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Rory was talking with other nurses while Rose was on her mobile, Amy next to her. Rory rejoined the girls"Something's happened up there," he said "we can't get through."

Rose dialed Rory's phone number on her phone to call the Doctor.

"Yes, but what's happened?" Amy asked him

Rory replied, "I don't know. No-one knows. Rose, phone him."

"I am phoning him, Rory," Rose said and the Doctor answered the phone "Doctor? We're at the hospital, but we can't get through. Oh, that's brilliant!"

"Rose, what did he say?" Rory asked Rose.

"Have Amy and Rory look in the mirror." Rose said and Amy turned to see her reflection. "There. Nothing there," Amy said, confused and Rose rolled her eyes and pointed to Amy's costume. "Oh! Ha-ha! Uniform!"

Amy put her hair up while Rose talked to the Doctor. "Are you on your way? You're going to need a car."

"Don't worry, Arkytior," he said " I've commandeered a vehicle."

Rory, Rose and Amy got out of a lift and saw the corridors were a mess; gurneys and tables overturned, scrubs and utensils littered the floor. A woman holding the hands of her two daughters saw them, "Officer," the woman said to Amy

"What happened?" Amy asked

"There was a man. A man with a dog," the woman replied. "I think Dr Ramsden's dead. And the nurses."

Rose phoned the Doctor, "Are you in?" He asked her

"Yep. But so's Prisoner Zero." Rose Answered.

"You need to get out of there," the Doctor said. "You're still regenerating, Rose, if he fatally wounds you, you'd die and I won't be able to live without you. "

"I know that, Doctor," she said " We're just not sure where he is."

Rory turned from Amy to the woman as she spoke again and noticed it was one of the girls. "He was so angry. He kept shouting. And that dog, the size of that dog, I swear it was rabid." Amy tapped Rose on the shoulder. Rose looked up and slowly backed away with Rory and Amy. "And he just went mad, attacking everyone. Where did he go, did you see? Has he gone? We hid in the ladies."

"Oh, I'm getting it wrong again, aren't I? I'm always doing that. So many mouths." The woman said and she opened her mouth to reveal teeth so did the girls, revealing her to be Prisoner Zero.

"Oh, my God!" Rory cried out, as he was freaked out.

"Rose? Rose, what's happening?" The Doctor asked on the phone, meanwhile, Rose, Rory and Amy ran down the corridor into one of the wards. They closed the doors and slid a broom through the handles. "Rose, talk to me!" They backed away from the doors to the centre of the ward.

"We're in the coma ward," Rose said. "But it's here, it's getting in."

"Which window are you?" He asked.

"Window? What, sorry?" Rose asked, not hearing him properly.

"Which window?"

"Which window are we at?" Rose asked Amy

"First floor on the left, fourth from the end," Amy answered and Rsee repeated what Amy said into the phone.

Prisoner Zero broke through "Oh, dear. Little Amelia Pond, Prisoner Zero said "I've watched you grow up. 12 years, and you never even knew I was there. Little Amelia Pond, waiting for her magic Doctor and his wife Rose to return, but not this time, Amelia." She opened her mouth.

Rose's phone beeped as she got a text message from the Doctor saying 'Duck!' Rose heard the wail of the siren and pushed Rory and Amy down just as the ladder from a fire engine broke through the window. The Doctor climbed up the ladder and joined the trio."Right! Hello! Am I late?" He asked them, he looked at the clock "No, three minutes to go. So still time."

"Time for what, Time Lord?" Prisoner Zero asked him.

"Take the disguise off," The Doctor said, "They'll find you in a heartbeat. Nobody dies."

"The Atraxi will kill me this time," Prisoner Zero said,"If I am to die, let there be fire."

"OK. You came to this world by opening a crack in space and time," the Doctor added. "Do it again, just leave."

"I did not open the crack," Prisoner Zero said.

"Somebody did," The Doctor scoffed.

"The cracks in the skin of the universe, don't you know where they came from? You don't, do you?" Prisoner Zero said and then She spoke in a little girl's voice. "The Doctor in the Tardis doesn't know. Doesn't know, doesn't know!" Prisoner Zero said in a sing song voice, mockingly.

"The universe is cracked. The Pandorica will open. Silence will fall," Prisoner Zero said in a normal voice.

There was a clicking sound and The Doctor turned and looked up at the wall, "And we're off!" He said. "Look at that." He pointed at the clock which read 0:00. "Look at that! Yeah, I know, just a clock, whatever. But do you know what's happening right now? In one little bedroom, my team are working. Jeff and the world. And do you know what they're doing? They're spreading the word all over the world, quantum fast. The word is out. And do you know what the word is? The word is' zero'. Now, me, if I was up in the sky in a battleship, monitoring all Earth communications, I'd take that as a hint. And if I had a whole battle fleet surrounding the planet, I'd be able track a simple old computer virus to its source in, what, under a minute?" He took Rory's mobile out from his pocket. "The source, by the way, is right here." Suddenly a bright light shone through the windows. "Oh! And I think they just found us!"

"Being a showoff like usual I see," Rose said cheekily and smiled as she stuck her tongue between her teeth.

"The Atraxi are limited," Prisoner Zero said. "While I'm in this form, they'll still be unable to detect me. They've tracked a phone, not me."

"Yeah, but this is the good bit. I mean, this is my favourite bit. Do you know what this phone is full of? Pictures of you. Every form you've learned to take, right here. Oh, and being uploaded about now," the Doctor said. "And the final score is - no Tardis, screwdrivers not being much use, two minutes to spare." He held his arms out, feeling successful. "Who da man?!" He was greeted by silence and a face palm from Rose. "Oh, I'm never saying that again! Fine."

"Then I shall take a new form," Prisoner Zero responded.

"Oh, stop it, you know you can't," the Doctor told her. "Takes months to form that kind of psychic link."

"And I've had years," Prisoner Zero told him and her form glowed as it morphs into a different body.

Amy almost fell to the floor but Rose caught her and lay her down as the Doctor rushed over to her. "No! Amy?" Rose said frantically as she put her hands to Amy's face. "You've got to hold on. Amy! Don't sleep! You've got to stay awake, please."

Rory looked at Prisoner Zero. "Doctor?"

The Doctor looked up to see Prisoner Zero had taken his and Rose's forms, standing side by side. "Well, that's rubbish. I know that one's Rose. Who's that supposed to be?"

Rose looked up at prisoner Zero "That's your new body," Rose said

"Oh. that's what I look like now?"

"Yep," Rose said.

"How did you not know what you looked like?" Rory asked him.

The Doctor stood up "Busy day," he told him.

"Rory, it's actually 'cause me and him recently changed bodies through a process called regeneration and he hasn't had time to look in a mirror yet," Rose explained.

"Why me and Rose, though? You're linked with her," the Doctor said approaching the copies of him and Rose.

Rose stood up and walked over "I think it's what Amy's dreaming about, Rose said, "I think Prisoner Zero is copying Amy when she was a child, and is dreaming about us."

They suddenly heard Amy's voice from when she was a child "You're correct, Rose." She stuck her head around the copy of Rose. "Poor Amy Pond. Still such a child inside. Dreaming of the magic Doctor and his wife, Rose she knows will return to save her. What a disappointment you two have been."

The Doctor shook his head and said, "No, she's dreaming about us 'cause she can hear us." She and the Doctor ran back to Amy. "Amy, don't just hear me, listen, he said. "Remember the room, the room in your house you couldn't see? Remember you went inside. me and Rose tried to stop you, but you did. You went in the room. You went inside. Amy…dream about what you saw."

"No... no... No!" Prisoner Zero shouted, panicking and glows as he transforms back to its natural form which was an eel like creature.

The Doctor faced it and said, "Well done, Prisoner Zero. A perfect impersonation of yourself." Prisoner Zero was caught in the light and writhed.

"Prisoner Zero is located," they heard a voice say, "Prisoner Zero is restrained."

"Silence," Prisoner Zero hissed "Doctor and Rose. Silence will fall." He disappeared. There was a whoosh of air as the ship left. The Doctor ran to the window and dialled the mobile.

"The sun, it's back to normal, right?" Rory said, "That's... That's good, yeah? That means it's over."

Amy woke up "Amy? Are you OK? Are you with us?" Rose asked

"What happened?" Amy asked

"He did it," Rory answered. "The Doctor did it."

"No, I didn't," the Doctor said.

"What are you doing?" Rory asked him.

"Tracking the signal back," the Doctor said. "Sorry, in advance."

"About what?"

"The bill." The Doctor put the phone to his ear "Oi, I didn't say you could go! Article 57 of the Shadow Proclamation. This is a fully established, level 5 planet, and you were going to burn it? What...? Did you think no-one was watching? You lot, back here. Now!" He tossed the phone back to Rory. "OK. Now I've done it." He left the ward, Rose and Amy behind him.

Rory asked, "Did he just bring them back? Did he just save the world from aliens and then bring all the aliens back again?"

"He's just going to settle a score with them, diplomatically," Rose told him.

The Doctor strode down the corridor, determined with Rose, Amy and Rory following him. "Where are you going?" Amy asked.

The Doctor replied, "The roof," he said before realizing something."No, hang on." He entered a room and began to sift through clothes, tossing away what didn't appeal.

"What's in here?" Amy asked.

"I'm saving the world," he replied. "I need a decent shirt. To hell with the raggedy. Time to put on a show!"

"I'm just gonna stay in these clothes until we get to the Tardis, to change to ones that appeal to his incarnation of mine, thanks," Rose said.

"You just summoned aliens back to Earth. Actual aliens," Rory said as the Doctor stripped off his old clothes. "deadly aliens, aliens of death, and now you're taking your clothes off... Amy, he's taking his clothes off."

Amy and Rose were watching appreciatively. "Turn your back if it embarrasses you," the Doctor suggested.

Rory asked, "Are you stealing clothes now?" Rory asked him. "Those clothes belong to people, you know." He turned around. "Are you two not you going to turn your back?"

"Nope," Rose and Amy replied at the same time as they smirked at each other.

The Doctor, now wearing a long-sleeved shirt, trousers with braces (suspenders) and a number of ties draped around his neck, strode over with Rose to where the Atraxi ship was waiting. Amy and Rory stood back a bit. "So this was a good idea, was it? They were leaving," Amy asked.

"Leaving is good. Never coming back is better," the Doctor said, "Come on, then! The Doctor will see you now."

The 'eye' disconnected from the ship and scans the Doctor and Rose. "You both are not of this world."

"No, but we've put a lot of work into it." He replied to the Atraxi and examined a tie. "I don't know. What do you think?" He asked Rose.

"Is this world important?" The Atraxi asked.

"Important? Do you care about any living thing?" Rose snapped

"Yeah, what she said, what's that mean, important?" He asked the Atraxi and Rose grabbed the tie and tossed it away. Rory caught it. "6 billion people live here, is that important?"

The Doctor asked, "Here's a better question. Is this world a threat to the Atraxi?" He threw another tie that landed on Amy's shoulder, she gave it to Rory. "Well, come on. You're monitoring the whole planet. IS this world a threat?"

The Atraxi makes a holographic sphere appear and it displayed events in modern earth history including the first time America used a Nuclear weapon on another country in the city of Hiroshima in the Empire of Japan, then it soon showed an image of the statue Christ the redeemer in Rio de janeiro, then it showed Mahatma Gandhi with his supporters protesting against British Rule in British Raj on the Indian subcontinent.

"No."

"Are the peoples of this world guilty of any crime by the laws of the Atraxi?" The Doctor asked and the holographic sphere displayed images of multiple humans "No," the Atraxi replied.

"OK,the Doctor went on, "One more. Just one. Is this world protected? Because you're not the first lot to come here." As the Doctor spoke, the holographic sphere showed Cybermen and Daleks, the Queen of the Racnoss, Ood, Sycorax, a Sontaran, a Sea Devil, Reapers, the Hath and the Vashta Nerada in the spacesuit. "There have been so many! And what you've got to ask is... what happened to them?"

The projection now showed all the incarnations the Doctor excluding his War incarnation before the current incarnation of the Doctor walked through the holographic sphere, wearing a bow tie holding hands with Rose. "Hello. I'm the Doctor and this is my wife Rose," the Doctor said, "Basically... run."

The Atraxi 'eye flew back into the center of the ship and departed, scared for their lives and Amy laughed. The Doctor felt hot something in his pocket. He reached in and pulled out his Tardis key and it was glowing and showed it to Rose.

"Is that it? Is that them gone for good? Who were they?" Amy asked still looking up at the sky and as she looked down from the sky to see the Doctor and Rose were gone.

The Doctor and Rose returned to Amy's back garden and the Tardis and saw that the Tardis had refurbished its exterior as well as now displaying a St. John Ambulance logo on it's door and a darker shade of blue. They stopped in front of it.

"OK! What have you got for us this time?" The Doctor asked the Tardis and he opened the door and he stood there, amazed. "Look at you!" The Doctor said He smiled. "Oh, you sexy thing!" Rose glared at him "But you're sexier, Rose," he added and Rose blushed and both Amy and Rory ran up just as the Tardis dematerialized. Amy closed her eyes, remembering when she was little, how she waited all night. She heard the Tardis and smiled.

Rose went to the Wardrobe room to change her clothes and tried on a leather jacket and something similar to the 9th Doctor, but didn't look good to her new dress appeals, she did the same with a dress but it didn't look good on her as well and then tried on a blue shirt and a dark pink jacket as well as jeans and it suited her new dress appeal and went back to the console room where the Doctor was waiting for her.

"Time to pick up Amy," she said as he set the console to Amy's house and the Tardis materialized in Amy's backyard, as the Doctor and Rose stepped out of the Tardis, they saw that it was dark out, close to midnight, about 11:45 PM.

Amy came out of her house in a nightie "Sorry, about running off earlier, the Doctor said, apologizing Amy. "Brand new Tardis, bit exciting Just had a quick hop to the moon and back to run her in while Rose changed her clothes. "She's ready for the big stuff now."

Amy approached them. "It's the two of you," she said, "You both came back."

"Course we came back," he responded, "We always come back."

"He's right, Amy we always come back," Rose said.

"Something wrong with that?" He asked her.

"And you kept the clothes." Amy said to the Doctor, noticing that he was wearing the same clothes that he took from the hospital. He looked down at his clothes "Well, I just saved the world, the whole world for about the millionth time, no charge. Yeah, shoot me! I kept the clothes."

"Including the bow tie," Amy added.

"Yeah it's cool," he said, touching his bow tie on his neck, readjusting it "Bow ties are cool."

"Are you two from another planet," Amy suddenly asked them.

"Yep!" Rose said

"Yeah," the Doctor said at the same time.

"Okay," Amy said.

"So what do you think?" He asked her.

"Oh what?" Amy asked.

"Other planets, want to check them out?"

"What does that mean?" Amy asked.

"Amy, it means come travel with us," Rose said.

"Where?"

"Wherever you like," the Doctor said.

"All that stuff, the hospital, the spaceships, Prisoner Zero…" Amy said.

"Oh, don't worry. That's just the beginning. There's loads more," he said.

"Yeah, but those things, amazing things, all that stuff…" she starts "That was two years ago!" she suddenly snapped.

"Oh, oops," he muttered and Rose laughed at him.

"He did it before Amy, once he meant to travel 12 hours in the future Rose sarts and turned to him "but was actually 12 months."

"You're never gonna let that down are you, Rose?"

"Never," she replied and stuck her tongue between her teeth as she smiled.

"Anyway, so that's…" He starts.

"Fourteen years!" Amy confirmed.

"Fourteen years since fish custard," he said "Amy Pond, the girl who waited, you've waited long enough."

"When I was a kid you both said there was a swimming pool and a library and the swimming pool was in the library," Amy said.

"Yeah," he said "We're not sure where it's got to now," he said it'll turn up. So, coming?"

"No," Amy said nervously.

"Rose was shocked that Amy said this.

"You wanted to come 14 years ago," he said.

"I grew up."

"Don't worry. We'll soon fix that," he said before snapping his fingers and the Tardis doors opened and Amy walked inside the Tardis followed by Rose and the Doctor, he closed the door behind him. The Tardis console room was now more futuristic and science fiction than organic. The center column was on a floor that allowed one to see underneath. There were also stairs leading to other levels and doors.

"Well? Anything you want to say? Any passing remarks?" He asked Amy "we've heard them all."

"I'm in my nightie," Amy muttered.

"Don't worry about that, Amy, we have some clothes we can get for you in the wardrobe room," Rose said.

"Rose is right, and there's possibly a swimming pool in there," he added.

"No, there wasn't, Doctor," Rose said. "It possibly became it's own room."

"So,all of time and space, everything that ever happened or ever will, where do you want to start?"

Amy approached them "You both are so sure that I'm coming."

"Yeah, we are," the Doctor said.

"Why?" Amy asked.

"'Cause you're the Scottish girl in the English village," the Doctor said walking around the console "and I know how that feels."

"Oh, do you?" Amy asked him.

"All these years living here most of your life, and you've still got that accent," he added pointing at her "Yeah, you're coming." He slammed his hand on a bell on the console which went ding.

"Can you both get me back for tomorrow morning?" Amy asked.

"It's a time machine. We can get you back for five minutes ago. Why, what's tomorrow?" He asked her.

"Nothing. Nothing. Just… You know stuff," Amy replied and Rose had a feeling that something was actually tomorrow that she was keeping secret from them.

"All right, then. the Doctor said "Back in time for stuff." suddenly the console made a noise and a screwdriver appeared that looked kind of like a claw and was green at the end. "Oh! A new one!" He exclaimed and activates it. "Lovely!" He puts the screwdriver in his pocket "Thanks, Tardis," he whispered to the Tardis." He and Rose began setting the controls.

"Why me?" Amy suddenly asked.

"Why not?" He countered.

"No seriously, you both are asking me to travel with both of you in the middle of the night. It's a fair question. Why me?"

"I don't know. Fun Do we have to have a reason?" He asked her.

"People always have a reason," she said.

"Do we look like your average people, Amy?" Rose asked.

"Yes," Amy replied.

"We've been knocking around with each other, alone for a while. Our choice. But It's weird.

"You're both lonely. That's it? Just that?" Amy said.

"Just that. Promise," he said as he walked in front of a new monitor and on it Rose noticed that it had the same crack that was on Amy's wall when she was a child

"Okay," Amy said, walking away and the Doctor noticed the monitor and switched it off and both he and Rose walked towards Amy "So, are you okay, then?" He asked Amy. "'Cause this place sometimes i can make people feel a bit… You know."

"I'm fine. I'm Fine," Amy said, "It's just… There's a whole world in here like you both 's all true. I thought… Well, I started to think that maybe you both were like two mad people with a box."

"Amy Pond," he said, "There's something you better understand about us, 'cause it's important and one day your life may depend on it. We are definitely two mad people with a box." He then laughed "Yeah." he and Rose went back over to the console "Goodbye Leadworth," he said "Hello, everything!"He pulled down the dematerialization switch and they held onto the console as the Tardis dematerialized.

Please review and tell me if I'm making Rose sound like well… Rose Because I still don't know how to write her properly and I need a beta-reader.

I might rewrite Meanwhile in the Tardis next, which comes immediately after the episode.