11 years ago, I wrote this story: A Beautiful Mind. To this day, I still love the story line, but man… when I read it back, I cringe! Though decent in some parts, maybe even good, overall it's was just so incredibly passive and telling versus showing.
So, I decided that, especially THIS story, deserves a rewrite with all the stuff I learned about writing over the years.

The rewrite is 99.9% finished. All that's left is checking through each chapter to make sure it's just right. Now that the rewriting itself is almost done, and all I still need to do are the finishing touches, I feel confident enough to upload the first chapter.

What to expect?
It's still the same story, but with a lot of added scenes, it's more personal. More show less tell. The steaminess has amped up by a lot! In this version Garrus is more mature, and less awkward, and he developed into something of a tease.
He's also a little darker and slightly more dangerous.
Some scenes have only received a little frosting, other scenes received a major overhaul, and some scenes turned out completely different.

I hope you enjoy the rewrite, and, if you did, please consider leaving a review. Though it's a labor of love, it would mean the world to me to know people enjoy this new version as much as I do!