Hello :)! The first chapter us a little experiment I'm trying out.
Next chapter will be normal but I wanted to try out first person writing :).
Hope you enjoy :).
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first person Pov: Begins
Arg...OUCH...
What happened? Everything's a blur, not to mention that ringing.
...Where, where am I? Let's see of I can..move...
I feel..Numb...REALLY numb, and tingling. Moving not an options for now...maybe I can...
..G-Got my eyes open a Li-little, that's kinda good...s-shards looks messy around here...
...Hearing is back a bit, despite the ringing.
?: IS HE ALRIGHT!?
?: DOES HE LOOK ALRIGHT MAN!
..That sounded like..Ish and Troy..
..yeah can see them through all this blur.
Ish: *Worry* Ash are you alright!?
Ash...Ash is next to me?
...yeah she is...she's..crying. Why is she crying?
Can't make out most of the conversation, maybe if I...
..Okay, Why can't I move? Arg, what is going on..wait..isn't that..Bolt?
Troy: *Worry* Bolt, what about you?!
...It is...electric is swarming around him and he's shaking like crazy...
Tears...he's crying too. What the hey happened? Why can't I move?
...Can i speak?
Well, gonna try. Bolt's gonna overload himself so-
B-BO-BOLT.
Wow I sound absolutely horrible.
Bolt: *tears* PICK AX!?
What-What ha-ppened?
Bolt: *tears* E-Everything will be fine, i-it's gonna be okay just..shards-
Bol-Bolt-
Man my heads spinning...Bolt's in a panic too, least is not as much...
Arg wish I could move, or at least show him I'm okay...I think?
Am I okay?
What exactly happen that I can't move, and what in the shards of the core made this mess?
I mean there is so much red on the ground around me, did I land on something and it broke open?
Bolt: A-Ash can, can you help me lift him up?
Looks like Ash is calming down a bit, still looks frazzled-
-Oh okay feel that, know my nerves are working still. So..not paralyzed, good news there. Very good news there.
But..still does not explain why I can't move, or what happened, why I can't remember.
Ish: *wincing* Ohh that's bad, really bad.
Troy: *Cringing* Just..How do you guys survive injuries like this.
..OKAY, injured; and by the sounds of it, BADLY.
No wonder Ash and Bolt are in tears, man I feel awful. I really don't like scaring the others like this. I gotta make it up to them later-
RIP!
-and I gotta thank Freefall later for teaching these kids first aid.
Bolt: *tears* Ahh this will have to do! SHARDS WHERE ARE THEY!?
Must be talking about a ambulance, I must be in really bad shape if their calling the Ambulance and not going back to Canton.
Wish I could tell Bolt they'll be here soon but...I think it's best not to talk to much, I gotta stay awake for them..Just until I get the all clear or I'm put under anesthesia.
SIRENS (Far off)
Ish, Ash, Troy: ENTER THE RUSH ZONE!
Perfect timing there, and good idea being in Guardian mode just in case.
Man (outside): OPEN THE DOOR QUICKLY!
So...we're inside, hear the door opening too so, got injured inside.
Man: *cringe* Ohh that's bad. What happened?
Yes I would like to know to-
-AH COME ON, MY HEAD'S RINGING SERIOUSLY! COULDN'T HEAR A THING THERE. Seems I might of gotten a concussion too..W-Wait..Manage to get one word..
..ACCIDENT.
Man: Alright boys, load him up!
..WAS I IN A ACCIDENT?
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OKAY. So, let's recap on the way to the hospital on what I know;
I was in an accident inside...I think one of the stadiums, maybe Bolt's cause he's here. Ish, Ash and Troy are here, think it might be just a patrol given they mentioned that I was in an accident, not attacked. Injured pretty badly given their reactions and I can't move, though nothing serious as I can still feel and talk.
Well, still got some questions but it's not alot.
...I still feel awful; scaring them like that. Team's gonna worry with how bad this is too.
Bolt: *Tears* Pick-Ax...you doing alright?
Bolt's looking a wreak here; I can't just let him be worried like this forever, if I could just give him a tiny smile...
...Heh, there we go. There might be tears still but there's that smile that won Coryell.
Bolt: *tears;smile* Heh, even in that much pain your still smiling..thanks for the reassurance.
Well wish i could also tell you I don't feel any pain and I am as numb as can be, but that won't really help if I start talking up a storm with the voice i have right now.
Bolt: *tears;smile* I promise to tell the others what happened once we get there.
...OH BOY, the others. Pillage is going to be worrying his mind off with this and..SHARDS SCAVENGER! SCAVENGER GONNA GO IN PARALYSIS MODE IF HE HEARS THIS!
S-Scavs-Scavs..
Bolt: *tears;blinks* Scavs...*clicks* Oh Scavenger! Your worried on how he will react huh?
ABSOLUTELY.
Bolt: *tears;reassurance* Don't worry, i'm sure the others will keep Scavenger calm and make sure he doesn't got into Paralysis mode. Don't blame you for worrying on that; with what we learned back in 2013 he's been doing better since then. So good news there huh?
OH YEAH. Scavenger hasn't been going into that mode constantly thanks to our conversation that day.
Bolt: *tears;reassurance* Not to mention Swoop, Blow-Torch, and the others are gonna be next to him to calm his spirits. I'm sure he's going to be okay.
Thanks Bolt, needed the reassurance there too. Guess we both helped eachother out here.
Man: See he's still conscious.
Bolt: *looks up;tears* Yeah, he must be in a lot of pain though with this injury. It's really bad.
Again, wish I could say I'm not feeling the pain but not a good time and place.
Man: He's probably unaware of the injury, nor the pain if he didn't reacted when you patched the wound.
THANK YOU my good sir.
Bolt: *tears* -sighs- A-Alright, don't know if that helps but..least I know he's not in pain. So that's another worry off my mind...I mean I still don't like what I saw or seeing him injured this bad but, at least he's unaware of the pain.
Happy to see Bolt knows now...But I really wish I knew what accident happened to cause all this. Seriously, WHAT HAPPENED!?
I don't remember what happened that caused me to get this injured. And it doesn't help I feel awful placing everyone in such a panic state.
Bolt...what caused this?
Bolt: *tears;placing hand on head* Hey, we're almost there. Their gonna put you under so they can work on that head wound of yours. Your going to be a-okay before you know it.
...
HEAD WOUND?!
HEAD WOUND!?
I GOT A HEAD WOUND!
T-That means that red stuff was...MY BLOOD. SHARDS I GOT A HEAD INJURY AND I WAS BLEEDING ALL ON THE FLOOR!
That explains why I can't move nor remember what happened, especially the headache and ringing.-
-OH that must of been messy for them, I feel really bad for the custodians who are going to be cleaning up that mess. Not to mention in front of Bolt and the kids, granted their in their teens now but seeing THAT.
No wonder Bold went into freak out mode IT'S THAT BAD!
Bolt: *tears* -Pick-Ax, listen...it was an accident, Don't go blaming yourself for this okay.
Bolt.
Bolt: *tears* Accidents happen, major or minor. But, your going to be okay. Know you will.
...T-Than-k y-yo-u, B-Bolt.
Well...I'm really getting tired...Think...Yeah, I'm just going to rest till I feel better.
Bolt: *tears* You just rest up now okay, you'll see me when you wake up. See you soon Pick-Ax.
...SEE YOU SOON BOLT.
first person Pov: Ends
To Be Continued..