ep39 (w17 ep1) Raccoon Revenge (Word count 390)
this was supposed to come in last week but I want to begin cowriting chapters with my occasional beta writer Cooker l.l since in the end of the day I am only one person and my beta writer and me do like working as a team. not to mention editing is taking about as long as making this.
this chapter gets a little closer to what this was supposed to be in the first place. wacky stuff happening with many cousins along with a few plot points imitating soap operas. on with the show.
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In a world where Magic and Science meet. Where the mystical wonder, and tension is always at the surface just waiting to react. The Magical Generations.
as Janet's mum travels on her Device currently in raven form. she has a plan on how to get her back by surprise. (and probably without her relative knowing it was her). she has some pieces of trash and recycling to put on her lawn and if she has time she might do the raccoon thing she originally planned. but as she begins to dump the trash from above out of the makeshift door (1) she gets there she sees her awake on the porch. she did not planned for her to be relaxing outside at this time but what are you going to do. of course she already dumped a few pieces down before she noticed Murph ((2) for more) recycling plant owner) laying back in her patio chair.
The recycling plant owner sees the stuff falling from the sky and when does what is going on. she has her suspicions it was not her tool but she goes to check anyway out back.
as the recycling owner goes to check Janet's mum lands the raven vehicle in the backyard. She was shocked that Murph was relaxing outside at night but decide to keep the opportunity to scare her immediately as a raccoon.
as Murphy is checking out her recycling truck which seems to still be in landform something comes towards her. it seemed to be a raccoon of some sort. on the other end Janet's mom operating the tool was feeling revenge being served. when she comes up to her she sees her being a little spooked
as the device in raccoon form puts up the claws but in doing so she seems to mistakenly pressed the button to turn people into animals in this case a rat.
she does not know what to do with this considering she was in the middle of controlling her device when this happens. she's tries to reach for the controllers to turn her back (luckily the makers tools thought ahead and make the controllers for animal transformation do not require human like hands.) but it was still for just long enough to make you guess if it is not A raccoon.
when Murphy was about to pick it up the tool moved away causing her to flinch. in the process a rat coming out of it (The rat being Janet's mom) causing her to step away making a escape possible.
(1) A lot of the animals form seen on the magic school bus seem to have doors. not all of them but a lot of them. (I even kept in mind when choosing the bird size so the "trash" can actually fit through the door of said animal.) it was going to be either raven or crow.
(2) The recycling lady's name. (from the Christmas episode in the original series) also miss fizzles cousin.
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I hope you like the ending. actually the rat animal transformation (including the animal itself) was completely Cooker l.l's idea. (The raccoon was my idea) this chapter would not have been possible without her cowriting and I hope to have her cowriting more in the future. (though I did not realize how many plot points have to be explained apparently in terms of the multiple magical tools) anyhow hopefully with a little help I will not go insane with the overload. this might be a good time to say that she did not read the previous chapters she did not edit. and I forgot that I mentioned my plans in the previous chapter, focusing on the advice I got. (I remember the plans, I just did not think I always stated them out loud.) so I had to fix it backwards the next day.
I keep calling the parents in the series (kid's name) mum or dad because it is simpler for the reader even if it is not completely realistic. I know grown-ups do not call eachother kid's mum but in the end of the day this is a kids show so it is going to reflect how kids speak.
The next episode is most likely to be the last episode for the summer reflecting the summer rerun schedule many TV shows have. I will be back in the fall probably near the beginning or end of September. enough to recuperate some of my episodes but hopefully not be completely 'forgotten' before then. (or worse moved on to the point that you cannot fit me in the schedule anymore.)
