ep42 (w18 ep2) Meet on the Street (Word count 376)

yes I am aware I just did a argument storyline but this one will have more twists. for this one hopefully you will expect the unexpected. I am likely to copy and paste each paragraph. The line breaks unnecessary I cannot risk that disappearing. sorry that last chapter had unmanageability.

here is the thing I spent Monday through Thursday figuring out how to put linebreaks (basically two dots) getting dinged every edit after Monday 9pm. (should have not re-uploaded it for One or two corrections but i try to do best by my readers.) to then find out that it no longer worked with apostrophes.

this left me really little time to write anything or combine the two versions. I have and the fact that I got no views is not really making me happy. (hopefully it is the Halloween one that is causing the lack of views which I can live with) this chapter was made back in August to September.

this is a second version of the chapter. The first one was smoother dialogue but I change around the relationship to a father character and stuff got jumbled but I did my best. I tried to combine the two but it was just too difficult to fix when everything can be done in the next chapter. also I had a lot going on on this week so this chapter was not changed. nothing in this chapter was written after the new ending of the last chapter but I do not think it changes anything. this is still one of my favourite so far even with all of that but that could be because I know what it was supposed to be. Also I noticed I got 2000 views thank you for everyone who read this.

New system , are quotes or apostrophe when surrounding a word. I am sorry for my foreign audience about this.

previously on the magical generations

Janet joy riding the Magic school bus, Arnold's father seeing it from a window, is that the bus.

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In a world where Magic and Science meet. Where the mystical wonder, and tension is always at the surface just waiting to react. The Magical Generations.

Bob was attempting to repossessed Arnold's father Device. they are both against using it and are One of the decently powered ones. he knows there is certain compatibility involved but most of them are not that stubborn in terms of temporary users.

he was able to sneak the tool but before he could do anything he saw his dad Leo say where are you doing planning on doing something halfway. he says nothing just taking a walk.

The dad says come on I always tell you to wish for the best. with Bob saying back sometimes you have to actually use some drive to force the thing in. With the father saying 'of course you do but sometimes you need to Believe you can accomplish what you want.' with Bob slipping up 'saying trust me I can accomplish what I want now what do you want to talk to me about', losing his patience.

Leo said I was just coming to tell you that miss frizzles tool was seen flying during broad daylight undisguised. Bob says that sounds unlikely where are you getting at. with the father responding what I am getting at is what Arnold dad saw. Bob said I do not know what you getting at I am not sure if she really did such a thing, I do not even know what to say but I got some where I wanna be.' slightly uncomfortable or at hearing the name of the person whos device he has currently hidden along with weirded out that any of them would you something so out in the open. but before he could leave a kid rush through them causing him to trip up and drop the device on the ground. he tried to hide it by kicking it somewhat out of sight but it was already too late to avoid it being seen on the ground for his father Leo so the father said this is not aligned, why in the world do you have his tool.

but before he could answer Newton the brother of Bob came by saying 'this is not as it should be.' seeing the situation at hand along with being prepared to report a new one. May I ask what you two are doing.

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why is Newton there to report you got to wait and see. I actually wrote this with the father Leo character being the brother. (they were going to be too hot headed rival brothers) then I realise wrong generation and I do not have any similar left characters for replacement. at the end I decided just to keep as the father. (basically correct all the pronouns) I think it actually is a decent and more importantly unique from some of the other ones we have are going in here.

also I imagine Newton sounds like blade's brother from techman Blade in terms of he is not emotionless and likes to taunt along with being distant. looking back a month later I think I could do something more but the show must go on and we have more episodes to do stuff with rather than mess with the introduction. name changes for having the characters not be character dad or character mom will probably be done after technical difficulties are fixed.

along with my previous notes back in week 2 I found an error. I realise according to the Wiki on the family page Perlstein family (which is somehow a separate page) they say the father does not appear in the gene machine. I think there is evidence enough that it is on the mother side. this will be the way it will be for future chapters even if it kind of mufflers the continuation. in terms of the technical difficulties I have emailed the website about the apostrophes. hopefully it will be fixed within the next 2 weeks. like I said a few chapters ago I will likely take another hiatus during winter Exchange season. sadly I feel like I might of lost my audience from the summer hiatus but hopefully some people come back.

next week on the magical generations

This is not as it should be the brother , their father says but that's not yours to wish, you know they do not use those in that side, uncle packs

as the search on magic continues.