh at what she was seeing believing her boyfriend was actually doing this silly dance
so peculiar said Sydney
max who was seeing the fake him doing a silly dance in front of his girlfriend facepalmed himself out of embarrassment Sydney will actually think he did this silly dance and will likely remember forever
forged put a reassuring hand on max shoulder
Max looked at his uncle
Forge gave his nephew a reassuring smile
Max said I can't dread is back
Forge said to Max don't worry well find him he wont get away with this
I get what you were saying now someone came looking for max steel only they found my best friends I guess being a real hero means staying out of the headlines sometimes huh
your learning kid said Forge who was happy his nephew learned from this experience
wait so no more front page photos what about my good said Steel who has been complaining that those who have taking photos of him and Max have been taking photos of his bad side and not his good side
both your sides are the same steel said Max
oh you're just being kind said steel
no seriously you're perfectly symmetrical said max
bless your heart but you don't have to say that said Steel
I know I don't it's true said max
all right you two enough when you two get back to base I want a full report of everything that happened here and I especially want you two to tell me everything you know about the new hero who helped you fight dread said Forge
he said he was a alien said Steel
Forge was a little shocked
a alien I thought he might have been some kind of mutation or something but him being a alien changes things great I'll have to tell Cecil about this new hero being a alien said Forge
but uncle Ferris he helped us he even saved Sydney's life said max
be that as it may max we know nothing about this alien he might be on our side or he could be the Vanguard for a invasion and he could pretending to be a hero just to fool us so he can learn our strengths and weaknesses
Max wanted to argue but he couldn't argue with his uncle's logic
Forge said but he could be on our side after all there are alien Heroes on this planet like Martian Man and Omni man
and don't forget me siad Steel
Forge and Max and Berto laughed at the same time
yeah you too Steel but the point is we will give him the benefit of the doubt Fair said Forge
yeah that's fair agreed max
still I'm surprised I thought you didn't like Cecil for your own reasons and yet you are willing to work with him siad max
when it comes to potential alien threats I have no choice siad Forge
Max couldn't argue with that
meanwhile with Dread and Naught at their Secret lair
now we know who's not max steel when you think about it there really are quite a few McGrath's in the phone book said Naught who was checking the phone book on one of the computers of their secret lair
in response dread blasted the computer
never mind who the man behind the mask is
to take steel it's going to take strength said dread
dread grabbed a big peace of his own equipment and ripped a big piece off and through it too another part of his lair
not subterfuge this isn't over it's just the beginning in the meantime see if can find any information on that new hero and add him to my list of enemies to destroy said dread
on it sir said Naught
meanwhile later at night in copper Canyon
outside a abandoned warehouse Chromastone landed outside the abandon warehouse
what a first day said a voice coming from the badge on Chromastones chest
yeah agreed chromastone who opened the garage door of the abandon Warehouse with his hands he entered the warehouse then closed the garage door outside the abandon Warehouse if anyone was outside they would have seen a bright green light from outside through the windows
meanwhile somewhere in this universe on a alien planet far far far far away from Earth
a big alien Warrior that look like a squid man was dragging a dead alien body whoever this dead alien was he looked like a human he has black hair and a black mustache and was
wearing White alien clothing which was damaged and stained with red blood the big alien Warrior squid man dragging the dead alien body is known as Vilgax conquer of 10
worlds vilgax is from another universe and he was the most feared lifeform in his universe the reason he is in this universe is because after a recent battle with his arch enemy the battle ended with an accident happening Vilgax along with his space Armada and right hand man Psyphon who's also a alien of some kind ended up being transported to this Universe with no way home despite the
advance alien technology Vilgax possesses he he does not possess what is needed to achieve interdimensional travel at least not at the moment not that it matters Vilgax has important business to attend to in this
universe it wasn't long before Vilgax figured out he and his minions were transported to another Universe but that doesn't matter to vilgax what matters to vilgax right now is learning everything he can about this universe and locating his arch enemy who Vilgax
knows was teleported to this universe as well but teleported to a different location of this universe and in a attempt to learn more about this universe when vilgax came to this planet he is on right now he encountered this life form that looked human but was much stronger and faster and more durable than a human and he could fly and run at super speeds he called himself Drax a elite Warrior of the viltrumite Empire it was a tough battle vilgax was surprised by this life forms
powerful abilities he assumed he was just a weak human before but when Drax explained who and what he was Vilgax took him seriously Drax was surprised when Vilgax told him did not know of the viltrumite Empire he did not know what a viltrumite was at all but Drax paid it no mind Drax demanded that
Vilgax surrendered Vilgax refused and the two Warriors fought Drax was confident that he could win too confident and that confidence sealed his fate at a point during the battle Vilgax was able to strike Drax with his sword which is made from a material that likely does does not exist in this universe and this sword belong to a hero Vilgax defeated back in his universe Vilgax took the sword as a trophy Drax assumed the sword would do nothing to hurt him and just break so Drax didn't try to
dodge when Vilgax attacked him with his sword Drax was so confident the sword would not hurt him at all Drax was wrong that one devastating strike from the sword of Vilgax secured vilgax's victory over Drax because after the strike from his sword Drax was severely wounded which gave vilgax the opportunity to unleash all his might and end the viltrumite Warrior now vilgax is taking the Dead viltrumite back to his ship so his right hand man psyphon who is also his main scientist can study this viltrumite life form so vilgax can learn everything he can about these viltrumites should he have to fight more of these life forms and Vilgax will interrogate the
life forms of this planet and other planets nearby to learn more about these viltrumites and their empire but vilgax main goal is still to locate and destroy his arch enemy and take what should have been his so long ago a object his arch enemy possesses the source of his powers a object of great power the Omnitrix
Vilgax looks up at the Stars
see you soon Tennyson said Vilgax
2 days later in the same universe
on another planet somewhere in the universe this planet is known as Galaluna home to the galalunians another alien race that look just like humans but they do not possess powers like the viltrumites galalunians are just as weak and fragile as normal humans but the galalunians possess far more advanced technology then humans do but despite there advanced technology things Are not looking
good for the galalunians there planet is on the Verge of being conquered by their sworn enemies the Mutraddi a advance alien race of diverse monsters that inhabit the planet mutraad somehow the Mutraddi were able to get pass galalunians detection systems unnoticed the Mutraddi space Armada attack took the unprepared galalunians by surprise and to make things worse the mutraddi Were Somehow now able to control there Mega Beast monsters mutraddi Mega Beast monsters are the biggest and most powerful of mutraddi but the mutraddi could never
control their Mega Beast monsters in the past but now they are able to and the galalunian military is unfortunately unable to use their most powerful weapons which the mutraddi were able to disabled leaving the king of Galaluna no choice but to send his precious daughter princess ilana to another planet for her safety in order to secure galalunas future
at the Castle of the galaluna Royal family which currently under attack by the mutraddi foot soldiers the brave soldiers of the galaluna military have formed a perimeter around the castle and are doing everything they can to keep the mutraddi at Bay for as long as they can inside the castle the king arrives at the
castles inside launch Pad the king looks like a man in his 50s but has a strong impressive build and he has a short pointy White beard and White hair which is sticking up at the back of his head and he is wearing Royal like clothing the king arrives at the castles inside launch pad with his daughter ilana and a galalunian Soldier named Lance who the king knows well because Lance's father who
passed away was one of the Kings closest friends Lance is a young man of maybe 16 or 17 he has black hair and black eyes and he is wearing a red and White galalunian Soldier uniform and he is holding a pretty big alien blaster Ilana the Kings only child and the sole heir to throne of galaluna is a beautiful young woman about maybe the same as Lance she has blonde hair that is sticking up at the back of her head like her father's and she is wearing a pretty purple galalunian princess dress
You first, your majesty said Lance
Rift-gate coordinates have been entered.
All is prepared as planned said some kind advance bio-cybernetic robot that appeared behind the king the robot was shaped like a orb
Good siad the king
What is that said Lance
This is Octus He's here to help you on your journey siad the king while Lance and Ilana watch the robot known as octus enter the Escape ship
Our journey said a confused Lance who turn to look back at the king
Ilana also turned back to look at her father she was just as confused as Lance
I'm not going You two are siad the king
What siad Lance and Ilana at the same time both were shocked
You have to come said Ilana who went to her father and buried herself in his chest Ilana worried if her father didn't come with them he would meet his end by the hands of the Mutraddi and her father was the only family she had left
I can't I have to stay with our people said the king
No, father I won't go said Ilana who started crying
Lance looked down away in sadness
Listen my darling said the king who wiped away his daughters tear with his finger
You are the heart of Galaluna you are its future
If anything happens to you all will be lost said the king
But When can I come back asked Ilana who started crying more
Soon I hope once I've dealt with the Mutraddi I'll send for you But if I fail said the king
Daddy don't said Ilana
If I fail, the people will need you to lead them.
Now, please, you have to go said the king
Ilana who was still crying listened to her father's words and she knew he was right
Ilana started walking to the Escape ship in sadness
the king turned to Lance
Lance, it's up to you to protect my daughter, no matter the cost She is the kingdom now Do you understand said the king to Lance
Lance nodded
You showed me that you really are the person I always knew you could be Your father would be proud I'm proud said the king
the king held out his hand to give Lance a galaluna it look like nothing special
Lance was shocked by what the king was giving him for some reason
I'm counting on you said the king
Lance took the Watch and put it on
I won't let you down, your majesty said Lance who saluted to his King
I know you won't said the king who saluted back at Lance
Good luck, sir said Lance
Ilana who was still crying ran to her father and hugged him one last time Ilana's father returned the hug
Goodbye daddy I love you said Ilana
Goodbye, my darling said the king to his precious daughter
Ilana and her father let go of each other
Lance and Ilana enter the Escape ship before going more into the Escape ship Ilana turns to look at her father one last time possibly for the very last time the Escape ship closes and starts taking off while the Escape ship launches out of the castle and starts exiting galalunas atmosphere the king is typing on a computer likely in the launch pads control room trying to activate a device he calls the rift gate generator this Rift gate generator device allows instantaneous travel between distant worlds and the king is using it to send his precious daughter to a far far away world to keep her safe
the rift gate generator activates shooting what looks like a big white laser into space the king Watches the device activate from the control room
the white laser misses the Escape ship and opens a white tear in space this is called a rift gate the Escape ship is heading towards the rift gate inside the Escape ship Lance and Ilana who are sitting in there seats are shocked because this is the first time they see the rift gate as the Escape ship enters the rift gate back inside the Escape ship The Light from the rift gate is so bright Lance and Ilana have to close their eyes as the two Young galalunians head towards there unknown location they Wonder what the future holds for them only time will tell
meanwhile Back with Vilgax
Vilgax is in his command ship sitting on his command chair
Vilgax said I will find you Tennyson and once I have the Omnitrix I will be
Invincible
and that's the end of chapter 1 tell me what you think
things to know
I am using Vilgax from Alien Force I believe that's the only version of Vilgax that stands a chance against viltrumites and is not too powerful for the viltrumites the animated versions of viltrumites anyway but I am thinking about giving vilgax a power boost of some kind or maybe I'll keep him as he is and just say he's already strong enough to hold his own against viltrumites if I decide to give him a power boost how do you guys think I should do it PM me or put your idea in the reviews
the OG Guardians of the globe are still alive and Mark will not unlock his powers for a while so the OG Guardians of the globe will be alive for a while
yes this is the first chapter of the story but there will be chapters where Max and Steel tell their origin story with flashbacks which will be a little different from the story of the actual show and there will be a chapter where Ben will tell the story of how he ended up in this universe
Drax the elite Warrior of the viltrumite Empire was my OC character but his story came to an end quickly and in my story Vilgax sword can cut Viltrumites I mean it is a weapon likely made from a metal that does not exist in the Invincible universe so it should make sense it can cut Viltrumites
and turbo energy in my story can hurt viltrumites and kill them if they take enough damage from Turbo energy attacks
and again I'm open to ideas but I won't guarantee I will do them and if you have any questions ask away
and Ben 10 and team sym bionic Titan and team Max Steel and invincible characters will meet and interact and fight evil together I just don't know how I'm going to do all that at the moment like how should I have everyone meet I can say this Ben is the only one who has gone through all his experiences of his story I will be merging the stories of Max steel the 2013 version and sym bionic Titan and invincible all into one and more Ben 10 villains will appear but not all Our Heroes will be teaming up together in every single chapter here is a example sometimes it will be just max Steel and Ben 10 teaming up perfect example like you can say team sym bionic Titan and Mark could be busy doing things off page and just so everyone knows I do not read the Invincible comics I learned about invincible when I heard about the show so please no spoilers in the reviews I do know some stuff that has happened in the comics that has not happened in the show because of unfortunate circumstances
spoiler warning for anyone who has not watched all of Max Steel the 2013 version you have been warned
the ultralinks and the viltrumite Empire are not
allies and Takonians in my story were one of the few alien races to resist Viltrumite Empire Takion did not fall under Viltrumite control