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Might of the 'Prince'
'Vegeta' took his position and stares at his foes, 17 and 18. He remembered how 'he' did the first time against 17, now it takes both of them to fight. It feels good to have vengeance.
Lapis and Lazuli stared at the fake prince. They took their stances telling themselves over and over that they needed to push aside whatever second thoughts they had. When they see an opening to finish him off they'll take it. Trunks do not need to see it, and Iolite does not need to even see a fake version of her grandfather. With steeled resolves, they began their plan to take him out.
"Since there's two of you, I will be using full power now." 'Vegeta' stated.
Lapis squeezed his fists remembering the beatdown the prince was giving him. He knew he wasn't trying, he was hoping he was wrong.
'Vegeta' dashed at the duo at full speed, he appeared between the two of them.
Both twins just noticed him between them and tried to throw attacks.
But the fake prince quickly threw a chop at Lapis's side and kneed Lazuli's stomach.
Lapis coughed, stumbled back, and let out some spittle.
Lazuli yelled in pain and keeled over. The amount of force coming from his attack had more force than Piccolo before Zangya's attack affected him.
'Vegeta' cackled as he aimed his arms at his sides and his hands glowed.
Both twins ignored the pain and rose their arms and aimed at the clone. And they used their attack they haven't used on an opponent in a while.
They created a barrier surrounding the fake 'Prince'. Twin Barrier Prison.
'Vegeta' looked around him. "A defensive move with both of you?" He laughed. "You must be desperate using this!"
The cyborgs didn't say anything they just put more and more energy into the barrier, making it stronger hoping to trap and make him waste energy to get out.
'Vegeta' cackled as he released golden energy blasts from his hands at the barrier on both sides.
The duo grunted as they pushed more energy into the barrier against 'Vegeta's attacks, but then the barrier started to shatter. The duo rose their arms to block the weakening but still strong energy waves.
The energy waves pushed them until they were a few feet away from the clone.
'Vegeta' put his arms down and looked side to side at the Androids. "To think before one of you was enough to bring me down, now look at you, both of you struggle against my might now that we have a leveled playing field! Then again you were merely humans, whereas I am a Saiyan prince."
It was deja vu, he was acting as cocky as the real Vegeta. Normally Lapis would say something snarky as he did when he faced the real Vegeta, but now was not the time to give in. They needed to kill the clone. They couldn't let Trunks have to fight this fake father. And they won't let Iolite meet this terrible version of her grandfather.
He glanced at his sister who nodded, they weren't sure if they could beat him they reached in their pockets for the vials containing the sacred water, his eyes widened when he found his pocket empty. He looked at his sister who looked panicked.
"Looking for these?"
The twins were shocked at the sight.
'Vegeta' was holding vials that contained the sacred water, or at least what they believed to be the sacred water. The fake prince removed the tops of the vials and emptied the contents on the ground much to their dismay. "Oh? Was this your secret to defeating me? Unfortunately for you, Kakarot warned us of the Sacred Water, you won't win using pathetic tricks."
Of course, Goku would know about the Sacred water, he trained with Kami.
"Damn it!" Lapis yelled as he threw himself at the Saiyan Tuffle with a winding arm once he was within striking distance he backhanded.
'Vegeta' rose an arm to block and threw a punch into his gut.
The enhanced human yelled as he was hit, it made him keeled over.
The fake prince turned to see a bunch of pink blasts fired from Lazuli, he deflected with one of his hands across the empty city causing many pink explosions.
Lapis shook off the pain and threw a punch across 'Vegeta's face.
Lazuli flew up to his other side and kicked up his chin.
'Vegeta' gave his signature smirk. Lazuli recognized that smirk, Trunks would wear it whenever he was confident in a battle or in a spar.
The duo then threw punches and kicks at his sides and 'Vegeta' blocked or evaded the strikes.
'Vegeta' smiled the whole time, he was drunk with power. Baby decided to toy with them a little. "You two seem very eager to take away Trunks's father from him again."
The twins felt like they should stop but they ignored it, they knew he was a fake. They continued their assault, they can't afford to relent.
"You two must keep him around because you enjoy reminding him of his failure to avenge us, to outsmart him into believing your allies, when you truly you see him as your inferiors."
"Shut up!" Lapis yelled as he punched straight into his head.
And Lazuli yelled as she kicked his stomach and sent him flying away.
'Vegeta' caught himself and landed on the ground, blood left his lips, he licked it and grin. "Come now, am I not entitled to meet that man my son has grown to be?"
The twins landed next to each other, they looked at each other and nodded.
Lapis walked forward and Lazuli stepped behind them.
'Vegeta' chuckled.
Lapis ran forward once he was within distance he jumped and behind him, Lazuli tossed a kick at the fake prince.
The fake prince rose an arm to block the kick.
Lapis threw his clenched hands at the back of 'Vegeta's head.
'Vegeta' quickly rose his other arm to block the attack.
The Cyborg duo began throwing many punches and kicks pushing the Tuffle Saiyan back.
'Vegeta' swayed a punch from Lapis and slammed his elbow across the male Cyborg's face.
Lazuli threw a punch but 'Vegeta' vanished and appeared behind her. He then smashes a fist into her back and sent her back.
Lapis quickly punched across his face threw another to his stomach.
'Vegeta' doubled over for a second but then grinned as he grabbed the cyborg's shirt much to his dismay. 'Vegeta' then headbutt him, punched him in the gut, kicked his chest and he finished with a left hook which sent the cyborg flying.
The fake prince chuckled but he quickly turned around to see Lazuli flying over him with her leg rose. He ducked as a kick was tossed at him, he then flew up and began an exchange of punches and kicks with the Cyborg.
During their clash 'Vegeta' was able to land more hits while all of the enhanced human's attacks either missed or were blocked. And like the original would 'Vegeta' began to talk.
"So Android" He spat. "I hear you are the mother of my first grandchild."
Lazuli glared at that. "She's not your grandchild." She took a punch in the face but she didn't care she powered through it and began throwing more attacks.
The fake prince cackled as he didn't throw any attacks, for the time being, he was having too much fun conversing with the woman, the same way her brother enjoyed fighting him. He just either eveaded or blocked the attacks with relative ease.
"I beg to differ" 'Vegeta' grinned as he caught a punch, he grabbed her arm and threw an uppercut.
Lazuli felt dizzy from that one blow.
'Vegeta' then kicked at her gut and sent her crashing through a building and created a spider web crack against another building.
Lazuli had closed an eye from the pain and then suddenly 'Vegeta' appeared in front of her.
'Vegeta' grinned. "Say what you will Android, but royal blood still flows through my veins, hers as well."
"Stay away from her!" Lazuli pushed herself out of the crater and threw a punch only for it to miss as 'Vegeta' flew to the side.
The fake prince then slammed his hands together on her head and sent her to the ground.
A crash shook the city from the impact, Lazuli was on her knees in the middle of a 50-foot wide crater.
'Vegeta' floated down and landed in front of her, he chuckled. "Relax I don't intend to harm her at all, she too will join our ranks and as a way of proving herself she'll kill you."
Lazuli yelled as she jumped and threw a kick only for 'Vegeta' to block it and threw a punch in return.
But before it could connect he was kicked across the face by Lapis and sent flying.
He stood before his sister and helped her up.
"Where were you!" She demanded as she got up.
"Making preparations, trust me it'll be worth it."
Lazuli nodded and turned their attention towards where he launched 'Vegeta'.
"Sis if you got any new tricks now's the time."
The woman nodded.
'Vegeta' roared as he flew towards them, he aimed his hand forward and fired a powerful yellow energy wave.
The twins split up as the attack hit the ground creating giant yellow explosions.
Lapis held up his hands and powered up two green energy balls. He tossed them both at 'Vegeta'.
The fake prince punched one upward and kicked another.
Then Lazuli appeared behind him and kicked him forward.
Lapis then kicked him upward and sent him up.
'Vegeta' stopped his momentum only in time for Lazuli to appear above him with a Pink energy ball in her hands. She slammed down the Power Blits and his back and sent him crashing against the ground, it created a huge pink explosion that engulfed the city.
Then 'Vegeta' rose out of the smoke with half his armor missing and slammed a punch into Lapis's gut, causing the Android to scream and double over.
Lazuli flew behind him and threw a punch.
Only for the fake prince to grab Lapis's arm and tossed him at his sister.
He then outstretched his arm and fired a powerful yellow energy wave. The attack hit its mark and a cloud of smoke was in the air.
Then out of the smoke came Lapis and Lazuli wrapped in the male Android's Barrier Technique.
Lazuli aimed her hands forward and charged up pink energy in her hands and fired her Infinity Bullet, many energy blasts left the barrier Lapis created.
'Vegeta' smirked and flew forward punching through the pink barrage and appeared before them still in their force field, he threw a very hard punch that broke the barrier and kicked at it causing it to shatter.
Immediately 'Vegeta' threw an elbow across Lapis's face and he punched Lazuli in the gut and sent her flying. He then kicked at Lapis which sent him in the other direction. He then powered up in his golden aura and spread his arms to fire two yellow energy waves.
The twins each ducked underneath the attacks and charged at him from both directions.
'Vegeta' looked at them both charging at him and merely smiled. "Desperate fools"
The female Cyborg charged him and threw a punch only for it to be caught.
Lapis fired an energy blast behind him only for the Tuffle Saiyan to deflect it and he tossed the female Cyborg into him sending them far away from him.
The fake Prince then aimed his hand forward at the two and powered up a powerful blue orb of energy. "Die Androids!"
The twins looked at each other and nodded. That'll work in their favor. They had their backs at each other and each aimed one hand together at 'Vegeta' an orange ball appeared in their joint hands.
'Vegeta' was so lost in this battle that he started to forget about what he really was. He had the power he truly deserved! The power that he should've had when he faced the Androids the first time and he will use it to turn them into scrap! "Big Bang Attack!" He fired his most powerful technique at the duo.
The twins fired their most powerful joint attack at the prince. "Photon Blitz!" The orange energy wave flew forward.
The two attacks connected and created an explosive clash between the attacks. The wind blew for miles, the light of their attacks can be seen in space.
'Vegeta' roared angrily as he had his hands out focusing on his Big Bang Attack. "You will not win! I am the greatest in the universe!"
Lapis and Lazuli were struggling, they put more and more power into their attacks waiting and hoping that they'll succeed.
'Vegeta' focused more energy into his Big Bang Attack and it doubled in size and it was overpowering the orange Photon Blitz wave.
It looked like the twins were struggling, both of them pushed more and more power into their combined attack while 'Vegeta' did the same and it was more so.
At least for the moment.
'Vegeta' was laughing like a maniac at his superior power, but then a moment later he realized something. Quickly he stopped putting energy into his attack and tried to go under as the energy wave raced towards him.
The orange wave of energy pushed the Big Bang Attack across the earth and into space.
Lapis and Lazuli held their right arms, focusing that much energy always harmed them. They looked down to see 'Vegeta' on the ground.
The fake prince looked ragged, the top right of his armor was destroyed revealing his shoulder, he was panting. He was exhausted, he was familiar with this sensation but he thought it was supposed to be long gone with this new body. Enraged he glared at the two Androids.
"What is this? What have you done to me?!" The prince yelled knowing they had a hand in this. "You two can't tire, yet now that we have an even playing field you need to resort to lowly tactics for victory?!"
Zangya's technique had work, now the fake was vulnerable.
More eager to end this Lazuli dashed forward.
"Tch" 'Vegeta' knew he was somehow running low on energy but he didn't care he will not run away from these two, and he will not lose to them a second time!
Lazuli threw a kick as she expected the fake rose an arm to block, she quickly pulled back her leg, it was a feint.
Lapis appeared above the fake behind him and slammed his hands on the back of his head making his head fall forward.
Lazuli took her cue and uppercut him.
'Vegeta' growled dizzy and in pain.
And Lazuli punched him straight in the face making him fall back.
Lapis took the opportunity to sweep kick him and make him start to fall on his back.
Lazuli grabbed his leg, she looked at her brother and he nodded. He vanished as she swung 'Vegeta' behind her.
The enraged fake prince tried to catch himself but before he could Lapis appeared behind him.
Quickly the brunette kicked the fake prince upward.
Lazuli aimed her hands up towards where the Prince will be, she readies her fiercest attack. A pink ball formed in her hands with pink rings wrapped around it, she fired it. "Blitz Stream!"
Before it could hit, 'Vegeta' caught himself and flew upward letting the powerful energy wave miss just underneath him.
"These two have done something to my energy core." He then remembered that those pricks he felt earlier. "No, it was that green woman, yes that was how 18 killed the namekien. Hmph, my Son has gotten some cheap allies while I have been away." The fake prince calmed himself, from what he can tell he was still more powerful than they are, he just needed to be careful with his suddenly finite energy.
Lapis flew up to him and threw a punch.
'Vegeta' ducked and let the attack fly over him, he then uppercut the brunette.
Then Lazuli came at his side and kicked at his other arm.
This sent the fake prince skidding across the ground, he rolled and put a hand against the ground to slow himself down. He looked ahead to see them charging at him, he needed to focus on defense until he gets his opening.
'Vegeta' rose his arms to guard against punches from the twins.
The twins then threw a barrage of punches and kicks while 'Vegeta' guarded or blocked their strikes.
Lazuli threw a punch only for the fake prince to sway it and he grabbed her arm and swung him, hitting Lapis and making him go forward.
'Vegeta' then tossed the female Cyborg to the side. He then dashed forward towards Lapis who hadn't caught himself yet. He then stomped on his stomach to make him hit the ground and created a crater in the ground. He smirked and aimed his hand down at the male. "You'll need a lot more than tricks to stop the Prince of Saiyans!" His hand glowed with energy.
Lapis looked up at him. "Fine here comes a lot more." He showed his hand and moved his thumb.
Before the prince could fire his attack he heard a sound to his right he turned to his right to see an energy wave at him. He couldn't dodge so he rose his arms to block and the blast pushed him away from Lapis.
The Cyborg sat up and clung to his stomach in pain and grinned. 'Got you, while Lazuli was dealing with you I placed a few Photon Geysers around the city. I got the idea from the fake Piccolo's attack when I fought him. I was saving them for when you begin running out of energy.' He thought with a smile, but then he frowned, if it were any other foe, he would be glad that his attack worked on a superior foe. But he tried to shake off the guilt, it wasn't real, it was a fake and nothing more. He sighed and began to focus on the task at hand.
'Vegeta' roared as he was pushed by the blast, he lifted his arms up and let the attack fly into space. He panted again, he remembered earlier he with ease was able to toss two of those at once in the air but now he struggled with one. How much weaker did he get?
Lapis appeared in front of him and threw a punch across the prince's face.
The fake prince roared as he kneed his stomach, he turned to see the female cyborg charging at him, he ducked under her strike and the male kicked across his face.
The cyborg duo then kicked on his chest and launched him away.
With a snarl, 'Vegeta' righted himself and aimed his hands forward. "You pathetic children! Compared to a Saiyan Warrior you are nothing!" He fired many energy blasts from his hands.
The attack hit but Lapis raised a barrier to surround them, the blasts would've shattered the barrier had the clone been at full power, but now where his energy was wavering it didn't even crack it.
Lazuli aimed her hand forward, her fingertips pointed at him. Her brother wasn't the only one who created new techniques. Yellow energy formed at her finger tips.
"Spear Bolt!" She fired, it was a short energy wave with the front looking sharp, it looked like as the name implies a spear.
'Vegeta' merely swayed it. "Patheti- gah!"
The Spear Bolt turned around and cut through the back of his side to the front. A bleeding hole came at the front. "D-damn it!" Another pathetic trick! And he fell for it!
It wasn't done, Lazuli's technique turned around again and aimed for his head.
Tired of this, the fake Prince rose his hand and it glowed yellow, it overpowered the Spear Bolt and vanished. That attack would have drilled through his body until he bled out! He glared down at the two and placed his hands on holes on both sides. He concentrated energy on them to cauterize his wounds. He glared down at the duo and started to charge at them.
Lapis rose his hand and moved his fingers.
Many Photon Geysers came at many sides of the city.
'Vegeta' looked around to see many giant yellow energy spheres. 'There were more!?'
Lapis squeezed his hand making the blasts come at all sides at him.
'Vegeta' pushed himself between two of the attacks and let them crash into each other. But instead of making an explosion the attacks combined together into one giant yellow sphere.
The fake prince sees the giant sphere and looked in shock.
Lazuli then vanished leaving Lapis alone.
The brunette then thrust his arm in the direction of 'Vegeta'.
The powerful sphere turned into a wave and fired.
'Vegeta' immediately flew as the wave chased after him. 'Damn it! My power is still waning, whatever that witch did to me isn't stopping!' He flew across the ruined city the few buildings left standing fell as he flew passed them. He looks ahead trying to get out of view of the Android, but his eyes widened at what he was seeing.
Lazuli was floating in front of him with her hands aimed at him. It had a pink energy ball with rings around them. "Die!" She fired another Blitz Stream from her palms.
'Vegeta' stopped and sees he has no time to fly above, with no choice he caught both of the blasts. In his hands, veins popped on his arms and on his face.
"You! Dare! Mock! Me!" The clone spat as the blasts collided with him.
Then a few seconds the attacks swallowed him and it closed into a giant orange blast that shook the planet itself.
A large cloud of smoke was in the air, West City was now just a crater.
Lazuli felt her arms, she was in absolute pain, she used Blitz Stream three times today, if she pushed for more her arms would be shattered.
Lapis landed next to her and looked at her. "You alright?"
"I'll be fine." She looked ahead to see the cloud of smoke. "Please, tell me for once this is a good sign."
Lapis looked at the smoke, it started to clear and it was gone. There was nothing, nobody, nothing. That was a new sight whenever smoke cleared.
They also couldn't sense Zangya's energy anywhere. They began to hope, that did it, it had to or-
"Was...that...all?" They heard a familiar voice behind them.
The twin's eyes widened and turned around to see the fake prince floating behind them.
'Vegeta's armor was destroyed, there were holes in the leg part of his jumpsuit and one of his gloves was missing.
He chuckled. "Did you really think I was going to die, to an attack like that?"
The twins charged at him, Lazuli threw a kick and Lapis threw a punch desperate to put an end to this clone.
Only for 'Vegeta' to sway the attacks and gut-punched both of them as hard as he could.
The twins coughed from the attacks, their bodies vibrated and they keeled over. These attacks felt like they did at the beginning of the fight.
'Vegeta' pulled back his hands and looked at his hands. He smirked. "Whatever your green woman did to me seems to have worn off." He smiled and looked at the two trying to rise and get to their stances.
"Hahaha, would you look at that! Your only saving grace has worn off!" 'Vegeta' aimed his hands forward. "Now then I will kill you both and drag your corpses to my son and I will beat discipline into both him and that granddaughter of mine. Both need to pay."
Lapis knew they were outmatched, he turned to Lazuli her arms were injured. 'Vegeta' was also injured but they'd get lucky to kill him. They needed to escape. But how? He thought back to the prince, what he thought of himself and said about himself. There's one thing he can do.
'Vegeta's hands glowed, he was going to fire as much power as possible and hopefully, there is enough of them left to bring to his traitorous 'son'.
"Whatever you say, Prince imposter."
'Vegeta's eyes widened as he held the energy blasts in his hands. "What?"
Lazuli eyed her brother, she knew what he was doing was a gamble, but it was their only shot.
"Oh? You know, the thing about Vegeta was that he was so proud of what he was you know? A prince of a warrior race, his body was all-natural and he was a Super Saiyan. He had no enhancement of any kind." Lapis explained and smiled. "Unlike you am I right?"
'Vegeta's eyes widened. He was wrong but also he was right. But it didn't matter! The point of these bodies was to torture them with the clones of their victims, he is no Saiyan he is a Tuffle! That is what he is. He is no prince of apes! But then he thought of 'his' heritage, the original's memories came to him. His planet, people, his father, and... his pride. And he feels that he needs that pride, it's everything to a S- NO! What is he thinking? Why does he feel this way?! It's ridiculous! He has much to be proud of he is the prince of all Saiy-! He stopped himself from finishing that thought and tried to rationalize everything. He is a proud member of the newly evolved Tuffle race, a new warrior race meant to topple the Saiyans! He is no pathetic prince of apes! He kept going back and forth between being the true Saiyan Prince or a reformed Tuffle.
He didn't do anything for almost a minute.
Lapis took this chance and rose his hands. "Solar Flare!"
'Vegeta' normally wouldn't fall for this technique but his pondering distracted him, also he wasn't expecting the Android to know it and so was blinded by the light. He yelled as he covered his eyes.
Lazuli took this chance and aimed her hand forward. "Spear Bolt!" She fired the piercing technique and the yellow spear hit 'Vegeta' in the chest. "Tch" She glared.
Her technique was only strong enough to pierce the skin and it was digging trying to get through.
'Vegeta' yelled and grabbed the Spear Bolt and crushed it.
Then Lapis took his chance and kicked him straight knocking him into a pile of rubble.
Lazuli then charged after him but was stopped, she turned to see her brother grabbing her leg. "Let go we need to kill him now!"
Lapis shook his head. "No way sis. We need to get out of here before he gets his vision back, we're no match for him, you know that."
The female Android glared at him, she was about to argue with him. But she realized that if her brother who is always more eager to fight wanted to retreat then he was right. She turned her head to fire a quick energy wave to hopefully at least kill the fake and begrudgingly followed her brother.
On their way out of the ruined city, they see Zangya. Lapis grabbed her arm and held him close to him much to her happiness. She giggled as Lapis was carrying her but she sees that he has a serious face. Maybe now wasn't the time to venture into her usual flirts.
'Vegeta' burst out of the rubble, his eyes started to open still irritated by the solar flare. He looked around and roared, he failed to destroy the Androids. But he grinned, he proved without Baby's boost that he is capable of killing the Androids. This means even without the time chamber, his son will be properly disciplined. Still, a shame what happened to 'Piccolo' oh well. He best report this to the master.
He flies away back to their hideout.
In the forest far from the ruins of West City Lapis and Lazuli were standing while Zangya was sitting getting rest from all the energy she wasted.
Lapis and Lazuli were disappointed in themselves, even with Zangya's technique they were unable to bring the fake Prince down and now they might have to leave him to Trunks to destroy. It was terrible but at least they all got away with their lives.
"Well, I call this a win," Zangya stated smugly.
Lazuli glared at her while Lapis just stared at her.
"What? We killed three of their clones, one of them was very strong weren't they blondie?" She asked Lazuli who was glaring at her.
Lapis sees her point, they managed to do something against their current enemy.
"No, it's not."
Lapis looked at his sister to see her walking towards Zangya until she was in front of her. "Why did you have to waste one of your shots on the Piccolo clone, if you had used it on the Vegeta clone one of us probably would've been enough to kill it."
Zangya looked up at the woman, she stood up to glare into her eyes. "Listen, dolly, I couldn't sense their energy, I only knew both of you had trouble against your opponents, and how do you know that just one of you can take on the spiky-haired man? Hm?"
"It was obviously the bigger threat Lapis would've destroyed it and helped me with the fake Piccolo." She scolded angrily.
"Oh you sure it would've been that easy, are Androids psychic? If so why didn't you explain some of your limitless wisdom earlier dolly?"
"Keep talking you bipedal bitch."
"Maybe you would've been able to kill your fake father-in-law if you didn't waste time skulking dealing with the Namekien."
Lazuli rose an arm ready to teach her a lesson.
Lapis came between her and grabbed her arm that was reaching for Zangya's throat.
The deadly blonde looked angrily at her brother. "Let go!"
Lapis looked serious and glared. "Cut it out. This isn't the time for grudges."
Lazuli pulled her arm back and walked away from her brother and Zangya.
Zangya looked at Lapis and asked once she was out of earshot. "What's got her panties in a wad?"
"She's just really stressed, ok? Try not to hold it against her."
The teal-skinned woman just looked at the woman a few feet away who stared into the forest. "Alright" She clung to his arm, which made him slightly embarrass. "But only if you keep protecting me."
Lapis sighed and looked at Lazuli's back. Her daughter found out what really happened, her husband might have to be the one to kill the fake Vegeta. All this happened while she had a husband and child. And she's holding on to that grudge against Zangya for the Zazuli incident, it was no wonder she lashed out at her. Still, he couldn't let this slide, if they were going to survive even a day of this he needed to get her to calm down and see reason.
He did not sign up to be the babysitter of the group.
So far things are going well for our Z-fighters, though whether or not it'll stay that way, well you'll see.
It's so fun writing a Vegeta fight when he can live up to his ego. Sadly they couldn't destroy him this time. Though they have a day, who knows if they can do more.
I hope everyone enjoyed this as I had fun writing it.
AxDevilman:Hell ya it is, I've been fighting not to read all the comics to spoil it. I've read a bit of it though and looking forward to it!
The old vs new z-fighters has been nice to write. Ya Zangya has no bad memories to fight off, plus she was a villain so she's got nothing to keep her from doing the job. Thank u I thought of that technique for a while, though Lazuli's not a fan of her having that technique.
Ya it's slowly but surely.
Hope u liked it!
Ok good, don't be afraid to let me know if u spot it, I wanna make it a good read for everyone.
Shadowwriter01: Yup, if they had a concionce then he has to know their innocent. It's kinda worse with Goku, he had no blood on his hands but tried to murder him and send his sons to fight him anyway. In this story he's going to get worse.
I-Love-Trunks1: Thank u, hope u keep enjoying.
SuperSaiyajin4Vegeta: Ya, I'm also a big Vegeta fan so writing this has been fun and the best part is he ain't done yet. I can promise you'll be seeing more of him.
warriorofdark: When u start reading the story I feel I should warn u I believe I improved and the beginning is a little messy, filled with errors I need to correct and even retcon. I appreciate the suggestion but Zangya's new move is more like a dart, it's just made of the Psycho Threads. I think maybe Psycho Poison would make more sense. I do appreciate it though.
Alright guys as usual let me know what you think, questions, concerns, and how u think I can improve. Appreciate you guys.
Have an awesome day! :)
