Mache:
It has been two months, and it's finally complete.
Greetings. If you're a new reader, you can ignore this and move on with the story. Returning readers, on the other hand, this is for you.
Everything has been reprised, updated, and edited, in order to make the story easier to read, cause past Mache kinda sucked at writing (I still suck as well but less).
Now most things stayed the same, aside from some minor changes is dialogue and whatnot. So I'll just say it here so you can get back to reading.
Chapter 1 - 3: Minor changes to dialogue
Chapter 4: Having a better understanding of stats now. Sakura can now one-shot balloons. This results in more levels than before. Not much after that.
Chapter 5: Really removed all the unnecessary filler. Including the rabbit stampede (not sure where i was going with that /). Usapil also die to Sakura's wrath. Tough with some effort this time.
Chapter 6: Rewritten completely. Pegasus now has thoughts, feelings and a better explanation of events.
Chapter 7: Minor changes to dialouge, not much else
Chapter 8: Same as above
Chapter 9: Removed gruff, replaced with Sakura. I'll be more frugal with adding ocs.
Chapter 10: No changes
Chapter 11: Revamped the fight. Sakura has a new technique, making a claw of mana from rhe bow on her dress.
Chapter 12: Went into greater detail on Ren's power-up methods.
Chapter 13: Naofumi got Fitoria's carriage method instead of the whip, (Cuz fitoria's memory sucks) And near the end of the chapter. With 3 people and a much higher level (Plus methods) in canon. Naofumi and co has no trouble protecting Ryute, and joins the other 3 heroes in order to finish off the boss
Chapter 14: Went into more detail with Naofumi powering up his weapon, included a scene where Ake tells Naofumi about the seven star weapons, went into further detail about Itsuki's methods, revamped the fight, and had Naofumi make an ew bet for Motoyasu's power up methods, instead of gold, and added a new ending. (aka just re-read this chapter)
Chapter 15 16 are just new chapters entirely, read those please.
Chapter 17: Added some fluff scene with Sakura and Ake. No changes after that
Chapter 18: Fitoria meets Ren for a second, Wyndia joins the border rush team, introduces Dragon vein to the group, and gives it to Keel.
Chapter 19: Wyndia is present for the battle, and Ake takes the sidelines (Reason being in chapter 16)
Chapter 20: No changes
Chapter 21; Minor changes to dialouge
Chapter 22: Just one small change of Naofumi using the whip method on Ake. (Cuz he doesn't have it anymore)
Sorry for doing this so suddenly. Without these changes, I don't think I could have ever continued Filolial in the state it was in. I want to give you all the best, and to do that, I needed to weed out what made the story feel worse.
Now as i did for Morale, no more rewrites, no more changes. We continue onward.
After a nine-month hiatus, I now know how this would go. I'd like to thank everyone of you for sticking around and making my first story ever a great learning experience. I hope you enjoy what's to come. I'll even start answering reviews as well in order to engage with you all more.
Until then, Merry Christmas, back to our scheduled program. Chapter 23