Chapter 10: A Close Call


Time seemed to slow as the dagger hurled towards the gorgon. The blade spun vertically in the air making a whooshing sound with every rotation. Stheno raised her shield to deflect the incoming projectile, but she was too late. The dagger impaled her in the neck, and she sank to the ground, giving a final hiss before turning to dust.

I tried to get up and rush to Thalia, but the moment I put pressure on my leg, pain shot through me like fire. Gritting my teeth, I forced myself to stand, barely managing to stay upright. Each step was agony, but I limped toward her as fast as I could, stumbling with every uneven movement.

I focused my attention on Thalia. It was bad. Like really bad. Her jeans were covered in blood from where she was cut by Stheno. The red scratches on her face contrasted with the paleness of her skin. Her eyes were closed, but she would occasionally open them and look around in a daze. They were glossy and out of focus. Her breathing was steady but shallow.

I stripped off my jacket and pressed it against the wound in her leg, applying as much pressure as I could to stop the bleeding. My hands shook, but I kept working, scanning the room for our packs. When I spotted them nearby, I hobbled over, grabbed mine, and limped back to her side as fast as I could.

"Thalia, nectar," I said, pulling the small jar from my pack. I lifted her head gently and gave her a bit of the liquid, watching as her lips barely moved. After a moment, her breath seemed to ease, her body relaxing slightly. The color started coming back to her face. I could tell her wound was already recovering.

"Percy?" Her voice was soft, almost a whisper, but it was there.

I leaned in, relief washing over me. "I'm here."

Her gaze met mine, still distant, but for a moment, I saw a flicker of the old Thalia. "Don't... don't let me die looking like this," she muttered weakly, managing a faint, tired smile.

I let out a shaky breath, half a laugh escaping me despite the knot in my chest. "You won't. You're way too stubborn to let that happen."

As soon as the words left her lips, Thalia's eyes fluttered shut, her breathing steady as she slipped into unconsciousness. I stayed there, staring at her for a moment, trying to process everything that had just happened. We were safe, for now. No one was dying. I kept telling myself that over and over, trying to believe it.

The exhaustion hit me like a wave. My head was spinning, my arms were numb, and my leg and head throbbed with every heartbeat. I glanced at her backpack, but I didn't have the strength to search for more supplies. I couldn't even move if I wanted to. Instead, I collapsed next to her, my body giving in to the overwhelming fatigue and pain.

Somehow, without realizing it, my arm ended up around her, and we lay there together on the cold, dirty floor of Aunty Em's Garden Emporium, the weight of everything finally pulling me into unconsciousness beside her.

The first thing I saw when I opened my eyes was Thalia leaning over me, carefully holding a piece of ambrosia near my mouth.

"Hold still, Percy," she muttered, her voice soft but with an edge of concern.

I blinked, taking in my surroundings. We were in one of the smaller rooms of the emporium, and I was propped up against the wall on a cushion from some old patio furniture. The room was cleaner than the rest of the building, and the weak winter sun filtered in through a grimy window. Thalia must have moved me while I was out.

She looked a lot better than the last time I'd seen her, but that wasn't saying much—considering the last time I saw her, she was barely hanging on. She still looked exhausted, her dark hair sticking out in wild, frizzy strands. Her jeans were stained with dried blood, and her face was littered with cuts from the battle. Despite her appearance, when I looked into her blue eyes, all I could see was concern. For me.

A small, tired smile tugged at the corner of her mouth. I smiled back, weakly at first, but then we both chuckled, the sound breaking through the heaviness of the moment. Thalia winced, and I reached out instinctively, though I wasn't much help in my condition.

"We almost didn't make it," I muttered, the reality of how close we came to losing each other still sinking in.

"Yeah," Thalia said quietly. "Too close, we got lucky." Thalia grabbed another piece of ambrosia from her backpack. "Now, hold still. Your left leg was almost twice the size of your right leg from swelling. You had a huge bruise on your rib cage from where you got kicked. And don't even get me started on your head. I'm surprised you can even understand me right now, Percy."

I couldn't help but notice how close she was sitting to me, how her hand lingered just a moment longer as she handed me the food. Even through the exhaustion, the tension from our earlier argument still hung between us, but there was also a quiet understanding. We were both still here.

After she'd given me the last of the ambrosia, Thalia propped herself up next to me, leaning back against the wall. We didn't say anything for a while, just sat there, letting the food of the gods do its work. The silence wasn't uncomfortable; it was more like we were both too tired to deal with the weight of everything yet.

"You saved my life." I was still in shock about almost dying. I tried replaying the sequence of our fight with the gorgons. It really was way too close like Thalia had said.

"You saved mine too. I thought I was a goner. When did you learn to throw daggers?" Thalia asked, leaning her head back against the wall, her voice lighter now, but still tinged with exhaustion.

"I never did," I said, cracking a small grin. "It was luck, like you said."

She chuckled softly, but her eyes lingered on mine a little longer than usual. "I'm glad you're still alive, Percy. Really."

"I'm glad you're still alive too." I responded.

She shifted closer, her shoulder brushing against mine. After a quiet moment, Thalia sighed, leaning her head back against the wall. Her voice was softer than usual when she finally spoke. "About what I said in the forest... Just forget I said anything, okay?"

Her words didn't carry the sharpness I'd expected. Instead, there was something quieter, something that almost felt like hesitation—something I didn't often hear from Thalia. It was like she was trying to brush it off, but not because she didn't care. It was more like our near-death experience had reminded her of what really mattered.

I hesitated, feeling the weight of what she was trying to let go. "Thalia..." I shook my head, my voice soft. "I can't just forget it. What you said... it matters."

Her eyes met mine, and for a second, I saw the flash of surprise there. Her lips parted slightly, like she wanted to say something, but instead, she just looked away, her expression caught between frustration and something else. "It's not that easy," she muttered.

I could tell she wasn't angry, not like before. She was tired—emotionally, physically. "Look," she said quietly, "we don't have to talk about it now. We've got enough on our plate." She let out a long breath, running a hand through her messy hair. "But... thanks."

"Thanks?" I repeated, unsure what to do with her sudden vulnerability.

"For not dying," she said with a weak smile, her usual snark softened. "And for... not brushing off what I said. Even if I told you to."

I smiled, feeling some of the tension between us lift. "I'm not going anywhere, Thalia."

She didn't say anything for a moment, just nodded slowly, her gaze lingering on mine a little longer. Then she leaned her head back and closed her eyes. "I've been keeping watch for hours," she mumbled, exhaustion creeping into her voice. "I just... need a minute to close my eyes. You'll keep watch now?"

"Yeah," I said softly, watching as she relaxed beside me. "Get some rest."

Thalia slept as the sharp angles of the sun became softer as the sun continued to rise. The cold stone walls of the emporium gradually lost their edge, though the warmth was more in my mind than the air. Thalia slept beside me, her breathing even, her face calm in a way that felt almost foreign after everything we'd been through. I shifted restlessly, knowing that Annabeth was still out there. I kept glancing at Thalia, the sight of her peaceful sleep grounding me in a way I hadn't expected. No matter what we faced, as long as she was beside me, I knew we'd get through it.

"Percy?"

I jumped and frantically looked around. Thalia was still sleeping, there was no way it could be her; and the voice sounded just like Annabeth's. It sounded scared and helpless and it was coming from outside the store. I quickly stood up, testing the pressure on my bad leg. It still hurt, but I could manage.

"Percy!"

Annabeth's voice sounded more urgent this time as if she was in great danger. The voice pulled me toward the back of the emporium, away from the eerie stone statues. As I neared the edge of the forest, I heard it again—Annabeth's voice, this time filled with pain. My heart lurched. I broke into a run, forgetting the now subtle ache in my leg. As I rounded a large tree I stopped dead in my tracks. My mouth was left wide open, and I put my sword away.

Standing before me was Athena.

"I see now that you only care about my daughter when it suits you, Perseus Jackson."

Her expression was fierce, her eyes glowing like a wildfire, and she looked ready for battle. Dressed in her traditional Greek robes and crowned with olive branches, she wielded a silver sword in one hand and clenched the other into a tight fist. Her gaze pierced through me.

I gulped, my heart pounding. I hoped she wasn't here to kill me, but I had no idea how far her anger might go. And I didn't even have time to wrap my head around the fact that Athena had been the one using Annabeth's voice to lure me out here. It had sounded so real.

"I knew this would happen," Athena continued, her voice like ice. "When I allowed you and my daughter to get close, I knew it was a mistake. I should never have permitted it. The blood of Poseidon cannot be trusted." She began walking toward me slowly, each step deliberate and threatening, like the gorgons I had faced the night before.

"My daughter has sacrificed so much for you," Athena said, her voice cold but simmering with frustration. "She's risked her life, her future, and her heart, all for your sake. And now, after everything, I see her in pain—more pain than she deserves. She's been trying to hold herself together after what happened between you two. You may think you did all you could, but it wasn't enough. She needed more from you. More strength, more commitment. You let her carry the weight of that decision, and I've seen the toll it's taken on her."

"I never meant for her to hurt like that!" I blurted out, frustration and guilt knotting in my chest. "You don't understand—it's not like I didn't care. I love her! I would never—"

"You do not love her, Perseus," Athena said, her voice sharp as a blade. "Not as she deserves. You are not worthy of her. She is one of my greatest daughters, and I will not stand by and watch her heart break again. Not when your loyalty is so easily swayed toward another."

Her eyes flashed as she said it—Thalia. She didn't even need to say her name, but I could feel the accusation hanging in the air, heavier than anything else she'd said.

"I do love Annabeth!" I protested, the words coming out more desperately than I intended.

Athena's eyes burned brighter than ever, glowing with an intensity that made the entire clearing light up. I had to shield my eyes as the temperature spiked, sweat dripping down my face as the air itself seemed to shimmer with her fury.

"Then act like it, Perseus Jackson!" Athena's voice thundered, echoing with divine authority. The sheer force of it made me instinctively cover my ears, but it didn't help. The brilliance of her presence was blinding, as if the very air around us had ignited with her anger. It reminded me of the time I'd sat on my father's throne—powerful, overwhelming, and inescapable. Slowly, the intense light began to fade, the air cooling as her fury subsided. I lowered my hands cautiously, blinking through the afterglow, and looked up at Athena, still burning with judgment.

"It is taking everything within my willpower not to strike you down where you stand," her voice calm yet still dangerous. "The only reason I am giving you this chance is because Annabeth, despite your failings, still cares for you. She has been taken, and I cannot find her. Something powerful is shielding her from me. If you truly love her, as you claim, you will find her and bring her back. You are the only one who can."

I made sure to pick my next words very carefully. This was probably my most dangerous encounter with a god to date, and that's really saying a lot.

"I will find her, Lady Athena." She looked at me with discontent, as if I was a fly trying to fly out of a house through a closed window.

"I do not want to spend a second longer in your presence than I need to. Remember Perseus, the only reason why I am helping is because I love my daughter more than I hate you." Athena paused. Through the anger in her eye I was able to see just a sliver of worry. "I am only able to see the general area where Annabeth is at. She is somewhere near what you mortals call Richmond. That is all I know. You will know what to do once you arrive."

I didn't feel like dying so I just nodded my head. Athena was able to see right through me and know how scared I was.

"This conversation is over." She didn't need to say more. Her divine form began to glow once again, bright and overwhelming, as I turned away to shield my eyes. The air around me heated again.

When I opened my eyes again, she was gone. All that was left was a faint trail of smoke and the smell of burning air. My legs felt like jelly. Athena had never liked me, but now it felt like her hatred was personal—like she resented every part of my existence.

I glanced down and saw a small leather pouch lying where she had stood. Opening it, I found ambrosia. Even through all her fury, even with her anger toward me, Athena's love for Annabeth was clear.

I slowly walked back toward the emporium, the cold air biting at my skin, but all I could feel was the chaos swirling inside me. Athena's words had been like daggers, each one striking a nerve. She didn't just question my feelings for Annabeth—she'd outright challenged it. She knew about Thalia, the tension that had been building between us, and now everything was spiraling faster than I could keep up.

I didn't know who had taken Annabeth or why. That alone made me feel like I was losing control. Annabeth was gone, and I was left scrambling to pick up the pieces. But it wasn't just her disappearance that had me rattled. It was everything.

Thalia. I didn't ask for things to get complicated between us. We were just supposed to be friends, right? Battle partners who could trust each other with their lives. But after our kiss, after our personal conversations, I couldn't pretend like nothing had changed. And now, with Annabeth missing and Thalia by my side, everything felt... wrong. Like I was caught in a storm I couldn't control.

My heart was pounding by the time I reached the door of the emporium. I pushed it open, catching sight of Thalia still resting against the wall, her face peaceful for the first time in what felt like days. She'd been through just as much as I had, and part of me was relieved to see her safe. But the guilt gnawed at me. How could I feel like this about Thalia when Annabeth was out there, lost, and in danger?

It felt like I was failing both of them. I couldn't even think straight anymore. Annabeth's face flashed in my mind, her voice from earlier echoing in my ears. She was calling for help, but I had no idea where she was or how to reach her.

I stepped back into the emporium, the door creaking as I shut it quietly behind me. The faint winter sunlight still filtered through the dirty windows, casting long shadows across the scattered debris. Thalia lay where I left her, propped up against the wall, her breathing slow and steady.

I sank down onto the cushion beside her, careful not to disturb the silence. My leg still throbbed, and my mind was racing, but the exhaustion was settling in. I needed to keep watch, give Thalia a chance to rest. She'd been through as much as I had, maybe more.

For a moment, I just sat there, my back against the wall, trying to let the quiet calm me. The minutes stretched on, the soft sound of Thalia's breathing filling the room. I glanced over at her. She looked peaceful, her face no longer creased with worry or exhaustion. It was hard to believe that just hours ago, we'd almost met our end. And yet here we were, still fighting, still together.

Suddenly, Thalia stirred. Her eyes fluttered open, and she blinked a few times before focusing on me. "Did you… go somewhere?" she asked, her voice thick with confusion.

I hesitated. "Yeah. I uh, had a conversation outside."

Thalia sat up straighter, wincing as she moved. "A conversation? With who?"

I sighed trying to prepare myself. "Athena."

Her eyes widened; her surprise was apparent. "Athena? What did she want?"

I rubbed the back of my neck. "She's mad at me. She thinks I didn't care enough for Annabeth, that I've let her down, that… I've been distracted."

Thalia's face tightened at the word, the unspoken weight of what distracted meant hanging between us. "Distracted," she repeated, her tone sharp, not quite a question but more like an accusation. "That must have been a fun conversation."

I sighed, feeling the pressure of everything building. "It wasn't fun, no. She pretty much told me I'm not worthy of Annabeth. That I didn't do enough to stop her from leaving."

Thalia's brow furrowed, and she shifted slightly, her eyes searching mine. "Well, did you? Why did you two break up? I mean... I never really got the full story."

Her question hung in the air for a moment, and I felt the familiar tightness in my chest. I wasn't sure if I was ready to dive into that part of my past, but after everything we'd been through, Thalia deserved to know the truth. Besides, avoiding it wasn't helping anyone.

I rubbed the back of my neck, stalling for a moment. "It's complicated," I said, the words tasting bitter on my tongue.

"I figured," Thalia replied quietly, her eyes steady on me, waiting.

I exhaled slowly, rubbing the back of my neck. "You already know about Annabeth's project, right? The Olympus rebuild after we defeated Kronos?"

Thalia nodded, her expression softening. "Of course. It was a huge deal for her."

"It was... it was everything she'd ever wanted, you know? This huge opportunity to prove herself. And I was happy for her—really happy. I mean, she deserved it after everything we went through."

Thalia nodded, her eyes still focused on me.

"And at first, it was great. Olympus was close to where I lived, so she'd work on the redesign, and we'd still get to hang out after she was done. We'd grab food, go for walks, talk about everything and nothing. It was like we were finally getting a chance to just be... normal."

I hesitated, remembering the early days when everything seemed perfect. "But then, things started to change. Annabeth got busier. The remodel was bigger than anyone expected, and she was stressed. She didn't have as much time for us anymore, and I could see it was wearing her down."

I glanced at Thalia, who was listening intently, her face unreadable. "I wanted to help her. I saw how much pressure she was under, and all I wanted was for us to spend more time together. I thought maybe I could help take some of that stress off her shoulders."

Thalia frowned slightly, her brows furrowing. "And how did she take that?"

I sighed. "Not well. Annabeth... she's proud. Always has been. Hubris is what she calls it. She didn't want my help, and I think she saw me trying to step in as a sign that I didn't believe in her, like I thought she couldn't handle it on her own. And... maybe she was right, in a way. Maybe I didn't trust her to handle all of it. But I didn't mean it like that. I just... I just didn't want her to keep pushing herself so hard."

I paused, the memories flooding back. "But instead of talking about it, we started arguing. Small things at first. Me asking when she'd be free, her telling me she didn't have time. Then, it got worse. She'd be working late, and I wouldn't hear from her for days. I'd try to bring it up, but she'd shut me out, saying she was too busy or too tired."

"It sounds like she was overwhelmed," Thalia said quietly.

"She was," I agreed, nodding. "I knew she was. But instead of helping, I think I just added to it. I kept trying to pull her back when maybe what she needed was space. And the more I tried to fix things, the more distant she got. It was this... downward spiral, and I didn't know how to stop it."

I felt the knot in my chest tighten as I thought about the moment it all fell apart. "It all came to a head one day. I told her that I missed her, that I felt like I wasn't part of her life anymore. She... she told me that I was holding her back. That she needed to focus on the project and that we couldn't keep doing this. And then she just... left. I didn't want her to go. I tried to stop her. I told her we could make it work, that we could find a way. But she was already done. She'd made up her mind, and... that was it."

As I spoke, I felt Thalia's hand rest on my arm, her touch gentle but grounding. She wasn't looking at me, her gaze cast down, but her fingers tightened, as if she was trying to steady me—or maybe herself. The warmth of her hand sent a current through me, cutting through the cold air of the emporium. It wasn't just a gesture of comfort; there was something more in that touch, something unspoken but heavy. Her thumb brushed against my skin, almost absently, like she was struggling with her own thoughts as much as I was.

I heard Thalia exhale softly. "I'm sorry, Percy," she whispered, her voice barely above a murmur. "I'm sorry you had to go through that." She lifted her gaze, her blue eyes soft and full of understanding. "I know how much you care about her."

Thalia's grip on my arm tightened slightly, and her voice softened even more. "You… you were just trying to be there for her. And that's who you are. You always try to take on more, especially for the people you care about. But... sometimes it's not enough." She paused, her eyes flickering with something deeper. "You weren't wrong for wanting more with her, but..."

Her words hung in the air, and I could feel the tension building. She hesitated, her gaze dropping for a moment before she met my eyes again. "It's just hard, you know? Watching someone you care about... and not being able to do anything. And knowing you would do anything for them, even if they can't see it."

Her words hit like a lightning strike. I could hear the weight of what she wasn't saying, the vulnerability in her voice. Thalia wasn't just talking about Annabeth anymore.

She blinked and let out a shaky breath. "You're not the only one who loves like that, Percy."

Her words hung in the air between us, and I could feel the shift, the weight of everything she was trying to say but hadn't said outright. My heart thudded in my chest, caught between the past with Annabeth and the present with Thalia. It wasn't just the words—it was the way her hand stayed on my arm, the way her fingers lingered like she was afraid to let go.

I swallowed, the room feeling smaller all of a sudden, the air thick with something unspoken and raw. "Thalia, I—"

She shook her head slightly, cutting me off, her eyes glimmering with a mixture of sadness and resolve. "You don't have to say anything," she whispered. "I didn't mean to... It's just—"

I could see her fighting with herself, the walls she'd built to protect her emotions cracking. Her gaze dropped again, her thumb brushing my skin once more, a soft, almost apologetic gesture. "I didn't want things to get complicated, Percy. But... they did, and here we are."

Thalia's eyes held mine for just a moment before she spoke again, her voice quiet but steady. "Just one question," she said, almost hesitantly. "Why get back together so quickly? I mean... after everything that happened. After how things ended between you two. Why?"

"We're not… I wouldn't consider it 'back together,'" I said, the weight of the truth settling in as I spoke. "When Annabeth showed up yesterday, it felt… different. Almost like we were just falling back into old patterns. I don't know. It was nice, but it didn't feel right. It felt… forced, maybe. Like we were trying to pick up where we left off, but something was missing."

Thalia didn't say anything for a moment, but I could see her processing what I'd just admitted. Her thumb still brushed gently against my skin, and though she tried to hide it, there was a flicker of something—relief?—in her eyes. It was subtle, but it was there.

"I guess... that makes sense," she murmured, her voice softer now. "You've both changed. After everything that happened, you can't just go back to how it was."

I nodded, unsure of how to respond, my mind spinning with everything that had come out between us. "Yeah, I guess we can't." My voice was quieter than I intended, the weight of it sinking in.

"So... what now?" Thalia asked, her voice quiet but loaded with more than one meaning.

Her question hung in the air, and for a second, I wasn't sure if she was asking about finding Annabeth or about us. Maybe both.

I met her eyes, and after a beat, I decided to focus on what we could handle right now. "Athena told me where Annabeth might be. Somewhere in Richmond. She couldn't pinpoint it exactly, but that's where we need to go."

Thalia's brow furrowed as she absorbed the information, her face still unreadable. "Richmond... That's at least a couple hundred miles away. We have a ways to go."

"Yeah," I said, nodding. "We'll head out as soon as we're ready."

She gave a small nod, but the weight of her earlier question still lingered between us, unresolved.


The tension in this chapter is almost palpable—Percy grappling with his guilt over Annabeth, the raw vulnerability in Thalia's confession, and Athena's fury hanging over him like a storm cloud. The lines between past and present, between loyalty and doubt, are becoming more tangled than ever. What are your thoughts on Athena's little confrontation with Percy? Do you think her accusations were fair? In any case, if one thing is for certain, Percy and Thalia are gradually letting their walls down, it'll be interesting to see how they go forward after this. As always, don't forget to review, follow, and favorite! Thanks so much for reading!

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