ep43 (w19 ep1) Brother Falling In (228 words)
I was able to get one apostrophe in last episode but I am still not gonna play around since some of the other things like the table contents was not able to be done. anyhow other than technical flaws. I actually spent a half hour with many different chapter ideas this was one of the best I got (some good ones involved puns , others were just too long which remove them from the running). hilariously enough I actually forgot about this chapter since it was labelled under ep3 for last week (I store of these by the week) in one of the drafts when I was looking how I previously wrote Newton. this ep3 idea was originally done to pick up the speed though a lot of issues some technical some other commitments lead to that not happening.
anyhow the conversation from the last chapter continues, I hope you like it I did enjoy making this. read the chapter before this before reading this one since unlike many others it is basically a part 2 continuation.
I realize I never told you how I thought Bob sounded when I mentioned how Newton sounded. Bob sounds like the main character from the honeymooners at his most annoyed and angriest. (I wish I can choose a more modern character but I am having trouble thinking of the queueI am having trouble thinking of a character with the equal forcefulness and whininess) his personality is NOT based on him and unlike Newton's Voice comparison (mentioned last chapter) in terms of looks I do not have the character name in my head meaning I have to think through who to compare it to (in terms of popularity enough to search) as the best approximation when writing this but I am referring to that style accent and forcefulness.
New system , are quotes or apostrophe when surrounding a word. I am sorry for my foreign audience about this. (edit 2024 - fixed dialogue apostrophe when surrounding a word since at the time the website how you really really strange but how you really really strange but in which it stopped acceptingin which it stopped accepting apostrophes in crops apostrophes and quote marks. (yes really)
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previously on the magical generation
Basically Bob is in possession of Arnold's dad's tool without permission. (rest is in previous chapter)
In a world where Magic and Science meet. Where the mystical wonder, and tension is always at the surface just waiting to react. The Magical Generations.
This is not as it should be the brother Newton said. with the dad Leo saying 'I might say you should wish, it may come true but that's not yours to wish. you might always want everything to work your way with that temper but you can not take things like that. everyone knows those are personal to the owner.'
Bob said 'no one will miss this. you know they do not use those in that side of the family.' but before anything more could be discussed Newton said 'I did not mean to fall into this situation between you and that brother of mine but something has gone wrong near the recycling plant it sounds like something of a disaster happened and I was to get bob as you two were wondering about.'
Bob said 'why in this universe would Murphy be interested.' His brother said 'I do not know Bob but she seemed to think you had something to do with it. but leave it to you to have something even she does not feel is worth sorting.' Bob said 'yeah Newton are you going to fall into something else before..' before the dad came in saying 'we will talk about this after', referring to the device he took before Bob can make any jokes at his brother. at that they both went down to the recycling plant.
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I was considering making this longer when I saw the count but I just do not have it in me even though I was really planning on having some fun with these character. I am so against this blocking older devices for nonsense reasons like security. security is a good thing but there is no way that the best way to block security is to make people older compatible device is not work deliberately. if eventually the devices burden is too much for the website fine but but not deliberately. I may have to try use Firefox even know that Application uses more ram than Safari (like many times per window) but that feels like supporting this destructive practice. (by the way I am not against the fanfiction website as much as I am against their security partner who is actually doing this.)
Anyway I know they were 'simple' cell phones (I had one that seem to have the battery power 15 minutes) though I know home lines for more used back then. (but I do not really have people to talk to,I would see them) originally I wrote it as a cell phone but decided to make a landline with the wondering about comment. this is because I got my mind mixed up when I edited it not when I wrote it when I found it. I was going through the chapter after this also (which is now two chapters after) so remembering phone politics from the 2000s got a little muddled with the 1990s because of the stress of finding a chapter I forgot to post. Anyway I know they were 'simple' cell phones (I had one that seem to have the battery power 15 minutes) though I know home lines for more used back then. originally I wrote it as a cell phone but decided to make a landline with the wondering about comment. this is because I got my mind mixed up when I edited it not when I wrote it when I found it. I was going through the chapter after this also (which is now two chapters after) so remembering phone politics from the 2000s got a little muddled with the 1990s because of the stress of finding a chapter I forgot to post. I was alive and able to remember then, I am not that young. I just was not thinking let me compare the usage of home lines since I did not know the iPhone was gonna be invented to change it. Granted the timeline was really only for it cell phones and when Easter occurs each year (and I spent hours care on each of them) so that is why I am so hard on myself for that. we have another appearance from the uncle next chapter, so stay tuned.
