ep67 (w30 ep2) A Additional Spray (772 words)
this is hopefully going to go through a few things. after last week I think I might put a importants meter ranging very, medium and some storylines and chapters go through a few things more than others. (and some storylines are to get my bearings or character development along with introduction) I like what I do but I recognise that the early chapters have major errors (it takes 6 months to make a voice dictation work) and those are the chapters that people see first.
it occurred to me that many houses have security systems. I did not want to go into deep detail about that type of stuff for a story like this (I am not going to give instructions about breaking in here for legal reasons). just assume it is a mix of them being family (and canceling out the security system). or it being magical related and they use another method to bypass it.
this chapter was written in the haste bigger than the last two. I was not sure the layout of the house, luckily in the end that did not matter but I will do better on that like I said last chapter. I do have where to find the set up on the house for the future though.
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In a world where Magic and Science meet. Where the mystical wonder, and tension is always at the surface just waiting to react. The Magical Generations.
as they go to the next house Poseidon says so you also want to get that Family members house too at the same time. I know you have your eyes always sit on pranks but at the same time/night. Bob says we pranked multiple members before, I know it will work. Poseidon says ok but this makes less sense then your usual antics. Poseidon thinking Bob usually likes more showy pranks then basic splashes. Newton says I found my gadget it seem to have dropped in the backseat. Bob says good riddance. (1)
they make it to Arnold's house, Bob said is there enough water in everything this time or are we going to have to figure out the hose again. Newton giving him a look. Poseidon says yes with Bob saying great. (they make a excuse for going inside) we are going to do a extra surprise Bob answered back. Poseidon says really Bob said ya we came up with it earlier and we are sure it is going to jam it in. Newton says plus we want to double check the sinks and make sure there is more than enough water so everything continues as it should be. Poseidon says ok but make it fast I do not wanna watch you both joke about for the whole night. at that they left and went into the house.
they enter the house they considered going for the sink but the both of them were not sure if it might be slightly noisy and risk the main plan. after that was settled Newton says you know what you gotta do. Bob said but what if we need to use it like for the last house. Newton said that would be a bad idea considering the owner is in the next room not to mention I have my own.
Bob did not even bother arguing knowing how bad idea that would be. Bob says fine I will go up the stairs and you make sure the water is available in the sink. Newton says like I am going to believe that, I am coming up with you. Bob answers but that would obviously make too much noise. Newton says I will watch the door to make sure it does not squeak. Bob grumbles but shakes his head okay.
as they walked up quietly they found the room and slightly open the door. Bob said 'should I try to steer in there.'Newton said 'and bump everything like back at the last house.'Bob shakes his head okay as he tries to slip into the room. he places his feet carefully on the carpet and makes it to the bedroom drawer seeing the face sleeping as he opens the drawer. at that moment Bob notices how loud the drawers. (not the loudness of a broken or only partially working drawer but it makes a the back-and-forth grumble sound)
Bob tries his best but knows he has to be so careful as he takes it out and puts it back in he drops in and closes the drawer a little fast. he is not sure if he heard a snore or him partially waking up but at that Bob goes out as fast as he can slightly stumbling but not complete falling. Newton looking oh no but holding the door for Newton to escape not making any extra sound then he is already making trying to leave the room fast.
at that Newton went down the stairs only carefully setting the door closed enough to not let be obviously open in first glance from in the room but not attempting to put it in the frame, not really risking the time to quiet the closing sound. at that Newton pointed to the
bathroom when where Bob shake his head yes. at that they filled up the upstairs bathroom sink with Newton saying and you complain about me stumbling and Bob arguing back.
before they went downstairs which is when Newton says that plan fell down with Bob saying you try. well at least it seems they are not getting up. Newton says 'at least someone other than me is down', remembering how he sometimes stumbles. Bob said I guess at least we can finish everything else here without stumbling. they prepare a few more things on the first floor but about three minutes in a particular a family member got the strength to come downstairs with both of the brothers thinking I thought they were asleep they rushed out since they finished mostly everything but not before they were noticed by arnold's dad saying what are you doing here.
(1) I was going to say they were driving newtons gadget but by the time I thought of the chapter before was already published. yes this has some inconsistencies but this is the best I could come up with. I know this does not come a lot to play on the chapter but that is because I was not even sure how I should include it.
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I am going to say that none of the chapter minus the final few sentences well written in any sort of order half of the middle was written before the other portions of the middle which is why some of the stuff like the lead ins kind of fit weirdly. I actually had trouble for deciding many things in this chapter including if they turn on the sink first or last because of the noise of a sink would cause all of this problems. again I probably should hthought that I have very little clue about suburban housing before I made this. I am not really pleased with this chapter this does not even sound like me because of over editing dialogue making it to perfect while still being sloppy with set up and stuff like that.
I did see a opportunity even though not an outcome for the possibility of them going into the house for a return. but I realized that I was trying to make a result instead of letting everything work itself out luckily I figured out out before making the end which is something I actually am proud of. I write these as I go for the most part. (those segments with Arnold are more of an exception than the rule) and I hope future episodes will be more on it.
this note is already too long but I am going on a trip that was planned three years in advanced. (to see the eclipse) I am going to be seeing it with my family in likely one room. because of this I will not be able to write because I kinda do not wanna voice dictate all the chapters in the presence of people. this means the week of the 8 of April is going to be chapter free.
next week on the magical generations
I heard you guys are arguing, more surprises ahead
As the search on magic continues.