Chapter 9. *note* the ship is still pretty far from the planet about a two days travel worth but the crews idea was the night before the days travel they would take over and fly the ship, the rest of the way. Silver's plan was to take the long boat while there were still two days travel away from the planet so in the crew plan to take over they weren't there.

second note* I don't wanna change the original story too much. I like the scenes on treasure planet so im I'm going to try to keep it the same. everything stays the same in the movie except the only people on the island are Doc, Amelia, Jim and Silver who later met B.E.N. Amelia was never shot and sliver never betrayed jim. Enjoy-

their plan was a success. They successfully took the longboat and beat them to treasure planet in the night. Because the planet was so far from the ship the longboat ran out of gas and crash landed, finding a kooky broken robot.

"HI, IM B.E.N. Bio electronic navigator!" The roboat said shaking the captain's hand like crazy. "WOOOOW, thats a nice uniform, chaptin flit used to wear something snazzy like that!" BEN turned his attention to the Little pink blob that was floating around his head.

"you know Nathaniel Flint?" Jim inquired

"know him? He made me" BEN responded while gears popped out of his stomach.

"mr.hawkins, if you want to keep that blabbering robot, I suggest you keep him quiet and away from me." Captain Amelia replied annoyed.

"can you take us to him?" Jim asked

"oh sure i can jimmy!" BEN eagerly, replied.

"ok but one thing. You have to be quite" jim said as if he was talking to a child

"SURE ANYTHING FOR MY BUDDY JIMMY" BEN yelled while jumping into jims arms. Jim dropped him on the floor and pulled his map out of his pocket, opened it and the small group followed the lights.

when the group got to the end of the light, they were incredibly confused.

"maybe we outta jump off?" Sliver suggested.

"no you numbskull we'll die. Jim try opening it and closing it" amila snapped back

"i am not a numbskull!" The two began bickering

"your right. Too much metal you dont even have a skull"

while the two were bickering doc had taken a closer look to BEN. "This oldern style of engineering often used ground systems to hide things." He murmured.

"jim" doc called out, "check the floor"

sure enough there was a circle shaped dent in the ground. Jim popped the map into it and a triangle portal grew. Instantly silver and Amelia stopped bickering in awe.

The small group entered silver filling his pockets with what he could while Jim went to the ship that had looked like it's been abandoned for years with BEN following not far behind. Amelia stood near the entrance. "i cant believe it..."

"me neither" doc responded next to her.

as Jim explored the ship messing around, he found a piece that looked like it belong to BEN. Has been turned around Jim popped the missing piece into BEN head. BEN begin rebooting. "Finally, peace and quite." Jim said as he grapped some intriguing looking treasure.

"is that Captain flint" BEN asked after a few seconds. Jim looked behind and his face dropped. They stood a skeleton wearing Captain Flatts uniform hat, and boots. "Oh..oh my gosh.. its captian flit.." jim said in awe. "he looked different from the last time I've seen him when he told me the whole planet was rigged to blow" BEN said innocently and confused.

"THE WHAT!?" jim screamed. Just then the planet began to rumble and split. fire and lava, emerging from the giant crack where treasure once was.

"ITS A TRAP, RUN!" Jim yelled out to the others. Jim went under the ship, hoping to find some sort of solution to leave this exploding planet. He messed with some wires and electricity cracked "YES" the boy said happily relieved.

"JIMBO, what are ye doin!? We need to leave!" Sliver yelled

"if im not there in five minutes, leave without me!" Jim yelled back.

"WHAT!? Are ye MAD!?" Sliver creid out. He turned to doc and Amelia, who are already making their way out. "WE CANT LEAVE HIM HERE" he shout after them.

"i am not leaving my buddy jimmy!" BEN said on the ship with jim while pulling Jim's feet from out under the ship. Jim gave him a cold, dead stare that could kill the bones off any sane person. "unless he looks at me like that BYE JIM!" And with that the annoying robot left.

Jim continue to work on the ship so we finally got it working enough to fly it out.

Silver was panicking. He was close enough to the entrance to make an exit but his feet refused to leave without jim. Just then the biggest ship silvers ever seen emerged from behind him and flew up over his head. Silver laugh after realizing what Jen's plan was and ran after the ship before the planet could explode. "Hop on" jim called out to the group below him tossing down a rope. The crew climbed aboard as a Jim stared off. He didnt get far before a horrendous explosion sounded off behind their ship sending it thousands of miles per hour. Scorching hot rubies gold emeralds, and diamonds flew towards the ship.

"GET DOWN!" Amila ordered. Everyone hit the deck except BEN who was clueless and jim who was steering the ship away from the burning planet. A rudy grazed his already scarred cheek, making his already permanent scar more deeper and noticeable. Jim held strong, and finally steered the ship out of distance and range from the burning planet.