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The Tardis flew out of control over the skies of London as the console sparks and the room was in flames. The newly regenerated Doctor hung out the doorway and the newly regenerated Rose, sprawled on the floor holding onto him, with her screwdriver in her mouth, as she begins to pull him up into the Tardis, the Doctor, turned at the sound of a bell and saw that he was about to hit Big Ben. Rose looked up and uses her screwdriver on the console, the Doctor slipped out again as the Tardis sped up, narrowly missing the Tower and pulling him inside, closed the doors and they leaned against the door and gasps in relief. "Thank, rassilon, that's over with," Rose said but then suddenly the Tardis lurched out of control.
"What was that about it being over, Arkytior?" The Doctor asked her.
"Okay, never mind then," Rose said and they were thrown to the swimming pool as the Tardis materializes on its side. As they fell into the swimming pool the Doctor found a very long grappling hook to use to climb back to the console room.
As they reached the console room Rose snapped her fingers and the Tardis doors opened, the Doctor threw the rest of the grappling hook out of the Tardis and the Doctor grabbed onto the edge of the Tardis, poked his head out and saw a little girl with ginger hair and a house nearby, meaning that they were in a backyard. "Can I have an apple?" He asked her, "All I can think about, apples, I love apple that's new never had a craving before." He said as Rose grabbed the edge and stepped on the ground quickly losing balance.
The Doctor got up and sat on the edge and looked inside the Tardis "Whoa! Look at that!"
"Are you two okay?" The little girl said with a scottish accent.
"We just had a fall," the Doctor said. "All the way down there, right to the library. Hell of a climb back up."
"You both are soaking wet," the little girl said.
"We were in the swimming pool."
"You said you both were in a library."
"The swimming pool is in the library," Rose said.
"Are both police officers," the little girl asked them.
"Why?" the Doctor asked leaning towards her. "Did you call the police?"
"Did either of you come about the crack in my wall?"
The Doctor and Rose both looked at each other and then at the little girl "What cra-ahhh" the Doctor said, jumping off the Tardis exclaiming in pain and Rose helps him up. "Are you all right mister," the little girl asked him. "He's fine, it's okay, it's all perfectly norm-" she starts and both gallifreyans breath out post-regenerative energy. "Who are you two?" the little girl asked.
"We don't know yet. We're still cooking," the Doctor said as he looked at the post regeneration energy on his hands. "does it scare you?"
"No it just looks a bit weird," the little girl said think that he was talking about the regeneration energy that was on both him and Rose.
"No, he means does the crack in your wall scare you?" Rose said.
"Yes," the little girl answered and the Doctor suddenly stood up, "Well, then, no time to lose.I'm the Doctor, she's my wife Rose. Do everything we tell you, don't ask stupid question and don't wander off." He walks forward and accidentally bumping into a tree, falling over in the process. " Are you all right?" The little girl asked. "His steering's a bit off," Rose said as she helps him up.
The little girl took them to the house and into the kitchen "If you're a Doctor, then why does you box say 'police'?" She asked the Doctor as she gave him an apple and he took a bite of the apple, quickly spit it out and coughs. "That's disgusting. What is that?" He asked her
"An apple," she replied.
"Apples are rubbish. I hate apples."
"You said it was your favorite," the little girl said, confusedly.
"No,no I love yoghurt not sure about you, Rose," he said "but yoghurt's my favorite, give me yoghurt."
"Thank you, but I'll pass," Rose said and the little girl went to the fridge and brought him a yoghurt, which he opened the container and poured some of it into his mouth and he spat it out. "I hate yoghurt it's just stuff with bits in it."
"You said it was your favorite," the little girl said.
"New mouth, new rules," he said wiping the yoghurt off his mouth. "It's like eating after cleaning your teeth. Everything tastes wro-agh!" He said and had a little fit due to the regeneration, slaps his forehead and Rose coughs out more regeneration energy.
"What is it? What's wrong with you?" The Little girl asked him. "Wrong with me? It's not my fault," he said "Why can't you give me any decent food? You're Scottish, fry something."
"Fry me some food as well," Rose said, wanting to know what food tastes good to this incarnation of her.
The Little girl went to fry some food on a stove "Ah bacon!" he said as he and Rose used towels to dry their hair.
The Doctor and Rose sat down at the table and ate bacon from the plates and the Doctor made a face and forked some more in, but then spat it out, Rose on the other hand didn't mind the food as it tastes good to her probably being one of her favorite's in her current incarnation.
"Bacon," he whispered "That's bacon. Are you trying to poison me?"
The Little girl, then turned the stove back on to fry some beans and the Doctor watched. " Ah, you see beans."
He went back to the table with the beans on a plate and took a forkful of the beans and as he tasted it he went to the sink and spat the beans out "Beans are evil," he muttered. "Bad bad beans."
The Little girl then took out a loaf of Bread and a container of butter and uses a knife to spread butter on a slice of bread. "Bread and butter," the Doctor said "Now you're talking." he tried to eat the bread but then spat it out on the plate and went to the back door and threw the plate outside and it hit a cat, which meowed "And stay out!" He closed the door as he goes back to the kitchen.
"We've got some carrots," the little girl said, offering him carrots, from the open refrigerator. "Carrots?! Are you insane?" He said and realized what he needed to eat. "No, wait hang on, I know what I need," he said approaching the refrigerator. "I need… I need," he opened the top door of the refrigerator and took a package out "I need." He took out another package "Fish fingers and Custard." he closed the refrigerator.
Later, sitting at the Table, the Doctor dipped a fish finger into a bowl of Custard then took a bite, Rose was eating chips. Across from them the little girl was eating ice cream from a container, the Doctor then picked up the bowl and drank the Custard. It left a mustache, which he quickly wiped away with his hand. Rose tried her best not to laugh.
"Funny," the little girl said. "Am I?" The Doctor asked. "Funny is good."
"What's your name, then?" Rose asked.
""Amelia Pond."
Oh, that's a brilliant name," the Doctor said. "Amelia Pond, like a name in a fairytale."
"Amelia, Are we in Scotland?" Rose asked and Amelia sighs "No. Had to move to England. It's rubbish."
"So, what about your mum and dad, then? Are they upstairs?" the Doctor asked "Thought we'd woken them by now."
"Don't have a mum and dad," Amelia said "Just an aunt." That statement made both the Doctor and Rose look at each other in confusion but the Doctor shrugged it off "I don't even got an aunt," he said.
"You're lucky," Amelia said.
"I know."
"So, your Aunt," Rose said "Where is she?"
"She's out," Amelia answered as the Doctor dipped a fish finger in the custard and put it in his mouth. "And she left you all alone?"
I'm not scared," Amelia said. "Course you're not," the Doctor suddenly said "You're not scared of anything! Box falls out of the sky, man and woman falls out of box, man eats fish custard while the woman eats chips," he said, putting the fish finger in his mouth "and look at you, just sitting there. So you know what I think?"
"What?" Amelia asked him. "Must be a hell of a scary crack in your wall," he said.
After finishing the food Amelia took them to her room and showed them the crack in her wall, which is shaped like a 'W' and the Doctor walked up to the crack. "You've had some cowboys in here, he said, examining the crack. "Well, not actually cowboys, though that can happen."
Amelia stood in the doorway holding an apple. "I used to hate apples, so my mum put faces on them," she said handing the Doctor an apple, with a smiley face carved into it.
"She sounds good, your mum," he said and tossed it into the air and caught it "I'll keep it for later." He then noticed something weird with the crack and touched it "This wall is solid and the crack doesn't go all the way through it. So here's a thing, where's the draught coming from?" He backed away from the wall, took out his sonic screwdriver and examines the crack in the wall with it and looked at his screwdriver. "Wibbly-wobbly, Timey-wimey. You know what the crack is?"
"What?" Both Amelia and Rose asked at the same time. "It's a crack," he answered looking at the crack and he reapproaches it "But I'll tell you something funny, Amelia. If you knocked this wall down, the crack would stay put, 'cause the crack isn't in the wall." He added, tracing the crack with his finger.
"Where is it, then?" Amelia asked. "Everywhere," he answered. "In everything. It's a split in the skin of the world. Two parts of Space and Time should never have touched, pressed together," he looked back at Amelia as he touched the crack with his finger "right in the wall of your bedroom." He puts his ear on the wall "Sometimes can you hear…" he starts "A voice " Amelia finished. "Yes." He hears a voice that was distorted on the other side of the wall and he immediately walked over to a table next to Amelia's bed and picked up a cup and dumped the water out and places the cup on the wall so the could hear the voice properly.
"Prisoner Zero has escaped," he heard the voice say. "Prisoner Zero…" he starts to repeat but Amelia finished his train of thought "Prisoner Zero has escaped. That's what I heard. What does it mean?" He heard the voice repeat itself and he removed the cup from the wall.
"I think it means that on the other side of the wall there is a prison," Rose said. "Rose, I think you're correct and that they've lost a prisoner," the Doctor said, agreeing with Rose. "And do you know what that means, Amelia?"
"What?" Amelia asked. "You need a better wall," he said before he and Rose started to move the desk that was next to the wall "The only way to close the breach is to open it all the way. The forces will invert and it'll snap itself shut." the Doctor said. "Exactly like how we closed the void right ,Doctor?" Rose said.
"Exactly, Rose he said. "Or…" he drifted off. "What?" Amelia asked. "You know when grown-ups tell you everything's going to be fine, and you think they're probably lying to make you feel better?" He asked her. "Yes," she said.
"Everything's going to be fine," he said as he holds Rose's hand, who was holding Amelia's hand and he took his screwdriver out and he aims it at the crack and activates the screwdriver, the crack lit up as it opened and they saw a dark prison. "Prisoner Zero has escaped," they heard a voice say "Prisoner Zero has escaped," the voice repeated itself. "Hello?" The Doctor said. "Hello!" And then suddenly in the wall, a giant eyeball came down from above and looked at the three of them and they all started at the eyeball. "What's that?" Amelia asked and a few seconds later the wall closed shut and as the wall closed a small ball of electricity shout out from the crack and struck the Doctor.
"There you. see, told you it would close. Good as new," the Doctor said and Amelia wanted to know what that eyeball creature was "What was that thing? Was that Prisoner Zero?" She asked. "No. I think that was Prisoner Zero's guard," the Doctor said and Rose agreed with him on that. "Whatever it was, it sent me a message. Psychic Paper," he continued and he looks at his psychic paper "Takes a lovely message," he explained to Amelia before reading the message "'Prisoner Zero has escaped.' But why tell us?" He wondered out loud. "Unless…"
"Unless he escaped through here, right Doctor?" Rose asked him and he smiled at her "I had that exact same though, Rose," he said "But he couldn't have. We'd know." He said before running into the hallway followed by Rose and Amelia "It's difficult," he told Amelia. "Brand-new me and Rose, I'm not sure about you Rose, but nothing works yet for me. But there's something I'm missing." he said.
"Same with me Doctor, nothing works fully for me yet," Rose told him as he looks around. ""In the corner of my eye," he said as he looks behind in the corner of his eye to see a room that neither he nor Rose have noticed and he stares at the door for a few seconds.
Suddenly the Tardis's cloister bell chimes "No, no,no,no,no,no!" He exclaimed as he and Rose ran down the stairs followed by Amelia and he opens the backdoor "We've got to get back in there. The engines are phasing. It's going to burn!" The Doctor exclaimed as he runs to the Tardis and Rose follows, while Amelia tries to keep up with them "But…" she pants and she stops as she got to them and they were picking up the grappling hook "It's just a box! How can a box have engines?" She asked them.
"It's not a box," he said and he stood up and turned to her "It's a time mach." Rose turned around "As well as a spaceship," she added and Amelia was in disbelief "What, a real one? You both got a real Time machine that is also a spaceship?" Amelia asked them.
"Not for much longer if we can't get her stabilised," the Doctor said gathering the rest of the grappling hook and threw it back into the Tardis "Five-minute hop into the future should do it." Amelia looked at them for a few seconds "Can I come?" She asked them. "Not safe in here, not yet," the Doctor said. "Five minutes. Give us five minutes. We'll be right back." He and Rose got back on the edge of the Tardis, prepared to jump back inside. "People always say that," they heard Amelia say.
Rose jumped back down to the ground and looked at Amelia in the face "Are me and my husband your average people?" She asked her, smiling "Do we even look like your average person? Do I even look like your average person? Trust me, Amelia. Girl-to-girl, yeah? I'm Rose Smith."
She got back on the edge of the Tardis and held the Doctor's hand and looked back to Amelia, and she held the rope in her other hand "Geronimo!" He shouts as they jumped in the Tardis and the doors slammed shut as the Tardis dematerialized.
"What did you see,Theta?" Rose asked him as they start to repair the engines of the Tardis. "I found a room that we didn't even notice with the corner of my eye, Arkytior."
"A perception filter?" She said "Oh no Amelia's in danger!" She cried."I know! We have to stabilise the Tardis quickly," he said and they began to stabilise the Tardis by repairing the engines and after stabilising the Tardis, the Doctor and Rose set the co-ordinates to Amelia's back garden.
The Tardis materialized in Amelia's back garden in the early morning and the door opened the Doctor came out followed by Rose amid billowing smoke and had cloths held over their noses and mouths. "Amelia!" The Doctor shouts "Amelia!" He ran towards the house with Rose in hot pursuit. "I worked out what we were missing. You've got to get out of there!" He tied his screwdriver but it kept flickering a few times till it finally stopped flickering and the door opened.
He and Rose came in "Amelia?!" he called. "Amelia, are you all right? Are you there?" Rose called as she followed the Doctor up the stairs and he used his sonic screwdriver on the doorframe to find out that he was correct and turned to Rose. "Rose, I was correct," he said "Prisoner Zero is here. Prisoner Zero is here! Prisoner Zero is here! Do you understand me? He said Prisoner Zero is…" He and Rose suddenly hear wood creaking and the Doctor turned around only to be knocked out by a Cricket bat and then Rose got the same treatment and passed out as well.
The Doctor is currently in his 13th and final incarnation, 'cause in this universe when he grew a new hand after being cut off by a sycorax it costed him a regeneration and Rose is currently in her 4th incarnation and 3rd Regeneration.
Please review and tell me if I'm making Rose sound like well… Rose Because I still don't know how to write her properly and I need a beta-reader.