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A short chapter this week, I'm sorry. I'm getting use to a new routine and am currently posting twice on AO3 so I'm falling behind on my game I'm sorry. This chapter does show a sneak peak of the future, particularly Breaking Dawn. I understand some of you don't really like these chapters so skipping is completely okay, I will see you next week hopefully for the Christmas special so I can publish some of these other filler chapters and then ON TO TWILIGHT!
I also did want to say that I had a really weird review this week, it wasn't negative really, but it did have a few swear words and felt almost bullying to certain characters that I want to remind you Don't Exist! I decided to delete it as I don't approve of the words they were using and want to let you know, comments like that will be taking off.
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Reviews:
KEZZ 1- Thank you!
Guest- Aww thank you, I wrote the Christmas Eve chapter literally at 1AM on Christmas Eve (Christmas Morning) so it's kind of special to me. I'm actually glad you felt the second hand embarrassment as that was my whole goal!
Bright Anarchy- THANK YOU! I was a little worried people wouldn't like my reasoning, but I just...I can't stand the dead blood lol.
Laenara- First, love the name, second, Thank you so much! I hope to read from you again!
agabriellafigueiredo- Haha, I could't help but right a period chapter. I remember reading Twilight when I was a freshman in high school and constantly questioning the whole period thing and then once I read Stephanie Meyers explanation being so furious at it that I wrote this chapter even before I knew I was going to be writing fanfic and posting it.
J- WOW...where to start. Well first, I never intended to continue writing this fanfic. I kinda did it because I found a notebook with the first ten chapters and just kinda wanted to see what people thought of it. For the first like two years I had a really hard time with this fanfic. Going back and forth between posting and not and then for some reason November of 2023, I just started writing it again. I began posting regularly (every Sunday for months) and started getting a lot of feedback. Then I started making friends and now some of them follow me on other platforms (Facebook, Instagram, Tik Tok) and now I just feel like I have to see it though. Second Thank you so much for the kind and amazing words, they really made me smile especially with the week I'm having lol. One of my biggest goals with this silly little story of mine is to make it seem like a real extension of the original works. So I try to keep the characters as close to how the author would want them while also putting them in new situations, I.E having a human from another world live with them. As for Mare, I really rely on my own experiences as a 14 year and I how I would act in Mare's shoes, granted I never changed worlds or had a abusive mother...also Mare's much more mature than me...but other than that lol I try to think of myself at that age. I don't always hit the mark I know, so you're words really made me happy! My second goal is flaws! I hate characters that are perfect, perfect reactions, perfect body, perfect skin, perfect everything, I like flaws. Everyone has them so why not highlight them! I love that your more of a grudge holder because SO I AM! I do have so many plans for Mare to hold grudges so watch out my friend lol! Thank you for the amazing words on the Callahan's, there very special to me because...well it's my real writing, my real characters, all of that is mine and not an extension of someone else's work so it leaves me very vulnerable and you've made me smile with your love for them. I've read a lot of OC's in Twilight and most of them end up with the Cullens because of an abusive situation and it's so black and white. There's no reason behind the abuse just abuse, I want to know why, what's their story, even the joker became evil for his own reason, so what thier's. That's why I have so many chapters about why Mare's mother is the way she is, and you understanding that and writing such kind words...AHHH THANK YOU! I'm sorry this is so long, I just can't stop thanking you for the amazing words and for letting me gush like this! I'm sending you good vibes and wishing you only the best week!
Rayamax790- AWW Thank you so much my friend! I really appreciate your kind words, they really made me smile! Unfortunately I'm not looking for an artist or interested in paying for art work but thank you. As I've stated in the past many times, I'm not looking to pay for art, but give full permission for art for fun is that's something anyone wanted to do. Have a great week!
Gretchenia- HELLO MY FREIND! I love that you love these sneak peak chapter, their kinda my favorite too! OMG GIVE ME YOUR IDEAS! I know why she's hurt, but I'd love to hear yours, see if other people are thinking the same way. Mostly I just want to hear your thoughts lol! Carlisle and Esme are amazing parents and I know I love my parent's but for Ince would love to be taken care of by Esme and Carlisle, just once...just to see what it's like. Mare's annoyed with Emmett, because she just doesn't feel good, and as always Emmetts at a level 10 when she needs him at a level 2 lol, but him talking about attack bears also kind of reminds her of why she's hurt herself (wink, wink) seriously though if you want to know, just message me on Instagram and I'll tell you lol! Thank you always my sweet lovely friend for being not only amazing but being a real and true friend! Sending all my love, COFFEE!
Is He Going To Be There (Breaking Dawn Sneak Peak)
"Is he going to be there?"
"He has a name."
"I know, I don't want to use his name." I roll my eyes, leaning back to toss a spare tank top at Cody's head, she catches it and frowns, "You know I don't like talking about him."
"Cody," I laugh, "you brought him up."
"I thought you liked girls," I turn lifting a brow in her direction. We've been in my closet for about two hours now, I'm going through my clothes and Cody is helping herself to my donate pile, so far there is no donate pile, only a Cody pile,
"Since when?"
"Since you told that one girl that you loved her." I can't help the smile on my face,
"That was you, Dakota,"
"Yes, but I said it back and I like girls, so that's that."
"Is that how Lesbianism works?" She nods,
"Sure is." I chuckle and turn back grabbing a Gucci tank top I've never worn and throw it in Cody's pile, "I just don't like him." I turn giving her a sympathetic look and sit down next to her,
"You don't have to, you're not going to like every decision I make, just like how I don't like every decision you make." Cody frowns,
"That's so different Mare, this is my life, this is...it's just a guy."
"Dakota, you're talking about the Army, I'm just dating a guy who knows how long we'll be together." I feel almost like a fraud for saying that, but Cody sighs,
"This is going to make my life better, give me a purpose, this is just a guy that no one likes."
"No one's giving him a chance." Cody growls and flops onto her back right into her pile,
"I tried, remember the movie, you remember the movie,"
"I remember the movie," I nod, she frowns and lifts her head,
"Why is he going?"
"Bella invited him." She flops her head back down and blows out a large breath, "Cody he's going to be busy most of the wedding so I'll be right by your side," Cody carefully lifts her head again, one brow raised,
"Really?" I nod, "Why is he busy?"
"He has things to do." She frowns and drops her head,
"So you won't be busy doing things with him the whole night?" For the fourth time since entering that closet, I roll my eyes and flop down right next to her. Now we're both lying down in my closet staring up at the ceiling,
"I won't leave you." Cody turns to look over at me,
"Promise?"
"Promise, I'll have to walk down the aisle. Bridesmaid stuff and all that, but after that theirs nowhere I would rather be, than hanging out with you." Cody smiles
"Aww Marceline."
"Awww Dakota." I mock back,
"I love you."
"And I love you." She smiles,
"Sooo-"
"I love you, not in love with you." She frowns,
"Well, not yet."