The part of the chapter after the potions part comes completely out of my imagination, as Hermione doesn't go with Harry to face Quirrel. If you've read Twelve Kisses by me, a bit of it may be similar, as I've used some lines from there that I thought would fit, but I won't use too much. Just a bit of dialogue.

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Chapter 22: Ron's Triumph

The next chamber loomed before us, shrouded in darkness. The kind of darkness so deep and suffocating it felt alive, pressing against my skin. As we stepped cautiously inside, a sudden, blinding light flooded the room, and I had to shield my eyes with my hand. Slowly, as my vision adjusted, I realized what lay before us.

A colossal chessboard stretched across the chamber, its black and white squares gleaming faintly in the unnatural light. We were standing on the edge, just behind the black chessmen. My heart skipped a beat as I looked up—up—at the enormous pieces. They towered over us, carved from some kind of cold, glinting stone. The white chessmen across the board were even more unsettling. Faceless and eerily still, they radiated a quiet menace.

Ron's eyes lit up with a mixture of excitement and determination, a stark contrast to the apprehension gnawing at my insides.

"Now what do we do?" Harry whispered.

"It's obvious, isn't it?" Ron said, his voice carrying a new kind of confidence. "We've got to play our way across the room. The door is there, see?"

I followed his pointing finger and saw the door on the far side of the board. The implication hit me immediately. My stomach churned.

"How?" I asked, my voice trembling slightly.

Ron stepped forward, his eyes scanning the board with the intensity of a seasoned player. "I think we're going to have to be chessmen," he said, his tone both excited and grave. He reached out to the nearest black knight and touched its stone horse. The figure sprang to life, the horse pawing at the ground with a sharp, echoing clatter. The knight dipped its head in acknowledgment.

"Do we have to join you to get across?" Ron asked the knight. It gave a stiff nod.

"This needs thinking about," Ron muttered, more to himself than to us. His gaze darted across the board, analyzing every piece, every possible move. "I suppose we've got to take the place of three of the black pieces..."

I watched him, my nerves buzzing. He was brilliant at chess, better than anyone I knew, but this was unlike any game we'd played before.

Finally, he turned back to us, his expression a mix of apology and determination. "Now, don't be offended or anything, but neither of you are that good at chess."

He wasn't wrong. I smiled faintly, appreciating his tact. "We're not offended," Harry said quickly. "Just tell us what to do."

Ron nodded with a smirk. "Well, Harry, you take the place of that bishop, and Hermione, you next to him instead of that castle."

I swallowed hard, stepping forward as instructed. "What about you?"

"As for me," Ron said, his voice steady, "I'm going to be a knight." He looked up at the black knight, which nodded in approval.

The three chess pieces we were replacing turned and walked off the board in perfect unison. I moved to my square, my palms sweating despite the chill in the air. The stone under my feet felt impossibly cold, and the enormity of what we were doing weighed heavily on me.

"White always plays first in chess," Ron reminded us, his voice cutting through the tense silence. "Yes… look…"

A white pawn glided forward two squares with an eerie grace.

Ron sprang into action, directing the pieces with sharp commands. "Harry, move diagonally four squares to the right."

Harry obeyed, and the black piece he replaced slid forward. The white queen moved next, striking down one of the black knights with a deafening crack. The stone figure shattered into pieces, the sound echoing off the walls. My heart leapt into my throat.

"Had to let that happen," Ron muttered, though his voice wavered slightly. "Leaves you free to take that bishop, Hermione. Go on."

I hesitated, my hands trembling as I reached for the stone figure. It felt impossibly heavy under my touch, but I pushed it forward with all my strength, knocking the white bishop off the board. The sound of stone scraping against stone sent shivers down my spine.

The game pressed on, each move more nerve-wracking than the last. Black pieces fell, their remains piling up like casualties of war. Twice, Ron had to throw himself into the fray to protect Harry and me, his quick thinking saving us from certain defeat.

Finally, the game reached its critical point. Ron stood still, staring at the board, his face pale but resolute.

"We're nearly there," he said, more to himself than to us. "Let me think… let me think…"

And then his expression hardened. "Right," he said in a low voice. "It's the only way. I've got to be taken."

"NO!" Harry and I shouted in unison, our voices echoing through the chamber.

"That's chess!" Ron snapped, his voice filled with frustration. "You've got to make some sacrifices! I take one step forward and she'll take me. That leaves you free to checkmate the king, Harry!"

"But—" Harry began, his voice breaking.

"Do you want to stop Snape or not?" Ron bellowed.

"Ron-" I yelled.

"Look, if you don't hurry up, he'll already have the Stone! I have to do this!" He shouted, putting his foot down on the matter.

Tears pricked at my eyes. I didn't want him to do this. The thought of him being hurt, really hurt, was unbearable.

"Ready?" Ron called, his voice shaking but determined. "Here I go. Now, don't hang around once you've won."

"But Ron-" I yelled.

"I mean it! I'll be fine."

Before either of us could protest again, Ron stepped forward. The white queen sprang to life, her stone arm swinging down with brutal force. She struck Ron across the head, and he collapsed to the floor.

"RON!" I screamed, tears streaming down my face as I froze on my square. The queen dragged his limp form off the board, and I fought every instinct to run to him. I couldn't move. I couldn't lose this game for him.

"Harry, do it!" I choked out, my voice trembling.

Harry moved three squares to the left. The white king hesitated, then removed his crown and placed it at Harry's feet. The chessmen bowed, the sound of stone grinding against stone filling the chamber. The door ahead swung open.

With one last look at Ron, who lay motionless on the cold stone floor, Harry and I sprinted through the door and into the next passageway.

"What if he's—?" I began, my voice breaking.

"He'll be alright," Harry said quickly, though I could hear the fear in his voice. "What do you reckon's next?"

I wiped my tears, forcing myself to focus. "We've had Sprout's; that was the Devil's Snare. Flitwick must've put charms on the keys; McGonagall transfigured the chessmen to make them alive. That leaves Quirrell's spell… and Snape's."

We reached another door.

"All right?" Harry whispered.

"Go on," I whispered back, steeling myself.

Harry pushed it open.


A putrid, overwhelming smell filled the air as we entered the next chamber, so strong it made my stomach churn. I quickly yanked my robe up over my nose, eyes stinging, as Harry did the same. The source of the stench became painfully clear when I spotted it—a massive troll sprawled out across the floor. Its lifeless form was grotesque, its head sporting a swollen, bloody lump. The sheer size of it dwarfed the troll we had faced on Halloween. I felt a cold chill creep over me.

"I'm glad we didn't have to fight that one," Harry whispered, his voice strained as he held his robe over his face. He stepped gingerly over one of its enormous, gray legs. "Come on, I can't breathe."

I nodded, too nauseated to respond, and followed as Harry pulled open the next door. My heart raced as we stepped cautiously through, bracing ourselves for whatever horror awaited us next. But when my eyes adjusted, I was stunned to find that the room wasn't terrifying at all—at least, not in the same way.

In the center of the chamber stood a table with seven bottles arranged in a neat line, their shapes and sizes varying. The room itself was eerily still, the bottles catching the faint light from above, their glass gleaming like some kind of cruel promise.

"Snape's," Harry said immediately, his face tightening. "What do we have to do?"

Before either of us could take another step, fire erupted behind us, cutting off the way we had come. The flames were vivid purple, licking up the stone walls like living creatures. I spun around, panic rising, only to see that a wall of black fire now blocked the doorway ahead.

We were trapped.

"Look!" I said, spotting a roll of parchment on the table. I grabbed it, my fingers trembling, and unrolled it as Harry leaned over my shoulder. Together, we read the riddle aloud:

Danger lies before you, while safety lies behind,

Two of us will help you, which ever you would find,

One among us seven will let you move ahead,

Another will transport the drinker back instead,

Two among our number hold only nettle wine,

Three of us are killers, waiting hidden in line.

Choose, unless you wish to stay here forevermore,

To help you in your choice, we give you these clues four:

First, however slyly the poison tries to hide

You will always find some on nettle wine's left side;

Second, different are those who stand at either end,

But if you would move onward, neither is your friend;

Third, as you see clearly, all are different size,

Neither dwarf nor giant holds death in their insides;

Fourth, the second left and the second on the right

Are twins once you taste them, though different at first sight.

The words made my head spin with a combination of dread and excitement. By the time we reached the end of the riddle, I couldn't help the grin that spread across my face.

"Brilliant," I said, practically bouncing on my toes. "This isn't magic, it's logic. A puzzle! A lot of the greatest wizards haven't got an ounce of logic—they'd be stuck in here forever!"

"But so will we, won't we?" Harry asked, his voice tense.

"Of course not!" I said, the thrill of the challenge momentarily distracting me from the dire stakes. "Everything we need is here on this paper. Seven bottles: three are poison; two are wine; one will get us safely through the black fire, and one will get us back through the purple."

"But how do we know which to drink?" Harry asked, his eyes darting nervously between the bottles.

"Give me a minute," I said, pacing in front of the table. My mind raced as I read and re-read the clues. The bottles glinted under the dim light, their shapes and positions calling to me like pieces of a complex puzzle. I worked through each clue systematically, visualizing the logic in my head.

At last, I stopped, my hands clapping together in triumph. "Got it," I announced. "The smallest bottle will get us through the black fire, toward the Stone."

Harry picked up the tiny bottle, examining it with a furrowed brow. "There's only enough there for one of us," he said quietly. "That's hardly one swallow."

I felt my heart sink. I knew what this meant. Harry was going to have to go forward alone.

"Which one will get you back through the purple flames?" he asked.

I pointed at the rounded bottle on the far right.

"You drink that," Harry said firmly.

"Harry, what—" I began, my voice trembling, but he cut me off.

"No, listen," he said, his tone resolute. "Get back and get Ron. Grab brooms from the flying key room; they'll get you out of the trapdoor and past Fluffy. Go straight to the owlery and send Hedwig to Dumbledore. We need him. I might be able to hold Snape off for a while, but I'm no match for him, really."

"But Harry," I said, tears welling up in my eyes, "what if You-Know-Who's with him?"

Harry's hand moved instinctively to his scar. He gave me a weak smile that didn't reach his eyes. "Well... I was lucky once, wasn't I?" he said. "I might get lucky again."

My lip quivered, and before I could stop myself, I flung my arms around him. My best friend was walking straight into danger, and there was nothing I could do to stop him. I clung to him, the weight of the moment pressing heavily on my chest.

"Hermione!" Harry protested, his voice muffled against my shoulder.

"Harry, you're a great wizard, you know," I said, my voice cracking.

"I'm not as good as you," Harry mumbled, clearly embarrassed as I released him.

"Me!" I scoffed, wiping my eyes. "Books! And cleverness! There are more important things. Friendship and bravery and... oh, Harry, be careful!"

Harry nodded, a flicker of determination in his green eyes. "You drink first," he said. "You are sure which is which, aren't you?"

"Positive," I said, though my hands shook slightly as I picked up the rounded bottle. The liquid inside was clear and unassuming, but the moment I drank it, an icy chill shot through my body. It was as if I had swallowed a shard of frozen glass.

"It's not poison?" Harry asked, his voice tight with worry.

"No," I said, shivering. "But it's like ice."

"Quick, go, before it wears off."

"Good luck, Harry," I whispered, the words catching in my throat. "Take care."

"GO!" Harry shouted.

I turned, forcing my legs to move, and walked straight through the purple fire. It licked at me, cold and strange, but I felt no pain. On the other side, I stopped and turned back. The flames were impenetrable, obscuring Harry from view.

"Harry..." I whispered to myself, tears spilling over. My heart felt like it was being torn in two. One of my friends was heading into danger, possibly facing Voldemort himself. And the other—Ron—was still unconscious in the chess room. They both needed me.


I hurried back to the chess room, my heart pounding in my chest. The room was eerily still, the silence only broken by the sound of my footsteps echoing against the cold stone walls. The once-intimidating chess pieces were now lifeless, scattered around the board like fallen warriors. My gaze darted to where Ron lay crumpled among the remains of the black knight.

"Ron," I whispered, dropping to my knees beside him. His face was pale, too pale, and streaked with smudges of dirt and blood. Cuts and bruises dotted his exposed skin, and the gash on his forehead had left a trail of dried blood down the side of his face. My throat tightened, and panic gripped me.

"Ron," I said again, gently poking his shoulder. Nothing. His chest was rising and falling faintly, so I knew he was alive, but he wasn't responding. My mind raced with every awful possibility. What if—what if he—no, I couldn't even think of it.

"Ron, Ron, please wake up, oh please!" I said louder, shaking him slightly. Still nothing. Then I heard it—a faint groan, so soft I almost missed it.

"Ronald Weasley, you get up this instant!" I screamed, my voice cracking under the strain.

His eyes shot open, wide and unfocused. "Hermione?" he croaked.

"Ron! You're awake!" I cried, relief flooding through me. Without thinking, I threw my arms around him, hugging him tightly.

"Hermione... please…" he winced, his voice weak. I realized too late that I was probably crushing him.

"Oh! Oh, I'm so sorry," I said quickly, pulling back. "I'm just happy that you woke up! I was scared here by myself."

"By yourself? Where's Harry?" he groaned, struggling to sit up.

"He had to go ahead. There was only enough potion for one of us to go through."

"Potion?" he asked, confused.

"Never mind," I said, glancing around the room. "Long story, I'll tell you when we get out of here if...oh goodness Ron! How will we get out?"

Ron held out his hand weakly. "Help me up, will ya?"

I grabbed his hand, trying to pull him up without jostling him too much. He pushed himself the rest of the way, swaying slightly as he stood. His face contorted with pain, and he stumbled back against the wall.

"Easy, Ron," I said, quickly moving under his arm to steady him. His weight leaned heavily on me, but I held firm.

"What the bloody fuck happened?" he asked, his words slurred.

"Well, the queen was simply barbaric!" I exclaimed, still shaken by the memory. "She hit you hard over the head and then slung you into the pile of pieces as if you were a rag doll."

"What's a rag doll?" Ron asked, frowning.

"Never mind," I said quickly. "Anyway, we need to get out of here and alert the school. Write to Dumbledore."

"Ooooookay," Ron said, his words dragging as if he were struggling to focus. He was definitely concussed.

We walked together into the next chamber, his arm slung over my shoulders as I practically carried him. When we reached the Devil's Snare, I stopped short. The plant was still smoldering from the fire I had conjured earlier, its tendrils limp and lifeless.

"Hermione, how are we supposed to get out?" Ron asked, his voice tinged with worry.

I looked up at the hole far above us, my stomach sinking. "Oh no! I didn't think about that! Stay here," I said, easing him down onto the floor.

"And where the bloody—wait. Sorry. Where are you going?" he asked, blinking at me.

"I have to go back and get a broom," I said, already turning to leave. "Looks like we're flying out."

Ron groaned but didn't argue. I raced back down the stone corridor, my heart hammering in my chest. The keys from the previous chamber were now scattered on the floor, their wings twitching faintly as if they were recovering from the earlier chaos. I carefully grabbed two broomsticks but paused. Ron was in no condition to fly on his own. I let one broom fall back to the ground.

"Right," I muttered to myself, gripping the remaining broom tightly. The thought of flying made my hands shake, but I had no choice. I had to do this.

When I returned, Ron was slumped against the wall, his head lolling slightly. I knelt down and helped him up.

"Right," I said, trying to sound more confident than I felt. "Well... I think you may be too out of it to steer."

"What are you talking about? I can…" Ron trailed off, wobbling dangerously before catching himself.

I gave him a knowing look, and he rolled his eyes. "Exactly," I said firmly. "So I'm going to steer, and you are going to attempt to play something on this flute so we won't get killed. Can you do that?"

"I can try," he mumbled, taking the flute from my hand. "Even if it's one long note."

I nodded, mounting the broom with trembling hands. Ron climbed on behind me, his arms wrapping tightly around my waist. I knew he could feel how badly I was shaking.

"It's all right," he said, trying to reassure me. "Just pretend this is a casual fly and not a fly that could potentially lead to our impending deaths if something goes wrong."

"Thanks, Ronald," I said sarcastically, though my voice wavered.

We kicked off together. The broom wobbled as we ascended, my grip so tight on the handle that my knuckles turned white. Ron began blowing a long, shaky note on the flute. It wasn't melodic, but it was enough to keep Fluffy asleep.

The dog's heads twitched as we hovered over them. One of the heads shifted slightly, and I let out a squeak, nearly steering us into its ear. Ron tilted my body slightly to guide the broom toward the ground.

We landed with a thud, and I scrambled off the broom, my legs shaking. Ron spit the flute out of his mouth as we bolted for the door. His limp slowed him down, but we managed to push the door closed just as a low growl rumbled from behind it.

We both collapsed against the wall, breathing heavily. Then, despite everything, we burst into laughter. Relief and adrenaline coursed through us, making us giddy.

"You were brilliant, Hermione!" Ron cheered, his grin lopsided.

"So were you!" I said, grinning back. "Let's never do this again!"

"I agree. What do we do now?" he said, his expression sobering as he stumbled again. I caught him before he could fall.

"First, we get you to the hospital wing," I said, determined. " You're acting as if you have a concussion. Then I go and write a letter for Dumbledore and send it off to him. He will know what to do."

Ron nodded weakly, leaning on me as we made our way out of the chamber. My thoughts were racing. Harry was still in danger, but at least Ron was alive—and I would do everything I could to ensure we got help in time.

I helped him all the way over to the hospital wing and pounded on the locked door. A minute later, Madam Pomfrey opened it, took one look at Ron and didn't say a word. Something told me she probably knew we had done something very serious.

The moment I left the hospital wing, I broke into a sprint. My legs ached from the long night, but I couldn't let myself stop. Every second counted. Harry was out there, alone, and if anyone could help him, it was Dumbledore. But where was he?

The corridors felt endless as I dashed through the castle, my footsteps echoing against the cold stone walls. The torches flickered, casting long, unsettling shadows. My chest heaved with each breath, the air cold and sharp in my throat. My mind raced faster than my feet. If I could just get to the owlery, I could send a message. Hedwig could find him, wherever he was—but what if it was already too late?

I took the stairs two at a time, gripping the banister to keep from slipping. Harry can't face this alone. The thought sent a fresh wave of urgency through me. My heart pounded as I turned sharply down another corridor, nearly tripping in my haste.

The entrance hall came into view, dimly lit and eerily quiet. And then—just as I was about to head for the staircase leading to the owlery—I froze.

There he was.

"Professor Dumbledore!" I cried, my voice cracking from the effort.

He stopped mid-stride, his long, sweeping robes billowing slightly behind him. His blue eyes met mine, sharp and filled with understanding. It was as though he already knew.

"Harry's gone after him, hasn't he?" he asked, his voice steady but laced with urgency.

I nodded breathlessly, clutching a stitch in my side. "Yes—he—he went through the trapdoor. Ron and I couldn't—there wasn't enough potion—we couldn't follow him!"

Dumbledore didn't need another word. He told me to head back to the choice wing, then turned on his heel and strode toward the staircase leading to the third floor. His movements were quick, purposeful, like a storm sweeping through the castle. The sight of him, so calm, so commanding, made my knees go weak with relief.

I stood there for a moment, clutching the wall to steady myself as my breathing slowed. The weight in my chest began to lift. Dumbledore was here. He'd get to Harry. He'd stop Snape—or Voldemort—or whoever was down there..


When I got back to the hospital wing, Madam Pomfrey treated my small cuts and gave a potion to me for the nerves and told my to stay in the hospital wing for the night.

Madam Pomfrey had just finished checking on Ron and headed to her office, her robes swishing behind her as she disappeared through the door. The silence in the room was heavy, broken only by the occasional rustle of the bedsheets as we shifted uncomfortably. I had taken the bed next to Ron's, though I felt anything but restful. My mind raced with thoughts of Harry and what he might be facing at that very moment.

The soft glow of moonlight filtered through the tall windows, casting long shadows on the floor. The faint scent of antiseptic hung in the air, mixed with the comforting but slightly medicinal smell of clean sheets. I stared at the ceiling, counting the faint cracks in the plaster, but no amount of counting could distract me from the knot of worry twisting in my stomach.

Would Harry be okay? He was only eleven, and now he was alone, facing unimaginable danger. Could he handle Snape on his own? Would Snape... would he actually kill a student? My chest tightened at the thought, and I clenched the blanket in my fists to keep from crying.

As the room settled into stillness, I quietly slipped out of my bed and padded over to Ron's. His red hair stood out against the white pillowcase, and he turned his head slightly when he heard me approach.

"Are you feeling okay?" I asked softly, not wanting to wake anyone else in the wing.

"Yeah," Ron said, though his voice was unconvincing. "Still stings though, my head."

I could see through his brave facade. The lines of pain around his eyes and the slight wince as he shifted on the bed gave him away. But he was trying to act tough, trying to make me feel better, and I appreciated it more than I could say.

I smiled, sitting gently on the edge of his bed and giving his hand a light pat. "My mum used to kiss my hurts when I was younger. Made them feel better."

Before I could think twice, I leaned over and placed a small kiss on the right side of his forehead, just where Madam Pomfrey had healed the gash. His skin was warm against my lips, and I could feel the faint pulse beneath it.

Ron blinked, looking utterly bewildered. "Hey... it actually feels a bit better," he said, a grin breaking across his face. "That's some crazy Muggle thing you got going on, Hermione."

I laughed quietly, the sound easing some of the tension in my chest. "Maybe," I said with a shrug, standing and heading back to my bed, sliding under the covers again.

The room was still once more, and for a while, neither of us spoke. I stared at the ceiling again, my thoughts still circling Harry.

"Ron?" I asked softly, not turning my head.

"Yeah, Hermione?" he replied, his voice sounding tired but steady.

"Do you think Harry will be okay?"

There was a pause. I turned my head to look at him, and he seemed deep in thought, his brow furrowed. The moonlight illuminated his face, highlighting the worry etched into his features.

"Ron?" I said again, my voice trembling slightly.

"I think so," he said finally, with a confidence that seemed more for my benefit than his own. "I'm sure the teachers have found him standing victorious over Snape's dead body right now."

"Ronald Weasley, that is cruel!" I huffed, though I couldn't stop the small laugh that escaped me.

"I know," he said with a crooked grin. "Now stop worrying and go to sleep."

"Goodnight, Ron," I said, closing my eyes.

"Night, Mione," he whispered.

I froze for a moment, my heart skipping a beat. Mione. It almost sounded like "my one." A nickname. He had given me a nickname. It wasn't something I was used to, but it felt...comforting. It was rather nice having someone outside my family give me a nickname.

I turned onto my side, my eyes catching the faint glow of the stars outside the window. They twinkled faintly, distant but steady, and I clung to the hope they seemed to represent. Harry was going to be alright. He had to be. I imagined waking up in the morning to find him in the bed next to us, grinning like he always did when he'd done something reckless but brilliant.

With that thought, I allowed myself to drift off to sleep, holding onto the fragile hope that tomorrow would bring good news.