This A.N is going to be in all three of my ongoing stories. So Harry Potter and the secret inheritance, Ember Potter and the secret of the gems, and Crystal Potter the half-ghost witch will all have the same A.N so if you read one of my other stories know you can just skip this bit.
So you all know I have spelling and grammar problems, well I asked something on Wattpad (Because that's for some reason the only site that has a community board, like seriously why doesn't AO3 at least have one of those, it would make asking your readers things so much easier!).
What I asked was if my readers would mind if I used ChatGPT to help with my spelling and grammar, I will not use it to write my stories for me. It'll just be there to help with my weaknesses like spelling.
Everyone on Wattpad said that as long as that's all I used it for, and it helped me then to go ahead so these chapters were corrected by ChatGPT. I went back and reread them side by side of the original text and all that was changed was spelling and some phrasing to better understand what's going on.
I wanted to let you know, because I'm going to be going back through my stories and using chat to correct the spelling and grammar errors in the past chapters.
Anyways lets get onto the reviews!
morningrose1 chapter 54 . Aug 5
awesome story just binged the whole thing in less than 24 hours
Me: I'm glad you like it! Here have another chapter several months ahead of schedule! (I don't have a schedule) :D
AnnaMerteuil chapter 54 . Aug 27
Wow what do you have for us in the next chapter
Me: Read this chapter and find out!
Anyways, lets get into the actual story now.
Adriane stayed behind the rock as she spied on the group. She quickly figured out that the two who killed her uncle and godfather were Saiyans. Seeing them, she remembered back to when everything first started, the strange black void where she could summon books about both the Saiyan race and Krypton.
She recalled reading that only a handful of Saiyans survived and began trying to figure out who these two were. Her eyes caught three new people joining the battle.
Her gaze was drawn to the tallest one.
This man was tall and muscular; he had clearly worked hard to achieve such muscles. Adriane could tell that they weren't for show, like some of the guys who went to the gym. This guy seemed genuinely strong.
He had a fair complexion with a few scars here and there. He was bald, which Adriane assumed was to avoid hair interfering with the third eye on his forehead.
She was shocked when she saw it. He couldn't be a Cyclops because they only had one eye, and he seemed to be a perfectly normal human. None of the people around him were making a big deal out of it either, so maybe it was a birth defect of some kind?
All three eyes had black irises, and the bottom two were almond-shaped. His eyebrows were thin and narrow, furrowed in anger at the two Saiyans.
He wore a green martial arts gi, similar to the one the short bald man had. He had a red sash as a belt and matching wristbands, and his boots were brown.
Her eyes turned to the other man.
He was shorter than the first man, with a different build, but it was clear he was a fighter. He was lean and fit; Adriane hoped he could fight.
He had a tan, likely from spending a lot of time in the sun. His face had a scar on his cheek, and his eyes were black and almost almond-shaped, just like the first man. He looked just as angry and serious as the others.
He wore a larger version of the outfit that the tiny bald man wore. Adriane felt a bit bad referring to him as the 'tiny bald man,' but she didn't know what else to call him since she didn't know the man's name.
Her eyes moved to the third new person, and her eyebrows raised.
This man was even shorter than the small bald man and the child. If it weren't for the fact that the man was moving around and flying through the air, she would have mistaken him for a doll.
His head was bald—why were so many of these fighters bald?—and his skin was almost pure white. He wore a black hat with a red pompom on it and a green martial arts gi with yellow sleeves.
Adriane narrowed her eyes as she watched from behind the rock. The taller Saiyan started speaking.
"So, these are the ones we came all this way to fight? They don't look like much, Vegeta." He laughed as he cracked his knuckles.
The other man, whom she correctly assumed was named Vegeta, replied with a smirk that irritated her, "Don't be fooled by appearances, Nappa. They might have some fight in them." He finished speaking as he crossed his arms.
She gritted her teeth; so Nappa and Vegeta were the names of her uncle and godfather's killers. Good to know she would be killing a prince soon.
Her eyes moved back to the group of fighters who had clearly been preparing to fight these men for a while. They were standing their ground, faces serious, but she could tell they were scared—especially the child standing behind the green one.
Her eyes narrowed further. Once this was all over, she was going to have a talk with that man about bringing a child to a battle where he could die. She did not approve of child soldiers; she was supposed to be a child soldier for Dumbledore, and she refused to let other children go through the same trauma as her.
The three-eyed man clenched his fists as he spoke, his voice heavy, "We can't let these two get past us and get the Dragon Balls; we have to stop them."
Those words only caused Nappa to laugh. Adriane clenched her hands into fists, hating the sound of his laughter. Oh, how she wished she could fly in and punch the jackass in the face, but she knew that was a bad idea.
As much as she wanted to join the fight, she needed to see how these two fought first. She would jump in if things started to look bad.
"You? Stop us? Don't make me laugh!" Nappa's voice bellowed across the land before he leapt forward with incredible speed, causing a shockwave that sent rocks flying. He landed in front of the group, towering over them with a wicked grin on his face.
Adriane had to quickly put her hands in front of her face. No matter how strong someone was, a rock to the eye could take almost anyone out.
"Which one of you wants to die first?" Nappa asked, his voice taunting. Adriane bristled when she saw the child shaking in fear. She didn't care that the green man was standing protectively in front of him; when this was over, she was going to deal with him.
Vegeta called out from where he stood in the air, his arms still crossed. He seemed bored and disinterested in Nappa's actions, but Adriane could tell he was still focused on the fight about to begin.
"Nappa, don't get too carried away. We still need to find the Dragon Balls before we kill them all."
Adriane was confused; this was the second mention of Dragon Balls, but what were they? She had never heard of these things before. God, she hoped they weren't actual Dragon Balls—that would be gross.
The small man stepped forward. It was clear to Adriane that he was scared, but he was standing tall. "We're not going to let you get them. We're going to stop you!"
She watched as everything played out, how the three-eyed man chose to fight Nappa on his own. She found that a bit stupid—why fight an enemy one by one instead of all together?
The man leaped into the air with incredible speed, his body glowing with energy. He charged directly at Nappa, trying to land a powerful blow right off the bat. Nappa smirked and barely moved, other than raising one hand to block the blow. The three-eyed man's fist connected with Nappa's palm, causing a shockwave, but Nappa didn't even flinch.
It was clear the man was shocked, and Nappa looked at him and spoke, his voice mocking, "That's it? You'll have to do better than that!"
She saw the man grit his teeth as he tried another powerful attack, but Nappa pushed him away effortlessly. The man flipped backward, thankfully landing on his feet as he charged up a new energy attack.
To her disbelief, he yelled out the name of his attack as he fired it, "TAKE THIS, DONDON RAY!"
What the heck? You never yell out the name of your attack; it just warns the enemies! This was just like the magical world and yelling out spells during duels—it was so stupid.
A beam of energy shot from the man's fingertips, streaking towards Nappa with incredible speed. But the Saiyan didn't even bother to move. Instead, when it got close, he swatted the beam away with his hand.
The beam landed behind her and exploded. Thankfully, she jumped out of the way of the debris from the ground shooting everywhere.
She quickly turned her attention back to the fight, her body tense and ready to jump in whenever.
Her eyes caught movement where the group had been sitting, and she moved to look. She wanted to make sure Vegeta wasn't attacking them. She relaxed slightly when she saw that it was just the small man stepping forward.
His fists were clenched, and he seemed to have come to a realization. To her disbelief, she could hear him from where she was. God, when this was over, she was going to have to teach these people the idea of staying quiet when explaining plans, wasn't she?
"We have to hit him with everything we've got! Piccolo, Gohan, now!"
She wanted to roll her eyes. They should have done that from the start.
The green man nodded, coming up with a plan on the spot. "Gohan, stay back and wait for your chance. Krillin, let's do a combined attack!"
So the green man must be Piccolo, the kid was Gohan, and the other small man was Krillin. At least she wouldn't be calling him the 'short bald man' anymore.
She kept one eye on the actual fighting and another on the two men as they charged their energy.
Piccolo's hands were glowing with a purple aura as he prepared something, while Krillin seemed to be forming some kind of disc in his. She could see the air crackling with power around the two from where she was hiding.
Her eyes glanced at Vegeta as she heard him speak, "Interesting, these peasants are stronger than I expected. Too bad it won't be enough."
She tensed up and turned back to the fight, ready to jump in at any time. If Vegeta wasn't worried, then she might have to jump in soon.
Nappa noticed the buildup of energy from the two men and grinned widely. Adriane glared at him for daring to be happy right now.
"Now this is more like it! Bring it on!" he cried.
Piccolo and Krillin fired their attacks simultaneously: a yellow corkscrew beam was shot by Piccolo, and Krillin fired a strange yellow disc. Both shot through the air with incredible speed. The disc flew straight at Nappa, but at the last second, he dodged with surprising agility for his size.
Adriane cursed as both attacks missed by mere inches. She watched as the attacks collided in the distance, causing a massive explosion that started to shake the ground. She heard Nappa laugh again and growled softly upon realizing he was enjoying himself.
The group of fighters stared in shocked horror as Nappa started to mock them. "Is that the best you can do? I don't know what I was expecting, but I know it was more than this."
She saw Piccolo and Krillin exchange a worried look, likely realizing how strong Nappa truly was. Piccolo seemed to growl something to himself as he and Krillin prepared for another assault.
Just then, Nappa suddenly leaped into the air, his massive form casting a shadow over the group of fighters. Her eyes widened when she realized he was crashing down, intending to land a powerful punch on the three-eyed man.
Her eyes narrowed, She didn't know how strong this man was or if he could tank a hit from Nappa like this. She quickly powered up, ignoring the way Vegeta's eyes widened when his scanner picked up her power, and shot toward the group, just barely making it in time to pull the man out of the way.
Nappa's fist created a huge crater in the earth. She noticed the man staring at her in shock as she glared at Nappa, standing in front of the man on the ground.
No one seemed to notice what had happened at first. She saw Nappa looking confused, Vegeta actually seemed interested in the fight now, and the group was horrified.
She heard Gohan cry out, what she assumed was the man behind her name, "TIEN!"
Piccolo held Gohan back from attacking when they all noticed her.
She could see the confusion and then surprise spread across their faces. She heard more then saw the man, Tien, stand up behind her. She straightened up and slowly started walking towards Nappa and Vegeta, letting her tail slowly unwind from her body.
She saw the way the Saiyans' eyes widened in surprise and how the group of fighters tensed up. She let her tail lazily wag behind her as she spoke.
"You made a big mistake coming to this planet, Saiyans, and you made an even bigger one destroying that city back there."
She saw Vegeta narrow his eyes at her in thought. "And just who are you, little girl? You are clearly too young to be from Planet Vegeta."
Adriane started chuckling, her eyes closing as she wrapped her tail around herself once more. "Me? Oh, I am many things, Prince Vegeta. I am a Saiyan, yet I am also part human. I am from Krypton, yet I have magic flowing in my veins. But most importantly for you, however..."
Adriane opened her eyes, which had shifted from a white sclera, green iris, and black pupils to a black sclera, blood-red iris, and black pupils. She didn't realize that her red eyes had a ring of electric blue around them.
She smiled darkly when she saw Nappa and Vegeta's reactions to her new eyes. Nappa had reeled back, and Vegeta's own eyes had widened.
"Most importantly for you, I am someone you have pissed off by murdering some of her only living family. I hope you're prepared to die."