I don't own Timecrest all right belong to sneaky Crab
This is the fifth chapter of our Alencia Academy story story, and the last one for a bit until the next round of chapters. I hope you enjoy our final chapter for a while of the introductions of the characters. I know these chapters are more important right now to establish the characters and their personalities and all their different quirks and personalities that the characters also, I added characters that were not in our chapter 1 characters originally the children and Corina and Zoe Val Zari from chapter 2 those are characters I added, is extra characters that I didn't think I would add to this awesome story but I thought they were important to add characters.
The reason I add them is because they're important later on as extra characters of Christalis as well. I just think adding Cristall to the story will make things more fun and more dramatized. Also to add some more royal drama to the story by having Princess Cena in the story. In this chapter, you'll be getting to be introduced to our main characters that I've been waiting on and you've been waiting on for a while yet.
The Timecrest twins will finally be introduced in this chapter evil twins Merrell and Hector will also be introduced in this chapter Edgar will be in this chapter. Elise Mabel will be finally introduced in this chapter.
And family members well family members of the siblings and other family members around will be introduced now even though they'll take the train and live on campus it's indicated that the twins that the Timecrest twins are native to this area of Valencia and living here in Orem Hala, but they stay on campus to make things easier so they don't have to travel so much except for certain events and certain PTA meetings that their mother Helena will surely attend.
But I'm getting ahead of myself aren't I all right? Then we'll get to our first set of narrations where I like to do a narration thing before we get into the actual introduction of characters. I hope you're enjoying this story and let me know your appreciation for Alencia Academy.
And if everybody's personalities are perfect.
narration
The kids were on the train for a long time when the conductor was driving the train and we're getting up to their own devices as well chatting or whatever it is they do for a long train ride. They were chatting about the new school for some of them. It was new for them and for others who were in second years and beyond we're talking about their next year and how it's gonna be different this year, especially with characters from kids from other parts of the world of Valencia kids from the ice skates, and people and kids from the bastard region, adding some different rarity to the school.
Some were more excited and some weren't the bullies weren't in the back. Oliver and the other boys were talking about things about how they were gonna bully all the new kids or the older kids that were not good. The Christalis were talking to them too And how the school year was gonna be different than any other school year before. And with us, the leader of the Kristalla group said to the princess I'll become the new king to Oliver we will rule the school yes yes we will take control.
King Janice doesn't know what he is doing. He doesn't know what he's doing is wrong for us. And right for our school by letting us join he has nothing he doesn't know what's coming and what's gonna hit him.
And neither will Orem Hala as she last Manoly as she sits and holds all of her hand and her own as he does all the bullies sit and laugh and clap, their hands joyful that the two are gonna be leaders of this school, even though she was the first year he didn't care that she was a first year. She was cruel. Not a complete first year cause she was about the same age as Oliver but the first year was her first attending, and her last year as well as a senior.
You know, he said you know you'll make a great king thank you. She says and that's what I wanna be called. I know he says.
Conversations were breaking out all through like I said throughout the train around the car they were in at least the conductor should've made carve designated for each group of students, but then friends wouldn't get to sit with friends and a lot of first years were a lot of friends with a lot of older students as well.
Luckily, this was only like twice a year that they did this which is good and fine.
The train was getting closer to their destination, but they were still once they got into Orem Hala. There are still a few kids to pick up. They live close enough that the PTA can still do things, but still, they have to stay on campus to make it fair for everyone, they could go home if they'd like these were the kids who were more likely student-like characters or students went to didn't take the train there. They could just return they could just come to school on the first day of classes or hang out in the school district area. I think they were picked up too, but they could leave campus whenever they like. .
Not many of them had that privilege only a few did the train came through the town, but not stopping at the school itself. Yet the school itself was its town where kids also lived at least on the outskirts of it. Academy was also a little town on the Oscars near Blood Moon Haven.
My guilds the school was built like that to be resemblance of a town so they haven't gotten quite to the school yet. Everyone stayed there even those who went home or could've gone home if they'd like some of them will take a separate train ride not everyone thought.
The train passes big buildings and homes that resemble just buildings, but they are homes for many kids and not kids but families.
Show me the wealth of some of these families.
Tell me they are three stories maybe even four even if they were single buildings for one family out the Orem Hella outskirts were full of these. It was different than seeing the Oscars when they were near the Oscars of Volder or there were small towns like this too. They even saw the town for the school. The school was the town. It was huge, not quite a city, but it was pretty good size.
Rather than a cluster area around each other before the kids could see the school first they saw all these buildings some light mansions.
Some of the homes were grand even more grand than the Crane mansion itself. The Crane mansion estates were nothing compared to some of these homes and the state that they lived in.
Oliver Crane was angry to see such big beautiful buildings near Orem Halla grander than his own home near the outskirts parts of Boulder I can't believe the king allowed this he said.
What do you mean, his friends asked, including his best friend who was sitting next to the crystal girl that was sitting to him I mean, look at these buildings he said, bobbing her head and nodding, looking out at the beautiful buildings near her most these probably caused a fortune of gold she said exactly. He said why but things like this have to exist it's rumored that the first made of Valencia live in one of these homes and the first human and his wife also live in one of them the first human lives among us yes that's what I heard. The soon ruler of the ice cade said.
I heard he lives in one of these mansion homes provided by the leader of the merchants union Porsche Del Rose.
What does he call his home monitor the sky I think or the human city is close by and he lives there but none of the kids there go to our school or the school that will be going to. She says there's a school already there for them so he lives in a big mansion like a Home apartment in the middle of the city, but we never go in it, only people who allowed his family members and the first said.
Some of our teachers live in some of these homes too, but not in the human city area the human city in Orem Hollow was in the center of Valencia along with the school district Alencia Academy, which was also a town. The town wasn't called Alencia Academy, though the town was called Timecrest.
Named after the first human himself and his family.
The train went around the town of the first city of Valencia first human city of Valencia the human city they called it. It was a mystical place, very high and full of human technology.
People, the kids tried to look out the window to see if they could see the first two minutes on his balcony, but he wasn't there. He must've not been there at the moment or he was probably asleep still or busy in his laboratory. he was a genius after all. One of the smartest people in Valencia besides his grandson, Luther Timecrest.
Most people marveled at the beautiful city. They rode by and the beautiful futuristic buildings were a lot different than Valder and a lot different than all the other small towns near Volder and other cities in the ice skates or any place. The city was a jewel the jewel of Valencia it was more beautiful than even the capital city of Volder.
As they drove by, they saw other towns and not really villages but bigger city towns the first mage's house was next door to the city. He didn't live in the city or in one of the towns he lived next door to the city and between another town and the city.
The second-year students third and fourth-year students weren't as mesmerized, as first-years and kids from other regions, who are now kids, but not mesmerized by the beautiful sites of the city itself. The conductor said that this was of the kingdom of Valencia and should've been our capital instead of Volder, but the king conquered and made himself king, even though he's king, Janice is not the rightful ruler of Valencia.
The kids in that city went to their special school there they didn't have to go to the city the big school in the center of everything if they didn't want to, but a lot of the kid merchant kids in the merchant city of Orem were where they were headed, drove by the city as they drove past they drove by Halla and merged the cities of Orem and Blood Moon Haven there was a station between the two places there was a station in Orem Hala but before they got there, there was another station another town nearby.
Also, it was no longer morning but late afternoon almost evening. They all had lunch too before and they probably won't have supper until they reach their destination at the school. The traveling was an all-day thing that's why classes haven't started today.
It won't be for another few weeks.
The towns were described to Scarlet by her friends. Thanks. She said looking at everyone sensing them near her thanks for describing things to me. They said you're welcome Scarlet knowing my brother he probably wouldn't describe these things to me. Even though I have been here before.
In the small town of Blood Moon Haven, which was near the outskirts of the merchant city. They named the town after the orphanage that sit in the center, but there was also another house nearby.
You see there was a beautiful home that Scarlet was keeping an eye out for her friends were for her, looking out the windows.
You see the royal palace was not made by I Am but the house that she was looking for Scarlet was looking for was a beautiful palace built brick by brick by I Am. It wasn't a palace, but a mansion.
Built by the prodigy himself the prodigy inventor of all of Valencia, but he didn't sell his inventions to Volter. They were cruel and wouldn't give him his wages for them so he sold them through the merchants union instead making a profit.
Also, the king himself doesn't even use it, and I really in the palace his palace as a normal one but the mansion was an I really in the palace, not a palace, but a mansion beside the king himself his family is the richest in all of the Valencia. The only other person who is just as rich as him, and the first human in the first mage was Latto Sing Latto Sing a Chow Cow, and the father of instant casting magic also had a mansion nearby.
But they weren't gonna get to see the lovely mansion, but Scarlet will be. She goes and visits there all the time when she's in this area, especially during the school year.
She couldn't retain her excitement, chatting with your monks, a mile a minute for a moment.
Driving through the train made a stop at the station inside Blue Moon Haven city the school wasn't here, but it was nearby. Timecrest was a town of its own. The school itself was a town of its own.
With the teachers and workers and the dormitory apartments that the kids lived in, even though those who lived in these outskirt areas also lived inside the town sometimes they'd go home a few times before school started.
No, they were getting close to the station and parking there now.
I'm picking up their last few kids.
Everyone was getting restless too don't worry. The conductor said we would be at the school soon enough.
But we still need to pick up a few more children, he says at Blood Moon Haven the last few children weigh last, but a group of them came to the train station.
The first group was Porsche's kids, not just her children, but the children she took care of. Blood Moon Haven as well lot of them we're ready to impact and ready to go. They're leaving the Haven some of them for the first time. A lot of the teenagers were at least.
And a lot of them were Porsche's kids. The first of these wasn't one of Porsha's actual children, but one that she took care of in the Haven because their family abandoned them because they didn't want them anymore and weren't working the way they wanted them to so she decided to take them in that kid, I'm talking about Edgar he had no last name which would be very difficult, but he was not a poor. He was a poor kid, but now he lived in the Haven.
Edgar was 15 but he was a mean little 15-year-old he thought he was better than everyone else even though he was poor, especially rich kids. He didn't like the little girl Elise Maybelle Porsche's child.
He always bullied her just like his just like the two just like her two siblings Merrell and Hector, who are also older than Elise there were at least 30 years of students at least first years I can't remember but they liked to team up with Edgar and torment Elise.
No one knew who their parents were except for Porsche, knowing they were her mother, the mother of them.
This is where we catch everyone in an argument Merrill Hector, Edgar, and Elise.
And why Marilyn Hector has named the tournament, twins the Twins of Terror.
Merrill
It was like any other day for me getting ready for this new school year bowling, especially my little sister Elise Maybell my brother, and I hated her very much, and our other little friend that we made Edgar also disliked her. We had to live in the stupid orphanage with her was always sick too. She was chosen to go to school with the 15-year-old sick child to go onto the school. We were 15 too. This is our first year as well and this will be embarrassing for us.
I told my brother and Edgar to come and pull her hair and stop her from getting things packed in time, but Elise had everything done already, but we still tormented her anyway Edgar told me and my brother Hector said there'll be lots of young kids to torture I smiled at that lots of young children to mess with our age. Being a bully will be so much fun.
Murder we won't be able to get away with but other things we will let being the best of everything and all of that.
I mean, be the daughters the daughter of one of the richest people in all of Alencia gives me the perks. I don't think that our little sister should inherit some of our fortune.
Well, I have one of the best ad dorm apartments that anyone on campus will have the best of everything everything will be the best for us.
Also, our mother is part of the PTA so I give some good perks too.
Near Arm Haven there's a house where a boy named Randy and his mother and father live and he's a bully too, so we'll get along just fine with him.
Like us, she thinks she's entitled to everything.
After all, my clothes were packed, which were very expensive clothing I walked to the train station. I didn't need to walk with my brother or my little sister or Edgar. We will get to the train as best we can.
The evening was approaching. That means this train must've been traveling all day long.
Well, I guess that's so.
Of course, I had all my manicure tools and nail polish and any expensive items I owned like I said I had one of the best apartments in all of the school so I knew I was gonna be rich even though I was a first-year royal or had a lot of money, had the richest apartments in all of the school those who didn't had the poorest.
Some even had to have roommates even the Rich if you had siblings usually you shared with them unless they had an apartment by themselves and you can choose to also, you don't have to share either.
What makes it good too?
But you can only share a dorm if you are in an apartment if you are related to someone you can't share if you're a couple a romantic couple cannot share rooms. You can only share if you're related.
But not three to a room, which is fine. I don't wanna share it with my little sister Elise. Hopefully, she'll have a room to herself a whole home by herself.
That'll be great I think.
Yes, that'll be great I can't wait to be the best bully ever I know mother doesn't encourage bullying, but we don't care where her worst kids are. She calls us her terror twins well we love being called that and would and we dread Edgar into this which was so much fun.
We did it because Edgar is one of Porsha's favorite mom's favorites and we'd like to torture that our sister is also mom's favorite kid. I don't know why.
Even though she says she doesn't like to play favorites it's clear that she does. I mean she's more spoiled than I am and has more things than me.
I was done, and now it was my brother's turn I told him to hurry, brother we need to hurry Don't hurry me, sis he said let me finish up packing.
Hector
Sister was hurrying me. I told her to be patient. I need to make sure everything is packed properly. I was the second half of the tarot, twins, terror twins they called us. Well, we will live up to that name. We were finished torturing our little sister Elise while she was finishing up her packing as well. She was already dressed and ate everything. I mean it's late obviously and the train got to us last because we're the closest to the school district kids can't go to school to leave us here, but I guess it's an agreement that we can all go to school together.
Well, my sister and I will show our support party our superiority that we are the richest in all of Valencia, including because of our mother Porsche, the leader of the merchants union even the child genius prodigy is no match for us. He thinks he's superior because of it, but he never flung it in front of us which I'm surprised he doesn't. He would be a great bully if he did, but he doesn't want to be that way. Well I guess it's a great contrast between us and him he's also a second-year student, which is no he's older than us he and his sibling are.
We have the best place to live. My sister and I our place will be better than anyone's.
And I know there's a great crop of bullies coming to our school this year. The Christalis, who were shut out for many years are joining our school for the first time the soon to be king of the ice skates I should call her queen, but she wants to be called king I guess is also joining the school for the first time, and then there's all Crane one of the richest men and boys and olives Olivencia he's the richest and all of Valencia then they're so likeness and others I can't wait to join them and my sister can't either. We travel in a pack together as a group.
And she said she's gonna try to become part of the cheerleading team, which is nice. That'll be great.
After we were done, our sister left ahead of us. I don't blame her, but I still do want to pick on her some more. I guess we can sit at the train station to wait for the train.
A lot of other kids around us at the Haven joined us too was very difficult because our sister mixed with them somewhat.
And chatting among them.
We had to block it out. It was so deafening. We tried to caulk up a conversation with Edgar though, and he decided to talk to us.
Eckert
I started to talk to the Terra twins I wasn't afraid of them. They could've attacked me if they wanted so they wanted me to join their group and I obliged if I didn't they would kill me even though I hate rich kids. They were fine as rich kids go little sister. Elise on the other hand was annoying annoying conversations with other kids around her.
She even told me she even told me that they would use her me like that will ever happen. Luckily, I had all my luggage and everything ready to go to this new school but yeah, like I said like whatever they would use they use anybody I heard her say anyone or anything to get in their way or use as what they do. They'll just use you, they'll treat you up and spit you out and not want to use you anymore. Yeah OK well I believe that.
Can you tell me how exciting it'll be to meet the princesses that'll be coming to the school too Princess Annalise, and Princess Riley not so much the princess of the ice skates she has a bad reputation I said I won't like any princess they're always stuck up in Rich anyway.
So why would I wanna associate with any of the princesses that'll be coming to our school?
I'm just saying, she said don't do what I said and I don't even like you and I don't even like talking to you either. You're rich too. You talk to my brother and sister and they're evil and they're rich. They're stuck up in Rich wouldn't you hate them too? I heard her ask I don't know. I said you should stay away from my siblings too. They're cruel they'd be a bad influence on you she said.
Yeah, like that's gonna happen. I said back
I gave her a look saying, leave me alone and she said fine I'll leave you alone, but you'll see the reason one day she said she ignored me and started chatting with other kids.
Elise
I try to strike up a conversation with Edgar next to me, but he's determined not to speak to me so I tried strutting up conversations with other kids. It was a lot more successful, especially with this Randy kid, even though he was a bully too. He wasn't a bully to me much but I guess he wanted to be too so you told me to stop talking to him too he thinks he knows it all because his mom knows at all like Karen I guess he thinks he's entitled because his mom is one of the more elite families. I told him that my mom is also from one of the elite families.
Randy
I told Elise to stop talking to me. She was so annoying. I can see why her siblings hated her so much and that Edgar guided me to maybe I could be a bully like them. Mom told me not to be influenced by me and the kids that I was a good kid mom doesn't know anything about me she thinks I'm a good kid because I come from a wealthy family of our status. I'll show her one day.
And I also passed a lot of the rich people around me and this unit in this neighborhood and kingdom or community I should say.
I should have everything even more than the Timecrest siblings. I don't care if Luther is the richest, smartest, brilliant kid in all the Valencia.
And that he was one of the kids who started this Academy at the age of 14. I don't care.
And that his grandfather as well Alvin Timecrest himself the first human I don't care And at the first human is close to the first mage, and that brings their family close to the first mage who cares I don't.
Vin narration
Meanwhile at the Timecrest house.
Helena was not rushing, but hurrying somewhat her kids the two wonderful twins their grandfathers were visiting as well, and their grandmother wanted to see them off like always.
I hope they're hurrying soon. I want to see them off perfectly. Alvin said, be patient, dear Violet said as she said between two of her husbands both of them.
Alvin was a great piece, but he wasn't good with girls. He had to kind of in a way he had Violet, who is his main girl, but he did accidentally have an affair with Porsche, which made him a little odd with Ezra a little, but not much he knew that that would happen.
That shows that some of the elite families sometimes have some troubles.
But even Violet wasn't the best either I have an affair as well, so it was a big deal between everyone.
But they tried to bury it under the rug.
Ezra was also visiting for a moment chatting amongst the grown-ups Porsche was also there well she was at Blood Moon Haven at one point and now she was visiting at ION ion mansion in the Ion states.
They were rich not just because of Alvin himself but because of Luther being a genius and then venting things, but also the teleport orbs and other devices that people used.
Also, they had the connection to the Timecrest being Timecrest. Both of them gave them a connection to their counterpart. They were inseparable the twins were Ash wasn't as incredible as his brother, but they were both just as good, thanks.
Luther
It was a new year a new year for us to be at the Academy. I was happy Ash to get to see all our friends that we made last year and new friends to make. I heard the princesses were finally coming at everything together we were staying on campus it made it easier even though we could come home if we wanted the train could bring us home if we wanted the conductor always had a private car just for the two of us, but we always like to hang out with the other kids.
I'm in the most beautiful mansion ion was great for us. We didn't have this beautiful home before I was born and Ash was born and even after that I didn't build this place until we were 10 years old we lived in a building that was three stories high four stories if you count the roof.
We gave that home to my grandmother, which was nice. She was happy to have it and when we built this beautiful home, I had a nice lab area and so did my father too. Where do we work on projects? The little home that I'll be having on campus will have that too. Of course, Ash and I will share her siblings after all even though I don't wanna share sometimes I do and it's better that way. I love being around my siblings. It was lonely when he didn't come to my first year. I came a year before everyone else because of my genius.
The teacher said I could graduate early, but I was going to go normal even though I came a year early. I want to graduate when Ash does. That'll make Asheville more comfortable.
I was going to bring Scarlet home with me to visit my home for a while before actual school begins after we get settled. I'll drive back here in our private car on our private train and be alone with her for a while. She has a home by herself. She'll have a she always does. She never shares with her brother, which was nice, I hate knocking on the door and asking to see her when her brother is there and telling me I shouldn't and I should leave.
She's my best friend, but my sibling asked me Brother are you gonna ask her out soon? I don't know Ash I would say I should though maybe I will this year she graduates next year so I don't have much time left.
If I can, but I can get her to come live with me and she could leave her brother alone and come live with me on ion. There's plenty of room here. But then there's the problem of her father. Of course, he might be OK with it as long as we go visit from time to time. Maybe I'll go and visit her during the holiday next time during the summer break that's what I'll do I'll talk to her about it on the train ride to school. I'm good to come home more often and I do since we live so close.
But this will be an interesting year. I heard interesting kids are joining the school this year. Some that will be graduating above me and some that are just starting are younger students.
I was almost done. Everything was packed and ready to go. I had additional bags because I had to have stuff for my lab as well.
I'm about to get ready to go. I was going to go check on Ash to see if Ash was ready.
Ash
There is a knock at my door is my brother asking me not telling me but asking me if I was ready. Oh yes, I'm ready for the best two-second school year of this year. I can't wait to see my friends Allison and Laura and some new kids too. I'm always up to making new friends all the time.
He also asked if I had the watch right now. Yes, I have it. We share it from time to time not because we could talk to the watch. We can our counterpart is a big deal to us and hopefully our friend Scarlet will join us. I don't know if she'll get connected to the watch or not, but as of right now, the two of us are connected.
Grandfather always told us to embrace the watch, embrace the side of us, which was great. We love that idea, but also told us to be careful because there are people who wanna make fun of us for it or take the watch from us so we need to hide it as much as possible too.
Matilda would be careful. Timecrest is not just our last name, but our ways of life are our last name as well. That makes our full name read our middle name because it was our father's last name. Timecrest is our last name because that is Alvin's last name Saying when is also part of our name drop but we don't use it often he's our step-grandfather but he's great. He made the chow mein cow. He also invented instant casting magic, which is cool even though magic isn't used much or literary little is still not able to known about that in the past, even though the schools were going strong That was still part of our world and still is in some I mean, mages are still important in some to fall off beasts and things like that and if you can't get in the other job being a major would pay well and maybe you could become a master we don't know for sure.
We have a great connection with our grandfather because he is close friends with our godfather who is the first mage Ezra, who always visits us and acts like another grandfather figure to us.
We wish she would take over and become king again in the past he and his grandfather were close as in they are still, but they used to be the top people in our world because they were the founders then The Vault Orion empire took over and they're not even the real Voran Empire even though they're close to Grandfather and the Timecrest Empire and they're still an empire to us the king is being fair I guess but still we wish someone else would take over his rulers or at least let the council take over.
It's good right now, but it probably wouldn't be as if the air through the throne takes the takes takes Janice's place things could go bad if he does he's in university right now, but he could ruin our lives. Jack is not that nice person and he could ruin everything for every one of us, including us humans even more so than Janice he hates humans and Timecrest. Janice is fine with us. Even though my brother refused to let him market his inventions he was still OK with us existing outside of any kind of imprisonment.
And we're protected by the union and grandfather and godfather to keep ourselves hidden enough I mean, even if we go to the school, we're still hidden enough if Jack takes the throne I hope he doesn't and that Riley or Annalise takes the throne, but they probably won't, but they're not old enough even if they could.
After I got everything together, my brother asked me if I had everything together. Yes, I said everything I got everything in order. I can't wait to share a room with you again or an apartment I should say not room too completely but an apartment together again this year, he smiles good cause I can't either. Course we can come home more than any of the others because we live closer to our school just like some of the others who live near Blood Moon Haven we live in the town of Blood Moon Haven, which is an outskirt of Omala, which could protect us from any kind of threats.
I moved my bags after they were done and my brother did too and we walked out and joined our family in the living room area in the kitchen ready for breakfast we ate breakfast and then left to walk to the train station or not breakfast but dinner I guess it wasn't morning anymore. We were the last to be picked up, but it was our last meal before we returned to our school, we got to have all the meals at home before the train arrival so that was good and we had all day to pack which was fine.
Mom had a PTA meeting that week as well later on, but not today she was part of the school, parent-teacher, conference, or whatever, and part of the school's biggest elites along with other people.
We waited, goodbye to our parents, and walked to the train station. The two of us could take our private car on the train, but we decided to join the other kids. It was shown that people were biased if we took our private car.
I can see that Allison when we got closer to the train and talked to the other kids. They didn't order some of them, but we got on the train we went. I went to sit with Allison and Ora and Luther went to sit with Scarlet and her group.
For the long short ride back to the school's campus.
aunt narration
As the last few kids got into their places to ride to the school short ride back to the school, everyone fell into the groups and started chatting away. The last of the kids were picked up, and the last of the tickets were stomped or stamped and ready to go, it wasn't gonna be a school year. Remember it was gonna be a school year to remember for a lot of the kids the teenagers and the graduating seniors this year.
As they rode to the school, it was getting close to night time checking into their dorms their apartment dorms was necessary.
And given the keys to their apartment, dorms were given out to every student, including the new kids.
ending here
I think this is a good place to end. The next part of the story or the next chapter, which won't be for a while will be about them checking in and getting closer to their dorms and getting to see their apartments. I'll have a short line or two or three from each kid's perspective chapter 6 will probably be like I was gonna do for chapter 2 but I hope you enjoy that as well when I get to chapter 6 because I'll be at least a few little short lines from each kid or group of kids or I might do it like this one except everyone will have a reaction to each person's dorm that might work too Chapters 6 through I don't Know 10 will be all about that reaction to the dorms from a group of kids to one kid at a time depending on who will get a shot like a chapter dedicated to themselves and a short narration for each of them.
I hope this story will be great and not too much if I separate the characters a little bit here and there I think this will be a great story and I hope you enjoy it if I can't get everything in this book, I might consider making this a series, but I'm not sure yet. All right I'll see you in the next one which will be chapter 6 and yeah, I'll see you then which won't be for another round or so.
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