ep46 (w20 ep2) A Missing Piece (word count 244)
yes I have not forgotten this storyline i just been busy with the others. I know these notes have been a mix match I honestly planned these notes more sometimes than I planned the chapters. (though in different ways) it is my only time to give perspective for my story outside the realm of my characters so I take it seriously. (you could probably guess I take this seriously considering there double the length of most of the chapters) along with giving reason for very niche things (A chunk of the characters appear only in words). this story has been both a love and a pain through I hope there is some value to it, anyhow let's see how the father is doing.
previously on the magical generations
(storyline begins - ep22 (w8 ep3) (ch24)
(Janet says) let me see what this will do, bus transforms into a jet circling the sky with her in it, how to get it down, ralphie helps, The teacher sees it out of her room, Arnold's dad did too,
later in ep32 (w13 ep2) (ch34)
it has been a long time Cuz how is it going , do not play dumb to me me and everyone at my job saw your tool flying all over the place randomly, well you know these things happen when things get messy, i hope you have a nice day.
recap end
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In a world where Magic and Science meet. Where the mystical wonder, and tension is always at the surface just waiting to react. The Magical Generations.
The dad of Arnold was going home thinking something just seems wrong. thinking in his head how would a device get ridden so recklessly, how could such an act happen. yes frizzle, has a habit of using the bus outside of normal operation and relies on people not believing what they do not expect more than the rest of them. he even knows that the bus has a habit of how should he say ,'doing different commands then given' but he has problems believing the rushed 'The bus going out for a stroll.' that Ms frizzle gave. there is no way it would take that long to make sure no one would be able to spot it. if it was that out of control it would have not been able to steer in such a way either. something else must have influenced it. so who or what would have done it then again, if it was really not ms frizzle.
he goes into his room thinking about who to check and notices his own gadget is missing. now he wonders what happened and if it is the same person that was playing with frizzles bus and why she would cover it up. Who would do this, Who snuck into his room. he thinks of ms fizzle and really doubt it was her. this leaves him with the issue that he really has to think through, this might be more than just carelessness after all.
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this was supposed to be a chapter about maybe them finding out Janet did the joyriding but stuff just sort of happen. anyway this works a lot better than the introspective versions I made before. I am still trying to figure out how this is going to affect Bob along with other things but yeah this might get interesting and possibly more serious fast. The recap was really detailed more than usual because I realise it has been quite awhile since that was mentioned and it was sandwiched between the easter dinner plot line. I probably going to have to go back for grammar edits on one of those chapters since there was a time when I was writing three chapters a week.
yeah the timeline and this one is a little messed up. I honestly do not even know where this fits except was was in the same three day period. The exact day this fits does not even matter in the long (or short) run anyway. also I know there has been a very few of our classmate characters recently. I still have plans for this next portion is long but this is what happened between October and November.
I have mentioned the view counter quite a few times ,probably more than most. I do not make my writing a certain way to get a certain amount of views like some people do social media but I even though I write stories that I like I do want to have people enjoyed them. most importantly I kind of wanna make sure they are understandable which is where the view counter comes in though recently it seems that the counter might be not working.
this issue seems to be happening for a while likely since back in September (like almost exactly when the month begins) to October but it was a secondary problem to staff barely being able to post without playing around with the text and avoiding apostrophes which that one seems to have been going since October to November. also if I do not get views for two months I am actually not vain enough to say it must be broken maybe just no one wanted to view it and I definitely had stories that would get no views for multiple months. (Not that I usually check thoses 1 shots even once a year in terms of views before publishing a story like this since it does not work on phones.) also I went on hiatus for about a month at that exact moment and it seem to follow the usual trend of less viewers about three days later.
I would most likely still be on this opinion except considering it happening within the beginning of a month along with the other 'security problems' I wonder if there is some problem possibly due to the new release of AI that makes it so my view counter is broken. I will say that the reason I actually took about a month to post the next week between w18 and w19 is if no one was viewing might as well touch it up as I deal with the exchanges (along with the coin thing). I also saw another Holloween story that I assume must be the cause of my viewage decrease and once Halloween is over and that story finishes I can check again to see if people if interest would increase and maybe the site will fix the posting issues. it was about two weeks in that it occurred to me that there might be some errors with the counter when I put the timings and 2 and 2 together but by that point I still have to figure out the things with the story along with exchanges. I would love to hear if anyone else has this issue or if it is just me.
next week on the magical Generations
uncle comes, I am still figuring it out.
as the search on magic continues.
