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A little boy was playing with a toy helicopter, as the Doctor, Rose and Amy passed him by, in the other direction. "What is this place Where are we?" The Doctor asked.
"Leadworth," Amy replied.
"Where's the rest of it?" Rose asked.
"This is it," Amy answered.
"Is there an airport?" the Doctor asked.
"No," Amy said.
"A nuclear power station?"
"No."
"Even a little one."
"No."
"Amy, What's the nearest city?" Rose asked Amy.
"Gloucester, half an hour by car."
"We don't have half an hour. Do we have a car?" He asked her.
"No."
"Well, that good! Fantastic, that is. 20 minutes to save the world and we've got a post office and it's shut!" He said, snapping at her and then he notices a duck pond "What is that?"
"It's a duck pond," Amy answered as they head towards the duck pond and he saw no ducks in the pond, Rose didn't either "Why aren't there any ducks?"
"I don't know," Any shrugged. "There's never any ducks."
"Then how do you know it's a duck pond?"
"It just is. Is it important, the duck pond?"
"Amy, he makes a very good poi-" Rose starts but falls over in mid-sentence due to her regeneration and the Doctor tries to help her up but the same happens to him. "This is too soon. We're not ready, we're not done yet."
Suddenly the sky began to darken the three of them looked up, "What's happening? Why's it going dark?" Amy asked, the sun appeared grey and was flickering before returning close to how it normally seen on earth "So, what's wrong with the sun?" Amy asked.
"Nothing's wrong with it you were just looking at it through the atmosphere, you're seeing it what it looks like from space," Rose said.
"Rose is correct," He added, "they've sealed up your upper atmosphere, now they're getting ready to boil the planet."
Amy looks around and then the Doctor and Rose stood up and then looked in the same direction Amy looked and saw the villagers were taking photos of the sun with their phones. "Oh, and here they come, the human race. The end comes as it was always going to, down a video phone!" The Doctor said.
"This isn't real is it? This is some kind of big wind-up," Amy said, not accepting that any of this was real.
"Why would we wind you up?" The Doctor asked.
"You both told me that you both had a time machine that is also a spaceship," she said.
"And you believed us," he said.
"Then I grew up," Amy said.
"Oh, you never want to do that. There's no point in being grown up if you can't be childish sometimes," he said and as he said that it reminded him when he almost said the same exact thing to Sarah Jane way back in his fourth incarnation. "No, hang on, shut up, wait! I missed it," he said before slapping himself on the forehead. "I saw it and I missed it," he slapped himself again. "What did I see?"
"What did you see?" Rose asked him.
"I won't find out any faster, Rose, if you be quiet for a moment and let me concentrate to remember," he said.
I saw... What did I see?" he asked himself as he reeled back the last few moments from a few hundred feet away and saw a few people with their phones out including old people and a woman in a red telephone box and then he got to what he saw, a young man in the middle of the park wearing a nurse uniform and a jacket over it and was taking photos of prisoner Zero, who is still in the shape of a man and a dog from a few feet away on the road.
The Doctor turned and looked at a clock and saw that they still had enough time "20 minutes. We can do it. 20 minutes, the planet burns. Run to your loved ones and say goodbye or stay and help us."
"No," Amy said.
"I'm sorry?"
"No!" She screamed
Amy suddenly grabbed his tie, and pulled him to a car that just parked and as she did that Rose followed."Amy, no, no, what are you doing?" He asked her as a man that was in the car got out she put his tie in the car door and slammed it shut and took the keys from the old man and locked the car doors and Rose asked "Are you out of your mind doing that to my husband?!" Rose asked her.
"Who are the two of you?" Amy asked .
"You know who we are," the Doctor said.
"No, really, who are the two of you?" she asked
"Look at the sky! End of the world 20 minutes," he said.
You and both better talk quickly, then!" Amy said.
"Amy, I am going to need my car back," the old man said interrupting them.
"Yes in a bit. Now go and have coffee." she suggested he obliged "Right, yes. he said walking away.
The Doctor tossed the apple Amy gave them when she was 7 years old "Catch," he said and Amy caught it and looked at it, "I'm the Doctor," the Doctor told her.
"And I'm his wife, Rose."
"We're time travellers," he added, "Everything We told you 12 years ago is true. We're real. What's happening in the sky is real and if you don't let me go right now, my wife won't stop it without me so everything you've ever known is over."
"I don't believe either of you," Amy said.
"Just 20 minutes just believe us for 20 minutes," he said, gripping Amy's wrist and then gestured towards the apple "Look at it Fresh as the day you gave it to us. And you know it's the same one." They paused for almost a minute "Amy, believe for 20 minutes," he pleaded and Amy unlocked the car doors with the car keys. "What do we do?" She asked
"Stop that nurse!" The Doctor answered and took his ties out of the cars door.
He ran towards the nurse, Rose and Amy followed after him and took his phone from him and looked at it for a second before walking back to the nurse. "The sun's going out, and you're photographing a man and a dog. Why?"
Amy?" The nurse said as he saw Amy.
"Hi," she said to the nurse.
Rose was confused "Wait, you know each other, Amy?" Rose asked pointing to Amy and the Nurse.
"Yeah," she said. "this is Rory, he's a friend."
"Boyfriend," Rory corrects.
"Kind of Boyfriend," she said.
"Amy!"
"Man and dog, why?" The Doctor asked.
Rory realized who the Doctor and Rose were as his eyes widen in shock "Oh my god, it's them."
"Just answer his question, please," Amy said.
"It's them, though, the Raggedy Doctor and Rose," Rory said. "The Raggedy Doctor and his wife, Rose."
"Yeah, they came back," Amy said.
"But they were a story," he said in confusion. "They were a game."
"Man and dog, why? Tell me now," the Doctor said, grabbing Rory by his shirt. "Sorry, because he can't be there. Because," Rory starts. "He's Ina hospital, in a coma," both Rory and the Doctor said at the same time.
"Woah, that was weird," Rose said in disbelief.
"Yeah," Rory said, nodding his head and the Doctor let go of him "Knew it. Multi-form you see. Disguise itself as anything, but needs a live feed, a psychic link with a living but dormant mind."
Suddenly the multi-form snapped as the dog barked and snarled, the Doctor walked closer, "Prisoner Zero."
"What, there's a Prisoner Zero, too," Rory asked.
"Yes," Amy said and the Doctor looks behind and saw a spaceship that has an eye in it's center appears in the sky and floats and it scans around for Prisoner Zero.
See that ship up there is scanning this for non-terrestrial technology," the Doctor said as he took his screwdriver out, "And nothing says non-terrestrial like a Sonic Screwdriver." He activates his screwdriver and points it into the sky causing the street lights to blow up. "No!" someone exclaimed, it also caused Cars to sound their horns "Stop!" an old woman on a scooter screamed as it moved forward on it's own.
A firetruck without a firefighter in it was accelerating forward with it's siren going off and two firefighters ran after it and "Hey, come back here! Oi, come back here! Come back!" one of the firefighters said.
"I think someone's going to notice don't you?" He asked as the spaceship's scanner touched a cathedral and Prisoner Zero who barked and he lowered his screwdriver and aims the screwdriver at a phone box, which exploded and the screwdriver suddenly sparked and fizzled, causing the Doctor to drop it to the ground. "No,no,no, don't do that!" The spaceship flies away.
"Come back! The prisoner you're looking for is here!" Rose shouts to the spaceship as it flies away, but unbeknown to them Prisoner Zero dissolves into slime and escapes down a sewage drain. Amy saw it "Doctor, Rose! The drain. It sort of melted and went down the drain.
"Well, of course it did," the Doctor said.
"Well, what do we do now?" Rose and Amy asked.
"It's hiding in human form," the Doctor said. "We need to drive it into the open. No Tardis, one screwdriver is working so it won't help us that much, 17 minutes. Come on, think. Think."
The Doctor, Rose, Amy and Rory were soon standing above the drain "So that thing, that hid in my house for 12 years?" Amy asked.
"Amy, a multi-form can live for a few thousand years," Rose said.
"Rose is right, Multi-forms can live for a few millennia," the Doctor said. "12 years is just a pit stop."
"So how come you both show up on the same day that lot do?" Amy asked. "The same minute."
"They're looking for him, but followed us. They saw us through the crack, they got a fix, knew we could find him, but they're only late 'cause we are," he explained.
What are they on about?" Rory asked
"Nurse boy give me your phone," the Doctor said "Rory asked "How can they be real?" Rory asked. "They were never real."
"Phone, now give me!" The Doctor snapped at Rory
"Rude!" Rose told the Doctor and Rory hands his phone to the Doctor. "They were just a game," Rory said. "We were kids. Amy made me dress up as you and she dressed up as Rose."
"These photos, they are all the coma patients?" The Doctor asked Rory as he looks at the photos on Rory's phone.
Rory said "Yeah," Rory said.
"No , they're all the multi-form," the Doctor told Rory. "Eight comas, eight disguises for Prisoner Zero."
Amy said "He had a dog though." She suggested A dog in a coma?"
"It's part of the dream, Amy," Rose explained. " Whatever the coma patient dreams about becomes reality as long as the multi-form is currently disguising as that form."
"Exactly what Rose said," the Doctor added "The coma patient dreams he's walking a dog, Prisoner Zero gets a dog. Laptop! Your friend, what was his name?"
"Amy, he's not talking about Rory, your other friend," Rose said. "The one who asked if we were the Doctor and Rose."
"Jeff," Amy answered.
"Oh, thanks," Rory said, sarcastically.
"He had a laptop in his bag, a laptop. Big bag, big laptop," the Doctor said. "I need Jeff's laptop. You three, get to the hospital, get everyone out that ward, clear the whole floor. Rose, phone me when you're done." He ran off and Amy grabbed Roy's hand "Your car, Come on," Amy said.
"How can you two be here, Rose?" Rory asked Rose. "how can and the Doctor be here?"
"The Tardis, our spaceship and time machine is still rebuilding, which caused it to travel farther in time than we expected," Rose explained to Rory as they drove off in Rory's car which was a mini-cooper, on the way to the hospital Rory gave Rose his phone number, while the Doctor entered Jeff's house.
The Doctor entered Jeff's bedroom where Jeff was lying on his bed using his laptop. "Hello. Laptop, give me!" The Doctor said and he grabbed it.
"No, no, no, no, wait, hang on!" Jeff said, refusing to let go.
The Doctor said, "It's fine, give it here," the Doctor said as He took the laptop and sat at the bottom of the bed and saw that Jeff was watching Porn. "Blimey! Get a girlfriend, Jeff."
The door opened and Jeff's gran entered "Gran," Jeff said.
"What are you doing?" Jeff's grandmother asked the Doctor
"The sun's gone wibbly, so right now, somewhere out there, there's going to be a big video conference call," the Doctor explained and he kept typing. "All the experts in the world panicking at once, and do you know what they need? Me. Ah, and here they all are. All the big boys. NASA, Jodrell Bank, Tokyo Space Centre, Patrick Moore."
"Ooh, I like Patrick Moore," Jeff's grandmother said.
"I'll get you his number," the Doctor offered. "but watch him, he's a devil."
"You can't just hack in on a call like that," Jeff told him.
"Can't I?" The Doctor asked him and he held his psychic paper to the webcam.
"Who are you?" An expert asked. "This is a secure call. What are you doing?"
"Hello. I know, you should switch me off. But before you do, watch this,"The Doctor said.
"It's here too, I'm getting it," another expert said.
The Doctor explained, "Fermat's Theorem, the proof, and I mean the real one, never seen before. Poor old Fermat, got killed in a duel before he could write it down. My fault, I slept in. Oh, and here's an oldie but a goodie - why electrons have mass. And a personal favourite of mine, faster-than-light travel with two diagrams and a joke. Look at your screens. Whoever I am, I'm a genius. Look at the sun. You need all the help you can get. Fellas, pay attention," the Doctor explained.
The Doctor took out Rory's phone and typed something on the mobile. "Sir, what are you doing?" An expert asked him.
The Doctor replied, "I'm writing a computer virus," the Doctor answered. "Very clever, super-fast, and a tiny bit alive, but don't let on. Why am I writing it on a phone? Never mind, you'll find out. OK, I'm sending this to all your computers. Get everyone who works for you sending this everywhere. Email, text, Facebook, Bebo, Twitter, radar dish - whatever social network you've got. Any questions?"
"Who was your lady friend?" Patrick Moore asked.
"Patrick, behave!" The Doctor scolded
"What does this virus do?" An expert asked.
The Doctor replied, "It's a reset command, that's all. It resets counters, it gets in the wifi and resets every counter it can find. Clocks, calendars, anything with a chip will default at zero at exactly the same time," the Doctor explained. "But, yeah, I could be lying, why should you trust me? I'll let my best man explain." He turns to Jeff "Jeff, you're my best man."
"Your what?" Jeff asked him and the Doctor closed the laptop halfway. "Listen to me. In ten minutes, you're going to be a legend. In ten minutes, everyone on that screen is going to be offering you any job you want. But first, you have to be magnificent. You have to make them trust you and get them working. This is it, Jeff. Right here, right now. This is when you fly. Today's the day you save the world."
Jeff asked, "Why me?" Jeff asked him.
"It's your bedroom. Now go, go, go," the Doctor answered and he left and Jeff opened the laptop. "OK, guys, let's do this." He started typing and suddenly the Doctor came back in the room. "Oh, and delete your internet history." He left again and ran out of Jeff's house, looked around then ran off.
Please review and tell me if I'm making Rose sound like well… Rose Because I still don't know how to write her properly and I need a beta-reader.
This is a message for a guest named 'Guest Who' who's been reviewing this fanfictions series on my last few chapters 'I have seen your reviews both my previous story and I this one, I'm just trying my best to make Rose sound like Rose and I'm not trying to make her sound like a clone of the Doctor.'