Keira: A New Journey

by Inkaliber

After learning of her Saiyan heritage and the truth of her power, Keira sets out to continue her journey as she discovers more about who she is. With her companions and loved ones by her side, there's nothing that can stop her. Be it the World Martial Arts Tournament, some guys with red ribbons, or even... another Saiyan? Sequel to Milla: Saiyan of Earth.

9. Apologies and Plans

Hey guys. Gosh it's been a while since I touched this one. I know you've been wanting to see more of this story and see what crazy direction things go in and am happy that you've enjoyed it so far. Sadly, this isn't an update like that. Please let me explain.

The story went way too wild way too fast. It's the same reason that the prequel to this story had to end before it even got to the World Martial Arts Tournament. The God Ki was too much, certain factors were introduced before I felt the story was ready for them, and everything just felt shoehorned in by the time we got to the previous chapter. I couldn't bring myself to plan more or try to make a new chapter because I saw the story spiraling towards things that the characters weren't ready for and made certain important events less likely to happen or act as a lesson. Keira getting pregnant so young into her life also did not help.

So now comes to the matter of how things will continue. This is something I feel like I'll be only known for with fanfictions, but I need to restart the whole series. I understand that you guys have been enjoying things so far, but I started to lose my engagement with the story. If I'm not engaged in my own story, then that hurts the quality of it which I don't want to happen. Diving into writing chapter by chapter with no structured plan was a fun experiment but now I know it just isn't going to be good for my writing going forward. I still plan to work with Saiyan society and how things work with them, don't get me wrong.

I'd actually hear from you guys what you thought worked and what you thought didn't work. Maybe even your own ideas for how certain things could have been handled or for the future of the story. This way I can try to develop myself as a writer and streamline the next version of the story into something that we all can enjoy. Until then, eat well, sleep well, work hard, drink plenty of water, and keep your imagination strong. It's imagination that brings life to these amazing series we love and that is something truly special. Until next time, this is Inkaliber signing out.