Hey guys, sorry, as usual I am sorry for the late chapter, I just wasn't sure how to write it. It's been so long since I've wrote chapters for this story that didn't have much fighting in it you know?
But anyway, on with the chapter.
Peace in our future, but the past?
Trunks and 18 remained in each other's arms for a while, the half saiyan could no longer hear her crying. "18, are you ok?"
The cyborg grabbed his shoulders and got out of his embrace wiping her eyes. She looked up at Trunks with a smile. "I'm ok, better than ok." She said with a smile that Trunks had to admit was pretty. "Thank you, Trunks."
Trunks tried not to blush and shook his head. "Don't thank me I should have accepted you and 17 after our fight against 13."
"I know you were trying."
"I was." Trunks nodded with a sigh. "We'll I have to take care of something, I'll see you around, and let me know if 17's around will you?"
She nodded as he started exiting, when she see's him opening the door she says. "Trunks"
The half saiyan turned around. "Yeah"
18 opened her mouth but hesitated before saying. "Call me Lazuli."
Trunks raised an eyebrow. "What"
"It was my name before.. Dr Gero kidnapped me and my brother." She stated. "I didn't really care for it before but now, I think I'd like to be called by my old name."
Trunks nodded. "Alright, see you later... Lazuli." He said as he flew off to capsule corporation.
Android 18 or Lazuli watched him leave and smiled. It felt good to be called by her real name, before she never cared for it and simply referred to herself as 18. However after being controlled by that mad scientist and having Trunks accept her and 17 she felt like she should take her human name, it was like starting over all again. And it felt good.
Little did her and Trunks know 17 was by the house listening in on them, with a smile written on his face.
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Trunks continued flying feeling good that he started patching things up with 18, he'll have to settle things with 17 later. But now he needs to see his mother. He would have talked to her about what he wanted to know but he wanted to patch things up with his new friends first.
The warrior made it home and walked in his house. He sees his mother standing in front of him.
"So how'd it go?"
Trunks smiled. "I think it went well." He then gave a serious look. "And mom, there's something I need to ask."
"Oh?" Bulma gave a worried look. "What is it?"
"I know it wasn't that long since the whole Paragas mess started but is the time machine ready?"
Bulma sighed as she heard the question. "I'm afraid not, I'm sorry Trunks, this isn't something I can just rush on." She said squeezing her fists. "It's been a year, who knows what that monster has done."
Trunks nodded remembering that monster Cell that killed him. 'If only I'd been this strong..., even half as strong as I am now then I could have stopped that thing.' He thought punching one hand into his palm.
"Hey" Bulma reminded. "We have to remember that Goku might be in that timeline, and if that's true then that monster won't have a chance."
Trunks nodded and started walking away. "Alright mom, I'm gonna go rest up, I feel exhausted after everything."
"Ok son, have a good rest."
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Trunks lied down in his room thinking about everything that transpired. After Paragas was taken care of he assumed everything else would just be easy, but then Broly showed up and proved that wrong. If it weren't for his training with Tarble, then Gohan and his father contacting him he would never have found the power needed to take down the legendary super saiyan. And also he might have never accepted 17 and 18 as they really are, innocent.
Then even if somehow he were to survive Broly, he doubts he would ever have taken the time to actually accept them as part of the z-fighters, even if he had no choice. As much as he hate to admit it, there may be others as strong or even stronger than Broly out there. And if that were to happen without this new power he and the others would have been demolished if not for his father and Gohan telling him of how he could harness the new transformation.
And now he wonders how the timeline will deal with Cell when he's done with whatever he was planning.
Also since it's been a year since he's been back from the timeline he visited. How would they fare with Broly? The power that monster had was beyond anything he'd ever fought, even 17 and 18 who were stronger than any of them when he left. But as his mother said, Goku is in that timeline, hopefully he's thought of something.
Trunks squeezed his fists, he needs to find out how these two timelines are faring, or he'd be riddled with guilt. He sighed as he slowly began to relax. There's nothing he can do now but wait... unless. Trunks gets up realizing something. "Of course."
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Trunks had gathered all 7 of the dragonballs, his mother and 16 were at his sides. The half-saiyan looked to his mother. "Do you think he could recreate your time machine?"
Bulma shook her head. "I don't think so but let's just try to see how there doing."
He nodded and spread his arms over the dragonballs. "Shenron come forth and grant my wish."
The dragonballs glowed, the dragon came through the dragonballs and darkened the skies. The dragon Shenron appeared looking down at Trunks and his mother. "You have gathered the 7 dragonballs, now speak your wishes."
Trunks looked up at Shenron and spoke his first wish. "Shenron, can you show us how other timelines are doing, like the one I visited, and the one the android called Cell traveled to?"
Shenron's eyes glowed red. "Very well."
Trunks's eyes glowed as well, he began to see things. He sees Cell, the creature that stole his time machine. After many events, finding out about what he called his 'perfect' form. Another version of himself fighting and losing to the bio-Android. And how Gohan using the same form he used against Broly to destroy Cell with help from his father who died saving the earth.
And then he sees another timeline, the timeline he visited. He sees Goku and his father fighting and defeating meta Cooler, who seemed to be made of the same material 13 was made out of. Then he sees a familiar Saiyan, Paragas, inviting Vegeta to this 'new' planet Vegeta, only this one seemed to have a different plan than the one in this timeline had. He sees Goku witnessing Broly's rage as Paragas tries to calm his son down. And it doesn't stop there.
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(The Unseen timeline)
As Goku sees Paragas trying to calm Broly down, he senses it. This was no doubt the energy he was looking for, the one King Kai warned him about. He's the one, the one who destroyed the southern galaxy. But his power, it was far greater than anything he'd imagine. "I-I don't think even the androids could handle this guy, I better grab Gohan and the others now." He said placing two fingers to his forehead and using instant transmission to teleport to Gohan.
After explaining to his son of the danger, he gathered him, Krillin, Master Roshi and Oolong. Then came the difficult part, convincing a certain prince to come along with them.
"Vegeta, I'm serious, there's no way we can handle this guy, even if we work together."
Vegeta kept walking ignoring the earth raised saiyan. "If this Broly really is the legendary super saiyan, then I will be the one to finish him, I don't need your help."
Goku watched him walk away. "Oh yeah, and what if he's stronger than Cooler or the androids?"
Vegeta stopped walking and turned around with an angry expression. "Are you mocking me?"
"I'm just saying, why not increase your chances, I mean the legendary super saiyan is suppose to be the strongest, don't you think he might compare to androids 17 and 18?" He asked seriously. "Look, I have a great place to train, it's called the hyperbolic time chamber, you'll get a years worth of training within a day, but only two of us at a time could get in." He explained quickly not wishing to remain on this planet with Broly at their current level.
Vegeta growled at the thought of losing to another enemy but thought to what Kakarot spoke. The legendary super saiyan is suppose to be the strongest among saiyans. Chances are that he would be strong even by the android's or Cooler's standards. And if that's the case they might have to rely on the low class saiyan's spirit bomb technique again. And he would not enjoy that. He may be stronger than he was against the androids but, he was still below their level. He clenched his fists but smirked at Kakarot's proposal, it may put him back on top. "Fine Kakarot, but I will take the chamber first, alone."
Goku sighed in relief. "Of course Vegeta, but let's go quick, we can't have Broly or his dad know were leaving."
"Hmph" Vegeta merely grunted as he got close to Goku and the others.
Also all the slaves on this planet seemed to grab on as well, and so with instant transmission they all vanished leaving "New Planet Vegeta" behind, for now.
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The next day Paragas looked all over the palace and could not find Vegeta or the others. "Damn it, where could they have gone?" He looked around. "Could they have seen through my ruse, no, even if they did they couldn't have all gotten of this planet so quickly."
Behind him Broly was standing wearing his usual blank face.
Paragas growled knowing there's only one place they could be. But the whole point of this planet was to avoid damaging the earth, he'd like it in perfect condition unlike this pathetic rock. "If only Kakarot hadn't" He stopped mid sentence and turned around to see Broly making a glare from his usual stoic expression. "Broly?"
"Kakarot" He said clenching his teeth in anger.
Paragas tightened the grip of the device on his wrist, the blue gem glowed in front of Broly. "Calm down Broly." He stated hoping to keep his mad son from rampaging again.
But this time the device was having less affect as Broly only kept uttering the name while holding his head in pain. The legendary saiyan's crown looking control device cracked, as he uttered the name again and again. And then when Broly seemed to have calmed down, the giant reached his hand over to Paragas's hand using the control device and squeezed them both.
CRACK!
Paragas pulled his hand back when it was released from Broly. "Gaaaah!" He fell back as he screamed rolling on the ground in pain, he then looked up to see his son looking down on him with a hardened glare, the suppressing device is still on his forehead, keeping his true power locked, but it's clear that now he Broly himself was free. Free from Paragas's control as he feared he'd be one day. "Broly I was only trying to he-"
Broly chuckled as he raised one foot up and stomped it on Paragas's right leg crushing it instantly. "HAHAHA!"
"GAAAH!"
The legendary super saiyan laughed at his father's suffering. "I'll be heading to earth now." He said as he turned back on his father. "Goodbye, dad, hahahaha!" He laughed as he flew towards Paragas's ship.
Paragas was still screaming in pain but was happy that Broly was now gone and away from him. The monster is now free and he won't be able to conquer earth as planned but he didn't care, all that mattered to him was that he was free from his own son.
However that didn't matter as he sees a green glowing ball heading towards him from above. "NOOOOO!" Paragas screamed as he was engulfed in the green energy blast along with the rest of the planet.
Broly looked down outside the spaceship, surrounded in his green energy shield ,as the planet exploded from view he laughed. "Farewell father." He then stepped inside his ship and closed the corridor. The saiyan then set the pressed the start button as the coordinates to earth were already locked on. With a grizzly smile he says. "I'm coming for you Kakarot." He said as the gem in his device cracked even further.
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Meanwhile on earth. Vegeta had just finished his training in the hyperbolic time chamber and he wore a proud grin on his face for discovering the level beyond a super saiyan. And now he waits for the so called legendary super saiyan. The saiyan would have left the planet already in the woman's spaceship but found out from the namek that he sensed this legend destroy New Planet Vegeta with his enhanced hearing.
He looked up as he stood on the lookout waiting impatiently to test his new strength. "You sure he's coming?"
Piccolo looked to the saiyan prince. "Yes and he's coming for Goku."
"Hmph, when will these cretins learn, only I have the right to kill Kakarot." The saiyan spoke and then felt something far off in the distance. A grin spread across his face. "We'll, we'll he's finally here." He stated. "Took him long enough." He then turned to the namek. "Tell Kakarot after he exits the chamber I'll be waiting for him."
Piccolo could sense Broly's power and looked to Vegeta. "If you live."
"Hmph" He simply said as he turned super saiyan and flew straight for Broly's direction.
The saiyan prince kept flying until he sees the giant ship Paragas came to earth in. He stopped as it landed on top of a building in the city. Vegeta waited until he sees the entrance opening showing only one man leaving it, the saiyan giant Kakarot suspected as the legendary super saiyan. The warrior flew and landed in the middle of the city, ignoring the gawking people around them in front of the ship. "So your here, and it looks like you've shown your true colors." He noted the spiky blue hair. " Good"
Broly looked at the prince and growled. "Vegeta, good, first you and then... Kakarot." He stated as he threw a blast to the ground killing everyone in the city beneath him. "Sorry I thought we could use more room.
The prince ignored that not even caring for the people of the city, which was now deserted and ruined "First" Vegeta stated as he powered up. "HAAAAAA!" He screamed as he powered up his golden aura, shaking the ground. His muscles grew as he felt the rush of energy flowing through him until finally he was in the ascended state. He then looked to Broly with a smirk. "And last." He finished.
"Tsk" Broly got out of the ship. "Fine scum."
The battle started in Vegeta's favor until Broly's control device started breaking, the giant was surrounded in a green aura that colored the entire area.
Vegeta watched in awe as Broly powered up, his eyes glowed green as his power grew, he then unleashed a green light that blinded the prince and colored the whole landscape. When Vegeta uncovered his eyes he sees something straight out of his nightmares. But it wasn't the appearance that frightened him but the power he sensed.
Broly's hair became light green, his eyes were without pupils, his muscles were even larger than before, he looked like something straight out of a legend, or a nightmare. He smirks as he sees Vegeta in distraught. "Are you ready prince?"
Vegeta didn't say anything as he allowed his transformation to were off back to his base state. "Your really him." Vegeta said simply shaking. "The legendary super saiyan." The saiyan prince fell to his knees. "Were going to die, were all going to die!"
Broly only laughed as he began walking over to the discouraged warrior. "What's wrong prince, what happened to all that bravado?" He asked as he kept walking.
Just as Vegeta was expecting for his life to end, two warriors stood in front of him with thier backs pointed at him.
Goku and a now teen Gohan stood between Broly and Vegeta. Goku glanced at Vegeta and then looked to Broly. "We'll Vegeta since you had your turn, I guess I'll have mine." He said in an eager tone.
"You can't beat him." He spoke in a surprising tone.
This took Goku by surprised making him turn to his rival. "Vegeta" But then he turned back towards their enemy.
"Kakarot" Broly said with seething anger and then made a malicious smile. "HAHAHAHA, perfect, you will be the first of my victim's!" He yelled powering up his light green aura.
Goku covered his eyes as the monstrous saiyan powered up. "Oh man he's even stronger than I imagined." The earth raised stated. 'No wonder Vegeta's acting this way, I'm actually shivering myself.' The saiyan thought as he and Gohan were pushed back by the power of his aura. Goku looked to his son. "Gohan get back!"
"But father-"
"GO!"
The half saiyan nodded slightly as he flew away from his father and the brute. He looked to the distraught Vegeta. "Vegeta, come on, we have to go."
But the saiyan prince acted as if he didn't hear only staring at Broly in fright. "It's impossible, there's no way anyone can stand up to the legendary super saiyan!"
Goku wanted to say something but was interrupted from a chuckle from Broly.
With a wicked grin he asked. "Kakarot, do you love your son?" He asked rhetorically.
The savior's eyes widened as he sees Broly ready a green energy blast and throws it... towards Gohan. Goku flew upward in front of the blast and crossed his arms to defend against it. He succeeded however it took so much energy and effort to withstand the attack. Broly flew in and threw a barrage of punches and kicks at Goku.
Gohan sees his father being assaulted and powered. The hybrid then charged at Broly with hopes of saving his father.
As the battle progressed Vegeta began standing up and clenched his fists. "I know these idiots are fighting a losing battle." He began. "But I... I will not die cowering in fear!" He yelled powering up to his ascended form and charged at Broly.
The three saiyans couldn't even make a dent in Broly, his power was just too strong. Piccolo came with senzu beans and sees Gohan on the ground while Goku and Vegeta are being toyed with by Broly. Gohan awoke hearing his father's screams of pain , he got up and looked at Broly who had Vegeta knocked out in a crater and was having a field day jumping up and down on Goku as if he were a trampoline.
As Goku was being pummeled, he considered his options of winning this. He thought of using the spirit bomb, but there's no way he can gather that much energy from the earth and the sun. He thought of asking everyone to give their energy, but at their current levels he'd still be no match for Broly, perhaps if Trunks were still here they could. Which means their only chance, is for Gohan to unleash his true power. The power he saw in the hyperbolic time chamber, with closed eyes he contacted Gohan through telepathy.
'Gohan listen.'
"Dad?!"
'You can stop Broly, all your power unleash it.'
"But dad I" He stopped as Broly looked to his direction.
Broly looked down on the beaten Goku. "Hey Kakarot, I just got a great idea."
Goku froze as he already knew what he was implying.
"I'll let watch your son's death before your own." He said with a maddening grin.
"N-no" Goku pleaded, he knew his son had the power to beat Broly, but it'd be useless, unless Gohan was willing to fight Broly with his true power, and right now he doesn't. "Stop, this doesn't have to involve him." He said as he tried getting up.
Broly only turned around showing a toothy grin at Kakarot's begging. "Don't worry, your next." He said laughing as he continued walking.
Goku felt helpless as he did when his older brother Raditz had beaten him, only this time, there was no way he could stand up unlike he did against him. "G-Gohan, unleash your power, please, it's your only chance!" He yelled desperately wanting to save his son.
Gohan looked to his father and then to Broly. Had it been any other opponent, he thought his father had been holding back against his opponent, but after fighting Broly he noticed that his father had indeed given his all against this monster. However it made little difference as Broly charged at him, the half-breed tried desperately to unleash his power that his father told him about but to no avail. Gohan was getting beaten by by multiple punches and kicks.
Broly held Gohan by the neck and laughed. He turned to Kakarot to see him watching with a terror in his eyes. "Are you ready to witness your son's demise."
Goku tried getting back up but his injuries wouldn't let him, there was only one way to stop him now, it may be a long shot but it was their only chance for Gohan to unleash his power. "Broly wait!" He yelled. "Please kill me first!"
Gohan's eyes widened at this, and he looked to his father. "D-dad?"
Broly only chuckled until he laughed. "HAHAHAHA" He then looked at him with a toothy grin. "Oh, sorry Kakarot." He said powering up an energy blast in his right hand. "I don't take requests!" He said looking to Gohan with a smile.
"NO!" Goku screamed. "Gohan!"
Broly was about to finish Gohan off until an explosion hit his back, the blast wasn't enough to harm him ,but curiously he looked to see the green man from before staring at him with his hand outstretched.
Piccolo stood there without his cape and turban. "Sorry but you forgot about one other warrior!" He yelled powering up in a blue aura.
Gohan looked to Piccolo trying to free himself but from the legend's grip. "Mr. Piccolo don't!"
"Tch" Broly was annoyed that this weakling even bothered to challenge him, however he saw nothing wrong with another bug to squish. "Another insect has come to die huh?"
"This insect bites hard." Piccolo stated as he threw himself at Broly with all the power he had, he wanted to save Gohan at all costs even if it is useless against this monster.
"Hmph" He sees the green man charge at him and throws the energy blast at him once he was close and couldn't avoid it.
Goku watched in horror as Piccolo was swallowed up by the energy blast and turned to dust. "Piccolo!"
"Now where were we." Broly said turning to Gohan who was shedding tears. "Oh, was he friend of yours, don't worry you'll be reunited soon enough along with your miserable father over there."
"Mr Piccolo." Gohan said that name as tears fell down his face, his best friend and mentor was taken from him before his very eyes. And this monster will continue killing until everyone he knew was dead, his father, his mother, Krillin and everyone else he loved. "Piccolo!" He then felt something snap, and his power slipped, his aura surrounded him freeing him from Broly's grip.
"What?!" Broly shouted as he was forced to let go of Gohan. A large crater appeared around Gohan as well as him. The larger saiyan looked at Gohan with a shocked expression as he looked different from before.
Gohan's hair was even spiker, standing all the way up aside from a sharp strand of hair over his forehead. Also a lightning like aura appeared around him. He looked to Broly with a calm looking expression, but in truth it was hiding his rage. "Broly, I will never forgive you." He stated as he began walking towards him.
Broly only chuckled as he threw himself at Gohan, and a very one sided battle happened as the two warriors clashed. Unlike Gohan in the timeline Cell visited, this Gohan showed no mercy ended it with blasting a Kamehameha wave at Broly into the sun.
The battle ended and the z-fighters used the dragonballs to wish everyone was killed by the mad saiyan back to life. And thus a time of peace had begun for this timeline.
Little did they know two others were unintentionally revived as well, the counterparts of our 17 and 18.
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It ended there, Trunks touched his head feeling a slight headache from what he saw.
Bulma grabbed her son't shoulders. "Are you ok?"
Trunks smiled and nodded. "Yeah and so's our other selves."
"Really?"
Trunks nodded only to be interrupted.
"Please say your second wish now." The dragon bellowed to the people down below.
"Oh um." Trunks began. "That's it, you can go now, thanks for everything."
"Very well, farewell." Shenron spoke as the dragonballs flew up and scattered all over the earth again.
Trunks watched as the dragonballs flew and turned to his mother. "There ok, both the timeline I went to, and the timeline I visited and the one Cell went to."
Bulma smiled. "That's great, do you think you can tell me what happened?"
Trunks nodded and went inside the house to tell his mother everything.
Trunks nodded. "Sure"
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A few days passed, and Trunks was standing in a grassy plain.
"Good your here."
Trunks turned around to see 17 with 18 or Lazuli behind him.
"Of course." He said as he quickly trasnformed into a super saiyan. Ever since he unlocked the true next level of super saiyan, going ssj 1 was a lot easier. "I hope you really have gotten stronger."
"Heh" He turned to 18. "Sis stop giving that look I told you it's nothing to worry about."
She sighed. "I just don't want this to get too serious."
"It won't"
Trunks interjected. "It's ok Eigh- Lazuli, this isn't a death match." He said as he gave a friendly smile. "It's just a friendly bout, and nothing more."
"Fine" Lazuli stated as she flew backwards on top of a rock far away.
17 looked to Trunks with a smirk. "Heh, Lazuli huh?" He asked rhetorically. "Before we start I have to say thanks."
Trunks raised an eyebrow at this.
"Thanks for saying all that to 18." He said easing his confusion. "This whole thing has been eating her since we were brought back, and after your little speech to her she's been really happy for once since we left Dr Gero's lab so thanks."
Trunks chuckled. "No problem, and you know i mean the same way about you, I've truly accepted you both."
"Alright enough with the mushy junk, no need to repeat yourself." He said. "And you know if 18's going by her old human name I guess I'll do the same, just call me Lapis."
Trunks smirked, not used to hearing 17 talk this way. "We'll then glad we could start over, Lapis."
"Hmm" 17 or Lapis put a hand to his chin. "Being called that feels strange, it'll take some getting used to." He shrugged. "Now you ready?"
"Born ready."
The two took on their fighting stances, Lapis was the first to charge towards Trunks and threw a palm strike up his chin, then threw a punch in his stomach, and finished his combo with landing an elbow on the warriors neck and sending him to the ground.
Trunks rolled away and stood up to see 17 going for a kick up his chin. The saiyan hybrid back flipped as the kick hit only air, after going a few feet away he stopped and raised his hands up creating a golden energy ball between them. "Finish buster!" He yelled launching the ball forward.
17 sees the technique coming and jumps to avoid it. The cyborg then threw an energy wave at his opponent.
Trunks flew upward avoiding it and charged at 17 with his fist cocked back. 17 did the same readying a back hand. The two warriors clashed making the area around them tremor creating a huge crack on the ground. They then started a clash throwing combinations of punches and kicks at each other.
18 watched as the two went at it, she was still worried even though they reassured her that it wasn't anything dangerous like the bad old days, she thought perhaps they would take it too far. However as her eyes watched the battle back and forth she saw something new that she never saw in the past when she and her brother were fighting Trunks. The saiyan human hybrid was actually smiling, like he was enjoying the fight. Her brother as well only without the malice and sadism behind it in the past. They both were enjoying it no lives were at stake, no one was endangered of dying. "There actually having fun.. men." She said bitterly but with a smile.
Trunks punched Lapis in the face sending him flying, the warrior chased after him reeling back his balled fists and slammed it against the cyborg's head sending him crashing to the ground. A cloud of dust appeared around where the android crashed, the smoke cleared and revealed 17 with blood coming out of lip and a few holes in his shirt. The cyborg wiped the blood out of his mouth and smiled. "Not bad at all, so ready to end this little warm up?" He said with a smirk.
Trunks smirked as well. "Didn't realize you were holding back, I was actually fighting at my best in this form."
"We'll guess that means you'll have to pull out all the stops huh?" He chuckled cracking his knuckles. "Come on, I wanna see what you used to take down Broly."
"Alright" Trunks stated as he powered up. "Raaah!" He roared as his hair spiked up even more leaving only a strand on his forehead and lightning sparks around his body. "Ready?"
"Heh" 17 took his stance clenching his fists, he'd like to say that he can match this form but in truth 17 was still marginally below this form and he knew it now that he can sense energy. But he's not one to back down from a challenge. "Lets finish this."
The two then vanished and fought once more in another clash.
Lazuli watched with a smile on her face. "Who knew all this would happen." She stated with a smile watching her brother and her new friend fighting to their hearts content. With no hate or anger but, happiness like two friends spending time together.
Ok so now 17 and 18 will be referred to by their actual names Lapis and Lazuli. For me I think that both androids are aware of their real names before Dr Gero kidnapped them, they just never cared for it, not seeing themselves as human anymore. But in this scenario where Trunks shows that he accepts that 17 and 18 weren't the killers he thought they were, they'd decide to go by their actual names as a way to move on from their past when they were being controlled.
Let me know what you think of that, like I said I'm not used to writing this kind of thing, so let me know if there was anything I should have done.
By the way the reason I didn't show any fighting with the timeline Trunks visited was because I think we've seen enough of Broly fighting, at least I have. The hard part of writing the unseen timeline was trying to come up with a time Goku would decide to leave and how he would convince Vegeta to go with him, but after being defeated multiple times by multiple enemies, I think he'd try using the hyperbolic time chamber to surpass Broly.
And now the Broly arc has officially ended, and so I'm going to be busy writing the next one. I have made only a couple plans for what the next one might be but I haven't decided which one would be more fitting as of yet. I haven't really gotten past this part of the story when I planned it, but don't worry, there will be a next one, I just need to consider which arc I planned would fit this story better.
And before I commit to any future plans for this story, I am going to edit what I have so far, as some chapters have what wouldn't make sense if they were canon. Nothing major will change don't worry all the important plot points in this story will remain the same, there are just some things I feel should change, I will let you know what those are in the next chapter.
Now for reviews.
shadowwriter01- Thank you, and your right it would make more sense to have Trunks forgive then accept, instead forgiving something that was out of their control, I'll be sure to edit that.
24- I take it that you enjoyed that chapter, good I'm glad. Thank you.
Guest- Ok, can you and everyone else not review about Super in my story, that'd be appreciative.
Ok, so can I ask you guys a favor. Can everyone not talk about Dragon ball Super in my story, I am waiting for the english dub and prefer not to be spoiled. So please if your going to review just review and not talk about what's happening in Super, I haven't seen an episode and prefer to watch it in dub, like I did with Z and GT. Ok thank you.
Alright guys, as usual see you in the next chapter and have an awesome day. :)
