ep41 (w18 ep1) Looking Through Leftovers (word count 257)
I am back for the fall. I will likely take a break in the winter. not because I am breaking away because because that was likely to always happen because winter is the busy season for the fan community. it seems that stuff is falling into place somehow the fact is making a soap opera is a lost art of sorts since the chunk of the soap operas have been there for over two decades at very very least (most 4 to 5 decades). and a lot of them were made by one person (get name). (well other than that beloved uk radio soap opera that gets mentioned so often) I never thought how hard it was going to be to get the character situated. but seriously look at every soap opera usually takes 40 to 50 episodes to get anything begun. dark shadow did not even have its main character introduced until near episode 60. (on the top of my head) I do my best and that is all I can give. anyhow let us begin the fall with some repercussions. (or at least opinions)
i usually try not to put same storylines back to back but they will be other storylines in the coming weeks.
Sadly the website is being very mean giving me a security check endless load thing not even save anything unless I copy paragraph by paragraph. anyhow enjoy. (I did use a text document at the end in which I use the leftovers are my first attempt to upload onto this site some things went weird that could been worse.) Do you know what that was 2 times when let me edit this is like the worst thing ever, now it is not allowed me to make the page breaks, I guess they are only allowed for Copy and Paste.
New system , are quotes or apostrophe when surrounding a word. I am sorry for my foreign audience about this.
previously on the magical generations (more detailed because of the hiatus, website did not accept certain sentence, no joke.)
I can do the bins anywhere i like, Janet mom begins to dump the trash from above out of the makeshift door.
Murphy sees it from the porch, comes towards her as a raccoon, malfunctions escapes but with a glance.
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In a world where Magic and Science meet. Where the mystical wonder, and tension is always at the surface just waiting to react. The Magical Generations.
the recycling plant owner Murphy is still cleaning her backyard that smells of ,garbage,. (1) she is thinking that the trash from above from the other night sure made a mess. But she has no idea on who could have done and after triple checking the equipment knows it was not one of her machines. she tries to think who in the family that has a tool would do vandalize and want to cause the end of the world (2).
she thinks into who could have possibly done that. she does not think Arnold,s family even if they hate the hefty use of magic in the recycling plant. She looks carefully through everything so as to recycle everything not anything goes to waste. but as she was tidying it up she runs into a portion of an address along with the few letters of a familiar name a j.
it was probably someone else from that house but which one of her parents. she cannot even imagine it. what would make either of them do a chaotic act like this. she thought angrily she would give someone the recycling talk of her life and have them help sort out this place but before she can show her rage her eye sees something. She wipes away a little of debris to find what looks like a few coins, very particular coins. she thought these look familiar, they seem to be the coins someone she known uses for a prank. now that is something she needs to look into.
.(1) this is obviously is off character and is from a narrator other words my beta writer were more confusing.(this description was 3 to 4 sentences for her version of which I understood 3 words and did not exist in mine.) the new system is not allowing quotes or apostrophe. I put apostrophes in the draft.
.(2) this statement is based on the usual recycling stereotype. Murphy was actually on the lighter end then even Miss frizzle in this holiday episode from the original series.(though keep in mind with the statement how extreme these got with the ,end of the world, recycling examples)there was one other option ,,Who of the people in her family would do vandalize or worse bring trash into the world.,, but I decided to keep it because it is the reason she did not suspect the angry person who got a ticket immediately and to keep with the rage.
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I have to make sacrifices to please the system, without any method to separate the note from the story or have apostrophes. I decided is that line break are more important then the above.
I feel like Janet mum would had enough sense to avoid having anything with her own name on it but maybe she forgot about some of her other relatives names making sure her children,s names were not in there. my beta editor did not understand this but I love her anyway. (she a parent do not get any ideas) which is why I usually limit these to 1 sentence. as you can imagine no one ever edits the author notes.
it took me a month for me to get the courage to ask the beta writer for help because she was busy. I have a lotta help from my beta writer for this. this would not be possible without her. granted everything was not smooth sailing, she needed to really lower with the big and complicated words which made it hard to edit (I had to use contacts clues).granted the way she editors she will do it once she will take no criticism and that is it. but I cannot really complain to Cooker l.l too much, she is from my ,regular, life after all.
it took me a month for me to get the courage to ask the beta writer for help because she was busy. I have a lotta help from my beta writer for this. this would not be possible without her. granted everything was not smooth sailing, she needed to really lower with the big and complicated words which made it hard to edit (I had to use contacts clues).
but the ending with the coins, which I thought was dumb when I first saw it but grew on me. without her that would definitely not have happened even if the only reason that happened was due to a misunderstanding that all the characters were teachers or students, go figure.
anyhow portions of the next chapters will be from draft scripts with the ending being the partial name or address. particularly the ones from this week since and possibly portions of the one right after. I was careful not to write the one right after into this one was done leading to a leading to a delay in writing new ones,well I will go into that information when the time comes to avoid spoilers. but there might be a few inconsistencies.I do have a idea who the coins will belong to but this was written this weekend and I want to at least go between the two people I am considering quickly. i hopefully cool down by then.